Love Action Bromance

By d_silent_reader

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A simple story that revolves around 3 brothers and their love life. Ee storyil kurach romance, brotherhood... More

1 : Take a look ๐Ÿ™„
2 : Begins
3 : College
4 : Accident
5 : First sight/fight
6 : Infatuation
7 : My girl
8 : Mission- Love
9 : Bad decision?
10 : Fighting!
11 : Meant to be
12 : Tables turned
13 : Unknown Feelings
14 : Guilty or not?
15 : Truth wins
16 : Jealous?
17 : Party
18 : The second fight
19 : Injured
20 : Flashback
21 : Confused feelings
22 : Possessive
23 : Villain?
24 : Lost?
25 : Confession?
26 : One side love?
27 : Everything is fair in love!
28 : The Hidden Enemy
29 : Complicated
30 : With you, forever
31 : Misunderstandings..
32 : Moving on
33 : One step ahead
34 : Silent love
35 : Calm after the storm
37 : Face to face
38 : Action
39 : Occasion
40 : Tying the knot
41 : Tough times
42 : Love wins
43 : Pleasure [M]
44 : Surprise
45 : Expect the Unexpected
46 : False hope

36 : The final proposal

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Jimmy cemetryude gateinte sideil aayi thante car nirthi. Avideyellaam onnu kannodichu nokkiya Appu aa kavaadam shradhichu.. that black wooden gate which opens to the cemetry.

Jimmy : Appu irang..😊

Appu gently onnu smile cheytha shesham Caril ninnirangi. Jimmyum irangi avalude aduth vannu ninnu.

Jimmy : vaa..

Avan thante kai avalkku nere neetti, with the most warm smile he has. Appu gladly accepted it and held his hand. Angane kai korthu pidich avar randu perum aa gate kadannu ullilekk nadannu.

After sometime...

Jimmy Appuvineyum kond nere poyi ninnath avante appanteyum ammayudeyum kallarakku munpilaanu. Avan Appuvinte kaikku melulla pidi kurachoode murukki, as a signal of reassurance. Appu melle thala thirich avane nokki. Avan aa kallarayilekk thanne nokkikkond nilkkuvaane.

Jimmy : Innale appantem ammachidem orma divasam aarunnu..

Appu nodded slowly. Taevin innale athu paranjath aval marannittillaayirunnu.

Jimmy : Ente lifeil ethoru important kaaryam varumbolum, enthenkilum situationil.. oru decision edukkaan pattaathe njaan nilkkumbolum ellaam.. njaanivarude aduthekkaanu varaare..

Jimmy oru soft smileoode Appuvinte nerkku nokki.

Jimmy : Angane edutha theerumaanangalellaam ithuvare sheriyaayitte ollu. Ithum.. angane onnu thanne aavum. Enikkorappund.😊

Appu smiled and nodded. Jimmy melle avante pantsinte pocketil ninnum oru kunj box puratheduthu. Ennitt Appuvine nokki, avan slowly oru muttu kuthi thaazhe irunnu, in a proposing posture. Appu ithellaam kand valya bhaava vatyaasam onnumillaathe nilkkuvaanu.

Jimmy : (opens the box and looks up at her) Ee jeevithakaalam muzhuvan ennodoppam kazhiyaan.. ente partner aayi varaan.. ente maathram Appu aayi ee lifetime spend cheyyaan... Miss. Aparna Balanu sammathamaano?

Avante hopeful eyesilekk Appu kurach nimishangal nokki ninnu. And to his surprise.. avalum melle avanu munpil kneel cheyth irunnu.

Ippo randu perum opposite aayi kneel cheyth irikkuvaanu. Appu had a gentle smile on her face, while Jimmy was so confused at her action.

Jimmy : uhm.. Appu..?

Appu : Ingane oru formalitiyude aavashyam onnumilla ini. Njaan already ee proposal sweekarichu kazhinjathalle?

Jimmy : (smile forming) mm.. athe.. ennaalum, ente oru santhoshathinu..😌

Appu : hmm. Pinne Jimmy, oru relationship aavumbo partners randu perum athil thulyaraanu. Aarum aarude munpilum muttu kuthanda kaaryamilla. And I need us to be equal.. in all sense.

Avalude vaakukal ketta Jimmy veendum avalil veenu poyi. Apart from her extreme pretty face, avan sherikkum avale ishttappettath, ee oru personality kandu kondaanu..

Appu oru kunju mandhahaasathode avalude valathu kai avanu nere neettippidichu. That was the moment he waited for.

Avan pinne ottum time kalayaathe aa mothiram avalude ring fingerilekk ittu koduthu.

Appuvinte smile onnude brighten aakunnath avan shradhichu, and that sight bought a pleasant wide smile on his face also.

Mothiram aniyicha shesham Jimmy Appuvine nokki.

And their eyes met again.

Ippol avanu kaanaam, avalude kannukalil... Avalkk avanodulla pranayam.

Yes, finally.. their feelings are mutual.

Jimmy : (maintaining the eye contact) Appu...

Appu : hmm?

Jimmy : I.. love you. 😍

Avalude kannukalilekk maari maari nokkikkond avan paranju. And he couldn't stop his smile, appearing on his lips.

And.. Avante smile athrayadhikam infectious aayath kondaano ennariyilla, ath Appuvilekkum padarnnu.

