NAYA AASHIYANA

By Kritika_1809

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Slow Updates Based on 5 years leap Join the journey of two adorable couples tanshi and abhira This story i... More

Author's note
Character sketch
Oberois
Birlas
Yaadein
Responsibilities
Maa Ka Vada
London Calling
Ajeeb sa Ehsas
Angel Or Zindagi?
Phir Le Aaya Dil ❤
Toota Hua Dil 💔
badalti cheejhe
Inauguration Ceremony
Beeta Kal ?
Purane Dard, Naye Ghaav 💔
Heartbroken Goodbye 💔
Jana Anjana Rishta 🥹
Miracle Baby
Shocking Reality (Tanu's Entry🎉)
Regret🥺
Abhi's Pain 🥺💔
Akshu's Guilt😭💔
When Abhi Met Junior 💕
Opening the curtains from the Past
Announcement
Manshi Met Akshu🥹
We Are With you 🫂
Family Ka Pyar🥹
Dosti ka Dard 🫂
Aaj din chadheya😍💕
Akshu's firm stand🔥🔥
Accha ji main Hari 😌😂

Sach Ka Samna

400 36 11
By Kritika_1809

Akshu going outside and abhi following her finding ways to how to talk with her and apologise

Abh: mumma aacha hua aap aa gayi

Ak: abhir betu kya Hua aur tu aise bahar kyu Mai tujhe hi dekhne bahar aayi thi

Seeing abhir Abhi hides himself

Abh: Shh mumma vo bad uncle sunlenge dheere

Ak: kya? plz mumma ko batao hua kya hai

Abh: chalo mere saath

Abhir drags her towards Oberoi electiricity area where she sees 2 men's

1men: are yaha toh koi party chal rahi hai
2 men: tujhe kya karna hai tu apna kaam karna jaldi se
1 men:haa kar raha hun
2 men: kab pakde jane ke baad

Ak: Bijili chor , abhir tujhe pata hai na kya karna hai

Abh:Yes mumma

Abhir and akshu takes sticks and start beating that 2 men's

Ak: tum logon ko kya laga bijli churaoge aur kisiko pata nahi chalega bijli chor kahi ke kitni 100 volt 500 volt 1000 volt

Abh: school main sikha nahi kya uncle chori karna galat baat hai

1 men: o didi maaf karo, jane do

Ak: are jao na mai kaha mana kar rahi hun par ghar par nahi hospital jao chodna mat abhir

2 men: are didi kuch meetha Kha lo aur gussa chodo

Ak: mai 8 baje se pehele kuch nahi khati

1 men: hey bhagwan jaldi se 8 baje de

Ak: bajau tathastu

Abhir akshu beating them continuously with sticks

Ak: 1 2 3 4

Abh: Abhir ki mumma Abhir ke saath

Ak:5 6 7 8

Ak/abh: gundo se karenge mukkalaath

Men: o didi ae bacche jane do maaf kardo hume, bol apni mummi ko plz

Ak: chalo bhago bhago yaha se chupchap

Akshu and abhir throw their sticks towards them and that men's runs for their dear life

Abhi saw all this he stands shocked

Ab:ye kya tha meri akshu aur fighter ye koi humshakal hai Kya nahi hai toh vahi maine khud picha kiya hai par meri akshu aur itna gussa (thinks)

Abh: yeyeye as always mumma aur baby jeet gaye

Ak: Yes baby mumma aur unka baby abhir best team hai

Abh: mumma aapke prince charming bhi kitna proud honge na ki unki babe aur unka baby kitne strong hai fighter hai (hugs her)

Akshu saw abhi who is shocked hearing abhir's talks

Ak: Yes baby, aapke papa hum dono pe bahot proud honge
(hugs him back with tears in her eyes)

Abhi is shocked while listening this that abhir knows about him as his papa and his mumma's prince charming

Abhi akshu share painful eye lock but akshu breaks it

Ak: chale ab ander varna tere handsome aur baki sab hume daant lagayenge

Abh: are haan chalo chalo

Abhir akshu goes inside mansion Abhi also comes

All are busy in party , abhir goes to play with manpreet ahana
Abhi quickly held akshu's hand and takes her in guest room
Akshu without screaming follows him beacuse she doesn't want to ruin the party

They enters in guest room, Abhi locks the door

He come towards akshu and cupped her face

Ab: akshu I am sorry I am really sorry mujhe laga, tumhe bolna chahiye tha na mai pagal samjhta raha tumne tum aur Mr.oberoi akshu tumne kaha kyu nahi tumhe rokna chahiye tha na mujhe

