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dil diyyan gallan story on Moran , just peep into the story for the roller coaster ride of Moran , and no bas... More

dil diyyan gallan ( disclaimer )
story of two opposite poles
family ya love ??
monu landed in India
karan and Monami in train
family background
matha ki jagrata
charector skech
monu meets Mahajan family
mall mein lukha chupi
Moran saves each other
monu bond with mahajan family
aag lagi basthi mein Moran apni masthi mein
saamp ne banayi jodi
monami wins Sherghil's heart
veer got a doubt
veer ka irade kya hai ??
PROMO NO 1
deepak's past
The first meeting
families ki Amna samna
karan ka shart
holi celebration in Mahajan mansion
Masti bhari Holi
pyaar v/s nafrat
aa dekhe Zara kismein kithna hai dum
nokhjhok
param's revange
families in village
monu ke haat lagi jaanvi ka dairy
monami's decision..
karan's challenge
golmaal shadhi begins
ring selection
param : the most eligible pandit
confusion mein engagement
fhas gaya param
promo
Turning point
shadhi Mubarak
shadhi ke baad tante ( beginning)
shadhi ke baad tante ( part 2 )
happy birthday mannu
shadi ka tante ( part 3 )
the hunting kiss
the gift
drunken karan
janvi and Deepak side story
janvi and Deepak side story ( part 2 )
moun vrat dharan
misunderstanding ka shikaar
the first Tashan
Navratri ka pehla din
veer's bond with Amritha
bawarchi karan Sherghil
some romantic time btw the couples
some romantic moments ( part 2 )
shadhi mein siyappa
Dark romantic novel hero
roop Tera masthana
unexpected truth
Amritha helps Monami
clarification
monu , and Amritha makes a deal
50 -50 partnership
monu saves dadaji
inauguration ceremony ( epilogue)
let them go

who is Amrita ??

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By crystal_heart756

Hai ..

Hello ..

Happy reading..

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Mahajan mansion ..

Koezi ka shadhi fix hogayi thi , sabhi log bahut hi kush the ..

Sab ke saath sooraj bhi shamil hogaya tha kyuki , faizi unke bete jaise hi hai , lekin jab bhi unka saamna Deepak se hothi , dono ek dusre se muhh fher kar chale jate hai ..

Jisse dekh kar Moran udas hojate the ..

Now everyone sat at dining table and eating lunch , juhi and Gayatri serving food for everyone..

Juhi said in btw ..

Juhi : monu navratri aane wali hai toh iss baar tum sari rules follow karna padega ..

Monu pouts and sees Deepak for help ..

Deepak : arey kyu bacchi ko tang kar rahe ho juhi , choti bacchi ..

Juhi : toh aapke upar case kardena chahiye tha Deepak ji aapki beti ko ithni choti Umar mein shadhi karne ki jurum mein ..

Deepak ab kuch bolne layak nahi raha , sabhi log mann hi mann mushku rahe lage ..

Paru : papa jab aapko pata hai mom se jeeth nahi payengey toh aap koshish kyu karte ho ..

Monu tak tak karke plate mein maarne lagi jaise jata rahi ho , woh gussa hai ..

Karan : ( smiling by seeing her antics ) ithni bhi kya rules hai maa ?? Mujhse boliye mein follow karunga .

Paru : soch lo jeez , ithna bhi easy wala nahi hai ..

Veer: ladka hokar vrat karega ..

Karan : kyu bagwaan ko prey karne mein bhi gender equality chahiye , waise ab toh har matters mein ladka aur ladki equal hai ..

Suhana : mein toh yeh sunke heraan hunn ki tum kab se bagwaan ko maan ne lage ho ..

Karan : kya karu maa Maan na padta hai , aur ( seeing monu ) devi ji ke krupa ke bina kuch hota bhi nahi aaj kal ..

Sabhi log karan ka yeh comment sunke hasne lage , monu badi badi ankey karke ke karan ko dekhne lagi ..

