Rishton Ki Dor

By unknown1389107

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This is a joint family story where everyone loves each other to no extent Join their journey to learn how th... More

Introduction
Personality
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
Episode 14
Episode 15
Episode 16
Episode 17
Episode 19
Episode 20
Episode 21
Episode 22
Episode 23
Episode 24
Episode 25
Episode 26
Episode 27
Episode 28
Episode 29
Episode 30
Episode 31
Epsiode 32
Episode 33
Episode 34
Episode 35
Episode 36
Episode 37
Episode 38
Episode 39
Episode 40
Episode 41
Episode 42
Episode 43
Episode 44
Episode 45
Episode 46
Episode 47
Episode 48
Episode 49
Episode 50
Episode 51
Episode 52
Episode 53
Episode 54
Episode 55
Episode 56
Episode 57
Episode 59
Episode 60 (Nikkah)
Episode 61
Episode 62
Episode 63
Episode 64
Episode 65

Episode 18

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"Ab kyun ke sab baat clear ho gai to asal baat par ate hein" Aghajaan said while picking up the cane from the bed making Haider's eyes widen...

"Agha... Aghajaan kon... Kon si baat ap ne Thappar mar liy... Liya na baat khatam" he stuttered and tried to move back but Aghajaan held his hand in a tight grip

"Are nahi beta abhi to baat shuru hui ha woh thappar to bas trailer tha" Haider gulped

Aghajaan moved to the door and locked it... He picked up the cane making Haider take two steps back

"Idhar ao aur sit-ups lagan shuru karo" He sat on the bed and pointed at the place in front of himself

Haider made a crying face but did as he was told

He did the first one but as he was standing up a hard wack landed on his bottom making him shriek...

"Aieeee Aghajaaannnn" he immediately rubbed his back trying to make the pain better

"kan pakar kar karo," he said sternly making haider pout

"mein kar raha hun par ap marein nahi naaa" he whined while holding his ears

Aghajaan shook his head and gestured for him to continue, he did as told

And again a hit landed on his back making him jump... "owieeee" he couldn't help but yelp cutely

"Aghajaan na mare na please" he pleaded like a kid

"beta ji ab apka hath dubara kaan se hata na to aik ke bajaiy har sit up par do dande parein ga" he warned making haiders eyes widen

He held his ears and continued doing the sit-ups while Aghajaan kept giving him one wack after every sit-up

"Ahhh Aghajaan bs karein please 30 ho gai hein aur kitna marein ga please mein ne office bhi jana ha, kese lage ga jab sab dekhien ga unka boss baith bhi nahi paa raha" he whined

"Acha beta abhi to mein ne mara hi kahan ha zara idhar to ao" Haider gasped

"Aghajaan thora rehem kar lein" Aghajaan smiled and gestured for him to come closer

"Acha ab mujahy batao kya galti thi apki" he held Haider's both hands in his one hand and turned him sideways

"Aghajaan please na marna nahi- owww" he yelped when he got whacked again but this time the wack was much harder

"Dont make me repeat myself" Haider gulped at his stern voice

"mein ne kamre ka darwaza band kiye baghair bhaijaan ko bate batein is liye apko sab pata chal gaya" he mumbled

But screamed when Aghajaan whacked him as hard as he could

"AHHHHH" he hissed he tried to get out of aghajaans grip and rub the sting but aghajaans hold was very strong

He may be old but being a retired army officer was quite strong and fit

"Haider mein janta hun ap Irum ke bhai ho, but aise jawab de kar isko prove karne ki zarurat nahi ha, ab batao kya galat kiya ha apne" he stated sarcastically

"mein ne apse jhoot bola,"

Hit

Scream

"mein ne hamza ki tabyat be bare mein sab se chupaya"

Hit

Scream

"bs aghajaan aur koi galti nahi ki mein ne" he stated trying his best to get out of his grip

Hit

scream

"Acha beta mujhay to apke secretary ne bataya tha ap meals skip kar rahe ho" Haider mentally said quite a few words for his secretary in a very colourful language

"Ahhhhhhh bs bs please Aghajaan paka ainda nahi karun bs please" he pleaded as Aghajaan gave him. Another hard hit

He could feel his back burning badly, the few hits he got at last were very hard and painful

"nai nai nai Aghajaan bs aur nahi mujhay pakka yaqeen h khun nikal raha ho ga, Thora to rehem ka lein mujh par" he pleaded as he saw Aghajaan raising the cane again

Aghajaan left his hands and he immediately rubbed his back while jumping around

"Idhar ao" Haider walked towards Aghajaan who sat on his bed and laid down keeping his head in Aghajaan's lap making sure that his sore back did not touch the bed

"theek hein ap?" he questioned softly

"itna marne ka baad ap yeh puch rahe hei, bhala itna koi marta ha, itna dard ho raha ha mujhay" he pouted

Aghajaan smiled and kissed his cheek... Haider snuggled closer to him and hid his face in Aghajaan's abdomen

"kisi se keh kar ice pack mangwa dun?" haider shook his head

"Nahi agar ap yeh karein ge to sab ko pata chal jai ga kya hua ha aur phir mujhay embarrassed feel karna pare ga" he mumbled cutely

"acha baba nahi bulwa raha, wese bhi Ali ko to pata hi ha apke saath kya ho raha ha" he teased

"unko pata hone se kya faraq parta ha mujh se kai zayada mar woh apse kha chuke hein, apko yaad ha jab unhon ne smoke kiya tha aur ap ne unko pakar liya tha phir kitni maar pari thi unko, puri raat woh ulta let kar rote rahe the dard ke wajah se, aur Hamza unko baar puch raha tha 'apto jection lata ha' kitna cute tha na woh bachpan me" he mimicked Hamza while smiling

"hn yaad ha mujhay, aur apne bhul gai ap jab apko mar pari thi aur jab ap so rahe the to apke cute hamza ne sote hua apko dande se mara tha aur ap rote rote mere pas shikayat ke liye ai the" he chuckled

"hayee woh din kese bhul skata hun me pehla hi itna dard ho raha tha upar se us nawab sahab ne usi jagah par aur zor se mara tha, aur phir jab apne dantne ke liye bulaya to Aghujaan ke pas mere shikayat laga kar mujhay aur maar prwai thi" he made a face remembering that horrifying day

Aghajaan laughed "Yeh baat to sahi ha, par Hamza ha boht janu bacha, apko yaad ha jis din apko dog ne kata tha aur phir apko 14 injection lage the to woh kese apko hug kar ke ro raha tha jese usko lage ho" Haider huffed

"Kya yaad karwa diya aghajaan pehla hi dard ho raha ha upar se apne woh manhus din yaad karwa diya ab zyada dard ho raha ha" he rubbed his back

"Abhi theek ho jai ga" he mumbled while leaning back















To be continued ❤️

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