Enemies

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Namaskaaaram🙏....

bunny...🥕: ith ente 2nd storya... ellarum support cheyyum enna oru predikshayil njn thudangan pokuva...

bam...🦴: pinne ahh vote button onnu click cheyythude free alle pillare paisa onnum kodukkandalo.....

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Engum nishabhdatha...,,
ellavarilum bhayam unarthunna andhakaram.... ahh adhakarathe illathe akki kond nila velicham bhoomi engum parannu....,,

kayil thante dairy eduthu kond jenalilnu arukil vaann irunnu.....   ennatheyum pole dairyil ahh vyakthi thante dinachariya ezhuthuvan thudangi..,, 


thante dairyile avasana varigal ingane ezhuthi nirthi...,,

"kaathirippinu avasaanam, njaan nine thedi varuvaa... jeevithathil orikkalum vendum kandumuttilla ennu vidhi ezhuthiyathaa njaan, ennittum ullil cheriya pratheeksha undayyirnnu.... ahh predikshayila njaan ithrayum naal jeevichathu thanne... avasaanam ninte aduthek ethi cheruvaan enikku vazhi thelinju vannu... veendum nammal onnikkumo ennu onnum ennikku ariyilla, pakshe avasaanamaayi  orikkal koode ninne ennikku kaananam"

kaiyile dairy adachu vachu kond  pathiye ezhunettu chennu jenalilude nilavine noki ninnu..... manasil pazhaya ormagal mini marayuvan thudangi...,,

            


5 years before......




oru puthuvarsha aarambam;


ennatheyum pole suriyante prabadha kiranagal bhoomiyileku pathichu.....

Ithu Mangalathu tharavadu....

ella kadhayile poleyum naatile perukeatta tharavadu aanu Mangalathu tharavadu....

Tharavadu ennu keattambo ningalu karuthi kaanum othiri peru thamsikunna oru tharavadu aanu ennu but alla ivide oru small family aanu thamasikunne pinne avarde kure pets um.... patti, pucha, kozhi, tharavu ennu thudagi kure jeevajalangalund ivide....,, avayellam Mangalathu tharavadile illaya sandhanathinte pets aane....

inni ividethe members ne parijayapedam..... alle venda kadhayilude thane avar aara nnu nammaku nokam.....



samayam ravile 6 mani;

??: teacheree paal.... teacheree....

ennatheyum pole pathivu theattikathe thane paalkaran paayan  vannu vili thudagi...

??: teachereee..... paal....

avan thante cycle nte bell adichu kond onnude vilichu....

??: eda keshu nee enthinada ingane vilichu kuvunne... enniku purathu varanulla savakasham thaa nee





Ithu Gowri Krishna.... high school principal annu

ithu aanu Keshu +1 nu padikuva....


keshu: ente ponnu teacher ehh onnu vegam vaa... ippo thane njn late ayyi

Gowri: 6 mani aayalle ullu nee enthina dhirthi kuttunne...,,

keshu: ente teacher ehh... innu alle
nammade football match...

Gowri: football match ahh??

Keshu: appo teacher arinjille?? Innu 10 nu WINNER'S club um FIGHTER'S club um thamile football matchu... avan onnum paranjille?

Gowri: illada avan onnum paranjilla

keshu: chillapo maranu kaanum

Gowri: allada nee irangunille??

keshu: pinne ille... njn illathe match ooh... ithu okke koduthittu vennam enniku practice nu pokan...

Gowri: ahh... enthayalum naanayi kaliku, cup kondu varillee??

Keshu: athil samshayam undo... eppozhum pole ee pravishyam cup "WINNER'S  CLUB" nu thanne (*proud face)

Gowri: hmmm... ayyikotte😄

Keshu: teacher ehh avarodu time nu ground il varan parayane... pinne avale koode kond varan paranjekanne...

Gowri: ohh athu njn parayanda karyam illa avalu vannolum

keshu: avalu vannu cheer up cheyyumbo kalikan oru energy ahh

Gowri: athe athe... ningalde cheer leaderum captain um akathu kurkam valichu kidannu  urangund

keshu: ayyo.... avare onnu kuthi pokkane teacher ehh practice ullatha

Gowri: ahh da...enna nee chellu time kalayanda

Keshu: sheri teacher ehh kali kaanan varanne...

avan athum paranju oru kupi paal teacher nte kayil koduthu

Gowri: nokkatte da pattuvane varam

keshu: sheri teacher enna

keshu avante cycle chavitti kond mattu veedukallil paal nalkkan poi....

Gowri veedinnu akathottu kayari paal adukalayil kond vachathinu shesham makkale unarthan ayyi mugalileku stairs kayari chennu....


*knock knock



Gowri: pillare eniche...

vendum knock cheyythu but oru anakavumilla... Gowri vendum kure thavana vilichu aaru kealkan... avasaanam avalu onnu sigh cheyythu kond room nte door knob pidichu thirichu noki.... door lock alla ayyirrunnu

Gowri: aysheri... appo lock alle

Gowri akathottu kayari bed il ketti pidichu uragunna makkale kanndu avalu onnu punchirichu....












ee kidannu urangunna randenam aanu  Gowri teacher nte  products....

Jyothish Krishna
              &
Jeethika Krishna

Jyothi... ayyo sorry sorry... angane vilikaruthu nnu nerathe munariyipu thanatha... JK ennu vilikunnatha allku ishtam.... ellarum keattallo arum marakaruthu🤨

mattethu jithu... Mangalathu tharavadile illaya sandhanam

Jk ippo +1 nu padikuva bio maths aane sub,,, Jithu 8thilum.... randum same school thaneya..,, athu pinne angane alle varu...

[*bhakki details njn intro yil paranjittu ind vaikathavar vegam angottu vitto.....]




