Creativity:15 /15
This story is gold. I will just let you know this story is 150 billion percent gold. I dug this story up and found it under a rock; it is one of those stories that I'm glad I did. The way the author does everything makes me think they either researched the olden days or are fascinated with the Olden days. Let me tell you, the writing is impeccable, the creativity is phenomenal, and the story is gorgeous.
Originality: 15/15
There is so much uniqueness in the story that I am blown away by how it isn't in the millions when it comes to votes and reads and things like that. Because the story has you on the edge of your seat, wondering what will happen next. It is so beautifully written that it's like eating a fancy food that tastes like Silk. It's like a silky smooth dessert you can't get enough of.
Storytelling: 15/15
I need this author to tell me how they did what they did because the storytelling is so creative. I felt like I was sitting there in the 17th or 1800s, watching all of this unfold and wondering what would happen next. I wondered who he was, how he came to be, and why he left. I am sorry, but this story is gold.
Character:15 /15
I actually connected a lot with Andre. I loved him, and I still do. I'm like Team Andre; I hope he returns to the story. But the way he was, he had such finesse to him, such elegancy. That you knew he was not from there. He was elegant yet mysterious; he was beautiful yet dangerous. You loved him, but you knew he had secrets. And I live for it.
Story Flows:15 /15
All I have to say is this author's story flows so beautifully that it's like taking cursive writing and looping every letter ideally in sync that it writes this beautiful alphabet. There was nothing wrong; there was nothing wrong. Everything floats so gorgeously that nothing is wrong, out of place, and sounds wrong. It was beautiful, very smooth, exquisite.
Cover Design: 15/15
Honestly, I wasn't a fan of the cover at first. But after reading the story, I realized the cover and the story complement each other very well.
Final Thoughts:10 /10
This story blew my mind. That's all I can say about it: the elegance, the gorgeousness, the softness, and the mysteriousness. It's all wrapped up into that problem that you need; it's that present that you've wanted all year long, and you don't think you'll get it, and then you get it. This story has tugged at my heartstrings, and I am living for it. I'm obsessed with this story now. This story will go into my reading list so I can come back to read it because now I need to know what happened. Where is Andre? Why did you leave? Why did he treat my girl like that? Because I am not a big fan of somebody just being cool with the kid and then being like, bye. But I think the reason he did it was because of his secret. She realized he didn't age, had an old soul, and didn't want her to get his secret out. Or he didn't want her to tell his secret. Still, he could have said goodbye. The author should be very proud of themselves because I don't praise stories much unless I am very into the story. And this story is so beautiful and so worth the read. I don't understand how it doesn't have millions of millions of reads. Because it deserves it, this story and so many others I've read deserve to be popular on Wattpad.
Chapters I read: Prologue and three chapters
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
Featured on @HistoricalFiction🥇Literary Book Awards🥈Future Banned Writer Awards Story of Edith&Andre: "O'Lady Liberty divine! For thee alone, my life I'd resign: I beseech all to carve thy name so fair, On my tombstone, for all to stare." "This is a love poem for me?" Edith couldn't help muttering resignedly. But what else could she do? Her lover was a stoic little leader! Every time she complained that he was always working tirelessly, Andre would smile and whisper in her ear, "Have you not heard? 'A revolutionary only finds rest in his grave'." It seemed like an ominous omen when he ultimately had neither a grave nor a tombstone. The only thing Andre left her was a small notebook with a red cover. The front page was inscribed with neatly written words: Love, Compassion, Liberty. The final pages remained blank, but at the very end was a small line of pencil writing, already smudged and faded. Each letter was bold and alive, revealing the profound happiness and fervor of the writer: "Liberty is the right to love and to be loved."Story of Fiona: Little Fiona always thought that she lived in a world entirely separated from those wealthy girls, until this barefooted waif became a little Marchioness overnight. She had two fathers, one grand and handsome like a god, the other short and frail like a reed. They believed in completely different philosophies - the latter left her mired in poverty and shame, while the former pulled her into a heaven full of dignity and glory. Fiona chose one and abandoned the other. She felt she lacked nothing: beauty, wealth, honour, and love. Until she met that angel in the scarlet dress again. A century later, the old soldier who ended Fiona's life recalled her in his memoir: "I felt that old lady was a blaze of fire. I aimed at her, shot, and she fell. But bullets could never snuff out flames."What romantic entanglements will fate weave for these noble souls?
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