The Viper hero. My hero acade...

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His name is Nagisa midoriya Adopted as a baby by the midoriya family He lives with his adopted brother and... More

Bio
Enter Nagisa and izuku midoriya
Time for a training montage
Entrance exams
Time to be a hero
The Awakening and the meeting
Time to train
Lets go to the USJ
Unexpected attack and an Dark debut
Lets get ready to roll
The race and a surprising twist
The battles begin
Todoroki gets fired up and Nagisa roars
NAGA UNLEASHED
Best friends or bitter rivals, Nagisa and katsuki clash
Who will win its the sports festival finale
Hero names and interships
Training with Edgeshot
Clash with the hero killer
Aftermath of the fight
And we're back
Fighting with all our might
The sleepover
Shopping and future trip
The first sleepover
I island part 1
I island part 2
Lets go swimming
The tearful goodbye for now
Training camp!
Going plus ultra
Time to fight
Naga breaks free
Lets get out of here
I'm home
Staying over
Dorms
Ultimate moves
Lets get our liceenses
The three way grudge match
Aftermath
The scoop on class 1-A
Work studies
Overhaul and the girl
The meeting
The raid begins
The Reapers rage
We won..but at what cost
Its good to be home
The school festival
Lets rock
Making her smile
Hero rankings and The new symbol
Time for some rescue training
Heroes rising part 1
Heroes rising part 2
Kicking it up a notch
Clash between classes
Chilling out
Interveiw and a very special time
The New year
Burn away the wrong
The most awkward dinner ever
Total victory
The new year begins
The league vs the giant
The destruction of the liberation army
Worlds heroes
The war begins
The giant will fall
The clash of monsters
Recovery
Waking up....wait what happened
The battle of brothers
Deku vs Class 1-A
The Declaration
The Calm before the storm

Exam time

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They arrive at the exam area

Kyoka; ahh I'm getting kind of nervous
Nagisa: so many people...
Kyoka: stop freaking out about that your supposed to reassure me
Nagisa: sorry too busy having social anxiety as well as regular anxiety about this exam
Kyoka: Ok that's fair enough

Mineta: i wonder what their gonna make us do what if I can't get my license
Aizawa; mineta don't ask if you can say you will
Mineta: right sure I've so got this
Aizawa: if you can pass this exam and get your provisional licenses then you novice eggs will hatch into chicks, you'll be semi pros
I expect your best
Denki: I can't wait to be a heroic chicken
Kirishima: let's call out the usual you guys on my mark
Go
Plus
??: ULTRA
Nagjsa: (huh)
?: you know is pretty rude to barge into other peoples huddles like that inasa
Inasa: right, I, AM, SO, INCREDIBLY EXTREMELY SORRY
Denki: who is this guy I do not trust his enthusiasm
Nagisa: wait their uniforms
Kyoka: he's right there from shiketsu
Sero: the famous school on the other side of Japan
Katsuki: ua in the east and shiketsu in the west
Nagjsa; (so the one with the hero course than rivals UA)
Inasa: I WANTED TO SAY IT JUST ONCE PLUS ULTRA I REALLY LOVE UA HIGH-SCHOOL I'M EXTREMELY HONOURED TO GO UP AGAINST SUCH AMAZING STUDENTS I'M SO LOOKING FORWARD TOO IT

Aizawa explains inasa

Nagisa; (that guy is way too tall it's not fair but more importantly that means he's better than todoroki this guy could be serious trouble)
Sero: this guy says that he loves our school but turned down his chance to enroll when it was offered
Mina: yeah what a weirdo
Nagisa: not necessarily there could be a perfectly good reason he turned it down, family issues, issues with getting to the school, money issues it's depressing but true
Aizawa: he may be a weirdo but he's the real deal watch out
?: eraser I know that scowl anywhere I saw you on tv and at the sports festival but it's been a long time since we've been this close in person
Nagisa; (I know the feeling teach)
Izuku: she looks familiar
?: let's get married
Aizawa; No
Nagisa: (wow didn't know he'd be so blunt)
?: you're a real laugh riot
Aizawa: as usual your impossible joke
Izuku explains mrs joke
Nagisa: (oh yeah she did look familiar)
Joke: Come on imagine it if I was your wife you'd have a future full of constant laughter
Aizawa: that sounds like an actual nightmare
Joke laughs again
Nagisa; what's going on
Kyoka: I've honestly got no idea
Tsyu: it seems like you two are close
Joke: our agencies where near each other at aspiring heroes striving to make a difference in the world a mutual love bloomed
Aizawa: no it didn't
Joke: I do miss your quick retorts your my favourite person to tease future husband
Aizawa: so joke of your here then that must been
Joke: yup come on guys it's ua

Short skip

?: hey my names Shindo it seems like ua has had a lot trouble must've been tough for you but your still all aiming to be pros, HEARTS OF FORTITUDE that's what i believe hero should have
And blue hair midoriya and bakugo must've been tough for with the kidnapping and everything
Nagjsa: (this guy there's something off about him)
Shindo: you both have strong wills today I'll do my best to learn from both of you I'm looking forward to it
Katsuki: stop pretending what your saying doesn't match the look in your eye
Nagisa: (yup that's it)
Ejiro: hey..
Nagisa stops him
Nagisa: don't Kacchan is right this guy isn't what he seems
Ejiro: what do you mean
Nagisa: I think we're gonna find out
Kyoka: what's up with you
Nagisa whispers: all of these guys give of the wrong vibe they seem less like nice people who are introducing themselves and more like beasts stalking their prey till they show weakness
Kyoka: oh (Nagisa's instincts when it came to people have almost always been spot on) 
Skip forward