Gowri: eda makkale enitte...

avalu avare thatti vilichu

Jeethika: mmchh 😴😴😴

Gowri: eda enitte.... jyothi enitte

Jk : ammaa.... 5 mins

Gowri: eda cherukka ezhunnette ninaku innu match ille...

match nu keattathum jk pettanu njetti ezhunettu...

Jk: ayyooo..... time enthai??😳

avan vegam thottu aduthu table il irikunna alarm clock leku nokkunnu

Jk: ayyo 6.30 🤯

Jk vegam bed nnu chadi ezhunettu bathroomleku odi...

Gowri: eda pathiye odada...

appozhekum avan bathroomil kayari door lock cheythirinnu..... Gowri vendum urangi kidakunna jithu ne nokki....

Gowri: edi jithu ezhunette...

Jeethika: onn poo maa...

avalu vendum onnude puthapu thalavazhi mudi theerinju kidannu

Gowri: nee match kaanan ponille??

Jeethika: athu 10 nu alle iniyum time ind (*sleepy voice)

Gowri:  avasaanam match kaanan pattilla nnu paranju evide kidannu mongaruth🤨

Jeethika: athu okke njn ezhunettollam ippo amma poo enik uranganam😴😴.....

Gowri: enthannu vacha cheyy

athum paranju Gowri kitchenileku poi...






kurachu samayathinnu shesham...,,






Jk kulichu ready ayyi avante Jersey okke ittu thazhottu irangi vannu...



[I miss that old jungkook 🤧]

Jk : ammaaa..... foodeee......

avan odi vannu dinning tableil irunnu

Gowri: onnu pathiye parayada enniku chevi kealka...

Jk : samsarichu nilkan time illa vegam food thaa...

Gowri: eda cherukka ninte frontil alle food irikunne eduthu kazhuchude ninaku...,,

Jk : swayam eduthu kazhikan oru sugham illa amma eduthu thaa...

Gowri: ninaku entha da

Jk: ammade kai kond eduthu tharunna food nte taste thane veraya

Gowri: uvva... inganeyum madiyan maru undo ente bhagavane.... achante ellam correct ayyi kitti ind🤦‍♀️

Jk : he is my role model 😌

jk  ammaye noki avante famous bunny smile angu pass akki

Jk : avide thane nilkathe vannu eduthuthaa.... (*pouting)

Gowri: ahh itha varunnu....

Gowri  avante plate il nala choodu appavum curry um eduthu vachu kodukunnu...,,,

Jk vegam kazhikan thudagi....

Gowri: pathiye kazhi...

Jk: time illa... time illa... ippo thane late ayyi (* while chewing)

Gowri  oru cup il boost kalaki kondu vannu jk de aduthu vachu koduthu...,,

Gowri : nee enthada innu match ullathu parayanje?

Jk: ayyo njn paranjille?? sorry amma maranu poyatha

Gowri: achanodu paranjo nee??

Jk: innale morning call cheyythapo paranju (* kunju appathinte piece eduthu kazhikunnu )

Gowri: enthayalum nala pole  kaliku... pinne vazhakinu onnu pokarathu

Jk: njn ayyittu pokilla pakshe ingottu vannu chorinja njn chillapo pidichu manthum

Gowri: eda oru match akkumbo athu okke usual ahh nee athu mind akkathe irunna pore

Jk : athu thane ennikum parayan ulle match akkumbo fight okke kaanum athu ammayum mind akkanda....

Gowri: arodu parayan aaru kealkan  (*sighed)

jk vegam cup le boost eduthu kudichu.... kazhicha plate eduthu kitchenileku poi... plate sink leku vachu kai kazhukkiya shesham dining area leku vannu,, avante bag eduthu purathottu irangi oppam Gowri yum.... porch il nirthitt irikunna cycle eduthu avan pokan orungi....

Jk: amma avalodu nerthe varan paranjeku

Gowri : ahh da mone...

ammayodu bye paranju jk cycle um chavatti kond avide ninum poi



kurachu samayathinnu shesham jk practice ground il ethi.... avante cycle avide oru marathinte chuvathil nirthittu bag um eduthu irangi....

Jk: eda keshu.....

keshu: ahh nee vanno

Jk: late ayyoda ??

keshu: illada ellarum vannathe ullu

Jk: avan evide??

Keshu: avan ball edukan poi... ahh atha vannallo.... (*pointing to the side )

Jk  avan choondi kaanicha sthalathottu nokunnu....,,















(* imagine it as football )

Faizal Reheem

Jk de soulmate..... ellarum snehathode faiziiiii.... nnu neeti vilikum

Faizal: eda jyothi eey enthada late ayye??

[ NB: jk ne avante parents and Faiziii mathrame jyothi ennu viliku vera aarum angane vilikunnathu avanu ishtam alla ]

Jk : ezhunelkan late ayyada

Faizal: jithu evide?

Jk: nala urakam... match thudangubozhekum avalu vannolum

Faizal: enna practice thudagiyalo

Jk: ahh da... eda keshu ellarum vannille??

keshu : ahh da

Jk : enna vaa practice thudanga

keshu: eda jk nammaku ethire avan maru puthiya oruthane irakittu und nna keatte...

Faizal: athu aaradey?

Keshu: entho oru Christy....

