BEPANAH ISHQ

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Kehte hai na kismat hume humare pyaar se milvati hai kab kon kaha mil jae kisi ko nahi pata, kab kis se konsa... Еще

Shuruat
Do zindagiya
Mulakat ❤
Pagalpan🔥
Jazbaat ❤
Tere Ashq
Sauda
Saazish
Ishq or Jung
Ishq or jung - 2
ᴘᴜʀᴠɪ ᴠɪʀᴇɴᴅʀᴀ ᴘʀᴀᴛᴀᴘ ❤️
Grehpravesh 🤍
RAAZ 👀
Mehfil 🥀
pehli rasoi
Ehsaas ? ❤️
Vir's Mother 🥺🤍
PREM 💛
Purvi is in love?
Lagav 🤍
Pur ~ Vir
Raatein 💕
Laal ishq ❤️
Dooriya
Teri Yaad ❤️
Mera Ishq 💖
Purvi gets angry
Hum Tum ♥️
Ishq🧡
Mohhhabatein🤍
Chhedkaniya
KAREEB
Confusion? 👀
The First Kiss
'confession'
'Tere Sang'
PurVir's Bhanji
Vir's Birthday
manipulated
Andekha
Pain.
The Fight.
A long Night (i)
A Long Night (ii)
caring pati
Bas Ek Baar
Pal ♥️
Virendra ~ Purvi
Celebration
announcement
Mehnadi
Mehfil ||
Naughty
Intense Night❤️‍🔥

Teej♥️

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Hello everyone i hope you all are fine and doing great! Let's start our story

[story shuru karn se phele ek choti si baat jo mujhe kehni thi. Firstly thank you so much for your love & support  second agar ap logo ko part chaiye ya koi question suggestions to please aap log mujhe Wattpad pe dm kardo ya to insta pe dm kardo hum online rehte... jawab denge chahe part chaiye ya koi bhi baat ho I'll answer.. aise mujhe na 400 - 500 comments nahi padhe jate na hum individuals ki req dekh pate kise konsi story chaiye ya kiske kya pov ha  pure 400 - 500 comments nahi padh or dekh sakte isiliye aap sab comments mai bas story ke feedback dijiye wo bhi limited taki mai sabke feedbacks comments read kar saku.. baki agar story demand ha suggestions ha ques ha to please wattpad ya insta pe msgs kar dijiye mai jawab dungi I promise]

Here we go ,

It was mid night around 3am. purvi was sleeping.... suddenly her sleep disturbed by the door knock.. she opened her eyes and get-up from bed..

Purvi : Itni raat ko kon aaya hoga..

She goes opened the door and found shikha was standing with clothes and jewelleries.. shikha smiles and entered in her room. purvi switch on the lights

Purvi : Didi aap yaha koi baat ha kya?

Shikha : Nahi koi baat nahi ha purvi mai to bad kapde gehne dene aai thi.

Purvi : Kapde gehne kyu..?

Shikha : Teej ke liye.. abhi maine tumhe isiliye jagaya taki tum kuch kaha pee lo kyuki vrat shuru hone wala ha..

Purvi : Achaa.. mai taiyar hojati hu..

Shikha : Tum jaldi se naha kar kuch kaha pee lo phir jab vrat shuru hoga mehandi lagane wale aaenge..

Purvi : Pooja karne ka bhi mahurat ha kya..?

Shikha : Haa.. par wo sham ko ha abhi subha tum baki ke kaam karlo or phir aaram karna mehandi lagvane ke bad..

Purvi : Ji.. theek haa..

Shikha left.. purvi move in washroom and take bath soon she came out from washroom and gets ready she took the vermilion bottle and wipe her tears..

Purvi : Kaha ha aap mukhiji..!

She took pinch of vermilion and applied in her hairline... she was looking herself in the mirror and covered her head with duppta.

She came downstairs where pd shikha already sitting and waiting for her. She calmed herself and goes near them..

Pd : Aao purvi.. (big smile)

Purvi : Maa apne bulaya tha?

Pd : Haan bulaya tha.. aao baitho..

Purvi : Haan..

She sits near her and smiled lightly.. shikha complimented her..