Appu : I love you too.

Avante kannukalilekk nokkikkond thanne Appu paranju. And that words were falling from her heart.

Appuvinte ring ittu kodutha aa kayyil avan melle thante viralukal kond thalodi, payye thante chundinod avalude kai aduppicha shesham Jimmy avide oru kunj mutham koduthu. A slight tint of blush covered on Appu's cheeks.

Jimmy : ee mothiram.. enikku othiri special aanu.

Appu Jimmyude gaze follow cheyth avalude kayyil avan ittu kodutha mothirathilekku nokki. That "c" imprinted ring.

Appu : hmm.. ee "C" ..?

Jimmy : (soft smile) Marikkunnenu munpulla ammacheede pirannaalinu appan medich kodutha mothiram aanu. Ammachiyude perinte aadhyaaksharam kothiya ee mothiram.. aal poye pinne ormakkaayi njaan ithennum ente koode kondu nadannu.. enikk athrayum vilappetta onnaanu ith.

Appu : (shocked) a-appo enthinaa ithenikk-

Jimmy : (eye contact) Appu, enikku neeyini ente paathi jeevanaanu. Ithrayum vilappettathu thanneyaanu neeyum..

Appu : alla.. ennaalum..🙁

Jimmy : orennaalum illa. Ithini ente adayaalamaayi ee viralil ingane kidakkanam. ☺️

Appu aa mothirathilekku nokki, pinne Jimmyeyum. And she slowly nodded.


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After half an hour -
At chakkaalakkal veed

samayam ethaand 1.30 pm aakunnu..

Joeyum Susanum lunch kazhichondirikkuvaanu, Varkkichan entho thirakku kaaranam innu oonu kazhikkaan vannittilla.

Joe : Aa paathrathil enthuva Susammo?

Susan : athinnalathe meen chaar aaneda.. veno?

Joe : ingottedutho, athini eduth vachitt aaru kazhikkaana?

Susan : hmm.. (gives it to Joe)

Joe : ennaalum aa pennu ente Jimmychane thechallonnu aaloichittaa enikk.. (getting angry and eating fiercely)

Susan : (sighs) avanu aa kochine vidhichittilla.. allaathippo ennaa parayaana..?

Joe : Enikkangott polinj keri vannathaa innale. 😤

Susan onnum mindaathe thante plateil ninnum chor kazhichu kondirunnu.

Joe : Ichaayan onnu kai njodichaa mathi, ishttam pole penpiller vannu queue nikkuvaayirunnu. Ennittum ithrem serious aayitt ithra naal porake nadannille.. athokke potte, avalkkoru accident pattiyappo eduthodi hospitalil kondoyath ichaayanalle? Ennittaanu immaathiri swabhaavam kaanikkane.. raakshasi!

Susan : mathiyeda kuttam paranjath. Ennaayaalum nadakkaanollathokke nadannu kazhinjille? Ini paranjitt athonnum maaraan ponillallo..

Joe : Ahh susammakk ath parayaam. Adi kondath paavam ichaayanaanallo.. 😢

Susan : shyeda, ee cherukkan🙄

Joe : Raavile aalde mukham kandaairunno? Aa mokhath ithreem veshamam appanum ammem poya annu maathrave njaan kandittollu.

Susan sighs and avane nokki.

Susan : Ini oru vazhiye ullu, avanithokke marakkanavenki ethrayum pettennu nalloru pennine kandethi kettikanam.

Joe : Athinu ichaayan sammaikkoonn thonnanindo?

Susan : Athokke nammal avanekkond sammathippikkum. Ningal randaalum koode ente oppam onnu ninnu thannecha maathram mathi.

Joe : Athu njangalettu.. Jimmichane kettikendath njangade koode utharavaadhitvam aanallo..

ohhooo, anganeyaanno??

Joe and Susan aa shabdham kett nokkumbo, it's none other than Jimmy. Aal kaiyyum ketti chuvarum chaari Joene nokkikkond nilkkuvaane.


Joe : (surprised) ahha.. jimmichan itheppo ethi? Njangalingane oronnu paranj irikkuvaarunnu..😁

Jimmy : mm.. njaan kettaarunnu.. ningal ennaa paranjondirunnennokke.

Susan : ooh. Avan paranjelum kaaryamillaayo? Neeyini ethra naalennu vachaa ingane ottathadiyaayi nikkaan povunne?

Jimmy : ayine njaan ottathadiyaayi nikkaan pokuvaann aaraa paranje?😌

Joe : ehh.. ichaaya.. ningal ithra pettenn move on aayo?😲 Unbelievable..!

Susan : ennaa aayaalum nannaayi. Chelappo onnum nammal aagrahicha ellaam Karthaav nadathi tharulla kunje.. athum nammude nallathinu vendi aavum.

Jimmy just smiled at her words.

Joe : Sathyam parayaalo Jimmicha, ningal rakshappett. Allenki aa mothaline okke bhaarya aakkanda oru avastha.. ho... Aaloichitt enikk aake angott virayal varuva..🤧

Jimmy : (raising eyebrows) athennaadaa nee angane paranje?🤨

Joe : (munching food) ente.. ichaaya.. enthoru terror aayirunn aa penne. Ee kurumbath keri vannirunnenki ivide motham adakki bhari- ehhhh..???!!😳😨😱

Joe paathi paranjathum jimmyude purakil ninnum vanna oraale kand aake shocked aayi irunnu. Vaayil vacha food irakkaan polum pattaathe avan sthambhich irunnu.