Jk: ahh puthiya allkar okke varatte da appozhale kali onn usher aku...  ahh pottan marde koode thane kalichu kalichu njn maduthu

Faizal: athu oon paranjathu sheriya... aara oru change okke agrahikathe

Keshu: avan maru ini aare okke irakkiyalum cup nammade kai thane irikum

Jk : athu okke athraye ullu....

avar agane oronnu paranju warm up  cheyyan thudagi.... athinnu shesham practice start cheyythu....








ini ee match nte story parayam... why this match is this much important for them.....,,

Because........

ithu randu deshangal thamile match ahh... Balapuram  deshavaum Sreepuram deshavum....,,,

purathu ninnu nokkunavarku ithu athra valiya malsaram ayyi onnum thonnulla but ee rand deshakarkum agane alla.... athu kond thane avar ithu valiya oru agosham pole aanu nadathunne....,,,

ee malsarthinte thudakam kurachu varshagalku muna.... oru 25 varshathe pazhakam und ee match nnu.... athu oru kunju story ayyi njn paranju thara....

pandu ivide randu friends undayyirnnu rand perum nala katta football fans ahh... pakshe randu perum rand team nte fans ayyirrunnu oral Argentineanayum matteaal Brazil um...,, allelum pandu muthale athu angane aanalo..... but ithu onnu avarde friendship ne bathichilla....

veruthe oru pani illathe irikkae  avar rand perkum oru bhudi thonni... oru football club thudangiyalo ennu... aanu kearathil ennu alla India il thanne football clubugal kuravu ayyirrunnu.... annu ettavum kuduthul undayyirnnathu cricket club ayyirrunnu... athu pinne India world cup okke kondu vanna kalagatam alle pillare.... 

agane avar football club thudangan thirumanichu.... ennal ellareyum pole thane paisa oru preshnam ayyi vannu.... ath kond avar mattoralde sahayam thedi,,, ahh naatile thane panakaranaya oru muthalaali de....  ayal panam nalga ennu samathichu but oru conditionte purathu.....

oru football match !!

athil ninum theeranju edukkuna players ne mathrame club il cheruvan anuvadham ullu....,, ayal athu oru business ayi aanu kandathu..... avar rand friends um ath samadhichilla because avar ith thudangan theerumanichathu thane nattile ella football premigalkum vendiya but ith oru business akuvan avar ku thalpariyam illayyirunnu.... avar vera kure vazhigal nokki but onnum sheri ayyilla....

ella idathum kalluvalo  than naanayilelum kuzhapamilla mattullavar naanakaruthu  ennu chindagathi ullavar... agane kure ennam ivideyum ind...,, avar thudakam muthale ee club varathe irikan pala pala karyagal paranju parathi.... pakshe athu onnu ahh rand kuttukardeyum rommathe polum badhichilla.... avar thanganullude lakshyathode thane munottu poi...  asooyakar oru avasarathinu kaathirinnu....,,,

avasaanam randum kalipichu avar thudangan thane theerumanichu.... athinu ayyi avar kurachu perode okke kadam medichu.... At last avar oru club thudangi.... "EPIC" athu ayyirunnu avar club nu itta peru....

agane club nte ulgadanam pramanichu avar rand deshangal thamil match nadathan therumanichu.... athinayi avar swantham deshathinnu thanne rand team undakki.....,, Balapuram team WINNER'S and Sreepuram team  FIGHTER'S.

Avasanam match devasam vann ethi...  Oru friendly match aanu avar udeshichathu....

avar 2 friends um avarde deshathinte team captains ayyi kalichu.... randu kuttarum nala pole thane malsarichu..... injodu inju poratamayirumnu.... at last match draw yil avasanichu 4 - 4 score il....
penalty shoot il 1 score vyathiyasathil  Sreepuram team ayya fighters jayichu....,,, ithu balapurathe jenagalde ego ye valathe hurt cheyythu,, nattukarde mathram alla players-nteyum....

avasaanam adi akum ennu thonniyapo rand kuttukarkum enth cheyanam ennu ariyathe ayyi.... appozha deiva dhoodhane pole panakaranaya muthalaali varunnathu.... ayalku naatukarku idayil athiyavishyam nala perum nilayum ullathu kond thane adehathinu final decision vittu koduthu..... rand kuttukarkum ath ottu thalpariyam illayyirunagilum avarku vera vazhi illayyirunnu.....

Ayal andhima therumanamayi rand team neyum rand clubugal akki theerichu.... ee decision rand kuttukarum samdhichilla because  ingane cheyythal bhaviyil rand deshangal thamil adi undakum ennu avarku urapu ayyirunnu.... but avarde vaakinu villa kodthilla ayal ith oru business ayyi mathram kandu because oru match kond thane jenangale ithra yeare swadhinichittu unde ahh kali upayogichu nala rithiyil labam undakam ennu ayal manasil karuthi....

rand kuttukarum ith nala rithiyil ethirthu but arum avarde koode ninilla.... ith muthalaki ayal  puthiya club thudangan pokunnu ennu ellarude munil vachu pragiyapichu....

ithu avar randu pereyum thalarthi kalanju because oru football club thudanguka ennu avarde valiya swapnam ayyirrunnu ellavarkum orumichu aswathichu kalikan pattuna pole oru club but ippo ath oru competition club ayyi mari kazhinjirikunnu..... avarku onnum cheyyan pattathe nisahayathode nokki nilkane sadhichullu..... ithu kandu nilkan ottum thalpariyam illatha kond thane avar randu perum thangalde club mattuoralku vittu.... Agane EPIC club,  Fighters club ayyi mari....

Pinnedu angottu rand clubugal thamil ennum malsaram ayyirrunnu.... sathyam paranjal athu rand deshangal thamile malsaramayi mari...  randu deshavaum malsarthil ottum purake allayirunnu.... pakshe malsarthinte karyathil mathrame competition kaanu allathe rand deshangal thamil oru vazhakum illa.... nala rithiyil thane avar munottu poi but match nte annu matharam avide friendship nokkarilla.... pakshe kalam marunna anusarichu chilla vyathiyasagalum vaanu thudangi....

Agane varshagal kadannu poi.... ippol 25 varsham kazhinjirikunnu ....,,,

ee rand club um ippo kerathil thanne rand top most famous clubugal ayyi mari...,,, kazhivu ullavarku mathrame clubil kayari pattuvaan sadhiku... mattu clubugale pole panam koduthu ivide kalikare edukar illa kazhivu unde avarku clubil cheram... pakshe ee mattam kond vannathu muthalaali de mon club ettaduthapo muthal ahh... ippo football mathram alla vera kure sports koode avar encourage cheyyund....

ee club thudangan karanamaya rand kuttukarum ellam nirthi pattalathil chernnu....,,,

appo ith aanu match nu pinnile story....

ini ahh rand kuttukar aarokkeya nnu ariyande....