Shikha : Bohot sundar lag rahi ho purvi or ye gehne tum par bohot suit kar rahe

Purvi : Thankuuu didi..

Pd : Acha purvi abhi tum kuch kaha lo theek haa phir vrat shuru hojaega na to pure 24 ghante bad vrat poora hoga..

Shikha : Haan tum abhi jaldi se kuch kaha lo mehnadi lagane wale aate hoge

Purvi : Jii.. theek haa..

After sometime Gopi came with tea and some fruits..

Pd : Beta khana shuru karo..

Purvi nodded and start eating fruits and talking with pd and shikha.. but she was not feeling happy she fisted mangalsutra and remembering him..

Scene shifts :

Vir woke up suddenly and sits he switch on the lights and looked at clock..

Vir : Yu achanak meri neend kyu toot gayi abhi to 4 bhi na bje purvi wo toh theek hogi na.. ke karu..

He getup from bed come downstairs   there was a pin drop silence Vir came outside and weather was little cold..

He noticed some group of ladies going towards shiv mandir.. he goes near the main gate and gets confused..

Vir : Ye sari auratein aadhi raat ko kaha ja rahi haa.. kuch haa kya..

He thinks and suddenly he remembered today is teej.. he hits his forehead lightly and feels angry..

Vir : Aaj teej ha mai kaise bhul gaya are kaise bhul gaya mai... aaj purv ne bhi to vrat rakha hoga or mai yaha hu... MS ne btataya bhi tha lekin bhul gaya or isiliye aadhi raat ko jag gaya kyuki wo bhi vrat rakhne ke liye aaj jaldi uthi hogi par kya karu kaise jau unke pass..

Pehli baar unhone mere liye vrat rakha  or mai hi unke pass nahi hu unhe kitna bura lag raha hoga kitna gusaa hongi...

Ek to bhukhi pyasi rahegi upar se gussa bhi karengi. kahi unki tabyat na kharab hojae nahi... nahi... mai abhi didi ko call karke bol deta hu unka dhayan rakhegi unhe aaram karne ko keh dengi..

He came inside and goes in his room hurriedly..

Here purvi sitting in hall and two ladies applying mehnadi in her hands... she try to smile but deep down purvi was hurt angry and disappointed... shikha smiled and sits near her.. purvi smile little

Shikha : Zara dikhao to kaisi mehnadi lag rahi ha tumhare hatho mai..

Purvi : Abhi laga rahe ye log didi..

Shikha : Hmm.. nikhar kar aaega mehnadi ka rang tumhare pati ji
itna pyaar jo karte ha...

Purvi : Dekh raha ha didi kitna pyaar karta ha bina batae chod kar chale gye or phone to dur ki baat ha..

Shikha : Koi baat nahi purvi vir ki koi na koi wajah rahi hogi aise karne ke peeche ab tumhara haq banta ha use pucho or uska farz banta ha jawab de

Purvi : Wajah to hume jaane ka haq ha na didi haq ha humara ek patni ke nate

Shikha : Mai samjh sakti hu tumhe bura laga ha par is waqt humare hath mai to kuch nahi ha shivay vir ke intezar krne ke or tumhara wo bilkul lazmi ha purvi.

Purvi : Humara pehla teej unke bina adhura ha didi..

Shikha : Kya pata adhura ha ya poora..

Purvi : Achaa jija ji ne apko phone kiya

Shikha : Ha jab tumhe kape gehne dekar neeche aai tabhi phone aaya tha unka..

Purvi : Achi baat ha (smile)

Shikha : Tumbhi udas mat ho..

She smiled and wipe purvi's tears.. suddenly shikha's phone rangs.. 

Purvi : Kiska phone ha..

Pd : Purvi beta zara yaha aana to..

Purvi : Haan maa..

Purvi getup and goes shikha smile and recieved the call..

Shhikha : Haan vir bolo..

Vir : (restless) Ha didi aap kaha ha?

Shikha : Mai neeche hu vir Hall mai..

Vir : Or purvi wo kaha ha unka vrat ha na aaj unhone vrat rakhne se phele pani piya kuch khaya unki tabyat thik ha na..

Shikha : Aaram se vir ek hi saans me boldoge kya sab kuch..

