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New character unlocked....
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Next Morning......

Radhika:- ummn🥱😪😴🥱 aachi nind ayi thi kal......

Wo Aapne side main dkhti Hain...or waha Tinni nehi thi.....

Radhika:- ye Kaha chali gayi.....

Radhika:- Tinniiiiiii......

Tabhi niche se awaaz ayi...

Tinni:- chilla kyon rahi hai main niche breakfast banaa rahi hun... Fresh ho ke niche aa....

Radhika Fresh hoke niche jati Hain......

Radhika:- Tu kaise uth jati Hain behen itni Subha ko..... Tujhe Mera shasthang dandvat pranam....

Tinni:- jyada nautanki mat kar, chup chap Khana khaa or ready ho ja....

Radhika:- Kahi jaa rahe hain keya ham?

Tinni:- Maine tujhse Kuch Bola tha yad hai?

Radhika:- ooh ha ha yad Hain.....ok chal Maine khaa li Hain abhi ati hoon ready hoke....

Wo ready hoke ek Coffee shop main jate Hain ....

Radhika:- ab bata vi de vo mysterious character kaun hai. Aur Tera हाल-चाल mujhe aajkal achcha bhi nahin lag rahi hai. Kahin tu kisi ke sath chakkar wakkar toh Nahin Chala rahi hai na...

Tinni:- 🙂 Ha Kuch waisa hi Soch le......tujhe tere jiju se milane lyi hoon ab kush...

Radhika:- wtffffffffffff..... Kaun hai woh?????Kaisa dikhta hai wo??? kya karta hai wo??? Kahan rahata hai wo???

Tinni:- thodi der chup ho ja meri Man Teri sari excitement bahut jaldi khatam jayegi... Aur dekh main bata rahi hun..Tu thoda shant rahana Uske samne..

Radhika:- aise kyon bol rahi hai main kaun sa Jhansi ki Rani ban ke tere boyfriend ka gala kat lungi....

Radhika:- kat legi isliye to dar rahi hun....

Radhika:- kuchh to gadbad hai Daya.... Tu chori chhupe mere dushmanon se to Nahin mil rahi thi na.....

Tinni:- aise hi kuchh hai tabhi to tujhse chhupa rahi thi Varna kab ko bata Diya hota....

Radhika:- pata nahin kiski baat kar rahi hai....

Tabhi coffee shop Ka door open hota hai or koi andar ata Hain.......

Tinni door ki taraf dkh ke nervous ho jati Hain ....

Radhika:- tauba tauba sara mood kharab kar diya Mera.... Subah subah harami ka munh kyon dekh liya maine......

Tabhi wo ladka unke table ke samne aakar khada hota hai......

.......main late ho gaya sorry Tinni......


Name:- Park Jimin....

Age:- 28

Nature:- flirty... aasan bhasha mein yah dikhne mein hai bahut sweet & swami type ke lekin hai bahut bade harami type ke ...

Profession:- janne ke liye story padhte rahiye shayad kuchh interesting mil jaaye... Kyunki iski histry mein mystery hai🌚


A/n after showing Park Jimin in the story be like:-



A/n:- so let me tell you why Radhika hate jimin so much .....

Radhika pahle se jimin ko janti hai, yah donon neighbours bhi hai aur bachpan se ek dusre ko jante bhi hai, bachpan mein Ek bar Jimin ne apne ball se Radhika ke face per mara tha, aur badle mein Radhika ne Uske favourite ball ko fod diya tha... Aur tabhi se yah donon jaani dushman hai... Ye dono high school mein bhi Ek sath padhe Hain??padhe to Nahin hai lekin jhagade bahut hai.... They just hate eachother....now let's get back to the story...


Radhika gusse se dono ki taraf dekhti Hain...

Radhika:- tinni tujhe aur koi nahin mila???? Jisse main sabse jyada nafrat karti hu tujhe vahi Pasand karna tha.....

Tinni:- main kuchh Nahin kar sakti jhamela to Tum donon ke bich mein hua tha na Main to Nahin thi na vahan per....

Radhika:- but fir bhi isase achcha to tu kisi ko bhi utha Kar lati main man leti lekin yah....

Jimin:- Tum thoda jyada nahin bol rahi ho???

Radhika:- Tu to chup hi reh sale tujhe Pyar karne ke liye meri hi besti Mili thi....

Jimin:-  haa to ab keya Tinni se pyar karne ke liye tere pass application du...

Radhika:- application to dur ki baat Main tujhe meri beti ke aaspaas  bhatkane na dun....

Jimin:- Tinniii....(he dramatically scream)

Tinni:-

50000000 years  later....

Jimin & Radhika still fighting....and Tinni is busy voting & streaming for BTS.......🌚

Radhika:- mujhe ab yeha or nehi rehena main ja rahi hun.....

Radhika left from there being angry......


Tinni runs behin her trying to stop her....and Jimin start running behind Tinni to stop both of them.....

Tinni:- Radhika sun toh meri baat.. itna gussa mat kar yaar.... Chal main icecream khilati hun....

Radhika:- Nahin khani Teri icecream Ek to mujhse itni badi baat chhupai upar se date bhi kar rahi hai meri dushman ko.... Pyar karne ke liye ye chota chuha hi Mila tha tujhe....

Jimin:- ruk ja semdhi Jo bolna hai mere muh py bol bhag kyon rahi hai...

Radhika stop and about to start another world war..... before she could do anything Tinni stoped her....

