We thank all who submitted action excerpts for consideration.
Criteria Used:
Excitement and Pacing: How thrilling and engaging is the action sequence? Does it have a suitable balance between fast-paced moments and moments of tension or breather?
Clarity: Is the action sequence easy to follow and understand?
Originality: Does it offer a unique take on action or introduce new elements?
Cinematic Quality: Can you visualize the action sequence vividly?
Emotional Impact: Does the action sequence evoke emotions in the reader? Does it create a sense of danger, triumph, fear, or any other strong emotional response?
Descriptive Language: How well does the author utilize descriptive language to enhance the action sequence? Does it create a vivid and immersive experience?
First Place
Unmasking The Nightmare by starStorm26
Second Place
Seret by Wabisabi_kn