And to their surprise, avar ottum expect cheyyaatha oraal aayirunnu appol avide prathyakshappettath.😌


Appuvine kanda Susanum vaa polich antham vitt Jimmye nokki. And Jimmy oru mischievous smileoode avarude reaction aaswadikkukayaayirunnu.

Jimmy : surprise aayoo..?😌

Susan onnu kannu chimmi Jimpuvine maari maari nokkiya shesham payye eneettu. Appuvinte aduthekk vannu veendum avare randu pereyum questioning gazeoode nokki. Avarude chodyam manassilaaya pole Jimmy thalayaatti.

Jimmy : samshayikkanda susammo.. ithaanu bhaavi marumakal. Madichu nilkkaathe sweekarichekkunne..😌

Susan ambarannu Appuvine nokki, Appu just smiled at her.

Susan : neraano koche.. mol..mol.. sammathicho..? 😲

Appu nodded with a genuine smile. Athu kanda Susante mukhathum oru niranja chiri vidarnnu. Avar ere vaalsalyathode Appuvinte cheekil thante idathu kai kond thalodi. Avar thelloru paribhavathode Appuvinod chothichu..

Susan : ennaa pinne molkk ivane ingane ittu vishamippikkanda kaaryavondaarnno..? Innalathe ivante kolam onnu kaananavaayirunnu..🤧

Jimmy vannu Susante tholil kayyittu ninnu, and looks at Appu.

Jimmy : athe.. angane angottu choikk susammo..😌

Appu raised her eyebrows at Jimmy and he winked at her in return.

Susan : saaravilla.. ippozhenkilum ivante sneham molkk manassilaayallo.. athu mathi. ☺️

Appu : Njaan kaaranam.. jimmykkum athupole ningalellaavarkkum vishamam undaayeenn ariyaam.. (low voice) I'm really sorry..

Susan : ayyo athonnum venda kunje. Kurach vishamichaalum ippo ennaa.., avasaanam othiri santhosham kitteellaayo?😁

Jimmy : athe..😌

Susan : ahh, ningal kazhichaarnno pillere?

Jimmy : athinalle ingottu vannath.😁

Susan : aaha, ennittippolaano parayaanje? Irikk randaalum..☺️

Jimmy : Appu, vaa..

Appu followed Jimmy and avar randu perum aduthaduthaayulla chairsil irunnu, opp. to Joe. Joe ippolum ivide ippo enthaa undaayenn kathaathathu pole irippaane. Athu kanda JimPuvinu chiri vannu.

Jimmy : Da!

Joe : (startled) huh ehh??! Ennaa?😳

Appu : ennod nalla deshyam undenn thonnunnu avanu..😁

Susan : ond ond.. nerathe enthokkeyoo paranjaarannallo.. ennathaada ath.. 🤔

Joe pov : thalla enne kolakk kodukkaanulla plan aa..🤧

Joe : ehee.. athu pinne.. appozhathe oru deshyathinte purath ariyaathe paranju poyatha.. 😬 (lowering head) ettathi kshamikkanam..🙂

Appu : athonnum kuzhappavilla. Ichaayanodulla sneham kaaranam paranjathalle.. it's okay. ☺️

Joe : (looks at her) allenkilum enikkariyaarnnu.. ettathy paavam aanenn 😁

Jimmy : uhm.. uvvaa.. chekkan ippozhe soaping thudangy susammo.

Susan : hmmm.

Joe : ente nilanilppine bhaadhikkunna prashnam aanne.😁

Jimmy : hoo.

Susan Jimmykkum Appuvinum food okke serve cheythu koduthu. And they began eating.

Susan : mol eracheem meenuvokke kazhikkuvo?👀

Appu : haa. Idakkokke.

Joe : athennaa Susammo angane oru chodyam? Ettathi Hindu aanennum vach athonnum kazhikkullaann ondo?😏

Susan : da da da.. nee chumma keri aalaavaan nokkalle.😏

Joe : hehe😁

Appu smiled at their bickering.

Susan : (sadly) Makkal innu varoonn munne paranjirunnel njaan nalla valla curryum ondaakkiyene.. ithippo.. koch aadhyaayitt veettil vannu kereett..🤧

Appu : athonnum saaravilla amma..

Appu amma ennu vilichappo Susan pettennonnu njetti. Avarude mukhathe bhaava maattam shradhicha Appu nervously avare nokki.

Appu : ah- alla.. sorry aunty..🙂

Susan : ayyo mol ammannu vilicha mathy.. pettennu angane kettappo..☺️

Appu : haa😊

Jimmy smiled at their interaction and continues eating. But ithokke kanditt avide oraalkk maathram athrakk angott pidikkunnillaayirunnu.

Joe pov : ho enthoru sneham.. enthoru olippeeru.. 🤧 ithinte sherikkulla swabhaavam susamma kaanaathonda..😪

Joede mukhathe expression shradhicha Appu avane onnu nokki, and at the next second avan bhaavam maatti avale ilichu kaanichu.

Joe : ettathykk food okke ishttaayo?😁

Appu : mmmm.. (meaningful nod)

Jimmy : Appu, kurachoode chor idatte?