Tinni:- mujhe pata hai tu mere se pyar karti hai aur mere liye is bandar ko bhi jhel legi..... To chal itna gussa mat Kar chupchap chal main icecream khilati hun..

Radhika:- jo chahe kar lekin is bandar ko mere se dur rakhna.....

Tinni:- ok ok chall....


They was talking to eachother while a car was coming towards them in full speed..... They didn't saw the car coming towards them......


Suddenly the car hit.......and then everything went silent......

Radhika open her eyes and saw Tinni beside her they both  laying on the road....

Radhika:- Tinniii Tu thik toh Hain na.....

She hugged her.....

But when she broke the hug & saw Tinni's face which was filled with her tears.....

Tinni:- Jiminnnnnnnn!!!!

She scream while crying....

Radhika turn her head and gapes.....

Yes Jimin saved both of them whice cost his own life......he pushed both them in the other side and got hit by the car

Radhika's eye got teary....

Tinni runs towards Jimin.....and Radhika also runs behind her.....

Tinni put jimin's head on her and start crying while hugging his body..

Tinni:- Jimin!!!! Please open your eyes....plsss ...(while crying)

Radhika:- Jimin...... Plss open your eyes .....I.... I'm sorry....why??? Why did you do that.....

Radhika hug Tinni who was crying mess.....

Radhika check jimin's pulse whice was very low.....

Radhika:- Tinni we have save him.....stop crying.... let's go to the hospital.....

Suddenly a man came with his car.....

Omggg it's a accident....heyy come with me I'll drop you to the hospital....we need to save him......

Radhika yeahhh plss help us....Tinni lets go.....

Two hours passed.....

Radhika & Tinni was waiting for doctor to come out from OT......


Doctor came out ....

Tinni:- doctor...jimin Kaisa Hain abhi?? Wo thik toh Hain na???

Doctor :- don't worry miss he is out of danger now.... But he lost a lot of bloods....and also his shoulder is broken... I gave him sleeping pill so he is sleeping now..... don't worry he will be Okey.....

Tinni:- ok doctor thank you......

Radhika:- yah sab meri vajah se hua na...agar Main itna gussa nahin karti agar Main itna jid nehi dikha kar raste per Nahin jaati to yah sab Nahin hota aaj....

Tinni:- pagal hai kya Tu apne aap ko kyon dos de rahi hai maine kaha kuchh tujhse... Han main bahut daar ho gai thi per usne aaj fir se proof kar diya ki main kyon usse itna Pyar Karti hun...

Radhika:- Jo bhi ho Main jimin se mafi mang lungi......

Tinni:- Tu aur jimin donon hi meri bahut favourite hai tum donon mein se agar kisi ko bhi kuchh hota hai na to main bahut dar jaati hun yaar.....

Radhika:- chal ab apna drama band kar.... Nurse Ham donon ko bula rahi hai humko dressing karvani hai....

Hum dono ki hi girne ki vajah se hath pair cut gaye hain...

Tinni:- hmm chall...

Wo dono Raat Bhar wahi the jimin ke pass...

Next Morning jab jimin ko hoss ayaa.....

Jimin POV....

Main jinda Hun?? Kahiye Sapna to Nahin hai Na??

Maine apne right side mein dekha toh waha Tinni thi....Mera haat pakad ke so rahi thi ...aishh kitni pyari Hain....

Or jab Maine left side main Dekha toh mujhe apni aankhon mein biswas Nahin ho raha tha..

Radhika??? Ye bhi yeha Hain? Maine sabko itna Dara diya kya???

Radhika open her eyes and saw jimin is awake.....

They both looked at eachother and smile awkwardly.....

Jimin:- hii radhika!!

Radhika:- tere hii Ka achar dalu main? Aisa kyon Kiya yaar??

Jimin:- pahle bata deti tujhe Marne Ka itna shauk hai to bekar mein apna Jaan Nahin deta main...

Radhika:- once a suar always Suar..... Kabhi Nahin sudhrega Tu.....

Jimin:- han to mera accident hua hai yaddasht Nahin Gaya hai  sudhar kyon jaaun main...

Tabhi wo dono Tinni ko dkhte Hain Jo ki abhi neend se jagi.....

Tinni:- Jimin!!!! .

Jimin:- yess baby?

Tinni:- tum thik ho na!!

Jimin:- tumhare hote mujhe kya Hoga?

Tinni  hugged him...

Jimin:- auchhhhhhhh..

Tinni:- oh I am sorry I am really very sorry... Main bhul gai thi tumhera shoulder toota hua hai....

Jimin:- hahaha it's ok bby ... Main to majak kar raha tha.....

Radhika:- ahemmmm!!! Ye hospital Hain!!

Jimin:-to maine kab bola Mera sasural hai....

Tinni:- hahahaha Tum donon Kabhi Nahin sudharoge.....

Radhika & Jimin:- haaan Kabhi nehi....

Aisa bol ke donon Ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain aur fir

Jimin:-😒

Radhika:-😒....

Tinni:- now plss stop .....😂





To be continue........










A/n:- main dusri bar yah story likh rahi hun... Story mein likhkar khatm karne wali thi ki mere keyboard ne jadu dikha diya... Mera phone hang hua aur pura story ud Gaya... Vo to meri kismat acchi hai ki main voice use Kar ke notepad mein likh ke rakhti hun pahle se aur yahan per sirf copy paste karti hun.....next part main Raat ko dene ki kosis karungi

Aur mujhe batana Jimin Ka character tumhe Kaisa laga??

And now..

Milte hain next chapter main.💗

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