Ak: bina samne wali ki baat sune react karne ki tumhari adat jayegi tab na (jerks his hand)

Ab: akshu vo

Ak: enough abhimanyu bahot bol liya tumne infact bahot jyada bol gaye tum

Ab: akshu plz listen

Ak: no I don't want to listen to you and don't you dare to call me akshu, abhi pal bhar main mai tumhare liye akshara thi aur ab phirse akshu samaj ke kya rakha hai tumne mujhe

Ab:ok ok akshara calm down plz ek baar meri baat suno

Ak: tumne suni thi jo main sunungi mai bhi toh keh rahi thi abhimanyu plz plz ek baar meri baat suno par nahi tumne nahi suna aur tumhare mann main jo aaya vo suna diya mujhe kabse keh rahi thi, par nahi par ab bas, tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab har kyu ka jawab ab main tumhe dungi
Sabse pehele tumhe kyu nahi bataya abhir ke baare main, sach batau mere pass tumhe ye sach batane ki wajah nahi thi dr.abhimanyu birla

Ab: akshara I know tum gusse mai ho lekin ye kya keh rahi ho tum aise kese keh sakti ho tum

Ak: kyu nahi keh sakti agar samne wala sunne ke liye bhi taiyar na ho toh kese bataya jaye

Abhi looks at her confusingly

Ak: sach batane ke liye do logon ki jarrorat hoti hai ek batane wale ki dusra sunne wale ki mai toh bol dungi par kya tum sun Paoge ?

Abhi nods confusingly

Ak: aaj toh bata hi deti hun, uss din tumhe laga jo khoya tumne khoya maine kuch nahi khoya mera koi loss nahi hua Neil ke saath maine apne ek bacche ko khoya tha use bacche ko jis bacche ke liye main tumse ladi, minnatein ki, hajar vade karke pregnancy continue ki thi tumne mujhpe neil aur humare babies ke maut ka iljaam laga liya iljaam aur nafrat ke tohfe deke ghar se nikal diya yaha tak humare rishte ke maut ko bhi tumne mujhe blame kiya tumne ek baar bhi socha tumhari akshu tumhare bagair kese rahegi, kese jeeyegi vo uske Abhi ke bina

Akshu Abhi looking at Each Other with teary eyes

ak: jab mujhe pata chala na meri cokh (womb) main humara ek baby zinda hai mujhe sabse pehele tumhara khyal aaya ye baat mai tumhe batana chahti thi kyunki tumhara bhi iss baby pe utna hi haq tha jitna mera aur isliye sab kuch bhul ke maine tumhe phone kiya infact kayi calls kiye vo phone call toh yaad hoga na tumhe
(Abhi looks at her while remembering how manjiri reacts seeing akshu's call on his phone and how he cut that call continuously)
Nahi , par mujhe uss phone call ka har second yaad hai mai yaad dilati hun tumhe, jab tumne finally phone receive kiya tab maine kaha tha
(Same as show akshu apne haath ko as a phone dikhati hai)
"Hello hello Abhi, mujhe na tumhe bahot jarroori baat batana hai"
Tumne kaha "humare beech kuch bacha hi nahi hai kehne sunne ko "
Lekin maine kaha "bacha hai Abhi bacha hai tumhe jitna chillana hai chilla lo jitna dantna hai dant lo jitna gussa karna hai kar Lo lekin plz plz bas ek baar meri baat suno"
Tumne kaha "maine bola na kuch nahi bacha hai humare beech, aur jo bacha hai mai usse sambhal raha hun
Mai itna gidgidayi maine kaha "Abhi plz ek baar meri baat sun Lo humare baby ke bare main mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai (both sobs) par tumne meri puri baat suni hi nahi
Tumne kaha " agar tumhari yadash chali gayi hai toh mai tumhe yaad dilata hun tumhari wajah se maine apne babies ko kho diya"
Mai phir bhi kehti rahi "nahi nahi suno meri baat"
Aur tumne kaha " humare beech kuch bacha hi nahi aaj ke baad mujhe kabhi phone mat karna aur ab chali gayi ho na meri zindagi se toh dubara kabhi wapas mat aana"
Aur tumne phone kaat diya aur main bas "hello hello Abhi Abhi " bolti gayi aur phir maine gusse main apna phone fek diya tumhare liye vo bas ek phone call tha par mere liye vo umeed thi jo tumne todi thi vo phone call meri zindagi ki sabse badi haar thi Mujhe mere pregnancy ke iss safar main Har kadam main tumhare saath chahiye tha par tumhara gussa meri tadap se jyada bada tha aur itne saal mera phaisla tumhare haq se jyada bada ho gaya

