Rishton Ki Dor

By unknown1389107

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This is a joint family story where everyone loves each other to no extent Join their journey to learn how th... More

Introduction
Personality
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
Episode 14
Episode 15
Episode 16
Episode 17
Episode 18
Episode 19
Episode 20
Episode 21
Episode 22
Episode 23
Episode 24
Episode 25
Episode 26
Episode 27
Episode 28
Episode 29
Episode 30
Episode 31
Epsiode 32
Episode 34
Episode 35
Episode 36
Episode 37
Episode 38
Episode 39
Episode 40
Episode 41
Episode 42
Episode 43
Episode 44
Episode 45
Episode 46
Episode 47
Episode 48
Episode 49
Episode 50
Episode 51
Episode 52
Episode 53
Episode 54
Episode 55
Episode 56
Episode 57
Episode 59
Episode 60 (Nikkah)
Episode 61
Episode 62
Episode 63
Episode 64
Episode 65

Episode 33

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The kids (Saad, Irum, Maheen) immediately jumped and celebrated, Hamza was still sitting silently but Irum pulled him and made him join their celebration

Everyone was looking at them with adoring eyes...

Irum who was jumping and holding Hamza's hands suddenly stopped making them all stop

The smile on her face disappeared...

"Aik minute kon kon ja raha ha is trip pa?" she question

"Ali, Haider, Aryan, Zayan, aur ap Charon bandar" Aghajaan shrugged

"Nahiiiii!" she dramatically screamed placing the back of her palm on her forehead

"Allah khair kare Bache kya ho gaya," zenat asked

"Yarr this is not fair" she whined and sat on the floor like kids

"hua kya ha?" Aghajaan frowned

"yar Aghajaan ap in do hitlers ko hum becharon ke sath kyu bhej rahe hein inko alag bhejein, Aryan aur Zayan bhai ko hamare sath bhej dein yeh donon wese bhi pagal hi, aik par puppy eyes dikhao to pighal jate ha par yeh Hitler to steel ke bane ha kitna bhi kuch kar lo tas se mas nahi hote" she made an annoyed face

Haider who was sitting behind her kicked her lightly but enough to make her fall on her face...

"beta Haider aur Ali ka jana zaruri ha, Zayan aur Aryan pe mujhay koi bharosa nahi, kal ko koi kuch bhi kar ke aa jein ya donon kuch bhi nahi bolein ga" Aghajaan glared at them who looked at him with betrayed eyes

"Still not fare mujhay nahi jana in Hitler ke sath" she pointed at Haider

"Idhar ao zara me batata hun Hitler kon ha," Haider said and got up and ran behind Irum...

"Aghajaan mein nahi ja sakta ap Haider ko bhej dein," Ali said while texting someone

"Oho! Acha gi, To prime minister sahab ka kon sa important kaam ha jo woh thora waqt nahi nikal sakte?" Aghajaan stated sarcastically

"Aghajaan boht meetings ha me kese ja sakta hun" Ali said in his defence

He does not want to go because he knows he will have to stop the kids from doing a lot of things and he does not like saying 'no' to his sisters

"Ali ghar me aur log ha business ko sambalne ke liye you don't have to worry about that... You are going with the kids and that's final" Aghajaan said sternly

Ali sighed in defeat and nodded...

Hamza, Saad and Aryan were glaring at Rayan who was sitting in front of them with Haider and Ali

"Oi! Hamza kesa bhai ha tu ja kar gala daba de na iska, mein isse shadi nahi hone dun ga Irum ki, woh itni pyari aur yeh tch" Aryan made a disgusted face

"baat to sahi ha Aryan bhai ki, par jo bhi ho yeh chqundar (beetroot) ha to handsome" Saad replied making Aryan and Hamza glare at him

"To tum kar lo is handsome prince Charles se shadi" Hamza taunted

"tum tenon apni bakwas band kar lo, Aghajaan ki dhamki bhul gai ho" All three of them flinched when Zayan appeared out of nowhere and whispered in their ear from behind the sofa

"kya masla ha tera ja kar apna kam kar phaphey kutni banne ki koi zarurat nahi ha" Aryan glared at him pinching his waist

[phaphey kutni: women who cause fights or problems in the house]

"Ouch! Meri bala se mar to tujhe hi pare gi mujhay kya" Zayan glared at him and left

Aryan huffed and continued glaring at Rayan who chuckled noticing the glares

Aryan gave him a fake sweet smile, The dimples on his face became visible making him look hot!

"wese Aryan bhai ab is se to zayad hi handsome ho, ap karlo na Irum se shadi" Aryan froze hearing Saad

"Saad soch samajh kar baat karo," Hamza said sternly making Saad pout

"sorry" he mumbled

"Acha mujhay mama ne aik kam ha ata hun unhon ne bulaya tha," Aryan said and left

On his way to his room, his eyes fell on Irum, she was going in the opposite direction as his,

She looked extremely gorgeous wearing a traditional dress, she had no makeup on her face, and Her hair was tied in a French braid

Irum saw him and punched him on his stomach while walking past him with a smirk

He winced and turned around staring at her back in a daze... He flinched shrugging his thoughts away as he moved to his room...

