Creativity: 10/15
I like the story, and the creativity is there. The only issue that I personally have is that it's in two different languages. It's hard to figure out what's happening because they start in one language and then italicize the next. Now, I don't mind the whole italicizing the next language, but sometimes they put the first language and the 2nd language together in the same line. And because of that, it's hard to really figure out where English is. But the story is still creative. It's interesting to read.
Originality:15 /15
It's definitely a story that I have not read or have not come across. I love the characters. They seem very interesting. They touch on many topics, like fat Shaming., just the way certain things are in the story. It seems interesting, but once again, the thing that gets me is English and then. The other language is because they are so sometimes slammed together, and the author expects you to understand that English is italicized, and I get that, but sometimes, when you're reading it, you read. The first language and then right underneath it is the Italicized English for me. It gets hard to try to find both to enjoy the story.
Storytelling:15 /15
She enjoyed the storytelling and the way that the author wrote the story. It is very unique. I love the names. I love the atmosphere. I love how they tell it. It feels like they're telling a love story, but it also feels like they're telling or showing us the struggles that everybody goes through in life, whether it is a couple whether it is individuality. Everybody's gonna struggle in life, And you can tell that with this story.
Character:15 /15
I enjoyed the characters. I find that the characters are unique in their own way, and they have their own personalities, but they also have their own struggles, which I really love.
Story Flows: 15/15
I did not see anything wrong with the story regarding grammar, set, and structure, or the flow of the story.
Cover Design: 15/15
I love the cover, the cover, and the story. Some of them need each other really well.
Final Thoughts:10 /10
Once again, this is not to be mean or malicious, but these are my thoughts, and I feel the author needs to divide English and the other languages at the end of the day. Once again, I don't know what the other language is, and I'm not going to try to understand what it is because that would be disrespectful. I could guess what it is, but I don't want to because, once again, that would be disrespectful to the author. So I feel like either. Take the italicized English part and put it on a second line like you have the first language, and then in Italicize, it's the English version. Well, instead of putting them close together, they need to be double-spaced so that way you can see and understand and read English, and it's not what the first language. Because of them being together, it isn't very clear for me. Other than that, the story was a very good and unique one.
Chapters I read:3
Total points:95
Summary of the book:
lOVE!! love is an amazing feeling. A individual with a earing heart is consistently prepared to help other people with no desire.Love associates the two souls everlasting and makes the world a beautiful spot for them.Without a doubt ,love is divine...Once Raghav had also feels the same thing but that one incident had changed his life totally ,it crushed his heart like a paper..Now he doesn't believe in all this ..He thinks LOVE AND MARRIAGE is not made for him or we could say he fears to give love a second chance...From childhood days Poonam grows up by hearing continuous taunts and comments from people..From friends to her relatives everyone likes taunting her .. Now it doesn't effect her as she got habituated by these taunts..she is pure hearted soul but full of insecurities..For her,LOVE and MARRIAGE is beyond her reach...Both RAGHAV AND POONAM had a DARK PAST ....But when there is God by your side nothing is impossible...and this is how they tied into a BOND OF MARRIAGETO KNOW THERE MARRIAGE JOURNEY YOU HAVE TO READ THE STORY... {ENGLISH TRANSLATION ISAVAILABLE...}
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