Mo : ( to herself) yeh ladka khud ko samajte kya hai ?? Kal tak mounvrat daram kiya tha , toh khafhi nahi hai , aur besharam kahika sab ke samney flirt kar raha hai , woh bhi kudh ki biwi se , sharam naam ki koi cheese hi nahi ( thinking a second) lekin dusron ki biwi ko kaise flirt kar sakta hai , apni hi biwi se flirt karega naa ..

And she mentally slapped herself for her thoughts ..

Juhi : zyada badi rules kuch nahi karan , subha 5 bhaje ko utna hai , maa ka Puja karna hai fhir shaam ko thoda puja paat karni hai bus ..

Mo : accha aur subha paanch bhaje ko tande paani se nahana , fhir raat ko jagrata , fhir Kanya ka Puja , din bhar mein ek baar khana khana , pura nou din  no nonveg in the house , yeh sab nahi batayenge aap maa ( seeing Deepak ) papa aapko shadhi karne keliye juhi Williams hi mili kya ?? Koi acchi hi du ladki se shadhi ki hote toh kum se kum sasuraal walon ko impress karne ke chakkar mein ithna puja paat toh nahi karti ..

Juhi playfully slapped on monu head , and otherside Mahajan's were very much impressed with juhi gestures..

Paru : ( in teasing tone ) waise mom aap ek important rule bhul gaye ..

Juhi : kounsi rule ??

Paru : yehi ki monu ko aur jeez ko dhur rehna hoga in nou dinon tak ..

Waha jithne bhi log hai sab ko samaj agaya hai paru ka meaning kya hai except karan , monu toh ankey badi badi karke paru ko darane ki koshish kar rahi thi but who cares ..

Karan : ( by counting the distance btw him and monu ) abhi do feet ki shooting hai woh khafhi nahi hai ??

Sabhi log ek dum se has pade monu kicked on his leg under table but woh galathi se veer ko maari thi ..

Veer : ouch , Monami mujhe kyu maar rahi ho ??

Mo : sorry sorry ..

And woh karan ko ghoor kar dekhne lagi , paru karan ke pass aakhar laan mein bolu ..

Paru : mr unromantic jeez meri matlab hai ki you and di can share a room but not a bed ..

Karan bhi ek dum se chodne laga kyuki abhi tak khud monu ithni boldly unke saath baatein nahi Karthi thi lekin yeh not so be jubaan jaanwar , sab ke samney uska mazaak udarahi thi ..

Juhi : yeh bacche bhi na , sharam naam ki cheese hi nahi ..

Aur woh badbadate huye kitchen mein chale gayi , and moran ek dusre se nazrein churane lage ..

Veer noticed that awkward moment and woh beech mein topic change kardiya..

Veer : uncle aapko pata hai aaj office mein ek miracle hogayi thi ..

Sab ki attention veer par gayi thi ..

Veer : humare office ek intern aayi thi , aur bilkul monu ki tarah dikhthi thi ..

Suddenly Deepak expression got changed , he was somehow surprised or shocked by this news ..

Faizi : sach mein veer , matlab humara Monami ka humshakal ..

Veer : haan faizi hum shakal kya koi pehli baar dekha toh dono ko behen hi samjengey ..

Deepak ki baat se spoon chut kar gir gayi lekin Deepak ko kuch hosh hi nahi thi , which is noticed by karan ..

Karan : are you ok uncle ??

Tabhi kitchen se kisi ka girne ki awaaz aayi thi , sabhi log kitchen ki taraf bhaaga aur dekha ki juhi behosh hokar jameen par giri huyi thi .

Sabhi log dar gaye ,, Deepak pulse check karne laga aur karan juhi ko god mein utake room ki taraf lekar Gaya

Deepak : ( to everyone) aap sab bahar jayiye , mein check karta hunn ..

Mo : papa mumma ko fhir se stroke aayi hai , lekin abhi tak sab normal ..

Deepak : monuuuuu tum bhi ek doctor ho , panic nahi karte ( to karan ) karan monu ko bahar lekar jao , aur sambhalo ..