Both are in crying mess

Ab: nahi plz itni badi saja nahi

Ak: saja toh vo hain jo mujhe mili Mai akeli thi puri dunia mere khilaf thi tum bhi tum bhi aur mai akele apni baby ko apne pet main leke lad rahi thi Na pairon ke Necche Jameen thi na sar ke upar koi ghar ki chat na koi manzil thi na koi rasta mere dono parivar ne mujhe marne ke liye choda tha ye mat kehna mai goenkas ke pass ja sakti thi kese jati jab mere apne gharwalon ne bhi yakeen kiya jo hua mere wajah se hua tab nahi pata tha mujhe ki mai akeli nahi hoon mere saath mera baby hai toh kisiko aur taklif na dene ke liye chali gayi mai waha se
uss waqt pata nahi kese kanha ji ne mujhpe taras khaya aur rishi ko mere pass bheja vo mujhe hospital le gaya tab mujhe pata chala humara ek baby zinda hai uske baad vo mujhe apne ghar le gaya dheere dheere vo mera best friend ban gaya suna tumne mai aur rishi sirf best friends hai aur kuch nahi kabse yehi kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin tumhe sunna hi nahi tha janti hun tumhari galti bhi nahi hai papa ne jis tarah se tum se sabko introduce kiya tumhe aise laga par sach pata chalne ke baad ek baar mujhse shanti se bhi puch sakte the ya phir meri puri baat hi sun lete phir react kartey lekin nahi tumne mujhpe Iilzam lagaya mai tumhe bhul gayi maine tumhe dhoka diya tumhari yadash ab chali gayi hai toh mai tumhe yaad dilati hun vo tum the jisne mujhe choda vo tum the jisne mujhe divorce deke ghar se nikala aur mai manti hoon maine tumse abhir ka sach na batake galat kiya jab maine tumhe aur abhir ko ek saath dekha na tab mujhe realize ho gaya maine kitni badi galti ki isliye inauguration ke din mai tumhe sach batane wale thi par tumhara accident ho gaya tabse Mari jaa rahi thi tumhe batane ke liye kyunki mai aur nahi chipa sakti thi aur galat nahi karna tha mujhe tumhe aur abhir ko dur rakhke yehi batane ki koshish kar rahi thi kabse par yaad rakhna mere bete ko mujhse door karne ki koshish ki na tumne toh mai bhi ladungi mai bhi peeche nahi hatungi mere baby ke liye mai koi bhi ladayi lad sakti hun chahe vo samne tum kyun na ho

Ab:tumhe tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki mai aisa kuch

Ak: kyu nahi kar sakte bilkul kar saktey ho kyunki tum mujhse nafrat karte ho mai janti hun tum mujhse nafrat karte ho isliye tum mujhse mere abhir ko chinoge mujhe pata hai (she is panicking , shivering badly)

Both are crying badly
(Abhi was about to held her hand but she jerks)
(She was about to go after pouring out her pain her anger, but turns back and said )

Aur jante ho iske baad bhi kuch hua tha par vo kahani batane ka haq mere papa tumhare sir Dr.harshwardhan birla ka hai unse jake puchna kyunki mai akeli nahi thi jiske saath galat hua tha unke saath bhi uss waqt galat hua tha

After saying she goes and unlock the door and left from there after wiping her tears

Abhi stand shocks listening her side of story but he needs to listen full story so he goes outside to talk to his sir after wiping his uncontrollable tears

In Rishi's room:
Tanu comes and saw rishi is working on laptop she understood he is pretending to avoid her

Ta: rishi mai itne dino baad aayi tum mujhse miloge bhi nahi

Ri: mai busy hun abhi baad mai baat karunga

Ta: rishi plz I know tum naraj ho aur tumhari narajgi jayas bhi hai par plz mujhse ek baar baat karo

Ri: mujhe koi baat nahi karni tanu tum jao party enjoy karo aur rest karo abhi abhi aayi ho thak gayi hogi

