Rising Against All Odd

By Avni79smile

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Fear had two meaning 1)forget everything and ran away. 2) face everything and rise. The Choice is yours. By... More

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CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
Character sketch
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
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By Avni79smile

First of fall I got the idea of inserting the trailer photo in the update from my fav writer tani10, SwatiSandeep and Maalvika1.
So all credit goes to them.

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Raj was sitting by the lake he  looked at the lake the water was soo calm this was the calmness he was craving in his life right now.


His eyes were not teary just red and exhausted he was tried tried of crying.
His tears were dried .

He wanted to cry but no tear came out of his eyes.

It was like now the tear is also tired with him.

He chuckled at his luck.

He don't know what was the solution of sneha's this trick.

Actually from starting he never tried to find out solution he always did what she told him .

Because he was too focused in trying to save his family's reputation that how to checkmate her didn't even crossed his mind.

Or maybe maybe he was scared if he tried to do anything against her she will
damage his family's reputation.

Now also his family's reputation was at stack but atleast they were not facing embarassment because of their mms .

His mother and father had thrive hard to maintain a reputation in the society.
His brother was a respected person in his college plus one time his parents can handle the embarrassment of their mms leaking but his brother sunny he was just a child that to soft child he will not be able to bear this things he will not be able to see his mms on the tv.

When he left sneha he never thought she would stoop so low just to take a revenge.

He never thought a person can stoop so low because of ego.

But ego is a big thing people kill other people for their ego .

When she started blackmailing him he was sooo scared of it that he didn't realise he should also find ways to defeat her he was panicked so he did whatever she asked .

He did whatever she asked .

He still remember how hurt sunny was with the slap .
How furious his mother was on him she would have slapped him if sunny didn't interfere in between.

Even his father rebuked him for not believing sunny and slapping him.

Sunny didn't talk to him after that he was broken he expected his bhaiya to support him .

He was too hurt to realise why his bhaiya slapped him and he is not hurt or angry on sunny for that he can understand after all sunny is a 14 year old child

And now he is not sure whether he really pushed sunny from terrace or not.

He is devastated he was trapped in the vicious gane of sneha .

And their is no way he can defeat her .
Atleast he cannot see any way.

He was standing lonely physically and mentally he was lonely very lonely.

He smiled sadly:- ab main kuch bhi karlo main sach sabit nahi kar paunga na bata paunga ab meri zindagi akela pan hi hai .

Main kuch bhi karlo sneha se nahi Bach sakta aur ab toh Mera pariwar bhi nahi Bach sakta .

He closed his eyes

"Tere anadar tere baap me Harsh ka Ganda khoon hai Raj "
Was what his mother said to him.

A tear escape his closed eyes.
"Main tujhse nafrat karti hoon Raj "

He still remember with how.much hate and rahe his mother said this to him.

He never realised how much it hurt to see his hate in your mother's eyes.

He sobbed a little .

"Bhaiyaaaaaaaaa".
He remember sunny's shout when sunny feel from the terrace.
That shout was imprinted in his heart.

"Tumhe ise guilt main marna hai Raj ki tumne sunny ko terrace se pheka tha."

"Agar tumne sach batya Raj toh....samjh loo....sneha laughed evilly".
Her laughter echo in his eyes.

Then opened his eyes  wiped his eyes.
He was tired he just cannot go on like this.

Raj smiled slowly after some time  and said:- ab mere family ko bachane ka ek hi solution hai jise main bhi ise dard se mukt ho jau aur woh log bhi Shanti se rahe .
his face show some emotion which no one can interpret and got up from their and walked slowly away from the peaceful lake .

Here in Raj's house where mahima was in room throwing things angrily.

And mahindra was sitting in hall with defeated face.

He just don't know why Raj didn't said anything.
He remember mahima's word
"Main nahi sun Rahi thi par aap tu sun rahe the na iski baat isne aap se sach kyu nahi kaha".
For the first time after this all fisco he was thinking mahima was right On the day when sunny went to comma they all were soo tensed that didn't got time to hear raj's word but after that whenever he asked Raj the reason of pushing sunny and behaving so rudely with him.

