NAYA AASHIYANA

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Slow Updates Based on 5 years leap Join the journey of two adorable couples tanshi and abhira This story i... Xem Thêm

Author's note
Character sketch
Oberois
Birlas
Yaadein
Responsibilities
Maa Ka Vada
London Calling
Ajeeb sa Ehsas
Angel Or Zindagi?
Phir Le Aaya Dil ❤
Toota Hua Dil 💔
badalti cheejhe
Inauguration Ceremony
Beeta Kal ?
Purane Dard, Naye Ghaav 💔
Heartbroken Goodbye 💔
Jana Anjana Rishta 🥹
Miracle Baby
Sach Ka Samna
Regret🥺
Abhi's Pain 🥺💔
Akshu's Guilt😭💔
When Abhi Met Junior 💕
Opening the curtains from the Past
Announcement
Manshi Met Akshu🥹
We Are With you 🫂
Family Ka Pyar🥹
Dosti ka Dard 🫂
Aaj din chadheya😍💕
Akshu's firm stand🔥🔥
Accha ji main Hari 😌😂

Shocking Reality (Tanu's Entry🎉)

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Harsh picks up abhir and all are try to divert his mind with taking him to eat something

While Abhi comes in guest room , akshu also following him

Abhi is shocked with this unexpected revelation he is unable to understand, how should he feel

Toh decide hua humare baby boy ka naam abhir hi hoga
(He remembers his and akshara's conversation about baby name)

He remembers his and abhir's moments

Oye kya Hua
Hoye dikhayi nahi deta chot lagi hai

aaj se aap mere friend ho docman

Aapko pata hai mumma ke baad sirf aap mere shortcuts samaj paye

Aakhir pota kiska hai aur beta kiska hai

Mai inhe harsh nanu dadu kehta hun

He remembers his moment with akshara:
6 saal main chashma kese
Mai bhi wahi soch rahi thi tumhari najar toh kabhi kamjor nahi thi aur na hi..... (meri) what akshu about to say

Akshu enters in guest room following him

Abhi saw akshu, he held her

Ab: akshu akshu neeche jo bhi hua kya sab sach tha kya sach main junior mera humara baby hai akshu bolo na kya junior tumhara aur mera (sobs)

She cups his face and he also , both touch their forehead with each other

Ak: beta hai haa Abhi haa vo tumhara beta hai vo humara baby hai tumhare junior ke senior ho tum Abhi tum uske papa ho (she said with sad and happy tears in her eyes due to crying)

Ab: akshu I can't believe this pata hai jabse usse Mila hoon na mere dil ne pure 5 saal baad kuch feel karna shuru kiya jese tumhare liye feel karta tha humesha lagta tha kya rishta hai humara kyu mujhe vo itna apnasa lagta hai kyun jab vo mere samne aata hai tab lagta hai seene se laga ke rakhu pyar lutau uspe, socha shayad vo tumhara ansh hai tumhara beta hai isliye vo mere liye special hai tab nahi pata tha lekin ab pata hai ye rishta kya kehelata hai vo humara baby hai humare pyar ki nishani Abhi akshu ka Abhir hai vo

Akshu nods with tears

They sobbing while holding each other's face

(Sapna jahan played in bg)

Hum pe sitaaron ka ehsaan ho
Pura adhura har armaan ho
Ek dusre se jo baandhe humein
Baanhon mein nanhi si ik jaan ho
Aabaad ho chota sa ghar
Lagna sake kisi ke nazar

Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai
Main bhatakta hua sa ek badal hoon
Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai

Ak: I am sorry Abhi I am sorry maine tumhe pehele nahi bataya par mai

Abhi comes in reality after listening akshu's words he is feeling akshu betrayed him as he realised he lost his son's 5 years of childhood

Ab: kyu nahi bataya mujhe itna bada sach chupaya tumne vo bhi itne saal
Aur inn sab main tum akeli nahi thi sir bhi shamil the unhone aur tumne mujhe dhoka diya hai akshara