Ta: itni fikar hai toh khud hi khana khila do na yun naraj mat raho plz

ri: mai mai naraj nahi hun tanu i am fine

ta: accha sabse pehele toh ye laptop leke acting karna band karo aur mere aankho main aankhen dalke baat karo

ri: tanu mai bahot busy hun abhi maine kaha na baad main baat karta hun

(tanu takes laptop and kept away from rishi)

ta: naraj nahi ho toh najare kyu chura rahe ho, jawab do mr. rishi oberoi (said angrily)

ri: kya sunna chahti ho tum yehi ki mai tumse naraj hoon toh ha hun mai naraj tumse ki tum 4 din bolke gayi thi aur 2 hafte main wapas aayi ho aur iss 2 hafte main humari koi baat hi nahi huyi hai (he said with losing his patience and hurt in his eyes)

ta: rishi i know i am sorry achanak mujhe vaha aur kuch dino ke liye rukna pada par maine tumhe kitne calls kiye tum hi the jo mujhe ignore kar rahe the itni choti si baat pe tum itna naraj kyu ho rishi tumhe bhi pata hai maine ye jaanmuchke nahi kiya (tanu try to calm down the situation)

ri: tumhare liye ye choti si baat hogi par mere liye bahot badi baat hai mai apni tanu se 2 hafte dur tha meri tanu ko thik se dekhna bhi naseeb nahi tha mana ki ye chand humari sari baatein sunta hain lekin tanu kab tak, tum janti ho tumse door jana mujhse kabhi bardash nahi hota mai pagal ho jata hoon tumhare bina

ta: aur tumhare gusse ke wajah se mujhe bardash karni padi humari ye dooriyan vo, mai bhi toh tumse door nahi jana chahti thi mai bhi jald se jald tumhare pass aana chahti thi kuch reason se nahi aa payi toh kya tum aise gusse main mujhse baat bhi nahi karoge, ignore karoge mere calls ko, mai bhi toh tumhe miss kar rahi thi mai bhi reh sakti hun kya tumhare bina tumne socha bhi kaise aisa (crying face)

(tanu was about to leave after pouring her heart out, but rishi held her hand and turns her, due to force her hands automatically resting on rishi's shoulders)

ri: tanu i am sorry plz rona band karo arrey yaar tumhe pata hai na mai kitna bada idiot hun i am sorry i am really sorry apne dard main maine tumhare dard ko andekha kar liya i am sorry tanu honestly mujhe tumhe jane se rokne ka bahot mann tha (wipes her tears)

ta: toh kyu nahi roka rok lete na tumhara haq hai rishi ek baar kehte tanu mat jao ( cups his face)

ri: (cups her face) nahi tanu mera pyar tumhare liye koyi pinjara banke rahe ye main kabhi nahi chahunga, mera pyar tumhare liye khula asman hona chahiye jaha tum udan le sakti ho , mere pyar ke liye mai tumhe apne sapno se dur karun toh uss pyar ka koi matlab nahi i am sorry tanu honestly maine 4 din ke liye khudko prepare kiya tha par achank tumne kaha 2 hafta tum vahi rahogi mai pagal ho gaya tha already miss kar raha tha tumhe aur phir ye news aur gusse main tumhare calls ko ignore kiya aur darr bhi tha ki phone utha liya aur apne gusse main tumhe hurt na karun tanu i am sorry adat ho gayi hai yaar teri tujhse door nahi reh jata but mai teri kamjori nahi teri takat banna chahta hun tujhe tere har sapne ko pura karne main support karna chahta hun i am sorry maine gusse mai bahot kuch bola na tujhe i am really sorry Jana

ta: it's ok i know tumne jaan muchke nahi kiya mai bas itna keh rahi hoon ki mai bhi hurt ho gayi jab tumne mere calls receive nahi kiye toh, maine bhi tumhe bahot miss kiya rishi i love you Jana

ri: i love you too meri Jaan

(they tightly hug each other happily as they both are yearning for each other for days)


Precap: glimpse of past from harshu ,

Ta: Rishi vo hot ladka kaun tha bahar?🤔
(Imagine rishi's reaction 😜)

Guys, I know sabko laga hoga maine aadhe se jayada show ke dialogues kyu liye akshu ke confrontation ke liye but believe me jitna aap sab ne ye story padhi hai Akshu as a single mother ye dialogues read karke dekho, dekhna perfectly hit karega aur plz koi akshu ko judge nahi karega dono ne apna saalo se bhara hua gussa narajgi ek dusre ke saamne nikal di bass
And that electricity scene vo scene dekhne ke baad mere dimaag main ye imagination scene aaya tha so voh bhi use kar liya unn pagalo ki toli ne jo scene diye ussme abhira ko ghusaker use aacha banane ki koshish kar rahi hoon

How was my 1st tanshi scene?
Sorry kuch galati ho gayi ho toh it's my first time of writing for them

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