Manohar

ahh rand friends le oral

Sreepuram desham

ippo military il lieutenant colonel aanu pulli....

marriage kazhinju 3 makkal und

ini next friend....,,

Kuriyan

Balapuram desham

he also military lieutenant colonel  but randu perum different camp ahh...

allde kalyanam kazhinju oru mon und wife oru accident il marichu....


ini nammade panakaranaya muthalaaliye kaanade.....





Mangalathu Prabakaran

Balapuram desham

Business man

tharavadu peru keattapo manasil ayyi kaanuvalo aara ennu.... yes guyzz ithu nammade jk de grandpa ya

ippo business ellam ore oru makkane elpichu vishramathil ahh


~~~~~~~~ Back to the story~~~~~~~




Eppo ivide nadathunathu teenagers nte football match ahh.....

just oru friendly match ahh ithu..... ella 6 months kudupozhum ingane oru match rand clubugalum nadatharund.... for encouraging their players

but deshakarku ithu oru competition poleya.... varsham kure ayyagilum ee oru karyathil oru mattavum illa... football match eppozhum oru competition ayye avar kaanarullu.... prethigichu youngsters nte idayil....,,, annu avar friendship nokkarilla....


ippo samayam 9.00;


at Mangalathu tharavadu.....,,,,




Ayyyooooo........


nilavili keattu kitchenil joli cheyyunna Gowri odi roomilottu vannu.....

Gowri: entha.... entha pattiyee 😟

Jeethika: 9.00 mani ayyiii..... amma entha enne vilikaanje

Gowri: ithe penne kayil chattakam ahh irikunne onnu angu thannal undalo.... ravile ethra thavana vilichu appo theerinju kidanittu ippo ene kutam parayinna....

Jeethika: enne onn nirbhadichuda ayirunno

Gowri: jithu..... ravile thane ente vayil irikunna kealkan nikkathe poi kuliku....

Gowri athum paranju thazhottu poi....

jithu ezhunettu bathroomleku odi....



~~~~After some moments~~~~




Jeethika ready ayyi thazhottu vannu..... kayil oru bouquet um ind....

Gowri: ith enthinna ee bouquet??

Jeethika: match jaikunavarku kodukan vendi undakiyatha innale... kollavo??

Gowri: Sreepuram team aanu jayikunnegilo... nee ath avarku kodukuvo??

Jeethika: nadakunna karyam valam  para amma.... 5 kollam ayyi nammade balapuram thane alle cup kondu varunath..... ipravishyavum ath agane thane ayyirikum....

Gowri: confidence okke nalatha but over akaruthu

Jeethika: ee amma full negative aanalo.... excuse me! Mrs. Gowri Krishna, ee karyathil eniku over confidence thaneya because balapuram team ayya WINNER'S nte captain the great Jyothish Krishnayaa.... my one and only brother.... ente angalade kazhivil eniku nala vishavasaind oppam ahankaravum😏

Gowri: ahankaram ath pande undalo ninaku

Jeethika: athe eniku tharkikan time illa,, ippothane late ayyi... njn poittu venam ellareyum cheer up cheyyan

Gowri: ohh ayyikotte madam... vannu food kazhiku penne

Jithu food okke kazhichu avalde cycle eduth match nadakunna groundileku pokunnu....

late ayath kond aval cheriya oru eda vazhiyilude aanu pokunathu.....

pettanu.....

**Thud.....!!

Aammachiiiii....






















Ithe kidakunu jithum avalde cycleum thazhe....

sambhavam entha nnu vachal...,,,

nammade jithu dhirthi pidichu cycle odichu kond pokuva... appo pettanu oru bike nala speedil avalde sidelude pass cheyth poi... pettannu ayya kond jithu nte balance poi avalum cycleum thazhe  veenu.....

bike il undayyirnna aal bike avide stop cheyyth avale onnu thirinju noki....

jithu avalde kayil pattiya മണ്ണ് ellam thoothu kalayuva.... kai muttu cheruthai murinjittund....

Jeethika: amma..... ayyo choora....

aval deshyathode bike le vyakthiye noki.... aval avide ninu chadi ezhunettu bike nte aduthottu chennu.... ayal helmet ittrikunna kond face kaanunilla...

??: enthelum pattiyo??

Jeethika: ayyooo.... kandittu enth thonnunu.... ith kando ente kai murinju

??: Sorry

ayal athum paranju vegam bike eduth pokan orungi.... pettanu jithu kayari avante bike nte frontil ninnu....

Jeethika: ahhaa... enne idichittu mungan nokkunna

??: aish... ith valiya shalyam ayyalo

Jeethika: ohhooo.... enne vannu idichathum pora njn shalyam annale.... nokiko njn ith police il parayum

??: poi parayadi....

Jeethika: dee nnu thante veetil ullavare vilicha mathi 😡

??: dee koche ninte preshnam entha....

Jeethika: ente cycle naanaki thaa....

??: nasham enth samayath aano ith vazhi veran thonniye....

ayal vegam thante purse eduth athinnu oru 500 ruppa eduth avalku nere neeti....

Jeethika: eniku thante paisa onnu venda.... ente cycle naannaki thaa...

??: pinne eniku ath alle pani... venne ee paisa pidi vala puncture kadayilum kond koduku ninte patta  cycleu

avan oru pucham kalarnna tonil paranju... athu keattapo jithunu evidennu illatha deshyam kayari vannu.... aval vegam avante bike nte key eduth kayil pidichu...

??: dee.... key thadee😠

Jeethika: agane ippo than ponda...

??: ithe koche kalikathe key thaa... eniku poittu oru athiyavishyam und

Jeethika: aano... enikum poittu athiyavishyam und...

??: ninaku paranja manasil akkille...