He always got blank look from Raj .
He tried very hard to hate Raj same way mahima did but somewhere he cannot do it because if whenever he tried to hate him Raj 's eyes came in front of him .
And in those eyes he could only see pain immense pain .

Whenever Raj looked at sunny photo he can see guilt but pure love in those eyes.

He can distrust Raj but not his intuition.
And the way sunny shouted Raj's name while falling is still ringing in his ears that call doesn't had hate nor surprise it only had love in it.

And He know Raj his Raj will never hurt sunny.

They were two body one soul.
Raj cannot withstand a single scratch on sunny .

But all these proof.

Ufff his mind is messed up he sighed.

Mahindra thought:- shayad main Raj pe vishwas karke sunny ke sath injustice kar rah hoon....par nahi mera Raj apne sunny ko hurt nahi karega .

He was lost in thought when he heard the front door opening and Raj came inside with red eyes .

His face was pale but it had a small smile he looked at mahindra who was looking at him with blank expression.

He slowly walked towards mahindra kneel down infront of him.
Mahindra wanted to get up and move from their he was angry on Raj for not saying anything infront of mahima.

But Raj's eyes stopped him from saying anything or moving.
His eyes were soft yet red filled with pain .

He was not understand when Raj can get forgiveness from mahima by confessing everything why he is still silent taking all pain without any words.

Raj looked at mahindra and said:- papa with soft voice .

Mahima had already heard the door voice she came running towards from her room saw Raj grabbing Raj and at once was about to pounce at him like a tigress who want her prey .

But mahindra saw her and at once glare her with cold eyes .

Making her shiver so she stood their without any words .

Raj saw that he smiled after all this still his father was not letting his mother hurt him .
His eyes watered he looked at mahindra and said :- papa main aap se kuch mango toh doge kya .

Mahindra was so moved with his gentle voice which has nothing but pain in it he cupped  his face and said :- haa beta bol na kya chaiye main tujhe abhi donga woh i promise.

Raj eyes went teary hearing this how could his father treat him well after all this .

Raj teary:- papa let me meet sunny once just for once I beg you .
He said joining his hand together.

Mahima breathed fire she shouted at once :- bilkul nahiiii ye waha nahi jayegaaaa.

Raj ignored her and looked at his father and said :- papa plzzzz mujhe ek bar use milna hai plzz.

Mahima :- kyu use phir marna chahta hai haa akhir maar kyu na sare property maa baap ka pyar sab ise chaiye .
Sab kuch kitna lalchi hai tu Raj .

All her words were piercing his heart but he ignored her and looked at mahindra with hope whose eyes were teary as if he was in trance for the first time mahindra also doubted Raj .

Mahima disgusted:- kaise hai tu Raj tu bhool gaya ki ayesha ne hamre liye kitna Kiya tha kitna pyar karti thi woh tujhse haa iske baad tune ye kiya ye uske bete ko comma main daal diya bhil gaya Ayesha ka ehsaan haa.

Raj didn't even answered her .
Answering her was waste of time .

He was upset with her not because she didn't trusted him he was upset with the words she chooses with the way she talked it broked him.

Mahindra saw Raj's broken face and immediately came out of his trance .
He is sure Raj has some reason and he will wait for the reason to unveil .

If he is wrong it's his luck but if he is right atleast Raj will have him as his support.

Mahima was not stopping the poison she was speaking.
Mahindra at once said:- chalo Raj sunny se milane chalo.

Mahima and Raj both were shocked .

Raj was happy and mahima was burning in range.

Raj smiled and nodded both got up to leave when mahima stopped  mahindra by holding his hand .

Mahindra and Raj both looked at mahima .

Mahima shock:- aap jante hai aap kya kar rahe hai isne hamre sunny ko Marne ki koshish ki hai aap ise nahi le Jaa sakte use mil ne .

Mahindra sternly:- ye murderer nahi hai mahima aur ye bhi Hamra hi hai mahima aur maine ise waha le jaunga .

