Fakhir ki Anie - Mayi Ri

By Unique_Dreams_

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Fakhir a eighteen years old boy, who lives his life carefree and enjoys his life... Because of his father's p... More

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CHAPTER - 2
CHAPTER - 3
CHAPTER - 4
CHAPTER - 5
CHAPTER - 6
CHAPTER - 7
CHAPTER - 8
CHAPTER - 9
CHAPTER - 10
CHAPTER - 11
CHAPTER - 12
CHAPTER - 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER - 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER - 34
CHAPTER - 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER - 37
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
NOTICE!!
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
ACCIDENT
CHAPTER - 47
CHAPTER - 48
ACTION

CHAPTER - 42

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Next morning...

Fakhir gathered all the family members in the living room...

Sameena: fakhir sabko yaha kyu jama Kiya hai?
   Fakhir why have you gathered everyone here?

Habeeb: Haan, kya huwa hai?
      Yeah, what's the matter?

Fakhir: batata hun phele ab log he dekhiye...
      I will say but 1st you guys watch this...

Saying this he went to near the tv and connected his phone and played the video that he yesterday recorded...

Everyone were shock, especially rahila... She was sitting my lowering her gaze...

Everyone were more surprised when inspector akram said about Amma how she died...

Habeeb got furious, went towards rahila...

Habeeb: Maine tumse Aaj Tak kuch nahi kaha , tumhari har baat sunte aaya hun , maine tumhe koi takleef di hai rahila , tumhare liye maine Ayesha ko itni takleef di , mere bacchon se dur raha, kabhi nahi samjh paya unhe, jitna bhi Mane kamaya sare tumhe Diya , maine kabhi Ayesha ko ek rupya nahi diya... Tum paiso ke liye itna gir gayi ki tumne meri maa ko maar Diya, BATO KYU KIYA TUMNE AISA...
 
     I have never said anything to you till now , listened each and every words of you, i didn't gave you any problem rahila, bcz of you i have given Ayesha so many problems, stayed far from my childrens, never ever understood them how much I earned i gave everything to you, never gave a penny to Ayesha... you would fall so greed for money that you killed my mother, TELL ME WHY DID YOU DO THIS...

Rahila flinched in horror, she got scared of him...

Rahila: mujhe paiso ka lajaj Chad Gaya tha, sach may habeeb Maine sab chodiya, pls mujhe maaf kardo...
    I was got greedy for money, really habeeb i left everything, pls forgive me...

Sameena:tum itni asani se kaise keh sakti ho ki tume maaf karde , tumne ek insan ko mara hai... Aaj Tak hum hamri Amma ke qatil ke sath ghar may reh rahe hai...
      How can you so easily say that we should forgive you, you have killed a human... Till now we were staying with the killer of our mother...

Habeeb: bhabi aap isse dur rahe , ye mere aur rahila ka beej ka mamla hai....
     Sister in law stay away from this, it's mine and rahila's matter...

Sameena: aise kaise dur rahe habeeb vo hamri Amma thi....
    How can we stay habeeb she was our mother..m

Habeeb: may keh Raha hun na bhabi , mujhe baat karne dijiye...
     I am telling you, sister-in-law, let me talk...

Sameena nodded...

Habeeb dragged rahila to the room...

Fehmi: habeeb Aisa maat Karo usse lag jayegi aur bacche ki jaan khatre may ho sakti hai...
      Habeeb don't to this she will get hurt and baby's life will be in danger...

He didn't listen to anyone and dragged to the room and locked it from inside...

In room...

Rahila was crying...

Rahila(crying): habeeb Maine nahi mara hai amma , maine dawayi hata di thi, vo vo unke zaban ke niche rakhte hai na...
       Habeeb i didn't kill her , i took away the tablets , that she used to keep below her tongue...

Habeeb: ek aur lafz maat khena Varna Jaan se mar dunga tumhe... (Anger tone)
      Say one more word or else I will kill you...

Saying this he took the small pot of show piece to hit her....
 


Rahila: habeeb Maine Jaan bujh kar nahi kiya may sach ke rahi hun (crying) pls mujhe maaf kardo , hamre bacche ke liye...
     Habee. I didn't do wamtedly I am telling the truth pls forgive me, for the sake of our baby...