Saad and Hamza were moving to their room when Ali came behind them

"kidhar ja rahe ho khana khao aa kar yeh kya batmeezi ha," he said sternly making Hamza and Saad stop

"hame bhok nahi ha bhaijaan ap ja kar kha lein," Saad said looking down

"Saad don't test Aghajaan, wahan mehman bethe ha aur tum donon wahan se uth kar aa gai ho 'hame bhok nahi ha' yeh kahan ki tameez ha. Agar nahi khana to mat khao magar wahan pe hi betho sab ke sath" he scolded

"Hum nahi bethna chahte us Rayan ke sath apko kya masla ha" Saad raised his voice

"Tammez mat bhulo Saad warna mujhay time nahi lage ga tumhe sidha karne me... Aur Rayan bara ha tumse bhai bolo usko" Ali said in a dangerous voice

"nahi ha woh mera bhai aur kabhi nahi ban sakta woh mera bhai" Saad glared at him

"Saad!" Ali growled

"Kya Saad bhaijaan hn kya, problem kya ha kaha na bhok nahi ha nahi khana is me masla kya ha, apni ego kya problem na banai is Baat ko," he looked at Ali and then continued

"Aur woh Rayan us insan se mujhay nafrat ha mujhay, agar Irum ki shaadi us se hui to is ghar se me nahi balke mera janaza (dead body) jai gi"

his face jerked to his right, Hamza gasped and held Saad protectively

He looked at Ali with teary eyes, his hand placed on his cheek where Ali had slapped him

"Aik aur lafz nikla tumhare mun se to mujh se bura koi nahi hoga" Ali's face was red with anger

Hamza held Saad's hand to take him away, but Saad pulled his hand away from his grip and glared at Ali with red teary eyes

"ap se bura koi ha bhi nahi, ap ne kese apni ankhon pe pati band li ha, mein ap logon ko apni behn ke sath ye zulm nahi karne dun, chahe ap uske liye mera mun kyun na tor dein" he yelled

"woh yeh sab Aghajaan ke liye kar rahi ha yeh baat apko kab samajh ai gi bhaijaan, agar woh apne emotions show nahi karti iska yeh matlab nahi ha ke uske pas emotions hi nahi ha... Agar mere behn ke sath koi bhi zulm hua to is ghar ke har aik insaan ka qatl me apne hathon se karun ga" he growled

"Saad fazool bakwas mat karo-" Ali said in a dangerously low voice, Hamza on the other hand immediately ran to call Aryan as his room was the closest

"Bakwas me nahi ap kar rahe hein, and mark my words there will be a day when you will regret your existence just because of this one mistake" Saad's face was red his veins were popping out of his forehead clearly showing how angry he was...

Ali slapped him again making him lose balance... But he composed himself before he could fall and continued

"apne apni ankhon par pati band li ha bhaijaan, ap kese kar sakte ha uske sath ye, kya kya nahi kiya unse ap ke liye, apke liya apni Jan dene ko bhi tayar rehti ha woh har waqt, behad pyar karti ha woh apse aur ap, ap bhai to kya dushmanon se bhi bura saluk kar rahe hein uske sath" he yelled in a disappointed tone

Ali was just staring at his face, Saad's words were piercing his heart like bullets

"Agar kal ko us insan ne kuch galat kar diya mere behn ke sath to apne ap ko face kar pein ga ap?" he asked

"woh sirf tumhari behn nahi ha Saad" Ali said in a low broken voice

"Acha matlab apko yaad ha ke woh apki bhi behn ha? Kyun ke ap bhai hone ka to koi farz nahi nibha rahe" he taunted

Ali slapped him again Saad closed his eyes in pain but did not stop talking

"kese bhai ha ap bhaijaan? apka to pata nahi par me apni aonkhon ke samne apni behn ki zindagi barbad hote nahi dekh sakhta samjhe ap" he warned

"Saad shut up tameez me raho-" Ali shouted

"You shut up bhaijaan, mei un logon ki tameez nahi karta jo mere behn se pyaar nahi karte, aur ap unhi logon me se aik hein" he shouted

Ali's anger saw no end, he slapped Saad with all his force making his lip bleed

Saad was about to fall with the impact of the slap but Aryan who just came held him...

"bhaijaan" Arayn lightly pushed him away...

Saad chuckled sarcastically and touched his bloody lip

"Thapar marne ke ilawa ap kar bhi kya sakte ha bhaijaan" he taunted

"thapar mar kar ap mera mun to band karwa sakte ha par hakeekat (reality) ko nahi badal sakte" Saad wiped a stray tear that left his eye and left to his room, but not before yelling

"I hate you bhaijaan" Aryan and Hamza immediately followed him

While Ali stood there in shock he could still not believe he slapped his baby

He left warm liquid wetting his cheeks... He was crying? But how... Ali Khan the oldest child in the house was crying...

After 9 years someone managed to break him enough for these pathetic tears to roll out without his permission

He touched his cheeks in a daze and fell on the floor on his knees

His legs no longer had the strength to keep him standing

"Yeh mein na kya kar diya" he whispered in fear looking at his hands in disbelief...

A pair of eyes that was looking at him fell on the floor and kept a hand on her mouth to stop her sobs

Ali was looking so broken she had never seen him in this state... He looked like the living example of a body with no soul

She wanted nothing more than to kill Saad with her bare hands... And that was exactly what she was gonna do...

To be continued

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