Ye mera akhiri fasla hai

Mahima angrily:- aap mere marzi ke khilaf le Jane Wale hai ise .
Toh aap jante hai main kya karungi .

Mahindra sternly:- kya karne wali ho Ghar chod kar chali jaungi na ye hi blackmail kar rahi ho na kabse jab jab Main iska sath Dene ki koshish karta hoo tum ya toh Ghar chodne ka blackmail karti hoon ya mujhse ladne lagti ho  aur main iske badle har wakt tumhe chunta hoon mahima .

Par ab aur nahi mahima bas bahut kar liya tumne bahut sun liya isne .
Naraz ho theek hai hak hai tumhara par ise janwar ki tarah mat behave Karo.

Baar baar ye mat kaho ki ayesha ne itna Kiya tha tum kya kar rahe ho ya main kya kar rahi hoon.

Ayesha tumhe apni behen manti thi isliye usne harsh ke chodne ke baad tumhara sath diya.

Woh Raj ko apna beta manti thi aur ye uska rule tha ki tum dono dono bacho ko sambhalo gi.

Ek kam padega ga toh dusra sambhal lega.

Par ukse Jane ke baad tumhare dimag main ek baat hi reh gayi ayesha ka ehsaan .

Gratitude rakhna acha hai par us main sab kuch bhola dena acha nahi hai .

Tum use ke ehsaan ko chukane ke liye itna doob gayi ki bhool gayi ki Raj bhi tumhara hi beta hai sunny bhi .

Dono ko ek tarah pyar karne jagah tum bas sunny sunny karti rahi.

Ise bhool gayi phele Jo pamper tha ab woh apne sare Kam kare kyu kyuki woh bada bhai hai aur sunny chotha .

Hai na toh bada bhai  hai toh kya uski galti hai.

Jab jab use maa ki zaroorat padi sirf sunny tha uske pass .jo use maa ka pyar de raha tha.

Tum nahi .
Tumhe laga yaha tumhra attention sunny ke liye kam hua waha duniya tumhe bolegi ye toh sauteli maa hai .

Tum kya janti ho Raj sunny ko kya Banta hai woh uska sab kuch hai Raj apne aap ko maar sakta hai sunny ko nahi.

Mahima :-acha itna Manta hai toh hurt kyu kiya sunny ko itna.

Mahindra sigh it's useless to explain her he took Raj's hand in his and went from their leaving mahima stunned .
Mahindra never behaved with her like this her permissions was always priority in this house .No one in this house ever went against her .

Raj looked back and saw her crying his heart crushed :- chinta mat Karo maa aab koi dukhi nahi hoga aab sab khush honge bas kuch der aur .he thought.

She sat down on sofa dejected .

Mahima cried :- toh finally history repeat ho Rahi hai use .
Main chahe kar bhi nahi rok payi .
Use wakt iska baap tha aaj Raj hai use jagah par.
Wahi Raj kar raha hai jo harsh ne Kiya tha parin ke sath woh bhi bhaiya bhaiya karta reh gaya .

She cried bitterly.she never wanted history to be repeated .

Here Raj and mahindra who were in car .
Mahindra was driving the car silently he was also angry on Raj was keeping quite but didn't said anything.

While Raj was just sitting looking out of the window of the car.
Slow breeze were caressing his hair.

Suddenly his phone beeped.

Raj sigh he knew who it is.

He took out his phone and saw the MSG
"Kya darling dar nikal gaya kya hmm
Chalo ek Bhai apne bhai se Milne Jaa Raha hai toh main nahi ruku gi par waha Jo police guard kar rahe hai na unko ya kisi ko kuch bola toh soch Lena..."

The number was unknown but he knew it was from sneha.
The msg deleted automatically after 2 min.

He kept the mobile back in his pocket .

Mahindra noticed all this but didn't said anything.

Soon they reached the hospital mahindra already had special permission for Raj to meet sunny.
As Raj is suspect in police's eyes so he need special permission.

He is just saved because of mahindra.

He looked at the hospital with tears in his eyes after almost two weeks he is going to meet his sunny .

He and mahindra both moved inside and Raj noticed police officers glaring at him.
But he didn't bother to look at them.