Everyone comes outside ,, Deepak once again checks juhi's pulse and removed a injection and a solution from his kit and injects a solution into juhi body ..

Slowly her heart beat got normal and with in few minutes her condition got normal..

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USA

It's night and ina hospital

A lady was in the operation theatre and she is in her labour pains ,her husband was waiting outside , after sometime a nurse came outside and said to that lady's husband ..

" sorry sir  we weren't able to save the baby , as you know ma'am ko delivery mein abhi bahut time hai , and achanak hi labour pains hogaye hai "

That man fells in chair with a thud ..

" sorry sir , ma'am ko thodi der mein ward mein shift karengey tab mil Lena "

That man cupped his face and trying to control his emotions and trying to not broke because he have to console his wife now , after many years his wife got pregnant and this is the last hope for them ..

At the same time juhi also admitted in hospital for labour pains , Deepak comes and admits her in hospital and shifted her to operation theater , being a doctor he himself went into the operation theatre ,

After an hour juhi gave birth to twins , after delivery Deepak came outside and saw that person who was crying bitterly..

Deepak : maan ?? Maan tum yaha ?? Abhi toh bhabhi ki delivery mein wakth hai aur iss wakth tum yaha ??

Maan saw Deepak  , after leaving India Deepak came to US and settled in US only ,both maan and Deepak works in same hospital, they two are close friends now , not only close friends but mann os like an elder brother to Deepak ..

Astha ( maan wife ) helped juhi in her pregnancy time , they feel like juhi and Deepak were lucky for them after juhi coming to there outhouse , astha got pregnant and they two shares a sisterly bond ..

****************"

Deepak got shattered by hearing maan and astha's loss ..

Maan : tum toh jaante ho astha keliye yeh baby kithna important hai , and I don't know ab iss news ko astha kaise legi ..

Deepak : tries hard to console him ..

Just then a children specialist comes and says ..

Dr  : Dr Deepak mahajan , congratulations your babies are very healthy , no worries, just now I checked them , both are healthy ..

Deepak nods , mann again had tears in his eyes ..

Both went to infant spl ward and saw the babies who were peacefully sleeping in two cradles , Deepak had tears in eyes by seeing his twin daughters ..

But at the same time something is running in maan's mind , which he don't want to do but he have to do bcoz to save his wife ..

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Juhi : ( shouts out of her lungs ) aap pagal hogaye ho bhai , bhai mana hai na mein ?? Aur aap meri bacchi ko mujhse dhur karne ko soch rahe hai ..

Deepak : are you out of your mind mann ?? Bhale humare pass tumhare jithna paise aur power nahi hai lekin we are enough capable to give a good life to my daughters ..

Maan : i know mein jo soch raha hunn , woh galat hai , just think about astha juhi , tumne khud dekha hai astha iss baby keliye kithne sapne saza kar rakhi hai , isiliye mein ek minute keliye laalaj hogaya tha , i am sorry ..

And he left from their cabin and went to their cabin ..

**********""""""

Astha just got conscious and saw maan infront of her ..

Astha : maan where is our baby ?? Tu... tumne dekha hai baby ko ..

Maan tried to change to the topic ..

Maan : woh sab baad mein baat karengey , you take rest first ..

Astha : maan , you look upset ,humari bacchi teek hai na woh ?? Mujhe le chalo uske pass , mujhe abhi dekhna hai meri baby ko ..

She gets hyper which is not at all good for her health and maan tries his best to clam her down ..

Just then they heard a baby crying sound and turned to that side ..

They saw Deepak with a new born baby in his hands ..

Deepak : bhabhi , yeh rahi aapki beti , dekhiye kithna cute hai bilkul aap par gayi hai , maan par bilkul nahi gayi ..

He himself had tears but he composed himself ,maan folds his hands in front of Deepak and says thankyou , astha hugs her baby and cries her heart out ..

She is just lost to love her baby ..