Appu : ehhyy. Ithu thanne enikk adhikava. Ithrakkonnum njaan kazhikkulla.😁

Susan : shyoo.. veruthe alla koch ingane melinj ksheenich irikkunne. Kalyaanam aavumbolekkum kurach thadi okke vekkanam, kettallo?😁

Kalyaanam ennu kettappo Jimmy and Appu onnu parasparam nokki. They're ready for the next step, ennaalum.. aa word kettappo.. oru shyness. 😌

Susan : angere onnu vannotte.. ellaam paranj theerumaanavaakkiyitt adutha njaayaraaycha engaanum njangal molde veetilott varaam. Athaanallo athinte nadapp.. (looks at Jimmy) neeyennaa parayunnu Jimmy?

Jimmy : (shy) athokke ningal ellaarum koode theerumaanichaa mathiyenne. Ethrayum pettenn nadathaanaa enikkishttam..😌

Appu : ohhoo..

Jimmy nodded with a shy smile. Susanu avante naanam kand chiri varaan thudangi.

Susan : (teasing) Ennaa pinne adutha njaayar namukk kett angu nadathiyaaloda?

Jimmy : shyoo..🙈 enikk sammathavaa..😌

Appu : 🤭

Susan : ayya.. enthaa cherukkante oru poothi!

Avarangane oronnu samsaarich irikkumbo aanu purathu ninnu neettiyulla oru vili.

Susammooooiiiiiiii....!!!!

Aa sound kettathum Joekk aale pidi kitti.

Joe : (low voice) hai ente Rosu alle ath! 😌

Ellaavarum door sideilekk nokkiyathum avide vannu nilppund kakshi. Saakshaal Rose mariya Sebastian.


Susan : ahh vannallo.. 2 divasavaayitt ninne ee vazhikkonnum kaanaanillallode penne..?

Rose angott kayari vannu, and her eyes widened after seeing Appu.

Rose : ehhh! NO WAY!!! 👀😳

Joe : yes way. 🙂

Rose nere vannu jimmyude aduth ninnu, still her eyes stuck on Appu. Appuvinu ithu aaraannu manasailaavaathond avalum Roseine confused aayi nokki irippaanu.

Rose : (kai jimmyude nere neetti pidichu) ichaaya.. enneyonnu nullikke..👀

Joe : njaan nulliyaa mathiyo?😌

Jimmy : oh venda 😏 (gently pinches her hand)

Rose : ente maathaave.. appo ollathaano njaanee kaanane..🤩🤧 shyoo enikku vishwasikkaan mela...😍

Appu puzzled aayi Jimmye nokki. He was smiling ear to ear.

Appuvinu enthenkilum chothikkaanulla oru gap polum kodukkaathe Rose vegam vannu Appuvinte aduthulla chairil irunnu.

Rose : Appu ettathykk enne mansilaayo? 😁

Appu side eyes vach Jimmye nokki, and smiled awkwardly. Pinne "illa" enna arthathil thalayaatti.

Rose : (mukham vaadi) athenganaa.. enneppatti paranjaal alle ariyu?

Aval mukham veerppich Jimmye nokki.

Jimmy : ente ponnu Rosey, athinulla time kitteella. Athaa.. iniyippo nee thanne ninne angu parichayappeduthikko. 😁

Rose : hmm.. alleelum ningal pande udaayippaann enikkariyaa. Humm😪 (turns to Appu with a cheeky smile) myself Rose mariya Sebastian. 😁 2 veed appuram aanu thaamasam.. paranja varumbo Jimmichante pengal aayittu varum.. anganeyaanu njangal thammilulla irippuvasham..😁

Appu cheru chiriyode Roseine nokki thalayaatti.

Rose : Appu ettathine patti i
Jimmichan orupaad paranjittund. Appo thottu kaanaan vendi nokki irikkuvaairunnu njaan.. ho, atlast athum nadannu.. I'm so happy!😍

Joe pov : ho, enne kaanumbo illallo ithra happy.. 🤧

Jimmy : nee ithevide poyitt varuvaa?

Rose : mummykk allara chillara shopping, ennekkoode oru kaaryom illaathe pidich valich kond poyathaanne.. avide chennu bore adich chath njaan.😪

Joe : ennekkoode vilikkaarnnille Rosu, appo ninakk bore adikkullaayirunnu..😌

Rose: (disgusted face) ayyada..🥴😑

Jimmy : ah pinne Appu, Ivar randu perum katta chunks aanu.. cheruppam muthalee eenaampechiyum marappattiyum pole valarnnu vannatha randum. 😁

Rose : (squinted eyes) excuse me mister professor, aa upama enikkathra ishttappettilla ketto?🙄

Joe : uppumaavo?

Rose : uppumaavalleda potta, upama!

Joe : (manasilaaya pole irikkaam)oh oh.. ennaa enikkum ishttappettilla..🙄

Jimmy : kanakkaayippoyi.

Ivarude ee bickering ellaam kand chiriyode irikkuvaanu Appu.

Susan : (to Appu) mol kazhikk.. othiri kaaryangal choikkaanund athu kazhinjitt☺️.

Appu smiled and continues eating. Angane avar onnum randum paranj fooding thudarnnu..

