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Irum was looking out the car window trying to control her anger, she didn't want to come with Aryan but the family was already pretty stressed she didn't want to add to their worry
Aryan on the other side wanted to cry, he was feeling very lonely, sad, helpless and most importantly weak, but maybe this all was for the best
Irum sighed in frustration and sat straight before turning to face Aryan who was driving the car emotionlessly
"stop the car" Irum's voice brought him out of his thoughts "Huh!" he frowned
"Gari roko Aryan" She glared at him and he sighed but obliged scared that if he didn't stop she would jump out of the car, typical Irum!
"kya masla ha?" She asked him softly when he stopped the car and turned toward her
"Kuch nahi" he replied and she rolled her eyes
"Dekho Aryan you cannot fool me, hum koi abhi 2 hafte pehla dost nahi bane jo tum mujh sa jhut bol rahe ho aur I won't figure out, we've been best friends for as long as I can remember" Aryan gulped his tears her soft voice was doing something to him
"You're my buddy yar, my saviour you've always been there for me in my highs and my lows, aj tak har bar Haider bhai ki dant sa tum na mujhay bachaya ha, mere mistakes or stupidity to be more precise ka blame khud par liya, mera aj tak aik hi bestie raha ha aur woh tum ho, mein to Maheen sa bhi itna close nahi hun jitna tum sa hun, you know I hate crying right?" she questioned and Aryan nodded looking down
"Trust me, Aryan you're the person with whom I think 'Yar yeh to mera bestie ha iska samne to ro sakti hun yeh kabhi mujhay judge nahi jare ga' bs kabhi aisa kuch hua nahi ka rona pare lekin agar kal ko kuch hua to you will be my first option, Aryan tumhe pata ha mein kyu tumhe bhai nahi kehti?" Aryan shook his head still looking down
"Kyu ka mere dil mein mere bhaiyon ki jagah alag ha aur tumhari alag" Aryan looked at her with a smile
'you can do it Aryan kuch nahi hoga, irum is your bestie you can share everything with her she will never judge you kabhi nahi' Aryan thought in his mind that he would tell her, it was now or never
But before he could say anything Irum spoke
"Pata ha lot of my friends have said ka I have feelings for you that's why I don't call you bhai, but dekho ab un stupids ko to nahi pata na ke were friends- best-friend nothing more, I don't have feelings for you and nor you right?" she laughed and Aryan's heart stopped beating
"Of course Irum You're my best friend nothing more than that, Agar tum akhri larki bhi hui to bhi mein tumse shaadi na Karun" Aryan laughed and Irum hit his arm
"Batmeez" she pouted but laughed, but the next second she became serious and looked at Aryan with pleading eyes
"Aryan I want you to be there with me on my special day, shaadi, nikkah yeh roz roz thori hota ha, aik bar hota ha zindagi mein and I want my bestie to be there with me, please mere liya ruk jao bs aj ka liya please rat mein beshak chale jana" she pleaded
"I'm sorry Irum I want to be there with you as well but I can't mera Jana boht zaruri ha, company mein boht loss ho raha ha" he wanted to say his friend had an accident but in nervousness this slipped out of his mouth
"To tumhare liya company mere sa zyada important ha?" she questioned emotionlessly
"Nahi aise baat nahi-" she cut him off harshly
"Agar nahi ha to mat jao, agar tum gai to I will think you care more about your company than me, to batao will you go or not?" She questioned, Aryan's heart started beating furiously
"Dekho Irum-" she again cut him off "Han ya na" she said calmly
'I'm sorry Irum I love you' Aryan thought and "Han I'm going after dropping you off" he said coldly
Irum looked at him hurt for a mili second but then masked her emotions and got out of the car, shocking Aryan
"Irum gari mein betho" he came out in front of her...
"Mein beth rahi hun par tum mat behtna cab karwa lo," she said and sat in the driver's seat
"Iru-" Before Aryan could say anything Irum raced the car away, leaving Aryan shocked as nobody ever taught Irum how to drive
"Yeh larki ha kon?" he frowned but then sighed and got a cab for himself
Irum looked in the mirror and sighed, she was sitting in the bridal room of the hall they had booked
She was fully ready her make-up was beautifully done, it really complemented her facial features and made her look breathtaking
Ignore the belly! Irum hates showing skin!
Irum turned back when she heard the door open, she smiled when she saw Haider standing there...
Haider walked closer to her and kneeled in front of her, she gasped her eyes widening as she tried to make him stand
"Bhai uthein yeh kya kar rahe hein" she panicked, she could never make her brother kneel in front of her even if it was in love
"Shh! Apne behn ka age kneel karne sa mein chota nahi ho jaun ga" he made her quiet down
"Are you okay?" Haider questioned softly, "I should ask you that, you're the one shivering and on the verge of tears not me bhai" She creased his face
Haider sighed "Irum I know I should have asked you this earlier but everyone had assured me you're okay, ap is shaadi sa kush ho?" Irum smiled
"Ab is sawal ka kya faida bhai I'm happy but even If I wasn't kuch nahi ho sakta," she said softly
"Ho, sakta ha jab tak tumhara bhai zinda ha tumhare sath kuch galat nahi ho na dunga! Agar you're not happy just tell me, koi tumhe force nahi kare ga, zyada sa zyada bezati hogi, huh! Mere behn ki kushi sa zyada kuch matter nahi karta hmm?" he said creasing her cheek
One hand was placed on her knee while the other was creasing her cheek, his entire body was shivering like a leaf...
Irum slowly stood up and held his hand making him stand, once he was up she pulled him in a hug and placed her head on his chest inhaling his cologne
"I love you bhai" she whispered, Haider's heart ached to say 'I love you too bhai ki jaan' but he stopped himself
"Bhai agar ap gussa na hon to aik baat bolun, kyu ka agar ap gussa hui to thappar marein ga aur make up kharab ho jai ga aur abhi fix karne ka time nahi ha sare guests aa gai hein" she joked laughing while Haider's heart broke
They both were still in each other's embrace...
"Bolo" he whispered trying to keep the tears in his eyes
"Kabhi kabhi apne pyaar ka Izhar karna chahiye, sometimes all the other person needs is your assurance, you never know kab ap agle bande ko akhri bar dekh rahe hein," she said and Haider's heart stopped beating for second
But before he could say anything Hamza barged into the room and took him out as Aghajaan had called him leaving Irum alone in the room
On the other hand, Aryan stepped out of his car and walked into the airport with a heavy heart and teary eyes
"Allah mujhay Irum ko kisi aur ka dekhna ka liye zinda mat rakhna please let me die on this flight" he whispered taking his luggage to check-in
To be continued ❤️
How will you feel if Aryan dies?
How will Irum feel knowing her bestie died on the day of her wedding?
Is Rayan actually bad or was Saad misguided?
How was Haider?
Best of luck with the comments, the clock is ticking, and do not expect any mercy from me 😉😈
Ignore the mistakes I did not re-check it