To chaleee ....
lets continueee
mann jayein ...
she closed her eyes while crying ..
she feel soft touch on her cheeks ..
vir wipes heer tears ..
She open her eyes .. look into her eyes
👁️👁️✨👁️👁️⚡💕
He take her in warm soothing
hug .. She gets more closer to him gets hide in his chest ...
boths eyes r closed they r feeling e.o
mukhiji
hmmm
Aap hame chod kr to nhi jayge na
kabhi nhi
he smiles open his eyes too see her ..
His smile gets vanish ...
bcos....
he look around it was dark night 🌌☁️
cold winds r blowing throw a window
he was in car🚗 travelling at night ..
take deep breath rest his head at back seat..
His pov :- 💭
Pata nhi ye sapna kbhi pura hoga bhi yaa nhii ....
main tanne kbhi apne bahon mein bhar bhi pauga yaa nhii ...
ye pyar bhii na bahot buri chiz hoti haii
hota bhi usse hai jo hamare kismat main
nhi hotaa ..
kabhi kbhi to lagta haai main tere kabil nhi hu bawrii .. kbhi kbhi ye bhi lagta haii
kashh tuu manne pehle hi mil jatii ..
Zindagi kisi or mod par hoti aaj ..
Main bhi tujse utna hi pyar
krta hu lekin manne dar lagta he khi
tu manne chod k na jaye ..
Chahta to main bhi hu tera sath ..lekin
pyar se .. na ki zimdari wale rishte se ..
main bs itna chahta hu ki main jaisa tanne pyar krne laga hu tubhi mujse utna hi pyar
krne lag jayee ..
Kassh ye sapna sach ho jaye
shiv ji
he take deep breath close his eyes ...
Scene shift to haweli
m.s back to homee ..
goes n seat on couch
purvi came wid glass of water gave him..
looking towards door
her eyes was finding him ..
M.s saw her
kya hua kise dhund rhi he ..
purvi:-
Vo mama ji "mukhiji"nhi aaye aapke sath
m.s:-
nhii tuje bataya nhi usne ..
purvi:-
kis bare main
m.s:-
vo too subah hi nikal gaya Ahemdabad k lie tuje bataya nhi usne ..
purvi:-
lekin vo to koi saman bhi lekar nhi gye ..
pd comes from behind ..
" are purvi jab tu baccho ko lene gayi thi na school tbhi gopi ne saman bhijva diya viren kaa "
jii thik haii ( gives simple smile )
she left
They both understand ...
pd:-
ye viren bhi na bhaiji pata nhi aisa q
krta haii ..
m.s:-
hmm
pd:-
bata kr to jata ..bichari purvii
kitna bura lag raha hoga usse ..
m.s-
haaa pta nhi kya chl raha he dono k bich
pd:-
waise vaapas kab aane wala hai viren
m.s:-
pata nhi kam hote hi aajayega ...
pd:-
Thik haii ..
Here purvi is upset bcs he went
widout meeting her informing her..
Night time ..
All r wrap up wid dinner
kids r playing in purvi room
she is doing her work
manas is playing game on laptop ..
&the bell start ringing ..
hello baba
kya kr rhe he
mere dono shaitan
kids :-
aapko miss kr rahe haii ..
vir:-
accha call q nhi kiya fir
kids:-
aapke call ka intzar kr rhe the ..
hame laga aap rest kr rahe hoge
vir:-
accha khana khaya tum dono ne
haa baba or aapne
are main to abhi pohcha huu ..
Servent :-
aap dono ko dadi ji ne bulaya hai
aap dono k lie surprise hai ..
kids :-
wah 🤩😍baba byy hu badme bat krege .
dadi ne bulaya he
Vir:-
are rukoo sunoo too
while going he click the button to disconnect bt it mistakly swipe the camera ..
vir is about to disconnect bt he stopp..
purvi was admiring some pictures like
missing someone .
she is unaware of itt that call is going onn ...
She is writing something in it ...
Vir was admiring herr ...
she was missing Someone tear drops her eyes ..
she hug the picture burst out ...
vir feels bad for her ..
she kept that picture in tht sketch book ..
