the uncanny counter

By mrs-delulu

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Suhee who is in search of her parents murder's recently became a counter and tries to fight the world which i... More

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You slowly open your eyes to find your self in a bright white room, there was nothing in it just white plain room, you jump to your feet,

what the heck I'm i?

Oh hi your awake, you flinch a little and turn around to find a guy he was pretty cute not gonna lie, but the weird thing is,

where did you come from? You ask a little shocked, cause you were sure you were alone just a second ago,

Don't worry about that, he says in a deep husky voice, I'm lee do-hyun by the way, you just look at him blinking trying to get your brain to talk,

where I'm i, you finally ask,

Well your at the after life suhee, he says slowly walking towards you,

how the freak do you know my name, forget about that I'm DEAD, you said freaking out, you were a few inches away from passing out.

Well not really dead just in a bad condition, and in a coma and will not wake up anytime soon,

okay so suhee calm down okay, I'll explain what's going on your probably freaking out, glad you noticed, you say sarcastically,

so this is the place where dead and the living meet he say walking, you suddenly felt your feet touch sometimes soft, you look down and find your self in a beach, the air making your hair fly with it,

the is where the bad and the good meet, he say, turning to look at you.

it doesn't seem to different from my world, you ask looking at the calm beach,

because it's not the only different is, the good get rewards, while the bad  don't, he says.

So why I'm i here?! You ask, there's only one way for you to live suhee, and that is? You ask feeling a wave of hope,

He smiles mysteriously, and say, your a very powerful girl suhee, you might not notice it but your more powerful than you think, so we want you to join us and defeat the bad and save the good,

you look at him blinking, me save the good, this guy chose the wrong person,  that the only way for me to live, you ask, making him nod.

In your world there are people who are called counters, and their duties is to defeat the bad and save to good he says, so you want me to be one of those people, you ask kind off understanding,

Yes, suhee, so what do you say,

you sigh, and say, if that's the only way for me to live then count me in, you were exited but nervous you hoped you were what he exactly said but you weren't sure,

he smiles brightly, then suhee welcome you can go back now, before i leave can i ask you a question?, you were hopeful he might agree,

He nods, telling you to go on, my parents passed away a few years ago, and I'm wondering if i can meet them since you said this is where the dead and living meet, you say still looking at him waiting for a reaction.

You watch as the smile disappear from his face which is replaced by a calm but sad face, no you can't I'm sorry, you slowly nod disappointed,

suhee, just warning you this is a dangerous duty there's a high chance you mighy die, he says

you shrug your shoulder and say, i already died once so it's fine, he nods and points to a door that just came out of nowhere,

that should take you back now bye suhee, he waves, you wave back and enter the door, you slowly open your eyes finding yourself in a hospital room,

you sit up and look around, you look to your right to find a guy sitting there. Your awake he says,

who are you? You ask curious, I'm one  of the counters, he replys, i really like your hair, he pointed out,

you look at he confused, as he hand you a small mirror, you take it and look at your hair, you let out a small scream, and say, what the fuck happened to my hair.

If you become a counter your hair turn's curly he says calmly. You nod still looking at your hair, now let's go before the doctors burg in he says Walking away,

where? You ask, getting up, to meet the others he replys, you two were in a cab, it was an awkward silence none of had anything to say, so you tried making small talks with him,

I'm suhee by the way, you say trying to get close to him, mo-tak he replys, you nod, can you tell me a little about the counters, you ask curious,

he turns to face, and says we counters are like normal human beings but a little different, he stops talking for a little and comes close to you and whispers, we have super powers,

you look at him with wide eyes, while he nods backing away, he walks in the noodle place, you slowly follow after him hiding behind his back,

she's here he yells, as an old lady comes out of the kitchen, oh your here, you stick your head out of his back and wave at her,

she waves back and points at a table for you to sit, you slowly walk towards it and sit down, she takes the sit next to your and says,

you can call miss chu if you'd Like she says with a smile, you nod, I'm suhee you say, what a pretty name just Like your face, you bow a little and thank her,

you hear the door to shop open and a girl enters, with a boy just behind her,  I'm back she says sitting down on a different table,

just the right time, miss chu says, you look at the girl then at the boy, you notice him walking in crutches but ignored it, rather you focused on his uniform,

he takes a sit in front of miss chu, you must be so-mun she asks, he slowly nods, so-mun, you whisper to yourself.

Another high school kid, mo-tak yells, making you flinch, stop that your scary the kids, miss chu deafens.

they want us to team up with kids he says again, you just watch him in amusement, miss chu, gets up and walk next to him she whispers something in his ears, which you apparently heard clearly.

Stop do-hyun and wi-gen said we need this kids there are our only key at this point, she says,

This should be fun, you whisper to yourself feeling the excitement babbling inside you,

suhee do-hyun explained a lot to you right, miss chu asks, kinda you reply,

so we are called the counters all of us were in a come but after we become counters we walk up, we all work for the spirit immigration office and our duties in to take down the evil spirits, miss chu says,

you nod, taking the new information, she shows you her hands which had black don't on each finger, you look at your as it had the same thing, you never evan noticed it.

as so-mun looks at his and widen his eyes, mo-tak on the other hand tried to show his but showed the wrong one and got slapped on the hand by miss chu, not this one the other one, he shows the other one which had the exact same thing.

what does it do?, you ask curious, it's the gate to the afterlife, the girl who was listening to the corner finally says, you almost forgot she exits due to the lack of talk.

if you put your hand on your heart and count to three you'll go to the afterlife, so-mun wanna try it, miss cha said calmly, since suhee already met them.

He places he hand on his heart and start counting, 1.. 2.. 3.. He face suddenly fell to the table like he passed out.

did he pass out, you ask in disbelief, well sure you can think that, mo-tak says.

Hello i hoped you liked this chapter coz chapter one was beyond bad anyway i don't got anything to say so yeah and I'll try to update fast so don't worry


And this guy is one hella good looking guy

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