Purvi came and sits shikha saw her and sits near her shikha put the  vir's call on speaker.. purvi heard his voice and tear slip from her eyes..

Vir : Hello.. hello.. didi boliye na purvi theek ha na.. unhone kuch khaya piya ya nahi... hello..

His voice sounding restless and tensed purvi looked at shikha & wipe her tear.

Purvi : (inner voice) Ek taraf humse baat tak nahi karte or dusri taraf didi se phone karke humara haal puchte ha ap aisa kyu kar rahe ha mukhiji kyu..

Shikha : Haa vir purvi theek haa tum chinta mat karo theek haa..

Vir : Aap unka ache se dhayan rakhna wo zayda sochti ha or laparwahi karti ha apne sath..

Purvi heard his voice and snatched phone from shikha and say..

Shikha : Are purvi..

Purvi : Ek min didi..

Vir heard purvi's voice and smile...

Purvi : Haa to kya bol rahe the aap hume laparwah ha na.. apko bohot chinta ho rahi ha or aisa kyu bataiye hume jabse hume dadi ke ghar choda phone tak kakre baat nahi kiya apne..

Hume phone kiya to uska jawab bhi nhi diya hume lene aane wale the aap.. lene bhi nahi aaye.. or agar apko kisi kaam se kahi jana pada to kya ek bar apko hume batana nahi chaiye tha..? Lekin aap kyu bataenge didi ko phone karke puchenge par hume khud phone karke baat nahi kar sakte ye achaa ha mukhiji..

To hum vrat ha ya nahi kuch khaya ya nahi paani piya ya nahi hum theek haa ya nahi aaram kar rahe ha ya nahi apko ye sab puchne ki batane ki zarurat nahi kisi ko theek haa.. apka jab mann krega tab aaiyega or batana hoga to bataiyega warna apki marzi...

Or hume aata ha apna dhayan rakhna vrat mai apko sabko phone karke bolne ki zarurat nahi jab zarurat hoti ha tab to aap phone karte nahi to ab hum jo kare humar marzi..

She getup angrily handover the phone to shikha and left from there...

Shikha : Hello vir.. vir..!

Vir was smiling and ran his fingers in his hairs and laid down on couch...

Vir : (smile) Haa didi boliye

Shikha : Dekha purvi kitna gusaa ha maine tumhe kaha tha na use phone karlo baat karlo bata do sab kuch par tum mante kaha ho..

Vir : Are humari biwi roothi hui ha didi naraz nafrat nahi ha.. or roothi hui biwi ko manane me alag maze haa.

Shikha : Tum na pagal hogaye ha uske aankho se aansu nikal rahe ha or tum keh rae ho roothi hui ha are dukhi ha tumse naraz ha. Aryan nahi ha baaton mai fasa ke mana liya...

Vir : (smile) Aryan se kam bhi nahi ha humar purvi apne dekha nahi kitne haq se wo humpe gusaa kar rahi thi baatein pooch rahi thi or phone na karne ke liye gusaa kar rahi thi.. pure biwi ke haq se agar wo kuch bhi kahe hum sun lenge...

Shikha : Achaa beta tum aao 4 din baad na tumhari pared nikli na ghar mai tab baat karna mujhse... abhi phone rakho mai purvi ke pass ja rahi hu use dekhne

Vir : Nahi abhi unke pass mat jaiye abhi wo thoda royengi phir rote rote so jaegi ache se pata ha hume.. or unka dhayan rakhiyega.. theek haa..

Shikha : Tum 4 din baad aaoge vir..

Vir : Kuch pata nahi ha didi..

Shikha nodded and cuts the call and move to pd' room.. here vir blushing and remembering how she scolded him vir laughed and sits..

Vir : Humari biwi naraz ha humse

He smile cutely and close her eyes while  remembering her face then suddenly he thinks something & dailed someone's no 

Here purvi laying on bed and her eyes were teary purvi was missing him badly she want to see him want to hear him more and more but she was angry too..

Purvi :Aap jaldi aaiye mukhiji humse nahi raha ja raha ha par hum apse na gusaa bhi bohot ha bohot gussa hume aise hi chod kar chale gaye aap kyu kyu chod kar chale gaye wapis aajaiye jaldi humare pass..