Pinne food okke kazhich kazhinj ara manikkoor koode appu avarodoppam avide spend cheythu. Avar engane patch up aayinnokke Rose Appunod choich manassilaakki (allelum kaaryangal chorthi edukkaan Rosamma bestaa😏). And aa oru samayam kondu thanne Rose Appu aayi nalla company aavukem cheythu.. avalde nirthaathe ulla samsaaram Appuvum enjoy cheyyunnundaarunnu... Pinne Appuvinte sharp brain vach Joekk Roseinodu feelings undo ennum aalkk oru doubt thonneettund.. but ath mindil thanne vachekkuvaanu appu. Susanu Appuvine nallonam ishttappettu, familyekkurichum joliyekkurichum.. angane palathum Susanum Appuvinod samsaarichu.. overall parayuvaanel Appu liked them.. oru member aayi ee familyil vannaal nalloru life aayirikkum athennu avalkk thonni..

Angane ethaand 2.30 okke aayappo Appu poyi, Jimmy drop cheyyaannu paranjenkilum aalkk oru friendine kaanaan pokaan undenn paranj appu thanich aanu poyath.

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Meanwhile at a cafe -

Ee cafe nammude TaeNadiyude sthiram place aane, innale kaanaam ennum paranj Nadi varaanirunnath ingottaanu.

So, innu Taevin lunch timeile breakinu companyil ninnum irangy nere ingotte vannirikkuvaanu, Nadiye kaanaan vendi. Kurachu neram wait cheythathinu shesham atlast Nadi angottethi. Nadi door thurannu varunnathu kandathum avante mukham prakaashichu. Oru warm smileoode avan avale welcome cheythu. Nadi vegam vannu avante aduthulla chairil irunnu.

Nadi : (thalayile thattam nere idunnu) Ichaayan vannitt kore neraayo?

Taevin : mhmm..

Nadi : (sighs) hoo..

Aval vannathu muthal Taevin avalude mukhathu ninnum kanneduthittilla. He definitely knew, something is not right, just from a mere look on her face. Avan Nadiye thante adukkalekk cherthiruthi.

Taevin : (soft tone) Nadi..

Nadi avante mukhathekku nokkiyilla, thante madiyil koottippinachu vachirunna virakulilekk nokki aval onnum mindaathe irunnu. Avalil ninnum reply illaathe vannappo Taevin melle avalude mukham uyarthi avanu nere pidichu.

And to his surprise, kannukal niranj mukham aake puffy aayi irikkunna Nadiye aanu avan kandath.

Athu kanda Taevin aake tensed aayi, avalude shoulderil pidichu thanikku nereyaayi iruthi.

Nadi : Ich-aayahh...(sobs)

Taevin avale thante nenjilekk cherthu pidichu.

Taevin : enthaada.. ennaa pattiye? Ichaayanod para?😨

Aval kurach neram angane irunna shesham kannokke thudach avane face cheyth nere irunnu. Taevin avale nokki aakaamshayode irikkuvaanu, athilere tensionum und avanu..

Taevin : Kaaryam para Nadi..??

Nadi onnu deeply inhale cheytha shesham ellaam Taevinod parayaan thudangy. Aa stranger avalkku Taevinteyum Stephyudeyum pics ayachu koduthathum, pinne ayaal bheeshanippeduthiyathum.. ellaam..

Athellaam kettu kazhinju Taevinu nalla deshyam vannu. Who's that bastard?? Avanenthinaanu ivarude lifeil keri kalikkunnath?? Why the hell he's trying to break their relationship?? Athinellaam mele, enthu dhairyathinaalu avan Nadiye vilich ithellaam paranj bheeshanippeduthiyath??? Angane othiri othiri utharam kittaatha chodhyangal avante manassil vannu kondirunnu...

Ellaam kettu kazhinj onnum mindaathe Taevin irikkunnath kanda Nadi nervously avane vilichu.

Nadi : Ichaaya..??

Taevin : Nee ayaal ayacha aa photos onnu kaaniche.

Nadi avane onnu nokkiya shesham avalude handbagil ninnum phone eduth avanu nere neetti. Taevin aa pics athil check cheyyaa thudangy.

Nadi : Kevalam kurach photos ayachond maathram njaan ichaayane samshayikkumenn vichaaricha ayaal enthoru mandan aanalle..ennaalum njaan aaloikkuvaarunnu ichaaya, namukk maathram enthaa ingane oro prashnangal.. eppolum..??

Taevin : Daivam nammale pareekshikkukayaavum chelappo, nammude sneham sathyamaanonn ariyaan..

Taevin smiled gently and aa number avante phoneilekk ayacha shesham Nadiyude phone thiroke koduthu.

Taevin : Ente koch ini ithaalochich tension adikkaan nilkkanda ketto.. ith ichaayan kaikaaryam cheytholaam. (gentle pat on her head)

Nadi smiled and avante tholil thala vach irunnu.

Taevin : ithaalochich tension aayondaano enne pinne vilikkaanje?

Nadi : mmm..

Taevin : Ichaayante Nadi strong alle? Ivane poleyulla keedangale kand pedikkuvonnum venda ketto?

Nadi : athallichaaya, ayaal veettil ariyikkuonn vachaa enikk..

Taevin : ennaayaalum ariyandathalle Nadi, ippo aanenki enikk nalloru joliyum und. Ini ariyuvaanenki thanne njaan varum, nammude kaaryam samsaarichu sammathippikkaan vendi.