Let's skip the whole introduction thing you all know what's going on

They get to the place here the exam is happening

Izuku: everyone stay close together will fight them as a group
Ochako nods
Iida; got it
Katsuki: yeah right this isn't a field trip
Kirishima: idiot wait up

Todoroki leaves as well

Nagisa: ok we've still got most of the class that's good

They all run and eventually

Izuku; they will probably gang up against quirks they know
Nagisa: so that's mean
Kyoka: you gotta be kidding me

A huge army of students appear

And a barrage of balls come their way

Izuku knocks some away

Nagisa: my turns

He draws is sword

SILENT

SERPENT

SLASH

He slices the balls in half before they even hit their targets

Nagisa: you may know our quirks But we aren't the same people we where back them

Boomerang dude throws the balls underground of a surprise attack
Izuku: where are they going to pop out

Kyoka: get back I'll handle this

Sound amplification
Amplifier Jack
HEART BEAT DISTORTION

Nagisa jumps up to avoid it

Nagisa: that's my girl!

Kyoka smirks and gives him a thumbs up

The balls up come
Mineta: there coming straight for me
Ashido: maximum strength and viscosity
Protect this perv
ACID VEIL
Mineta: great move thanks
Mina; it's my defensive special that creates a me,Ty walk

Nagisa: time to fight back

It's about time I use my new copy

APATOSAURUS

COPY ABILITY THANKS TO COPYING THIS LONG NECKED DINO HE CAN NOW USE THE STRENGTH OF ONE
THIS PARTICULAR MONSTER WAS RUMOURED FO BE ABLE TO WHIP ITS TAIL AT THE SPEED OF SOUND

Nagisa:
SONIC STRIKE

He whips a ball so fast that he strikes a random opponents it's spot before they even know what's happening

Nagisa; heh that worked well

Shindo uses Tremoring earth to split up the class

Nagisa; dammit not good alright

Alright time to fly

Nagisa uses his wings to soar out of the way

Nagisa: phew that was close alright gotta find my classmates!

He lands to make himself safer

??: hey what's up

?: the names mizuki and I'm here to beat you

Nagisa; oh yeah well I'd like to see you try

He blasts out the water contained in his glove

Nagisa easily dodges it

Until the water curves and it strikes him landing him on the ground

Mizuki: Heh now to get one point

He throws the ball only to have Nagisa roll out the way

Mizuki: not bad reaction time how about this

HYDRO GATLING

He manipulates the water around him and puts the balls in the water which thenget split off into about 10 different shots of water

Nagisa succeeds into dodging a few but he has to keep dodging in order to avoid the manipulation

Nagisa: I'm faster than these things but they also won't stop

Unless

Nagisa flies straight up until as he suspected the dudes range gives out and they stop in mid air

Now

Instead of making wings appear on his back he creates turns his arms into wings

Nagisa

NOW
STORM SURGE

He flaps his wings in a clapping motion blowing the balls and the water away and in a blink on an eye Nagisa is right there in his face and a claw is in the dudes shoulder

Mizuki: heh looks like you beat me Well done see ya again some time

The venom seeps in and before he could even transforms his body he was knocked out

Nagisa: I'm sorry dude you where really strong but I need to pass this test

Nagisa eliminates mizuki

Nagisa turns himself invisible running through the stadium unti a red knife appears out of nowhere

??: I can sense you so you might as well fight me

Nagisa: so care to introduce yourself

I ignore that it says 26

?: just call me ichigo and I found you to prove what every warrior wants

He creates a sword out of his blood

to see whose better

Nagisa: oh about we make this more interesting,
Ichigo: I'm intrigued what are your terms
Nagisa: no help and we are only allowed to use our weapon of choice so this will just be a sword fight between two proud warriors
Ichigo smirks: I'm in winner takes all
Nagisa: of course

Nagisa draws his katana
Ichigo readies his blood sword

Both: LETS GO

Due to their height difference Nagisa had trouble competing but due to their terms he had a chance to win

He ducked and charged in they constantly clashed sword but Ichigo skill seemed much more polished then Nagisa's
But
Nagisa had one advantage
Speed

He could dodge much easier

He kept dodging and clashing until his sword was knocked out of his hand and he was knocked back by a kick

Nagisa: dammit you're good
Ichigo: right back at you but you gonna need to do much better than that  

Nagjsa now goes on a lot more of the defensive until he kept contssly getting pushed back

Nagisa: (this isn't working but maybe just maybe I can pull out a miracle)

He kept getting pushed back until he was right next to his sword

He stomped hard on the handle and it flew upwards and he kicked it right at ichigo but

Ichigo deflected it with some difficulty
Ichigo: pretty good but not good enough

Nagisa: oh no

Nagisa smirks jumps up and catches his katana in mid air and brings it right down at ichigo who blocks with his sword but is pushed back

Ichigo: Damn you are a strong one!

Nagisa: Thanks but it's over!
Ichigo's eyes widen
He uses his insane flexibility to put both his feet on the sword jumps away and then as soon as he hits the ground blasts straight forward disarms ichigo and he now has a sword to ichigos neck
Ichigo: I knew you could do it kid sensei would be proud
Nagisa: wait what?
Ichigo: yeah I'm a student of edgeshot and I already have my license but I was aloud to compete as long as I lost
Nagisa: so you where testing me
Ichigo: that's right you have a long way to go but you'll get there and you might even surpass edgeshot himself but for now claim your prize and eliminate me
Nagisa does so
Ichigo: maybe I'll see you again who knows but don't stop improving kid you've got a bright future

Nagisa looks at him walk away and smiles

Nagisa; I won't disappoint you

Ichigo: I know you won't

And that's a rap

couldn't think of how to include Nagisa in this first part so I just had him go against two fan created people

Ow in this remake I plan for ichigo to have a bit more to do

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