Creativity:15 /15
OK, this story starts off normal, like normal, just going to a hotel-type story. The author must make it creepy towards the end, and I love it. You want to know do they see these creatures or if these creatures see them. First, you're not sure when you start the story because they see the creatures, and you know they see them. The creatures are doing everything that's weird in this hotel. That's the interesting part about creativity is you're guessing what's going on and who can see who
Originality: 15/15
The story definitely isn't your normal horror story, and I'm not saying that's a bad thing. I love the way that the other does this. It doesn't give you the oh my God, this is 100 percent creepy feeling. It gives you a subtle, creepy feeling. But it's still a good Story and different from your average 0h. My goodness, we're going to start off as a creepy type of story. Wings you into the creepiness and that I can appreciate
Storytelling: 15/15
The storytelling actually makes you feel like you're actually in the story, and you're dealing with all the creepiness of the story, like you're seeing everything that you shouldn't see and you're witnessing everything you shouldn't be witnessing. But you're still going to live there because you don't want to go home. But then, at the end of the day, you meet somebody who can also see what you see. You wonder do you really want to stay in this hotel because I feel like your dinner. Like these creatures are walking around here waiting for you to freak out so they can eat you. Definitely interesting let me tell you, the storytelling is definitely interesting.
Character: 15/15
The characters I love, and here's why I love the characters: the characters are all broken. I feel like they are all broken. And I'm not saying I'm like one of those weird people that are like, oh, I love that your characters have issues. The reason that I love that the characters are broken is because the characters being broken made them not want to deal with the fact that there is creepiness going around in this house. You know that there's crappiness in this house. You see it in the first chapter, but it's like the main character is okay with it. What could go wrong? Like I think in the beginning, the characters think that this is just not real. So it's like they don't want to acknowledge the reality of it. I love the way the author did the characters. I love how they have that one annoying character. I feel like the annoying character is going to be like the Savior. At the end of the day, I love the characters and how they are
Story Flows:15 /15
I love the story flow and how it flows very nicely. I did not see any errors or mistakes, nothing at all that screamed that it needed to be changed or edited. Who sold nicely. Everything was beautifully written the story was amazing.
Cover Design: 15/15
The cover was perfect cover fit the story
Final Thoughts: 10/10
The story is beautiful. Even though it's a creepy horror story, it is still a very beautifully written one because it gives you that small amount of creepiness along with the storytelling. It's creepy but not in a way that you're like, 0 Oh my goodness, I can't continue reading on. It gives you the story, and it runs you through the story, and as it's running you through the story, you can see and read certain creepiness in the story; things that you think should be natural are not natural. Something that the author brings very well to the story. Appreciate stories like this because I think stories like this are amazing. Big and horror stories because I'm a big baby, but this author they did a fantastic job with it
Chapters I read:3
Total points:100
Summary of the book:
Brooke collapsed on the floor, her eyes widened in disbelief. "What is this?" Her heart beat faster as her chest tightened. The large figure broke the bones of strangers, pinched its eyes off their faces, and placed them on its head.She stood up her knees weak. She took a step back, taking in the view. "I'm going to die."--- Runaway seventeen-year-old Brooke decided to stay in Riverside Hotel for a few days until she found a permanent place to stay, that is until she discovered a dark secret hiding between the thousand doors of the Hotel. Every night when the clock strikes twelve, the pretty facade of the Riverside Hotel turns into ashes, and Brooke along with three other misfits must find a way to suvive.
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