His pov:-
itna hi pyar he to kehti Q nahi ..
samjh kaise aayega manne ..
pagal bawri kahi ki ....
ek baar ghr pohach jau to
khud hi puchlugaaa ..
He cuts the call ...
🅽︎🅴︎🆇︎🆃︎ 🅳︎🅰︎🆈︎ 🌄
Vir gets readyy
does his brkfast ..
went to his wrk
after few hours he finished his meetings ..
rest his on chair close his eyes ...bcs he is
feeling tired ..
☎️🎶☎️🎶☎️🎶☎️🎶☎️🎶
start ringing ..
He take the call
Namaste mukhiji .
Namaste ..
Main vikrant bol rha hu ..
Ha lawyer sahab boliye ..
kya baat haii
mukhiji vo aapka divorce case file ho gya haii ..
( gets shocked)
mukhyani ne daskht kr diye ..
lawyer👨⚖️:-
jiii mukhiji mukhiyani ji ne dastkht
kr diye or paper bhi jama kr diye the mere pass ..
vir:-
kab
👨⚖️:-
4din pehle ..
vir:-
fir tanne mujjhe Q nhi bataya ..
👨⚖️:-
hame laga aapko pata hoga hi ..
vir:-
thik thik hai main dekhta huu
aane k baad ...
👨⚖️:-
kal aapki case ki pehli sunwaie haii ..
he gets lost (closed his eyes)
👨⚖️:-
hello mukhiji hloo
vir:-
Ha ha Thik hai mein pohch jauga ..
kal ..
His pov:-
4 din pehle( he counts days )
mtlb jis din main yaha aaya uske agle din 😣hi bawri ne dastkhat krk k paper de diye ...
inner voice:-
ab kya hua yhi to chahta tha na tuu
Purvi tuje talak de de or apni zindagi
apne manmutabik jiye ...
mol k bhandhn se nikl jaye yhi to chahta tha na tu ab kya hua..
jab usne kr diye hai sachme dastkhat ..
Q bura lag rha haii...
❤️voice:-
lekin bawri k jane k
bad mera kya hogaa ...
main kaise rahuga uske binaa ..
🧠:-
jaise sakshi k bina jee raha tha Itne salo se
waise bawri k bina bhi jeena sikh jayega.
❤️voice:-
kya bawri ko bhul payega
kya usko kisi or k sath dekh payega ..
seh payega jab vo tuje chod k kisi or
ki ho jayegi ..
kisi or ko pyar karegi ye sab tujhse
bardash hoga ..
🧠:-
Nhi hoga fir bhi tuje khud pe kabu rakhna pdega vir..
tu khud k swarth k lie uski zindagi barbad nhi kr sakta ..
❤️ voice:-
agr vo bhi tujse pyar krti hogi too
tere lie usne dastkhat kr diye hoge tooo...
🧠:--
vir shant hojaa sb thik haii ..
jo hoga dekha jayegaa .. sb thik hoga
❤️ voice:-
muje abhi bawri ko dekhna haii ...
mujhe usse milna haii
main usse aaj saf saf puch luga
kya vo mujse pyar krti hai ya nhi ..
haa yhi shi hoga ....
Main aa rha hu bawrii ..
He leaves frm there ..
Next day in court ...👨💼📝
purvir came in front of e.o
judge:-👨⚖️
Kya aap sachme alag hona chahte haii ..
kya aap dono is talakh k lie tyar haii.
purvir eyecontact ..
lone tear falls frm her eyes ..
purvi:-
" jiii "
👨⚖️📝:-
kya aap bhi ye talak chahte haii ..
vir:-
" jii "
👨⚖️:-
Thik hai .. apka divorce case file hota he
ab aap dono ja skte haii ..
purvi leave from there immediatly ..
vir:-
mama.s bawri ..
M.s:-
Vir tune ye thik nhi kiyaa ..