Habeeb: TUM MERI MAA KI QATIL HO , TUMNE KAISE KEH DIYA KI MAY TUMHE MAAF KARDUNGA... TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUWI... JO BACCHA HAI NA VO MUJHE NAHI CHAHIYE THA , SIRF AUR SIRF TUMHAE CHAHIYE THA...
     YOUR KILLER OF MY MOTHER, HOW COULD YOU SAY WILL FORGIVE YOU... how dare you.. HOW DARE YOU... ABOUT THAT I DIDN'T NEEDED THAT , YOU ONLY WANTED IT...

Saying this he throwed the small pot on the other side in anger...

Rahila (crying): mujhe maaf kardo habeeb..
      Forgive me habeeb...

Said while joining her hands in front of him...

Habeeb: tumhe may abhi isi waqt talaq Deta hun may ek aur pal meri maa ke qatil ke sath nahi reh sakta...
          I am giving you divorce now itself ,Can't live another moment with my mother's murderer...

Saying this he dashed out of the room....

Rahila sat on floor crying...

Later habeeb came home... He took his phone and called aaliya....

OTP...

Habeeb: abhi Ghar aao yaha aur aapni bhen ko lekar jao...
    Come to home now and take you sister and go...

Aaliya: kya huwa habeeb Bhai?
     What happened habeeb brother?

Habeeb: may aapni maa ki qatil ko yaha nahi  rak sakta... May tumhari bhen ko talaq de Raha hun...
    I can't keep my mother's murderer.... I am giving divorce to you sister...

Aaliya: allah na kare habeeb bhai aisa na kahe...
    Allah forbid Habib Bhai not to say this...

Habeeb: abhi isi waqt aapni bhen ko lekar jao...
    Now itself take you sister and go...

Saying this he end the call...

After sometime...

Aaliya and her husband came to Ahmed's house... They started taking rahila with them...

Rahila started screaming
Rahila: may nahi jaungi ya mere aur habeeb ka Ghar hai...
   I won't go this is mine and habeebs house...

Aaliya started dragging her... Rahila was screaming...

Habeeba was looking other side , he doesn't want to see her again...  Soon Aaliya took rahila to her home...

Here, habeeb was sitting in room closing his eyes , his mind was roaming with many thoughts... He sighed and went out his room and went to ayesha's room...  Saw she was from folding the clothes and arranging in the cupboard...

Habeeb: Ayesha mujhe baat karni hai tumse...
     Ayesha I want to have a word with you...

Ayesha: bolo
    Say..
Said while keeping the last set of clothes in cupboard...

Habeeb went towards her and sit on his knees...

Habeeb (guilt): mujhe maaf kardo ayesha, maine sabse badi galti ki hai... Maine tumhe bhout taklif di hai , aur may shayad maafi ke kabil bhi nahi hun... Ayesha mujhe ek mauka do sudhrne ka... Maine aapne bacchon ko itna rulaya hai , tumhe rulaya hai, na jane kya kuch na kaha hai... Pls ayesha mujhe maaf kardo...
     Forgive me Ayesha, I did the biggest mistake... I have troubled you alot,maybe am not capable for forgiveness... Ayesha Give me a chance to improve... I have made my daughter's cry so much, what kya i have said... Pls ayesha forgive me...

Ayesha: itna sab karne ke baad maaf kardun may , maine itne saal se roya hai , tumne mujhe itni taklif di hai, kya tum vo sab din wapis karpaoge? Galti karke maafi manga asan hai... Kahanthe tum jab meri beti ko shaadi karwa rahe the , tab tumhe beti yaad nahi aayi , jab tumhri betiyan itne ache marks aur certificate say pure college may top Kiya, tab unki yaad nahi aai , gaarv mehsoos nahi huwa... Kya tum vo sab din wapis laoge jab may ro rahi thi aur tumhe mana kar rahi thi ki dusra nikha maat Karo, itna aasan nahi hai maaf karna... Jao may tumhe maaf nahi karungi...
   You did so much and i should forgive you, I have been cried for so long years , you have troubled me alot, would you give back the that days? Doing mistake and asking for forgiveness is easy... Where were you when your daughter was getting married at that time you didn't remember you kids, when you daughters were getting good marks and certificate and getting top in college at that time you didn't remember them... You didn't feel proud... Would to bring back those days I was crying and saying not to do second marriage, forgiving is not so easy... Go I can't forgive you....

Saying this she sat on bed and wiped her tears...

Habeeb looked at her and sat beside her and held her hands...

