Cahpter 13 The Metang wit Sartcaln [ Metang is a Pokemon. It is obvious this story is full of logic ]
"Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" she eskes when she say the cats that she new.
"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest!" [ YES. GOODBYE STARGLEAM. ]
gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln! said the she-ca. It was YellowFang. [ Well. Isn't that a surprise ]
"Wher else wood you be?"
"Yuo dont need to be so red! [ Yellowfang is most definitely not red ] said StarGlame she was mad."
sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made."
"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? [ I KNEW IT. THERE'S NO WAY HER FUR WAS THAT COLOR NATURALLY. ]
"TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret"
"Wait so then I'm died?" StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!" [ Oh no. I guess that means you'll have to stay there forever. ]
"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first." [ Aww. C'mon man. Can't you just baby sit her here for a bit. ]
"Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe." [ JOE. WHAT ARE YOU DOING. THIS ISN'T YOUR STORY ]
"I wnat to knew"
"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!" [ OH GOD NO. WHY STARCLAN. WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO YOU ]
"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?"
"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!" [ yes, because everybody will listen to a rainbow-eyed cat who is the age of apprentice, and is being fought over by delusional Firestar and Graystripe ]
"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with her. [ STARGLEAM. PUT THE ROCKS DOWN. Okay, Yellowfang, you're pretty old so I understand how you must've gotten her confused with like Leafpool or something. So, you distract her, and I'll grab the rocks and run. ]
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