She wipe her tears and soon she fall sleep..

Time passes it was 12 pm afternoon. Vir having his breakfast.. MS came and ask him in a confused tone..

MS : Viren tu abhi nasta kar raha ha

Vir : Haa ms thoda der hogaya..

MS : Mai subha utha par tu kamre mai na tha subha subha kaha gaya tha Viren

Vir : MS aap mere sath chaliye mai sab bata dunga or manne apse kaam ha to aaiye mai bahar gadi nikal raha hu thik

MS : Are par Viren baat to bata..

Both came outside sits in a car and drove off..

Scene shifts -

It was night purvi woke up and sits her head was paining.. then she heard door knock she getup and opened the door..

Aryan : Mami ji..

Purvi : (smile) Haanji..

Aryan : Mai apki mehnadi dekhne aaya hu dikhao na..

Purvi : Acha aao..

She picked him in her arms and she sits on couch and make him sit on her lap.... she put her palms forward..

Purvi : Dekhiye..

Aryan : (touched her palm) Achaaa haa.. mama ji ka naam ha isme mummy ne to bataya tha naam haa..

Purvi : Haa yaha idhar kone me haa apke mama ji ka naam..

Aryan : (he noticed and smiled) Haa dikh gaya yeahhh yeahhh..

Aryan : Apne pooja karliya..?

Purvi :  Ha subha hi waise humari mehnadi achi haa ya nahi..

Aryan : Haa bohot achi ha par mami ji mama ji kab aaenge..

Purvi : Pata nahi Aryan kab aaenge apke mama ji bina batae to chale jate ha..

Aryan : Aap unhe dantna jab mai bina batae jata hu ba mujhe daant padti haa

Purvi laughed and kissed his cheeks Aryan also kissed her cheeks..

Aryan : Achaa bye mami ji aap rest kro

He ran outside and purvi laughed.. then she saw his name and kissed her palms..

Purvi wipe her tear and getup she goes near his painting room and opened the door she looked here and there then  entered in his room and close the door

Purvi sits on his couch and touching his painting brush colour and canvas board she smiled and laid down on a couch..

Purvi : Aap apna aadhiktar samay yahi guzarte ha na mukhiji tab humbhi guzar rahe ha apna waqt yahi pe.. kam se kam apke aane tak din to kat jaenge humare..    aapne hume naraz gusaa karne ka lagta ha theeka le rakha ha humne apse itna kuch kaha badle me ek shabd apne nhi bola phone par..

She was thinking all these and again she fall sleep on his couch...

It was mid night purvi woke up to the sound of thundershe woke up and goes near window and saw it was raining... she was feeling restless she really want to talk with him..

Purvi : Bin mausam barsast upar se humara mannitna kyu ghabra raha  mukhiji to theek honge na..

She was romaing here and there in room and feeling restless she calmed her heartbeats and close her eyes..

Purvi saw one canvas board which is covered by red clothe she gets confused and goes near the canvas she was going to remove the clothe.. suddenly she hear

" abhi mat dekhiye purvi tasveer puri  bani nahi haa.. "

She felt goosebumps and turned with teary eyes.. she saw vir was standing near door.. he was drenched and his facial expression were quite tensed....

Purvi : Mukhiji.....

She smiled in tears and vir entered in a room and say..

Vir : Purvi tasveer abhi puri bani nahi ha hum apko baad mai dikha denge....

She didn't thinks anything else and ran towards him he opened his arms and at the end she throw herself in his arms... she hugged him tightly hide her face on his chest and clutched his wet kurta..

Vir close his eyes and hugged her even more tightly... she broke into cries and try to pulled him more closer.. she put her feet on his feet and completed the distance between them.. she wrapped her arms around his neck and vir hold her protectively Her ear touched with his cheeks.. tear slip from his eyes and he kissed her head deeply...

There was silence only her sobbing  and rain droplets voice were audible in their room no one ready to broke the hug and then suddenly she heard loud thunder strike and she back in sense and broke the hug and looked at him angrily...

That's all for today guyz plz ignore spelling and grammatical mistakes

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