Creativity: 15/15
The creative activity that this author did was amazing. It was gruesome in the end, and I'm not saying that in a bad way because it wasn't bad at all. They made the story and the main character in her craving and her not knowing what's real and not real after what she went through. Was amazing because, at the end of the day, she freaked out, and she didn't know what was and wasn't.
Originality: 15/15
Can I actually say that this is definitely an original story? I have never read something quite like this one. I have read stories about Faye. They are popular and I love reading stories about Faye, but the way that this character is and the way that the author wrote this story is a little different than what I'm used to. Everybody knows that when it comes to the Faye world, you need to be careful because, once again, if you make a deal with the Faye or encounter a Faye, things like that can get very tricky. The author did this is phenomenal because, at the end of the day, the way they did it's unique to think about it, but it feels like the main character attacked Faye. but brought her into their world and had him pursue her. Then again, I feel like he was already pursuing her. But once again, the originality is definitely there and beautiful.
Storytelling: 15/15
I love how the story was told because, at the end of the day, you're not sure what's going on, and the way the author did the main character is good and sad, OK? At the end of the day, it wasn't her fault what happened and what was happening, but she was still kind of dragged into, I feel, a world that she did not belong in. All because of a craving that she had, and though it is a weird craving and it is sad that she ended up where she is now, it's still lovely how the author wrote the story.
Character: 15/15
You honestly say I love the character is amazing. I love both of the characters I honestly feel like one of the characters is definitely a Faye, and I loved it, and I feel like I don't care that he definitely pursued her. I don't care. I feel like he was waiting for her to mess up. I love it 'cause I know at the end of the day that he wanted her to mess up like he was waiting for her to mess up. He's the one that made her mess up, so now I feel like he's going to make a deal with her or something to give her back what she wants but in return, she has to give him something.
Story Flows: 10/15
You can see I did put a snip of what I saw in it to be changed or something that didn't sound right when it came to the sentence structure. Comes to this, I feel like collapse should be collapsing. I felt like I was on the verge of collapsing rather then I felt like I was on the verge of collapse. because it didn't sound right, and it didn't flow right. Besides that, the story was amazing, and the rest of the sentences in the certain structure that I read were solid. just this sentence by itself really did not make sense to me, and it didn't sound right to me at all. Everything else was perfect.
Cover Design:15 /15
I loved that the cover design didn't go well with the story, and that's what I always look for when it comes to a story: the cover has to complement the story. And it did very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
at the end of the day, the story was religious, and I cannot wait for this author to get the acknowledgment they need. When it comes to stories like this, they don't get enough of the love they deserve. I feel like this story was really amazing, and the way that the author created each character was phenomenal. I don't think that a lot of Faye's stories like this one get a lot of acknowledgement because they are gory and are a lot to deal with. I felt this story from the three chapters I read had enough goriness but not too much, and it had enough sadness to represent the main character, but it wasn't to the point where you didn't want to continue reading. For me, as a reviewer and somebody who loves to read, this story was one of those stories that kept me on my toes. I want to know what he was up to but also what she's going to do about it.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
Lena, a 35 year old single mom is so close to achieving her dream of starting a family. She is pregnant with healthy twins and her practice is thriving.Everything is going well until she starts getting unnatural cravings, that consume her and push her to attack somebody.A simple mistake may cost her her unborn children. To get them back she enters a macabre dance with a fae, one of the last of his kind.But things may not be as they seem, the handsome fae may behave like a devil but what if beneath it all, he was just a man who loved Lena more than anything ?TW: cannibalism, swearing, murder, miscarriage, mental illness, forced hospitalization, gore
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