Ayal frustrated akuvan thudangi.... thante helmet uri avale deshyathode nokuvan thudangi

pakshe jithu aalde face kaandathum avalde kili full masanagudi vazhi ottiyil ethi.... aval kaan imma vettathe bike irikunna aale nokki ninnu.....






















(Ufff..... AI vera level ahh makkale)

Saajan Manohar

Oru adar sathanam anne.... sanju ennu vilikum

bhakki details kadhayilude parayam....


Saajan: edi koche kalikathe key thaa....

sanju nte vili keattapozha Jithu nte poya kili full kuttil kayariye....

Jeethika: entha??

Saajan: key tharan

Jeethika: ayyada.... adhyam ente cycle neraaki thaa....

Saajan: ninaku paranja ~~cut off~~

***Phone ringing

Sanju avante phone eduth noki....

Soulmate thendi calling......

~~~Otp~~~

Saajan: hello....

??: evide ahhda thendi nee

Sanju: onnum parayanda oru vali vannu kalil chutti aliya

Jeethika: aarodo vali 😠

??: pennaahh... da sathyam parayada nee evideyada ??

Saajan: njn ahh കീരിക്കുന്ന് nte aduth

??: eda nari.... enne kuttathe ottaku poi solluvanaleda

Saajan: onnu podapa.... ith oru kurish ahh

Jeethika: doo.....

??: kochu kaanan kollavo??

Saajan: eda panne manushan ivide pranth pidichu nikumbozha avante... nee ethina da ippo viliche?

?? : ninne kaanath kond... nee varunille time aayi

Saajan: eda athinu ival key tharanda

??: key??

Saajan: eda laval ente bike nte key pidichu vachittu tharilla nnu paranju nikkuva

??: enthinu???

Sanju onnu sigh cheyythu kond nadanna karyam muzhuvan paranju...

??: ashodaa pavam kochu... ninnaku athine onnu help akkikude

Saajan: pinne eniku ath alle pani

??: enth dhustan ahh da nee.... ahh kuttiye idichittathum pora,, athine onnu sahayichude ninaku

Saajan: nee ente side aano atho avaldeya??

??: njn aarde side um ninilla... eniku thonniyathu njn paranju.... eda keerikunnite avide athra safe onnum alla nee kochine avide ottaku nirthittu pokunna sheri alla

Saajan: aishh... ippo njn etha vende??

??: pattuvane athine onnu help aku

Saajan: ohh sheri....

??: njn enna cut akkuva... time nu ethan nokku....

Saajan: ahh OK

~~~call cut~~~

call cut cheyythu phone pocket vachathinu shesham sanju bike il ninnu irangi....

Saajan: evide ninte cycle?? (*irritated voice)

Jeethika: thoo avide....

aval thante cycle veenu kidakunna idathottu choondi kaanichu...,,,

sanju angottu nadakan thudangi.... avan  nilathu kidakunna cycle eduth poki vachu nokuvan thudangi....

jithu vegam vannu tharayil veenu kidakunna bouquet eduth kayil pidichu

Jeethika: ente bouquet.... njn ethra kashttapettu undakiyatha nnu ariyo🥺

Saajan: ariyilla (* uninterested)

Jeethika: idiot (* whisper)

avan vendum avalde cycle nokkuvan thudagi.... cycle nte chain  murinji irikunna avan kaandu....

Saajan: edi koche ithinte chain murinjittund... ith shop il poyale sheri akan pattu...

Jeethika: ente cycle.... amma enne vazhaku parayum 😭😭

Saajan: athinu nee ethina karayane 😳

Jeethika: enne amma vazhaku parayum (*sniffing)

Saajan: ninaku ith sheri akki thana pore

Jeethika: hmm... (*sniffing)

Saajan: vaaa...

Jeethika: engottu??

Saajan: shop il poi parayan

Jeethika: appo cycle??

Saajan: ath avaru vannu edutholum

Saajan poi bike il kayari irikunnu....

Saajan: ninaku engotta ponde njn drop cheyya

Jithu adhyam onnu madichu ninnu because parijayam illatha aala avalku oru pedi...

avalde mugathe pedi kandapol sanju nu karyam manasil ayyi....

Saajan: njn nine onnum cheyyilla.... pinne ivide ottaku nilkunathu athra safe alla

aval oru nimisham onnu alochichu avan paranjathun sheriya... ottaku nilkunath safe alla athu mathram alla match thudagan time ayyi.... cycle repair cheyyth pokan nnu vachal late akkum.... so ippo avalku avante koode pokuva enna oru option ehh ullu....

Saajan: alochichu theernnagil vannu kayaru....

jithu oru madiyode vannu avante bike nu purakil kayari....

Saajan: ahh key thaana eniku vandi edukayirunnu....

Jeethika: ohh sorry

aval key avante kayil koduthu.... agane avar randum avide ninum poi....

kurachu minute nu shesham avan oru workshop nte frontil nirthi

bike nte sound kettu workshop il ninu oru paayan irangi vannu....

Boy: eda aliya kure ayyalo kandittu....

Saajan: kurachu busy ayyirnna da.... alla varkichan evide ?

Boy: appan akathu oru car nte paniyila

appozha ahh paayan bike nte purakil oru lost puppy ye pole irikunna nammade jithu ne sredhikkunne....

Boy: eda kalla.... ninaku line set ayyale

Saajan: line ahh???

pettanu aanu sanju nu avante bike nu puragil irikunna aale kurichu orma vannathu

Saajan: ohh ivalu... ithnine eniku vazhinu kittiyatha

jithu  avante shoulder il cheruthai onnu adichu

Jeethika: vazhi nnu kittan njn entha vala patiyo puchayo mattum aano??

Saajan: allade tharavu...

Jeethika: tharavu... you mean duck....

Saajan: athe duck thane... verum duck alla Donald duck

Jeethika: you..... cat nte face ulla monkey

Saajan: korangan ninte kettiyon....

