𝓓𝓲𝓵 𝓭𝓲𝔂𝔂𝓪𝓷 𝓰𝓪𝓵𝓵�...

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dil diyyan gallan story on Moran , just peep into the story for the roller coaster ride of Moran , and no bas... More

dil diyyan gallan ( disclaimer )
story of two opposite poles
family ya love ??
monu landed in India
karan and Monami in train
family background
matha ki jagrata
charector skech
monu meets Mahajan family
mall mein lukha chupi
Moran saves each other
monu bond with mahajan family
aag lagi basthi mein Moran apni masthi mein
saamp ne banayi jodi
monami wins Sherghil's heart
veer got a doubt
veer ka irade kya hai ??
PROMO NO 1
deepak's past
The first meeting
families ki Amna samna
karan ka shart
holi celebration in Mahajan mansion
Masti bhari Holi
pyaar v/s nafrat
aa dekhe Zara kismein kithna hai dum
nokhjhok
param's revange
families in village
monu ke haat lagi jaanvi ka dairy
monami's decision..
karan's challenge
golmaal shadhi begins
ring selection
param : the most eligible pandit
confusion mein engagement
fhas gaya param
promo
Turning point
shadhi Mubarak
shadhi ke baad tante ( beginning)
shadhi ke baad tante ( part 2 )
happy birthday mannu
shadi ka tante ( part 3 )
the gift
drunken karan
janvi and Deepak side story
janvi and Deepak side story ( part 2 )
moun vrat dharan
misunderstanding ka shikaar
the first Tashan
who is Amrita ??
Navratri ka pehla din
veer's bond with Amritha
bawarchi karan Sherghil
some romantic time btw the couples
some romantic moments ( part 2 )
shadhi mein siyappa
Dark romantic novel hero
roop Tera masthana
unexpected truth
Amritha helps Monami
clarification
monu , and Amritha makes a deal
50 -50 partnership
monu saves dadaji
inauguration ceremony ( epilogue)
let them go

the hunting kiss

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Monami kitchen mein suhana ki help kar rahi thi ..

As woh kitchen mein thi lekin uska pura mann aur nazar uski room ke upar hi thi ..

Mo : ( to herself) ab kaise face karu uss kankajoore ko , ek toh maine ayisa dakka Diya ki koi mujhe jabardasti kar rahe ho , par mein bhi equally involved thi na , par khud ki control kaise kho gayi mein , mujhe step by step sab kuch karna tha , pehle papa ko sooraj papa ke beech misunderstanding thi usse clear karna tha , fhir karan ko sach bathana hai , uske mann mein papa keliye ko kadwahut hai usse nikal na hoga fhir uske baad hum dono humare zindagi mein aage badna tha na , lekin Maine kya kiya seedha last step par chali gayi , ohh God ab mein kaise karan se nazar milavu ??

Suhana tab se monu ki expression dekh rahi thi woh samaj gayi kuch toh baat hai jo monu ko pareshan kar rahi thi ..

Su : Monami , is any problem??

Mo : no maa ayi..mayisa kuch nahi hai ..

Su : humm jhoot bol rahi ho yeh samaj aara hai , par kyu jhoot bol rahi ho yeh nahi samaj aara hai , anyways jo bhi ho tum dono aapas mein clear kardena ..

She gives a tea cup to monu ..

Su : jao karan ko chai dekar auo , thoda aaram se bhi ayegi na tab bhi mujhe koi problem nahi hai ..

She said the last line in somehow teasing tone , uski gaal laal hogaye hai aur jo bachi kuchi kasar bharkha ne puri kardi ..

Bharkha : aur haan hum tum logon keliye breakfast table par inthazaar karengey , bus waha par time par ajana dono ..

Mo : bhabhi aap bhi ??

Both suhana and bharkha chuckled by seeing monu's flushed face , par unhe kya pata tha , monu bhi war zone mein enter kar rahi hai aur war zone mein kabhi 0eechr nahi hatthi hai ..

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Yaha room mein karan ka bhi kuch yehi haal tha , jab monu ne karan ko neeche dakka Diya toh by mistake uski sar bed ki khone se lag gayi thi , aur ek chota Nishan hogayi thi ..

Agar uss Nishan ko faizi ya param dekh liya toh biwi se maar khane wale 0ati bol kar karan ka mazaak uda uda ke behaal kardengey , isiliye woh foundation ke saath uss nishaan ko chupane ki koshish kar raha tha ..

Aur mann mein soch raha tha ..