Maan : ( in low voice which is audible to Deepak ) thank you so much Deepak , i promise mein tumhari bacchi ko seene par laga ke rakhunga meri akari saas tak , kabhi kisi cheese ki Kami nahi aane dunga ,

Deepak : maan bhai , ithni badi duniya mein aapke aur Avinash ke alawa humara hai hi koun hai , and abhi se woh aapki aur bhabhi ki beti hai ..

Maan : par juhi ??

Deepak : woh bhi ek maa hai dusri maa ka dard samaj sakthi hai , isiliye woh maan gayi ..

Maan hugs him tightly and thanks him from his heart ..

As they stays in same place so juhi jab chahe tab unki dusri beti se mil sakthi thi but after somedays they noticed that Monami and amritha dikh e mein ek jaise hi dikthe hai ..

Jayarsi baath hai they both are identical twins ..

Deepak : it's ok maan , mein yaha se chala javunga bhabhi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega yeh sach ..

Juhi : but promise me bhai , kabhi aapke koi aulaad ho bhi Gaya toh meri beti ke saath kabhi galat nahi hogi , varna mujhse bura koi aur nahi hoga mein batharahi hunn ..

Maan : first a fall woh humari Jaan hai juhi , woh humari life mein farista banke aayi hai , and mein uske saath kabhi galat hone nahi dunga , meri akari saas tak usse protect karunga , aur dusri baat tum log kayi jane nahi jare hai , abhi abhi toh Deepak ka promotion mili hai , tum logon par Monami ka bhi jimmedari hai, tum kayi nahi jayengey , mein India wapas chala jaunga astha aur Amritha ke saath , tum jab chahe usse mil sakte hai , waise bhi papa kab se wapas bhularahe hai , unhe bhi unki pothi se milna hai aur baaki ka pariwaar bhi Amrita se milne keliye taras rahe hai ..

Juhi : ( by caressing amritha who is in her arms ) chalo kum se kum meri ek bacchi ko sara pariwaar ka pyaar milega..

She kisses on her forehead and gives to maan ,

After few days Deepak and juhi gives send off to maan , astha and amritha ...

" Amritha"

Juhi shouts and wome up with a jerk ..

Deepak : juhi tum utt gayi ??

Juhi : Deepak Amritha, humari amritha ..

Deepak: juhi relax , abhi tak confirm nahi huva ki woh humari Amritha hai ya koi aur jo monu ki tarah dikthi ho ..

Juhi : nahi Deepak mujhe pata hai woh humari Amritha hi hai , aur mein maan bhai se bahut naraaz hunn , India aane ke kuch din baad , hum se sari connection cut kardiya , aur meri bacchi ki ek kabar tak nahi mili mujhe , usse khoob datungi mein , aur Amritha, usse seene se lagane ka mann kar raha hai mujhe , chalo na Deepak abhi chalte hai ..

Deepak : ( shouts ) ok enough juhi , pata nahi Amritha ko humare baremein kithna pata hai , ( softly ) hum usse mil lengey fhir maan ko khoob datengey , ithni saal humari amritha ka kabar nahi Dene ki acchese punishment dengey , fhir kya karna hai sochengey , plz tum apna control math khona plz ..

Juhi nods and Deepak side hugs her ..

So that's it for today i hope you like it..

And one more last thing for the last time ,

I know ab bhi koi muhh utakar ayengey kuch bhi bolengey , and un sab keliye meri ek hi jawaab hai , everything is interconnected here ..

And unlogon ki comments delete karke I will move on ..

Mein koun hunn aur meri parivaar kya hai , mujhe kaisi parwarish diya hai , yeh baat mujhe acchese pata hai ..

Koi bhi ayire gaire logon ki betuki bathon se munhe ya meri pariwaar walon ko koi farak nahi padta ..

Mein yeh kehna nahi chahthi but you forced to me to say maybe tum logon ki upbringing mein kuch kami hori hai isiliye ayise ek fictional character keliye Jeetha jaagta insaan ki emotions ke saath khel rahe ho ..

I wish ki bagwaan kisi ko bhi ayise bacche na de 🙏 no parents deserve these kinds of children, I really pity them

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