Soon they were outside Sunny's ward .
Mahindra stopped and looked at Raj and signal him to go .

Raj went inside with shivering body.

As soon as he entered he felt like he will faint .
Sunny was wrapped in bandage .
Only his face was visible.
His whole body was pale .

A monitor was showing his heartbeat .

Sunny head was covered in bandage even his hands were covered in bandage.

He slowly went towards him with shivering feets a tear escape his eyes.

His throat choked a little.

He kissed Sunny's head with love  and tears.
He touched sunny's like capturing him in his hands .
He slowly kept sunny hand on his head and layed their for few minutes while making sunny's hand caress his head like he used to do .
Then after few minutes he got up when he felt content and   with a smiled and said holding his hand :- I am sorry sunny .take care jaldi theek ho ja maa papa intezaar ka rahe hai .
And Goodbye sunny.

He kissed his hands like a child .
With that he last time looked at sunny and smiled went away .

Mahindra saw Raj coming he was shocked Raj came very early what was he doing inside .

Before he could even say anything Raj hugged mahindra and said:- Thank you papa emotionally.

Mahindra also became emotional and hugged him back .

After few minutes Raj broked the hug and said:- main kuch der akela reh kar ata hoon papa aap Ghar jau .aur maa se naraz mat rehna plzzz.

Mahindra looked at him he was not sure why he was feeling that Raj is leaving them but didn't said anything he nodded .

Both went in different directions mahindra was feeling sad and broken like Raj was leaving him.

And Raj was feeling happy because now everything will be alright.

They both went away one know he will not meet his family again .

And one don't know anything.

Raj stopped and looked back for the last time saw mahindra going he smiled .

He turned. And started walking towards the same beach .

He was happy atleast for the last time he could see his brother.

For last time he could hug his father .

For last time he could hear his mother voice even if it was just blaming him.

He was content with sunny touch .

He smiled.

And slowly reached the lonely beach he looked at the phone typed something with tears and smiled clicked send .

And then looked at the water And smiled .
Raj :- ayesha maa I am coming to you.
Ab ise duniya ko mere zaroorat nahi hai.

With that he slowly slowly walked in the water and slowly the water accepted him.

He was glad atleast the water didn't rejected him like his mother.

Sunny words echo in his ear
" Bhaiya yaar kuch Kahlo na "

He saw flashback of sunny feeding him like a mother .

He saw flashback of ayesha maa tickling him
"Ha haaaa ayesh...a ..hahaa ...maa....haahaa plzzz..bas.

He hear himself laughing while saying this.

"Maa dekho chot lag gai "
A flashback of small him was saying this while cutely crying.

His mother :- ale mera bacha .
And hugged him.
He could still feel that hug.
His mother's love .

He could hear his father's word :- I am proud of you Raj.

But today he is going to disappoint him .
His cried bitterly.
Raj teary :- sorry dad I don't have any option.

Maybe he have but he is not seeing this after all people think suicide is easy way to escape life not knowing it's a way to give your problems to your loved one's.

But soon the water took him away from the land .
He slowly slowly sinked in the water.
The water hugged him like his mother used to do .

Finally sneha revenge will be over .
And his family will live happily ever after.

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Sorry guys for late update.

Flashback scenes here is inspired from serial or movie or yt khani as in all these their are sometime flashbacks shown .

Specially I was inspired with a yt channel story's flashback funwithprasad scene.

Don't worry nothing is same here .
No scenes are copy from anywhere.

I may be inspired from some scene but no even a single scene will be same with them that I can guarantee.

So no scene is copy here.
If I have taken any dialogue I give credit to them .

The dialogue about suicide were it is said  that suicide is a way to transfer your problem to your loved one's .
I heard that dialogue on yt shorts I don't remember the channel but I loved that dialogue so all credit of that dialogue goes to tagt yt channel and that lady who said it not me..

This is longest chapter i ever wrote in my life.

And left alone? Book two chapter are coming up both will cross 4000 words so that's it's taking time for me to write just wait for two days I will update that book soon.

Thank you
Keep smiling 😊
Bye.

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