Vir:-
maine kya kia mama.s
M.s:-
Uspar aise dabav nhi dalna chahie tha ..
maine kaha tha na tujhse kuch din ruk
jaa vo apne pyar ka ijzhar krdegi ..
vir:-
lekin mama.s
m.s;-
tuje pta nhi hai tere jaane k bad kya
kya hua he yaha ...
vir:-
kya huaa ...
flashback :-
One normal day when purvi is
coming back home after done wid
her puja ...
She was lonely walking on street
Soome goons tease n harased her ..
by his(virs name )how he behaves wid her
vo tujme dilchaspi nhi rkhta to kyahua
goons:-
hum to hai na tere lie ..
chal mere sath ...
she was frustated already due to things which was going on ....
she gets scared first &bt irritated at same time ...
purvi:-
accha aao na
goons :-
haa haa abhi aaya ..
she took stone frm road
start throwing on them...
humse pyar kroge tum
kamino shakl dekhi hai apni ..
later she found dry stick on side of road
she took it .. runs behind them
" Hum sirf mukhiji hai or marte dum tak
unke hi rahege samjhe tum .."
(while beating )
Hame chuoge
she beat them all wid stick badly ..
Police take her off in Custody
&goons too put it in lockup ..
Suniye sarkar
sarkar
m.s:-
haa boliye munimji kya hua
mukhiyani ji ko police le gayi ..
m.s:-
Q kya hua .. kya use pta nhi vo hamari bahu hai..
munim ji :-
Nahi malik hamne samjhaya
unhe lekin vo nhi manne ..
M.s:-
Kisne itni jurat ki hamari bahu ko lockup
main dal diya ..
👮♂️:-
Namaste sarkar ..
M.s:-
isse jaldise bahar nikalo
tu janta bhi hai ye kon hai ..
ye is gao ki mukhiyani haii .
agar mukhi ko khabar bhi lagi na
to teri ye naukri chin lega ..
👮♂️:-
nhi sarkr mujhe maf krdijiye
main naya hu muje nhi pata tha
ye mukhiyani ji haii ..
they free her
Later they get bck home ..
purvi:-
hame maf krdijiye mamaji
hum khud ko rok nhi paye
humne ye sab ...
M.s:-
nhi beta koi baat nhin
tune shi kia har ldki ko aisa hi jawab dena chahiyee ...
Tu apna khayl rakh mein dr ko bhejta hu .
aarm kr le ..
jii ..
🅱︎🅰︎🅲︎🅺︎ 🆃︎🅾︎ 🆂︎🅲︎🅴︎🅽︎🅴︎;-
Vir:-
Unki himmat kaise huie
meri bawri ko chedne kii ..
unhe tooo main ..
M.s:-
nhi viren rukja filhal ghar chal ..
tuje lagta he logo ko dikhta nhi hai tera ye bartav sbko pta he tu kaise bartv krta he purvi see ..
Vir:-
mama.s aap sab jante ho fir bhii ..
M.s:-
muje pta he lekin logo ka kya kru ..
Vir:-
manne koi fark nhi padta mama.s
log kya sochte he ...
M.s:-
Tuje nhi pdta lekin in sab ki saza
purvi ko mil rahi haii ..
uski kya galti hai in sab main ..
vir:-
mama.s mane akela chod dijiye ..
he left ..
🅷︎🅴︎🆁︎🅴︎ 🅸︎🅽︎ 🅷︎🅰︎🆆︎🅴︎🅻︎🅸︎ ...
purvi was sleeping ..after taking pills
bcs she was nt well ...
(kal ki fight k wajah se thak gyi he )
vir came back to home get inside room ..
he saw her sleeping .. some marks on her body ..
vir cant control him self
he looked at her ...
tear slip frm his eyes ..bcs he saw her after week & in this condition ..
he cover her properly ..
He laid down beside her on bed ..
She was little toxicated due to dose of tablets ..
when she sense him ..
she open her eyes saw him
wid smile ..
"mukhiji aap aagye "
He slowly look at her
melt at her smile ..
she got up adjust herself on his shoulder
Vir got nervous .. she huged him
hide her face in his neck ..