Nadi : hmm.

Taevin : Ini onnu chill aayikke, oru coffee parayatte njaan? hmm?😊

Nadi avane nokki chirichukond thalayaatti.

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That day night :
At chakkaalakkal veed -

Ellaavarum living roomil irunnu entho charchayil aanu, main vishayam is JimPu marriage. Long sofayil Jimmy, Joe and Susan, avarude aduthulla 2 chairsil aayi varkkichan and Taevin, Ingane aanu ivar irikkunne.

Jimmy : Ennaayaalum adutha maasam thanne nadathanavennaa Appunte amma innu avide chennappo paranje.

(Innu evening Jimmy nandiniye kaanaan poyirunnu, just Ivar set aaya kaaryam parayaan vendi maathram. Appo nandini paranjathaanu ith)

Varkki : Adutha maasavennu parayumbo.. ithra pettennenganaada..? (thala choriyal with tension)

Joe : Athe, oru kalyaanam aavumbo enthokke kaaryangal und.. athokke oru maasam kond set aakuvo?

Susan : Athinippo ennaa, ee aazhcha kochinte veettilottonnu poyi samsaarikka. Pinne 4 aazhcha kidakkuvalliyo? Ningal ithrem perundallo kaaryngal nokki nadathaan.. ethrayum pettennu nadathunnathaa nallathennaa ente abhipraayam.

Joe : Athu sheriyaa.. (nods)

Jimmy : nee enthelum onnil orachu nikkeda koppe.

Joe : enikk pinne ente abhipraayam parayande.. halleyyy, ithu nalla kadha.🥴 Allelum Pennine kittiyappo ningakk njangale onnum mendaalo.. mansilaavindedo..😑

Jimmy : ivan entennu medich koottum. 😤

Varkki : onnu adangiyiri pillere..

Jimmy : njaan aano? Ivanalle.. uchakk Appu vannappo thott thodangeetha ivante chorichil.😑

Susan : mathi mathi. Randaalum ini mindanda ivde. Njangal ithonnu theerumaanikkatte..

Joe : hum🙄

Jimmy : angane paranja engana.. ente alle kalyaanam.. appo enikk voice und.

Susan : ennathaayaalum palleel vach kett nadakkuvenn thonnunnilla. Appo pinne hall book cheyyande varum.

Varkki : athinte kaaryangal okke ippole nokki thudanganam appo..

Joe : ennaalum enthaa adutha maasam nadathanam ennu ithra nirbhandham?👀

Jimmy : Appunte jaathakathil paranjittundathre, avalkk 26 vayass aakunnenu munp kalyaanam nadathanamnn.. athaa ammakk ithra drithi.. adutha maasam kazhinja pinne avalde birthday month aanu..

Joe : aa best! Appo Christiane kalyaanam kazhikkunnond kozhappamillalle🤣

Varkki : athokke ororutharude vishwaasavaa.. kaliyaakkanda..

Angane avide bhayankara charcha nadakkumbo oraal maathram entho aalojich zone out aayi irikkuvaane. Ithu Susan shradhichu.

Susan : Taeviye.... ennaada ninakkoru veshamam pole?

Aa chodyam kett ellaavarum avane nokki. Avan pettenn njetti ellaavareyum maari maari nokki.

Taevin : eh-yy.. onnulla. Innu kurach over work ondaarnnu. Nalla ksheenam ond.. Njaanennaa poyi kidakkatte..

Avan vegam athu paranj avide ninnum ezhunnettu poyi. All looks at the way he left.

Joe : athonnuvalla kaaryam.. ichaayanod parayaathe ningal set aayille.. pinne ettathi vannappo kaanaan patteellalo.. athinte veshamava...😑

Jimmy : uvva.. onnu poda.🙄

Susan : enthelum undel Avan nammalod parayum.

Varkki : athanne.

Jimmy : okay.. appo back to topic..

And their conversation continues...





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Next day evening
At college -

Jimmye kaanaan vendi collegeilekku vannirikkuvaanu innu Appu. (Ho maattangal sambhavikkunnu..mm..💗)

Appu staff roominte doorinte avude ninnu ullilekk ethi nokki, and aval thedi vanna aal avide thanne undaayirunnu. Jimmy aanenki piller submit cheytha records okke sign cheyyunna thirakkil aayirunnu.

Appu kurachu neram avanariyaathe avane thanne ingane admire cheythukond avide ninnu. He looks really intimidating while he's concentrating on something. But it makes him 100x hotter though! Angane Jimmye vaayi nokki avide Appu nilkkuvaanu.. But to her surprise, thante mel oru strong gaze feel cheythathu kondaano entho, Jimmy pettennu Appu nilkkunnidatheykku nokki.

Pidikkappetta chammal maraykkaan Appu avane nokki nallonam wide aayangu chirichu kaanichu.

kidakkatte oru BGM

Jimmy was really surprised by her sudden visit at the college. Kaaranam saadhaarana Appuvine kaanaan vendi Jimmy angottaanallo pokaarullath, Ith pathiv thettichukond Appu ingottu vannirikkunnu! Jimmy ezhunnelkkaan poyathum Appu " work kazhinjittu vannaa mathi" ennu action kaanichu. Avan chirichukond avide thanne thirike irunnu.

