Creativity:15 /15
The way that this author has created this phenomenal world is beyond me because you are definitely brought into a different world when you are reading this story. It is like your whole brain can't comprehend what this author has created because it's so vivid and so Lively that it's incredible.
Originality:15 /15
I don't know how they've created this world, but the way they've created it is something I have never read. It is so mysterious but also so intriguing to watch it unfold, and the detail of the creativity of everything is mind-blowing.
Storytelling: 15/15
I feel like when it comes to this concept of the story that I'm reading, it is like an older story, like a back-in-the-old-days Japanese feeling story. Just the way that the author writes, it feels like a Japanese-type atmosphere when it comes to home life respectability and things like that. Just like a culture thing, it's like a Japanese culture thing. I couldn't think of what it was, but now I did. That's how it feels, but it's still beautiful to read.
Character:15 /15
You can really tell that they have put a lot of thought into this character and characters. The characters flow very nicely, their personalities are unique, and how the author created them is phenomenal.
Story Flows:15 /15
I didn't see anything wrong with the story; I felt like it flowed very well. The concept of the story and the way that the author tells the story was phenomenal. I did not see any grammar issues, nor did I see any structural problems. Everything in the story flowed very well and was in sync with how the story was supposed to be.
Cover Design: 10/15
I'm iffy about the cover. I don't know if the cover compliments how beautiful the story is. But it's a unique and attractive cover regardless.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
At the end of the day, stories like this confuse me about why they do not have the votes, comments, and love they should. Stories like this that are phenomenal really represent what the story should be, how exceptional the story is, and how imaginative the author has created the story. And yet, they're not getting the support and love they shed. And this is why I feel like Wattpad is broken: Stories like this aren't getting noticed. What pad needs to make a section for new Authors are authors that do not get a lot of love so that people can find these types of gems. So that they can get the recognition they deserve because this is another author that needs their recognition, that needs their story to have millions of votes and millions of comments and to be recognized for how amazing it is.
Chapters I read: three chapters
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
Aoki Matsumoto. A student at Itachiyama high. An obvious target for bullies and an exemplary specimen for how not to be raised. He's taken advantage of at every occasion by basically everyone, for the worst of reasons. He's so tolerant and accepting that he has attested his fate of being an outcast and ill-treated into his daily routine. He has become numb to struggle and pain amidst his bedridden and cruel mother accompanied by the society for what his family had done. But little did he know that his drama filled life would be injected with magic, quite literally. A mage enters his life and teaches him magic, turning his prescription of life inside out.Follow along with Aoki who turns from a gloomy crybaby to a worrior who is destined to saves countless worlds using his magical abilities along with his friends both from Earth and Heavensworth.
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