Ak: nahi Abhimanyu main tumhe

Ab:5 saal se main apne bacchon ko mara hua samaj raha tha
Mujhe laga tha Mr.oberoi aur tumhari perfect family hai junior, par mujhe kya pata tha usne hum dono ke parivar ko pura kiya hai humari happy family ka sapna (Abhi cries)
Meri ghar ki neev ke saath ye ghar khada hai mujhe laga tha tum iss ghar ki vo neev ho jo maine jara sa bhi hila di toh yeh ghar bikhar jayega
Jab junior ka janam hua Mai uske saath nahi tha ungli pakad ke maine use Chalna nahi sikhya meri badkismat dekho, ek baap ka sapna kya hota hai ek baap ka sapna hota hai vo apne bacche ko pal poske bada kare maine toh usse 5 saal dekha bhi nahi mai janta nahi tha junior mera beta hai
Tumhe pata tha na sir aur mera rishta kesa tha tum janti thi na mujhe apne babies ke liye best papa banna tha toh tumne mujhse mera ye sapna kyu Cheena kyu mera sapna Mr.oberoi jee rahe hai pichle 5 saal se kyu junior unhe dad bula raha hai jabki uska papa mai hun, ye jante huye junior humara baby hai tumne Mr.oberoi se shadi kese ki tumhe mera jara sa bhi khyal nahi aaya itne saalon main ek baar bhi meri yaad nahi aayi tumne kese move on kar liya kese tumne mera haq Mr.oberoi ko de diya how could you do this akshara

Ak: Abhimanyu bas ek baar meri baat toh suno

Ab: bas akshara bas ab junior aur mere bich koi nahi aa sakta tum nahi Mr. Oberoi nahi sir nahi koi bhi nahi
5 saal pehele mai papa ban gaya tha 5 saal mujhe pata nahi tha aur ab jab 5 saal baad mujhe pata chala hai toh main junior ko bhi bataunga ab use bataunga uske papa Mr. Oberoi nahi sirf mai hun vo mera beta mai uska papa hun uska haq hai ye Janna mai use batake rahunga Abhi ke Abhi

Abhi angrily going downwards, akshu try to stop him

Ak: abhimanyu nahi abhimanyu plz ruk jaao abhimanyu plz meri baat suno ek baar

They reach downwards and everyone shouts "SURPRISE "

Abhi akshu calm themselves and they try to be normal

Akshu saw a cake infront of her with congratulations akshu written

Ak: rishi ye sab kya hai ye cake and all achanak kyu

Ri: hmm good question darling par woh kya hai na jab khushi achanak se aati hai hum use celebrate karte hai you know that right , main abhi tujhe hi bulane wala tha

Ak: haa par hua kya hai biji manpreet ahana betu koi batayega mujhe

Ri:wait mai batata hun tu aaj apni case no.51 haar gayi na

Ak: tumhe kisne? haa haar gayi (akshu shock but accept)

Ri: toh jese decide kiya tha jab tu apna case no. 51 complete karegi tab hum tumhare without losing pure 50 cases na harne ki jeet celebrate karenge so here we go Adv.akshara oberoi

ak: seriously rishi harne ke liye koyi jashn manata hai

ri: o hello madam ye jo nonstop 50 case tu jit gayi uska kya postiive baat pe bhi focus kar liya kar aayi badi

Everyone claps for akshu she try to smile

Abh: yeyeye mumma let's cut the cake

Ri: no champ not now there's more

Abh: offo handsome ab kya baki hai

Ri: akshu tujhe yaad hai tune ANK designs ke naam se diamond jewellery Set banaye the aur Abhira designs ke naam se guitar ke bracelets banaye the

Ak: ha par uska (she ask nervously) kya hume loss hua kya

Man:aksh come on yaar aise sirf tu hi soch sakti hai buddhu

Ak: preet ise bol na jaldi se bole peheli baar maine akele, vo designs banaye the iss ladke ne meri ek help nahi ki bol raha tha you can do it akshu I trust you sweetheart

Ri: are mai toh Abhi bhi keh raha hun mujhe tumpar abhi bhi trust hai you can do it akshu and you know what you did it sweetheart

Biji: rishi puttar kyu meri bacchi ko pareshan Kar raha hai bata de na beta

Ak: haa plz rehem kar mujhpar

Ri: ok ok so vo joh diamond jewellery sets and bracelets ki London main bahot demand badh gayi hai itni ki humara stock khatam hone aaya hai aur demand jyada se jyada aa rahi hai dono designs ki market main bahot demand hai so yes you did it darling after all tu goenka jewellers and singhania diamonds ke popular couple kartik uncle aur naira auntie ki beti hai