But Appu still remained there. Staff roomil ippo Jimmy ozhike vere aarumilla. Mikkavarkkum innu exam duty und, pinne Jackson sir undaayirunnu, aal aanel ee timeil oru call vanna kaaranam samsaarich purathott poyekkuvaanu. So randu perkkum saukaryam pole avide ninnu mouth watch cheyyaam ennu saaram.. ahem😌

Jimmykk aanel enganelum ithokke pettennu theerthitt Appuvinte aduthott pokanam enna chintha mathrame ullu ippo manassil. Avan veendum veendum bookil ninnum thala pokki Appuvine nokkunnund, Appu aanel avane thanne nokkikkond doorum chaari avide nilkkuvaanu.

Jimmyude kannukal avalude kannukalil ninnu maari aa ring mookkuthiyilekkum, punchiri thangi nilkkunna avalude chundukalilekkum, pinne lower aayi.. kaattil payye thenni neengunna saree kaaranam kurach exposed aaya navelilekkum ellaam maarikkondirunnu..

The sideview of her exposed navel was making him feel some weird things.. A sense of wild attraction..

Avante sharp gaze evidekkaanennu manassilaakkiya Appu vegam thante saree nereyittu, covering herself. Athu kanda Jimmy pettennu bhodham vannathupole Appuvinte mukhatheykku nokki.

And.. avan expect cheytha bhaavam thanneyaanu aa mukhath undaayirunnath.

Appu kai randum ketti ninnukond avane tharappichu nokkuvaanu, with her signature raised eyebrows. Athu kanda Jimmy oru innocent smileoode veendum thante workilekk shraddha thirichu..

And after 5 more minutes,

Jimmy work ellaam theertha shesham vegam Appuvinte aduthekku vannu.

Appu : (fake angry tone) Vendaathidathekkulla nottam athra sheriyalla ketto, Jimmy 'sir'?

Jimmy : oh pinne..😌

Jimmy oru koosalumillaathe Appuvinte valathu cheek melle pull cheytha shesham flirty smileoode nadannu munnoottu poyi. Appu was dumbfounded at his sudden and unexpected move. Koch vaayum polich kannum chimmi avide ninnu poyi.

Appu : ddo??!!😲

Jimmy : (turns around and in a flirty way) Enthaado?😌

Appu : urghh.. thaan nannaavilla.. 😖

Aal annoyed faceoode Jimmyude shoulderil thante shoulder kond melle thatti (intentionally aanonn arinjooda😁) avane kadannu angane nadannu poyi. Jimmy smiles looking at her back and avale follow cheythu..

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At a cafe -

JimPu nere vannath ee cafeyilottaanu. Actually Appu Jimmyeyum kond oru dateinu vannathaanu ennokke enikk parayaan aagraham undenkilum, sadly.. alla bebo..

Ivar ivide vannathinte udhesham, oraale kaanaan vendiyaanu. So, they're waiting for that person to come.

Jimmy and Appu oru corner tableil opp. aayittaanu irikkunne. Appu 2 cappuccino okke order cheyth avalude phoneil entho kuthikkond irikkuvaane. Meanwhile Jimmy aanel eth angle il ninnu nokkiyaal aanu Appuvinu ettom bhangi ennu kandupidikkaan irikkunna pole oru second polum waste aakkaathe mouthwatching aanu..

Appuvinu avante nottam feel cheyyaamenkilum aval pratyekich react cheyyaanonnum poyilla, just phoneil thanne nokki irunnu.

Appu : (eyes on phone) Thanikk ingane nokki irunnitt madukkunnille Jimmy?

Jimmy : mhmm..

Appu : Ho.. (sighs, scrolling in phone)

Jimmy : Ee life motham nokki irunnaalum enikku madukkulla, because.. (with feel) I love you!

Appu : (controlling her smile) Can you please stop with silly flirting?

Jimmy : Enthelum choikkaanundenki mukhathott nokki choikkanam miss..

Appu looks up from her phone and saw Jimmy smiling at her. Ahh, this smile is affecting her heart now..!!😖💗

Appu : Njaan okay paranjathalle? Iniyenkilum ee flirting nirthikkoodennu..??

Jimmy : (chuckles) I know, Appu ith secretely enjoy cheyyunnundennu.. ath illa ennu njaan paranjaa..Appu nishedhichaal athengane sathyamaakum?

Appu : (confused) huh!

Jimmy : ahha, coffee vannallo.

Oru waiter avarkkulla cappuccino tableil kondvannu vachu.

Jimmy : Ini athaaloich thala pukaykkaathe coffee kudikku madam..😌

Appu : hmm..

Appu thante coffee eduth sip cheythu, but avalude kannu Jimmyude mel aayirunnu. Jimmy aa mug eduth chundinod aduppikkaan poyappo aanu ath shradhichath..

Jimmy : huhh!!!

Avan confused aayi Appuvine nokki, Appu avalude mug thaazhe vach Jimmye nokki chirichu, a warm smile.

Appu : I'm sorry..

Jimmy : (utterly confused) ennaathine?

Appu : Ath.. njaan.. adichathinu...

Jimmy : ohh athaano.. athokke kazhinjille, pinnem enthinaa sorry?

Appu : ennaalum, ente mindil ippozhum vallaatha oru guilty feel und Jimmy.. Ath ethra sorry paranjaalum maaruvennu thonnunnilla.

Jimmy : Then what about making it up with something else?

