savirakkin 's Book started with a good hook for the readers. I admire your use of descriptive language that effectively conveys emotion and setting.
You have also created good dialogues and narrative of the characters with contrasting personalities and a conflict or tension between them.
Your writing is engaging and captures the reader’s attention well. You have used varying sentence structures to create a balance and rhythm in your writing.
So my fellow authors and followers, do try out the amazing book!