" mukhiji aap hame chod kr q gaye the "
he didnt utter a word ..
she get up look in his eyes
hold his face wid her baby hands
Came closer vir gets nervous
his hands is on her waist holding her ..
She gets more closer ..
staring at his lips ..
" Boliye "
wo main (nervous tone )
"kam kam se gaya tha "
he didnt stop her ..
he first time feeling her so closely...
Firse to nhi jayege na hame chod
kr ...
"He noded in no"
She came more closer
there nose touch vir closed
his eyes breathing heavily ..
she peck on his lips & then on cheeks rest her head on his chest ...
"Hum aapse bahot pyar karte hai mukhiji "
"smile crept on his face "
kiss on her head
he too take her in his embarce ...
Both sleep in e.o arms...
after sometime she open her eyes
Slowly slowly she open her eyes
saw no one is there in room she is alone in room ...
(oo hoo ye bhi sapna nikla ..
koi nhi dekho aage kya hota he )
shee look at time .. aaj to bhot der ho gyi .. later she get freshnup ..
Few minutes later
Vir back to home
He went into bedroom in full anger
kya jarurat thi kal
gundo se ladne ki ...
She was standing in front of mirror .
she turn after heard his voice ..
His eyes gets wide ..
She was also shocked ..
both turn in opposite direction
quickly ..
she is standing without her duppatta on her body ..
Tu tu darwaja band nhi kr sakti kyaa ..
(closed eyes,)
hame hame thodi pata tha a
aap aise acahnk se aajyyege kamre main ..
Main nhi to koi or aajata darwaja lock kiya kr
( she start finding her dupata looks around)
hamara hamra dupattaa she turn she found her duppatta is in front of vir on 🛋️
purvi:-
Hame voo dupatta dijiyena pls
aapke samne haii ...
Vir:-
kaha haii ..
purvi:-
aap pehle aankhe to kholiye apni
she smiles ..
ha haa
purvi;-
vo raha aapke samne ..
He took it givess her at back ..
without turning back
hogaya ...
she cover her shoulder & neck from front
jiii
he turn towards her ..
he look at her waist some cuts r visible
she applied some ointment ..
purvi:-
Kya kehrahe the aap ..
vir:-
Wo main haa
kya jarurat thi kal gundo se
ladne kii tu koi jhasi ki raani
nhi haii jo sabse ladti fire ..
tanne kuch ho jata too .. ( concern)
purvi:-
Wo gunde hame ched rahe the
or aap nhi the na hamare sath ..
aapke aane tak itnjar nhi kr sakte the ..
hame khud hi ladna pada unse ..
Aurr ab to aap sath hoge
bhi nhi hamare ..
Aage jo bhi hoga
hame akele hi dekhna hogaa ..
aap ko akela jo rehna haii ..
She left frm there ...
vir:-
bawrii ..
pata nhi ye Q baat ko ghuma firakr
wahi pe le jati haii ..
He went towards cupboard
remove his kurta ..
He saw tht dairy on his table
thn he remember something its the same dairy which he saw in vedio call that day yes purvis dairy ..
he open the dairy in anticipation.../ excitement 😄 😍
tear slip from his eyes
his heart gets broken in thousand peices ..
"its picture of vipul & her in one frame
both r looking at e.o smiling seated on ghat both r looking so happy"
Vir thoughts she still missed
him loved him ..after saw there pic he thoughts he came in between them
( vipul& purvi)
Ab mera veham sachme
badlta jaa raha hai bawrii ..
Tune jo bhi kaha us din vo sb sach tha ..
or tu vhi sab chahti haii ..
Koi baat nhi tu jo chahti hai whi
hogaa ..
teri khushi main hi meri khushi hai ..
He close the dairy wipe his tears left from
there ..
"Window are open at night
due to wind 🌬️ the dairy pages turns
rapidly .. there was one single picture of
him.. in tht he was smiling he was talking
with mama.s " it blows wid wind falls down under table ..
To be continueed ...
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Hope u ll like it...
𝐓𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐲𝐨𝐮 ..💗✨🎐
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