Jeethika: you idiot.... monkey donkey buffalo😡

Boy: kochu CBSE aanalo da

Saajan: 🤣🤣🤣

Jeethika: CBSE anne entha.... thaan ethina chirikunne

Saajan: eyy... ninte samsaram keattu chirichatha....

Jeethika : idiot 😤

Boy: ahhaa kochu kollalo.... evide nnu kittiyada

Saajan: ahh keerikunnite avidennu

jithunu avarde samsaram keattupo avalde ullil entho oru pedi thonni..... pinne mechanic paayante nottam avalku ottum ishtamayilla....

Saajan: eda.... ivalde cycle ehh keerikunnite avide veenu kidapaund... athinte chain onn potti ath onnu nerayaki kodutheku....

Boy: pinne entha da... ath okke nammaku set akkanne....

ahh paayan jithu ne noki onnu kaanu iriki kaanichu...

Jeethika: 😠😠

Boy: ayyo kochu nala deshyathil aanalo...

Saajan: ath onnu mind akkanda.... inna paisa evening nu ullil sheri akkiyeku ille kochinte amma vazhaku parayum

Jeethika: doo.... ath than enne aki paranjathu alle

Saajan: athello... manasil ayyalo bhagyam

Jeethika: idiot

Saajan: appo eda nee avalde cycle evening set akki vacheku njn vannu edutholam

Boy: ok da

sanju avide ninum pokunnu.... avante bike nte purakil balloon pole mughavum virpichu kond jithu irupunnd....

avan nere football match nadakunna groundileku poi....

Jeethika: athaa avide nirthiya mathi

Sanju aval choondi kaanicha sthalathu vandi nirthunnu.... aval bike ninnu irangi...,,, kayil ippozhum avalde bouquet irupund... kasttapettu undakiyathu kond kalayan manasu vanilla......

Saajan: evening keerikunnite avide wait cheyy njn cycle angottu kond vara

Jeethika: ohh ayyikotte

Saajan: enna chellu

Jeethika: hmm....

aval theerinju nadakuvan thudagi appozha sanju avalde kai muttu murinju irikunnath kande...

Saajan: edi Donald duck ehh onnu avide ninne

Jeethika: Donald duck thante mattavalu 😤

Saajan: ahh kai ingottu kaaniche

Jeethika: ethina??

Saajan: ahh ingu kaaniche...

avan vegamavalde kai pidichu nokku.... kai muttu cheruthai murinjittu und.... avante pocket il ninnu kerchief eduth murivil vachu ketti kodukunnu....

Jeethika: ahhh... (* hissing in pain)

Saajan: veetil chennittu marunnu vacha sheriakum

Jeethika: thanks

Saajan: ohh ayyikotte....

avan adigam onnum parayathe vegam vandi eduthondu poi.....
jithu avan pokunathu noki ninnu.....

Jeethika: ayyo peru chodikkan marannu.... hmmm.... aal kaanan look ahh ennalum kurachu ahankaram ille nnu oru doubt....
aishh.... njn ippo enthina ayale kurichu orkunne.... ayyooo match

aval vegam avide ninnum odi....





at players changing room....,,,




jithu odi kithachu vann door thurannu....

door thalli thurakunna shabdam keattu ellarum pettanu onnu shock pinne jithu aanu nnu manasilayapo  onnu relax ayyi

Jeethika: sorry.... (*panting)

Faizal: ahh jithu eey ith evide ayyirrunnu??

Jeethika: ezhunelkan late ayyi 😅

Faizal: ahh best

Jeethika: jyothi evide??

(* jithu jk ne jyothi nnu thaneya vilikaru chetta nnu adigam vilikar illa vala karyam sathikan mathrame chetta nnu viliku)

Faizal: oon change cheyyuva

Jeethika: ellam set alle

Faizal: pinn alla....

jithu avide ullaelleryum cheer up cheyyan thudangi..... appozhekum jk vannu...

Jk : edi nee ith evide ayyirrunnu??

Jeethika: athu ezhunettapo late ayyi

Jk: amma vanna ??

Jeethika: nope.... amma school vera pokuva nnu paranju

Jk: hmmm...

Jk appozha jithu nte kayil kettiyirikuna kerchief kaanunathu.... pinne avalde kayile bouquet um

Jk: nee ethina kerchief ketti vachirikune??

Jeethika: ahh.... ath... ath.... chumma style

appozha faizii kerchief le blood stain sredhikunne.... avan pettanu vannu avalde kai pidichu noki

Faizal : ith murinjittu undalo

Jk: evide nokkatte

Jk vannu kerchief azhichu noki... kai muttu murinju blood  varunnund....

Jk: jithuuuu........


ahh oru viliyum avante nottavum  thanne dharalam avalu innu viraykuvan thudagi... because sathyam paranjal ath valiya preshnam akum nnu avalku ariyam she knows her brothers character very well....

Jk: ith engane pattiyatha??

Jeethika: athu.... chetta

Jk: 🤨

Jeethika: athu njn varunna vazhi just onnu veenu (*nervous laughing)

Jk: just veena ingane muriyo?? sathyam para jithu

Jeethika: veenathu cycle nna😬

Jk: cycle nna...

Jeethika: eniku vera kuzhapam onnum illa cheruthai kai murinju athreullu..... pedikan onnu illa

Jk : ninaku sookshichu vannude jithu... alla evide vacha veene??

Jeethika: keerikunnite avidennu

Faizal: aanodu paranjittilla athu vazhi vararuth nnu...

