Creativity:15 /15
Okay, the story was definitely different. like I was not expecting her to be sold off. At the end of the day, the story had a very interesting turn of events. Like, I think the dad felt remorse for what he did, but at the end of the day, you can only show her more so many times before your daughter's like ready to beat the crap out of you. I'm sorry, but I feel like his daughter definitely needs to beat the crap out of her dad. Where the creativity was, and the way the author did it as you continued on was amazing.
Originality: 15/15
I don't think I've read a story like this one. The way its author writes it, I was expecting it to be like the asshole billionaire. Don't get me wrong, this originality In the way that he comes across he would think he is. end of the day Wait, the author did write him, and how he's different made me love the story even more. He has that rough edge side to him, but he's carrying as well.
Storytelling:15 /15
I love storytelling. I love the way that it's authored storytelling. I love the way that it is mysterious, but at the same time, it's sad. Of what the character goes through and how she goes through it. Time, I feel like the mystery of the story is what makes it amazing. You're not sure what's going to happen. You see this rugged man, and he's hard, and he's nasty, and he is the way he is. But then you see his caring side as well, so for me, the storytelling is beautifully equally balanced, and I love that.
Character:15 /15
One thing that I do love is the characters. I think that that is what makes this story the most amazing story you can possibly think of. The way that the characters are what makes the story the story. You have this really rugged character that you're thinking is going to just be nasty, but then when you continuously read the story, and you get farther into the story, you see that he has that beautiful soul to him like he does not like when people are disobedient or don't obey him. But he's not a nasty or mean person. He definitely does care, and you see that as you progress. Make me love this character.
Story Flows:15 /15
The story flowed very nicely. I did not see anything wrong with the story; I did not see any grammar errors, structural errors, or making flow very nicely, and everything made sense; there was nothing that was out of character. There was nothing that didn't seem like it flowed right. The sentences flowed right, and the structure wasn't sound, but it was a very good story.
Cover Design:15 /15
The cover definitely fits the story perfectly. I find that the story and the cover coincide very nicely, and they complement each other very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
Once again, I find that what the author did in this story is unique, and I can accept and acknowledge how beautiful it is. I've read a lot of million and billionaire stories, and there's always something where the main character, man or woman, is very nasty and rugged. In this story, you can tell that the main character has a heart but doesn't like to be disobeyed. That is understandable, especially when you spend a lot of money on the person he considers his property. I'm not saying that that is a good thing because nobody should be property, but I don't see him treating her as nasty. I feel like as long as she is understanding of how he is and he can understand her, they will be perfect for each other. The author did an amazing job with this story in balancing the meanness and ruthlessness of the billionaire and the understanding, caring, and timid way that they did the girl. They did it so perfectly, and I loved it.
Chapters I read: a prologue in three chapters
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
Sold to a group of unknown men by her father was not how she saw her eighteenth birthday. She opened her eyes after being sedated and saw an unsettling sight of rich middle-aged men contending for ownership. Desperation engulfs her as her eyes lock onto a young man in the room, silently pleading to be rescued. She refuses to be relegated to a life as a plaything for the wealthy elite, especially when dreams of a brighter future and hard-earned scholarship hung on the line. ..."I'm not your prize""I paid a million dollars for you, hence you are. You're my possession and unless you have a million dollars to pay me back you aren't leaving" his voice echoed through the hallway sending shivers down her spine. She knew she could never lay her hands on such an amount of money so she retired into her enormous cage called a bedroom in defeat. ^*^*^*^*As she grapples with her new reality, with dreams shattered and freedom seemingly unattainable, Avery finds herself entangled in a perilous dance between desire and survival. Will she succumb to the fate imposed upon her, or can she navigate the treacherous paths of the underworld to reclaim her free will and dreams? a complex tale of forbidden attraction, dangerous secrets, and the perils of the mafia world unfolds.
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