Creativity:15 /15
The way the story has an imagination that can come with the story is beyond amazing. The creativity and the way that the author does this are golden and phenomenal.
Originality:15 /15
I'm going to be honest: I am not a big werewolf person because I feel like they're all the same. But the story's originality is there. I love how they split up the kids: the Werewolf went to the mother, and the human went to the dad. Because the dad feared that his son would end up like him, it's original and remarkable to read.
Storytelling:10 /15
Now, people, I'm not too fond of long prologue. A prologue is supposed to be a small summary or paragraph or something to bring your readers in. It's supposed to feel like an introduction. To drag your readers into wanting to read more of your story. For me, the prologue regarding the storytelling felt more like a chapter than a prologue. It was more like chapter one in the beginning than what was to come.
Character: 15/15
I felt bad for these characters, but simultaneously, I could relate to each one. I related to the twin who grew up without a father and how he was like the bad kid or was presumed to be the wrong kid or would end up being the bad kid because he had the wolf inside of him. But at the end of the day, he doesn't seem like he's the wrong kid. He looks like a good kid; he's a good brother, friend, and son. The other brother seems Reckless and crazy.
Story Flows:15 /15
I didn't see anything wrong with the story. It has a lot of slang in it or a Southern accent. I don't know what it is, to be honest. But that didn't take away from the story. I feel like the story was well written. It flowed very nicely; no grammar or structure was off or wrong. Everything was great.
Cover Design: 10/15
As far as the cover, I don't feel like the cover is the right cover for the story. In my personal opinion, I feel like the cover could be completely different.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
The story was a well-written story and a unique story. It was one that I would go back to and read. This is a lovely one that I would recommend to my readers because of how well we're in the story, how much detail it has, and how beautifully it is written. The story is fantastic in how the author brings everything together. It's just a Beyond beautifully written story, and the author needs more people to read it.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 90
Summary of the book:
"I never wanted to be a supernatural being. Hiding my identity from the world was arduous." Jake Rose is an intelligent, mysterious, and stubborn teenage boy with a stubborn heart when it comes to certain things. When Jacobe, Jake's twin brother, comes into his life out of the blue, something changed. Something that made Jake change forever. Something that has to be kept a secret, but something that got spilled. Something that made him create a monster. Jacobe begins taunting him, slowly ruining his life and befriending his enemies. Meanwhile, Jake has to be torn in between living a double life and having a normal life, living in fear.Jake seeks help from his best friend, Lulu, which turned into a life-saving romance. Lulu SandraAn ambitious, mature, but yet cheerful young teenage girl who is willing to risk helping Jake with his problems--or rather be protected by him, despite her older sister's rants.Will Jake continue to live in fear. Will Jake be able to keep up with his identity crisis and escape the endless terror? Will Lulu stay by his side?This story is full of dark twists and sparks of romance.
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