Habeeb: thik hai maaf maat Karo , may tumse wada karta hun , may aapni mehnat se tumse maafi maang kar rahunga aur aapne aap ko sudharne ki koshish karunga aur ke behtar insaan Bane ki dikhaunga...
    Ok don't forgive, I will promise you that , with my hard work i ask for forgiveness and I will try to be a better person and show...

Saying this he went out of the room... Ayesha was crying...

Time skip...

At night...

Rahila was sitting on bed crying... She got a call , it was inspector akram...

Rahila (to herself): iss akram ka to kuch karna padhega...
   Should do something about this akram...

She didn't pick the call... Then after sometime she called to a person and said everything about akram...

Rahila smirked and kept her phone aside...

Aaliya came to rahila....

Aaliya: aapa vo koi inspector akram hai na , usko police se nikal Diya uska licence cancel kardiya Gaya hai...
    Sister there was a inspector akram na , he got removed from police and his licence is also cancelled...

Rahila: vo to hona hi tha...
   it was bound to happen

Aaliya: aapne kuch kiya aapi?
    Did you do something sister?

Rahila: Haan Maine saare uske kaale kaam uske senior ko bata Diya hai...
   Yes, I have told all his black deeds to his senior.

Aaliya: aapne kyu kiya?
    Why did you do?

Rahila: aise hi...
   Just like that...

Aaliya: aap kuch kha lijiye subha se kuch nahi kahaya hai...
    You eat something, you didn't had anything from morning....

Rahila's face fell down remember the morning incident...

Rahila: Mera Maan nahi abhi , baad may kha lungi...
    I don't feel like , I will eat later...

Aaliya: magar aapi..
  But sister...

Rahila: thodi der ke liye akela chod do Aaliya...
    Leave me alone for sometime Aaliya..m

Aaliya nodded and went out of the room...

After sometime...

Aaliya came to rahila to wake up for dinner...

Aaliya: aapi uthiye kuch kha lijiye...
      Sister Wale and have something...

Rahila woke up and nodded...

Aaliya: aap yahi rukiya khana lekar aatin hun...
    You stay I will bring the food...

In living room...

Aaliya's mother in law was scoulding Aaliya asking her for how many days she will stay here... Aaliya just said for somedays and she will go back some where else...

Then door bell ringed, Aaliya opened the door and unknown person was standing warring burqa and niqab...

Unknown person: assalamualaikum
   Greetings...

Aaliya: walikumsalam, ji aap koun?
     Greetings, yes who are you?

Unknown person: ji may rahila ki sheli hun , mujhe unse kuch baat karni hai...
   I a friend of rahila, I wanted to talk something with her...

Aaliya: ji aap yahi rukiye , may unhe bulake aati hun...
   You stay here , I will call her ...

Unknown person: ji thik hai...
   Okay...

Aaliya sent rahila to the main door...

Rahila: ji aap koun...
   Yes who are you...

Soon the unknown person took the niqab off... It was akram...

Rahila( shock): tum..
    You...

Akram: Haan may... Duniya ko allah hafiz boliye..
   Yes me.... Say bye to this world...

Saying this his took out his rivolver and shoot on her 2 times and ran away...

Aaliya ran and came to main door, she was shocked to her sister lying in pool of blood...

Aaliya took her head on her lap
Aaliya: hum aapko hospital lekar chalte hai kuch nahi hoga aapi aapko...
   We will take you the hospital nothing will happen to you...

Rahila nodded no and cressed her sister's face and took her last breath on her lap...

Rahila left the world with her unborn baby...

At Ahmed's house...

Rahila's body came to Ahmed's house, Aaliya was crying miserabley, Ayesha was comforting her...

Habeeb was standing near the door and looking at the dead body and was sad...

Time skip....

At morning...

All the males came from garve yard and after praying there fajar namaaz...

Annie served water to everyone...

Slowly all the guest started leaving...

Aaliya nd her family went back to their home...

So here ends the chapter of rahila in the story...

Every person deserves a 2nd chance so thought of giving it, bcz in the drama it didn't happen so I wanted to see habeeb in a better person... So was it a good idea?

Suggestions:
1: you guys the fakhir annie moments?

2: should I end this story in 1 or 2 chapters?

3: want habeeb trying to be a better person for his wife and children and living his life with her grand daughter Anaya?

How is the chapter guys?
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Next chapter will be updated soon...
Till then allah hafiz ❤️

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