Ak:rishi kya tu sach keh raha hai majak toh nahi uda raha

Ri: lo ji ise dekho Ab kya file lake dikha du thoda toh trust kar le

Ak: accha sorry sorry man liya

Abh: mumma chalo cake cut karo

Ab: akshu itne saalon main lawyer ban gayi aur jewellery designer bhi ye toh akshu ka sapna tha use apne mumma papa jaise designs banane the aur aaj usne kar dikhaya I am so proud of akshu par tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya kyun (in his mind)

Aha: Dr. Birla plz aap bhi aaiyen na dekhiye I know aapko aur di ko bahot batein karni hogi par ye moment na akshu di aur gharwalon ke liye bahot khas hai plz join us

ab: aap sabko sach pata hai (shocks)

ah: aapke accident ke waqt hum sab vahi the humne sab dekha tha bas abhir so gaya tha, abhi ke liye ye baate side main rakhen aa jaiye na plz

Abhi nods hesitantly

Ri: akshu abhir chalo aa jao

Abhir akshu cuts the cake everyone claps for akshu

Akshu feeds her betu first then biji rishi manpreet ahana and harsh

Harsh takes her in a fatherly hug

Har: I am so proud of you princess

Ak: thank you Papa mujhe support karne ke liye warna mai ye sab nahi kar pati aap sab ki support ke wajah se mai aaj yaha hun

Ri: oh madam chup kar tu aaj jo hai voh teri mehnat ke wajah se samjhi

Akshu nods

Girl: OH WOW celebration wo bhi mere bina, not fair

Everyone turns to see the voice of the owner

Har: beta tum

Biji: meri gudiya

man: omg really

Aha: di

Ak: tanu

Abh: mom (shouts happily), dad dekho mom aa gayi

Rishi left from there without saying anything (nobody notice this except Abhi and abhir)

Abhi stands shocked while listening mom dad from abhir's mouth to rishi tanu

Ahana akshu goes and hugs tanu tightly

Ta: ahana akshu yaar itna miss kiya mujhe tum dono ne

Aha/akshu: bahot we love u tanu di/tanu

Ta: aww I love you too both

abh: I missed you ms.gorgeous

Ta: I missed you too my golgappu (she hugs him )

Tanu takes ashirwad from biji , biji hugs her

Biji:khush reh puttar aacha hua aa gayi

man: tanu di so good to see you

ta: same here devar ji

Har: ha beta bahot miss kar rahe the tujhe meri Angel (hugs tanu)

Ta: I missed you too dad (hugs him back) dad vo rishi

Abh: mom dad chale gaye vo aapse upset hai ? (held her hand and ask innocently)

Ta: it's ok golgappu tere dad ko teri mom manake rahegi (kissed his cheek)

Ab: ye sab kya ho raha hai uss din jab ahana ne kaha junior ki mom aa rahi hai mujhe laga koyi elderly lady hogi jisse ye sab attached hai par junior Mr.oberoi ko dad aur iss ladki ko mom keh raha hai Kya maine hi (in his mind)

Har: galat samaj liya sahi soch rahe ho tum par iske liye mai jimmedar hun maine tumhe aise lagne diya

Ab: sir aapse toh mujhe baat karni hi hai par abhi can you plz explain what's going on?

Har: toh suno, champ bachpan se rishi tanu ko mom dad kehta hai tanu rishi ki girlfriend aur hone wali wife hai

Ab: toh iska matlab akshara aur Mr. Oberoi

Har: pati patni nahi hai

Abhi stand shocks after this big revelation he feels guilty about what he done, said to akshu in anger

He try to find akshu, he saw her going outside he follows her

Koi abhi ko judge nahi karega khud soch ke dekho insaan ko agar koi badi baat pata chali toh sabse pehele vo sochta hai usne kya khoya hai gussa hota hai ye nahi sochta ki kya hua tha isliye ye sab hua so abhi ka outburst uss ki jagah sahi hai plz understand this
abhi ka bol ke ho gaya now akshu ki turn

Precap: tanshi scene, most awaited confrontation part 2💥🔥

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