Jeethika: ath late ayyapo pettanu varan (*pouting)

Faizal: innu vannathu vannu but ini eyy ahh vazhi onnum pokarthu

Jeethika: ok done (* internally; but eniku orikal koode poye pattu ente cycle 🥲 )

Jk: ammayodu parayanda

Jeethika: hmmm

keshu: eda jk  coach vilikunnu

Jk: ahh da varuva.... jithu ente bag il first aid box ind... nee murivil marunnu vacheku ennitu nera gallery il chennu irunno

Jeethika: ok

avar ella players um coachnte aduthottu poi.... jithu murivil marunnu vaikanum....

~~~~Moments later~~~~

match thudagan time ayyi.... players ellam groundil iragan  ready  ayyi nikuva.....

keshu: eda jk thoo avan annu puthiya irakumathi

Jk: aaru?

Keshu: athe ahh left side nikunnavan

Jk keshu paranja sathlathottu nokunu















Christy Kuriyan

ithu aanu ahh puthiya avataram.... christy balapuram deshathinna but kalikunathu Sreepuram team nnu vendiya because athinu oru reason und athu vazhiye paranju thara....

aal oru pavam ahh mature and bold character ahh....

bhakki details njn intro yil paranjittu und   🚶‍♀️.....




Jk: ivan etha ithinnu mun kandittu illalo??

Keshu: avan delhilo mattu ayyirunnu avide entho preshnam ayyi naatil vaanatha....

Jk: hmm....

keshu: eda avan balapurathinnu ahh da

Faizal: pinne oon ethina oorde team chernne??

Keshu: ahhh.... arinjuda

Jk: ath enthelum ayyikotte nammal nala pole kalika

Faizi yum keshu sheri ennu head onnu  nod cheyyunnu....

ithe samayam jithu murivil marunnu okke vachu gallery il vannu irunnu.... appo avalde thottu aduth aaro vannu irikunna pole feel cheyyth avale side leku noki....
























Jeethika: thano??

Saajan: ahh ith aaruva.... nammade Donald duck alleyo....

Jeethika: you ugly buffalo face how dare you to call me a duck 😡

Saajan: ambooo.... saipinte pretham matte kayariyo dehathu?? kurachu mun vera kuzhapam onnum illayyirunnalo🤔

Jeethika: what's your problem man (*irritated voice)

Saajan: thalkalam eniku oru problem illa ini molu ayittu undakkathe irunna mathi 😉

Jeethika: ahhh.... idiot 😤

Sanju avalde irritated face kandu onnu punchirichu... avan avalde kaiyile bouquet appozha sredhiche....

Saajan: nee ith kalinjille... motham nasham ayyalo

Jeethika: njn ith night full kasttapettu undakiyatha

Saajan: alla aarku kodukan vendiya ithrayum kashttapettu undakiye?

Jeethika: match il jaikunavarku kodukan 😔

Saajan: sorry

Jeethika: enthinu??

Saajan: alla njn karanam alle nee..... ~~~cut off~~~~

jithu pettanu avante vaa pothi pidichu

Jeethika : onn pathiye para.... arelum ketta ente karyam theernnu

Saajanu pettanulla avalde reaction kandu mothathil kili poi irikuva... sanju nte face kandapozha jithunu karyam kathiye aval ippo entha cheyythe nnu,,, aval pettanu thane avante vaayil ninnu avalde kai pinvalichu...

Jeethika: sorry

Saajan: haa... hmm it's... it's ok

pinne avarku idayil oru awkward silence ayyirrunnu... randu perum parasparam onnum mindunilla... kurachu nimisham avar agane thane irunnu... pinne ahh awkwardness mattan sanju thane avalod samsarichu thudangi....

Saajan: hmm.... alla nee ethu team ahh??

Jeethika: enodu anno??

Saajan: ithrayum neram njn ninodu alle samsarichu kond irunne...

Jeethika: hehehe...

Saajan: ayya entha kini

Jeethika: ohh pucham.... wait.... what's your name??

Saajan: sheri aanalo nammalu ith vera peru paranjillale.... njn Saajan

Jeethika: myself Jeethika... jithu nnu ellarum vilikum,, thanum agane vilicho eniku atha ishtam

Saajan: jithu... athu oru resavilla... ninnaku pattiyathu Donald duck ahh njn anganaye viliku

Jeethika: idiot

Saajan: vayasinu muthavare bahumanikan ninte veetukar ninne padipichittu ille🤨

Jeethika: of course padipichittu und... respect kodukandavarku njn respect kodukum....

Saajan: ennittu nee enne enthadee respect cheyyathe??

Jeethika: ayya respect cheyyam pattiya sathanam... respect cheyyane athinu thonnanam....

Saajan: enne kanda thonnille??

Jeethika: evidennu....

Saajan: ath entha ninaku thonnathe??

Jeethika: ennodu engane aano athu pole ayyirikum njn theerichum (*hair flip)

Saajan: ohh... nee matte alpha team aanalle

Jeethika: alpha ya??

Saajan: ninaku ariyilla wolf le alpha pack ?

jithu illa ennu thala shake cheyythu kaanichu

Saajan: ippozhum kochu kunjale🤣

Jeethika: njn kunju onnum alla😕

Saajan: pakshe kaanda thonnade

Jeethika: ohh parayunna aal pinne alpha aanalo (*pucham)

Saajan: enthe enniku alpha look ille??

Jeethika: alpha.... athu thaan... onnu poo chetta comdey parayathe...

Saajan: ath enthadee nee agane paranje?? eniku alpha look ille??

Jeethika : evidennu.... kaanan oru cute poochaya pole und... madiyil eduth vachu konjikan thonnum...

jithu pettanu avalde vaa pothi pidichu avalu entha ippo paranje nnu avalku polum nishchayam illa... enthina agane paranjennum avalku ariyilla...

avalu paranjathu kettu avante rand eyes um wide ayyi.... avalde shocked face kandapo avante lips oru smrik form ayyi....

Jeethika: njn... njn... agane udeshichu paranjathu alla

embarrassment karanam aval thala thazhthi irrunna paranje.... but avalde face sanjunte ullil entho oru puthiya feel undakki.... avan avalde state kaandu chirikan thudangi.... sanju chirikunna kaandu jithu avane confused face ode nokki..

