Creativity:15 /15
I find that the creativity in the story is impressive. The author's writing of the story is unique but also unfortunate. And I can appreciate that.
Originality:15 /15
The story is one of a kind way that the author writes the story. It's a very Hunger Games feeling. But at the same time, it has its own originality, and how they're writing it is exciting.
Storytelling: 15/15
Now, when it comes to this, I feel like this is a phenomenal story telling us. The sadness, the anger, and the frustration all bunched into one. You can feel that through the story; you can even feel the tension that the main character has with their father.
Character:15 /15
The character development is very interesting because you can see right away, and you have to UNDERSTAND that the character has many ups and downs. You can tell they don't have an excellent relationship with their father even though the father is perfect. It's a factor of what he will make them do something they are opposed to. It's still sad that they have to do it, but they wish they didn't have to. The storytelling is phenomenal. The way the author tells the story is undoubtedly incredible like people would want to read more of the story. I don't know, I do. It's a fantastic story well worth reading.
Story Flows:15 /15
I didn't see anything wrong with the story. It didn't look like it needed any editing. The story flowed very nicely. It didn't seem like it needed anything, or anything was out of place. Everything was smooth. Every sentence was written well. There was nothing out of place.
Cover Design:15 /15
All I have to say is the design of the book is gorgeous. I love the book design. It is beautiful
Final Thoughts:10 /10
At the end of the day, I'm confused. The story is terrific. There's nothing wrong with it. Everything's beautiful when it comes to the story. So what confuses me is everything is good with the story, like all the check marks for a good story are there. So then, why do they not have more readers? Why is this story not being noticed? Because it came across my page as a recommendation, I would be happy on it.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
In what remains of the mortal world, the Van Blake's reign over life itself. At the hands of Alberich Van Blake, the country of Lunaria was built and is now the focal point of both life and death. When the eldest sibling in a Moonborn family is of age, all siblings; regardless of age, are forced to use their magic to battle their siblings to the death. The last sibling standing takes on the magic left behind from their dead brothers and sisters, strengthening their family bloodline.When Calypso Van Blake's eldest brother becomes of age, her and her siblings are in turmoil. In the pursuit of rescuing her missing siblings from a cursed island, Calypso finds herself on a journey of both love and loss. After discovering secrets she was never meant to know and meeting a man she never thought she could trust, will she still have the resolve to return home to her anticipated death?
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