Appu : hmm? mansilaayilla?

Jimmy : (leans forward) Enikk assurance thannathu pole... enthenkilum pariganichoode?

Appu : (gulps) h-uh!

Appuvinte cheeks okke angu heat aakaan thudangy.. Jimmyude aa nottavum, avante expressionum.. pinne annu nadanna avarude aa oru kissinte flashbackum.. okke koode Appuvinu vallaatha oru tharam tingling sensation on her heart..! Aval nervously thante lower lip bite cheyth Jimmye nokki..

But aa oru nalla heated moment ruin cheyyaanaayi, there comes a person.

Excuse me... couple..???

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Meanwhile at Kainoor -

Ivide aanu nammude Feliyude veed. Ippo JoSe and Feli avante veedinte aduthulla chira (vellakkett) kaanaan vendi oru kunju vazhiyiloode nadannu kondirikkuvaanu.

Joe : Ithu koree aayalloda ee nadapp thodangeett, enthaa sthalam ethaathe??

Feli : dhe aa valav kazhinja ethyeda.. (walking in front)

Rose : ithu thanneyalleda shavame nee kazhinja 8 valavilum paranje.. (heavily breathing)

Joe : Ivan nammale nadathichu kollaanulla parivaadiyaa Rosu.. hayyooo.. hammee... (kashttappett nadakkunnu)

Feli : ninakkonnum theere aarogyam illa, athaa ingane 4 adi vekkumbolekkum kithakkane.

Rose : ennekkondonnum parayikkallu nee..

Feli : hehe.. comeon guys..

Feli nalla speedil nadannu poyi, purake kithach oru parivamaayi JoSeum.

After 5 minutes..

Avar nadannu nadannu chirayude aduthethi.

JoSe : Woahhh!!!🤩🤩


Feli : engane ind sthalam..? Adipoli alle?🌚

Rose : ofc! 😍

Joe : ho, kanditt thanne chaadi neenthaan thonnunnu..🌚

Feli : (avide thaazhe oru sideil poyi irunnu) nee erangi neentheda mone..🌚

Joe : eppo erangeenn choichaa mathi..

Joe vegam avante baniyan okke oori avide thaazhe vachu. Thaazhe pinne oru trousers aanu avan ittirunne, so it's perfect for swimming. Angane avan time kalayaathe vellathilott irangi.

Rose Feliyude aduth vannu thaazhe vellathil kaalitt irunnu, but keeping a close look at Joe.

Feli : enthaan mwole, kuli scn pidikkuvaana.. eh eh eh🌚

Rose : Ewww cultureless fellow 😑

Feli : ohh.. 😏

Rose : eda.. (slight concern) avide aazham ulla sthalavonnuvallaalolle?👀

Feli : eeyyyyy.. ivideyokke kunj piller polum vannu meen pidikkaarullatha..

Rose : hmm..

Feli : ninakk njaanoru candid pic eduth tharatte?😌

Rose : ahm okeyy😁

Feli : otta minuteyy..

Avan shorts pocketil ninnum phone purathedukkunnu.. Rose oro pose okke itt avide irikkunnu.. angane photo session nadakkumbo aanu pettennu..

🌊🌊

Vellam aarthalakkunna shabdham..! Avar randu perum njetti vellakkettilekku nokkumbo Joene kaanunnilla..! Avante podi polum avide engum illa..!!

Rose vegam chaadi ezhunnettu aa vellakkettinte attath chennu ninnu..

Rose : Joeppaaa...!!!!!😳😨😧

Feli : edaa Joe... Keri vanneda... Nee.. aale pedippikkallee...!!😰😰

Avar avidamaake kannukal kond parathi.. pakshe avante yaathoru vidha chalanangalum avide engum illa.. Roseinte heart ippo pottum enna nilakk midikkaan thudangy.. Feliyude avasthayum ethaand athupole thanne aayirunnu..

Rose : (sweating hard and in verge of crying) eda feli.. onnirangi nokkeda ... 🥺

Feli : A-ahh... Enikk neenthaan arinjooda.. ennaalum njaan nokkaa..😧

Avanum aake paribhramam kaaranam enthaa cheyyande ennu ariyaan pattaatha avasthayil aayirunnu. Kuthiyolikkunna vellathilekk kannum natt Rose avide irunnu.. tears brimming in her eyes..

Joeppaaaaaa...!!!!!







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Thank you for 300+ votes on previous chapter.😍 Ee chapter ilum athrayum votes thannaal adutha update vegam thanne (within 1 week) undaakunnathaanu.

Pinne comments ellaam njaan vaayikkaarund, thank you for your efforts. 😘

Enthaayalum stry theeraaraayille, ini pishukk kaanikkaathe comment okke ittoode Bebo?🌚

Anyways.. Q n A tym ☝🏻

1. Joeppanu Appuvine ishttamillaathath Y Y Y Y...?😏

2. Taevin - Nadi prashnathinu oru parihaaram adutha chapteril undaakumo? 😑

3. Taevin ini enth cheyyaanulla purappaadaanu? 👀

4. JimPuvinte idayilekk idichu keri Vanna aa person aar? 🤧

5. Joeppan olich poyo...?😳

6. JimPuvinte kalyaanam pettennu nadakkumo? 🌚

Ok byee... Adutha updateil kaanam 😌

Take care 💕

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