Jeethika: enthina chirikunne?

Saajan: eyy ninte face kaandpo chiri vannu🤣🤣

Jeethika: 😑😑

Saajan: sherikum njn cute aano??

Jeethika: alla...

Saajan: ath enth parachilla,, nee alle ippo paranje enne kaanan cute poochaye pole und ennu

Jeethika: ath appo alle... ippo thonunnilla

Saajan: 😂😂

Jeethika: why are laughing?

Saajan: ayyo vendum saipinte pretham koodiya...

Jeethika: idiot 😒

Saajan: haa appozhekum pinagiyo Donald duck ehh nokkadi onnu

Jeethika: sheyy... entha😠

Saajan: uyyooo deshyam aano??

Jeethika: don't irritate me

Saajan: ok madam

Jeethika: better 😏

Saajan: alla madam... madam ethu team nnu paranjilla

Jeethika: WINNER'S CLUB

Saajan: aiwaa.... appo nammalu enemies ahh.... njn FIGHTER'S club ahh

Jeethika: what...!

Saajan: 😉

Jeethika: idiot

Saajan: dhee chechi pinneyum....

Jeethika: idiot idiot idiot...... 😤

Saajan: cute (* low voice)

Jeethika: enthelum paranjo?

Saajan: alla match start ayyi nnu paranjatha


ithe samayam ground il players ellam vannu.... kurachu minute shesham kali thudangi....

rand teamum malsarichu thane kalichu.... rand team um onninu onninu migacha pragadanam thane kazhcha vachu.... avare prolsahipichu kond audience ottum purake ayyirunilla... rand deshakarkum prolsahipikunathum malsarichu ayyirrunnu....

Whistleum claps um commentaryum ayyi ahh gallery full niranju ninnu....

2-2 aanu ippo match score

Jk: eda pass cheyyada (*shouting)

Jk ball keshu nu pass cheyyunnu

keshu: faiziiii....

Keshu nera faizi ku pass cheyythu...

Jk: adiyadaa faizii.....

Christy: block cheyyada avane

Christy faizi ye block cheyyan vendi odi varunnu

Jk: keshu.....

keshu nu karyam manasil ayyi avan Christye thadanju nirthanayi avanu nera odi puragil ayyi jk yum....

Christyum team um faiziye thadayan vendi avante aduthottu odunnu.... chillar faizide kainnu ball edukkan sremikunnu....

same time faizi goal adikanulla thirakilla....

Christy odi faizi de aduth ethiyathum keshu odi vannu Christye shoulder kond thalli but kurachu force kudi poi... except cheyaatha idi ayya kond christy de balance poi avan theerichu veenu.....

same time faizi goal adichu....

ith ellam ore time il ayyirrunnu... goal adichathum Christy veenathum

audience ellarum goal adicha ahalathathil aarthuvilikan thudangi.... but oral mathram mattu areyum sredhikathe galleryil ninnu ground leku irangi odi....

Jithu faizi goal adicha sandhosathil  thulli chadi kond irikuva pettanu annu sanju irangi groundileku odunnathu aval kannde....

Jeethika: heyy.... idiot angottu pokalle (*shouting)

Saajan aval parayunathu onnum keakunilla avan odi veenu kidakunna christy de aduthu ethi... christy ku chuttum avante team mates um nilpunnd...

appozhekum coachum mattum groundileku vannu... jk and team appozha christye sredhikunne...

match nte half time break ayyirrunnu...

players ellarum christy ku chuttum vannu  nokuvan thudangi....

christy vedana kond pullayunnu....
sanju odi vannu avane thangi pidichu iruthi....

Saajan: christy.....

Christy: ahhhhh..... ente kal


veena force il christy de kal nu cheriya paruku patty.... avante knee potti blood varunnud....

coach appozhekum angottu vannu....

coach: mariye mariye....

christy: ahhh....

coach: eda pillare avane eduthu nursing room leku kond chellu

sanjum players chernnu christye nursing roomileku eduthondu poi....

Jk and team enth cheyyande ennu ariyathe nokki ninnu... avarde coach players nte aduthottu vannu....

coach: entha da pillare ee kaaniche... ninaku okke onnu sredhichu kalichude

Keshu: sorry coach ente mistake ahh....

keshu thala kunichu kuttabodhathode paranju... avan orikalum Christye vedhanipikan cheyythathu alla avane block cheyyanam ennu mathrame undayirunnullu but odi vaana force il avan polum ariyathe christye thalli ittu....

Jk: sorry coach

coach: ennodu alla ahh paayanodu poi para

Keshu: mmm...😔

coach: bhakki ellarum changing roomilottu chellu... ippo break alle poo...

agane coachum bhakki players um changing roomileku poi... jk , keshu and faizi ivar moonu perum nursing roomilekum....


ithe samayam jithu players nu energy drinks kodukuvayirunnu.... kure time ayyittum avaru moonu pereyum  kaanatha kond aval avarde drinks eduthu kond nursing roomileku chennu....

jithu chennapo nursing roominte frontil oru kuttam nilkunnu, nala bahalavum und,,  aval oru confused face ode ahh kuttathinte aduthottu chennu avarku idayilude akathekku kayari....

aval thante frontile kazhcha kandu   shock ayyi.... aval onnum nokkathe angotteku odi....

Jeethika: Chetta.......








To be continued.....

_____________________________________

bunny...🥕: appo armies first part kazhinju... 

bam...🦴: ennalum jithu enth kandu akum pedichathu??

bunny...🥕: Jk ku valathum patty kaanuvo??

bam...🦴: jithunu avalde cycle theerichu kittuvo??

bunny...🥕: match il aaru jaikum??

bam...🦴: Christy ku match kalikan sathikuvo ??

bunny...🥕: Enthayalum ini next part il nokkam....

bye armies 👋

pinne vote button onnu press cheyytheku.... share koode 😁 ille next part late akkum....

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