Karan : ( to himself) how could you karan , tum khud par control kaise kho sakte ho ?? Mana ki woh tumhari biwi hai , officially tum dono ab aage bad sakte hai but without her consent how could you take a step forward, what if woh tumhe saath uncomfortable hogayi ho ?? Ya fhir unsafe feel ki hogi toh , what if woh wapas maine chali gayi toh ?? What if woh tumhe divorce dedi toh , what if woh tum par martial rape ka case lagayi toh ? ..

Unka what if ka race rukhne ki naam hi nahi le rahi thi , kisi ne doo knock karke ander aaye the ...

Karan ne sar utakar dekha toh monu thi , woh bagal mein 0ado laptop ko open karke kuch kaam karne ka acting karne laga ..

Monu ne thoda jhuk kar dekha toh laptop 0n bhi nahi thi , sirf black screen dikh rahi thi , monu ne class lagane ko soch rahi thi but kal raat ki kiss yaad agayi thi , woh embarrassed feel karne lagi ,

Mo : chai ..

Karan : haan toh peelo mere permission ki kya jarurat hai ..

Mo : ( in mind )  fhirse ?? Nahi monu iss baar nahi ..

Woh sach mein chai ko peene lagi ..

Karan sees monu drinking tea by sitting other side of the bed , immediately kara got up from bed and goes to couth and acting like doing some work in closed laptop ..

Mo : ( in mind ) agar acting karna hi hai toh laptop on karke acting karte ?? Sach mein pagal hai yeh insaan aur iss bed mein kya chuha soud raha hai ??

Karan : ( in mind ) agar chai peena hai toh bed room mein aakar peene ki kya jarurat hai ?? Hall mein 0ee sakthi thi , kitchen mein pee sakthi thi , garden mein pee sakthi thi , yaha tak ki bath room mein chod kar kayi bhi pee sakthi thi , yaha kyu agayi * aur woh kal raat ki intimate moments ko yaad karne laga aur unka gala sukh Raha tha *

Arey yaar reh reh kar mujhe woh kiss hi kyu yaad aaraha hai , aur mere body mein  ithna garmi kyu ho Rahi hai ..

He sees water bolltle on side table where monu sat and drinking tea .

Karan : ( to himself) ek kaam kartha chup ke se Jake water bottle leletha hunn ..

He silently goes towards her side and about to take water bottle , monu was in her own zone and didn't noticed him , suddenly she sees karan very close to her and shouts with a jerk ..

Mo : ahhhhh ..

Karan bhi monu ki shout se dar jatha hai aur balance bigad jathi hai aur monu ke upar girjatha ..

Ka : tum .. tum chilla kyu Rahi ho ??

Mo : tum .. tum ithna pass kyu agaye ..

Ka : woh Pani ..

Mo : Pani ??

Karan : aayeeee water bottle chahiye 

He grabs the water bottle and left from there ..

Monu takes a deep breath ..

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At dining table, elders were completed their breakfast now only youngers means parkha , faizi , Moran were doing their breakfast , suhana and rukku were serving breakfast to them ..

Moran stealing glances ..

Parkha sees each other and passed a noughty smile ..

Param : faizi , mein soch raha hunn ki ghar ka renovation karwa Dunn ..

Su : achanak kyu ??

Param : maa aaj kal kamrein se awaazein aane lagi hai na ?? Chilla neka

Suhana didn't understand but moran immediately choked the food ..

Su : aaram se khav , ithne bade hogaye ho lekin khana abhi tak nahi aatha hai dono ko ..

Karan glares at param but he royally ignored. ..

To avoid the teasing looks from bharkha , monu started talking with suhana ..

Mo : maa mein aaj veer se milne jari hunn , shaam tak wapas ajavungi ..

Su : kuch kaam hai kya ??

Mo : haan maa , veer yaha India mein apna business expand karna chahtha hai ek new venture hai , usmein mujhe aur sid ko bhi include kardiya hai , bus kuch paper work thi , karke ajavunga ..

Su : ohk mujhe venture ki details bathav mein cross check karwaungi..

Mo : sure maa ,

Su : waise kaise jayegi ?? Tumhara car toh abhi tak deliver nahi huyi ,

Mo : cab book karungi maa , don't worry ..

Karan : cab ?? Ghar mein ithne sare gadiya cab karne ka jarurat nahi hai ..

Param : tum bhi toh drop kar sakte ho na ??

Both Moran eyes met with eachother aur fhir kya dono ko previous raat ki yaadein yaad agaye aur ek dusre ko avoid karna hi teek samja ..

Mo : nahi mein chali javungi ..

Karan : ek kaam karo meri car le jao , mein faizi ke saath chala javunga , ok khud math drive karna driver ko lekar jao , guards bhi ayengey ..

Faizi : isse accha toh tum khud drop karke ajata ..

Karan : ( drinking water ) mujhe ek meeting hai , mujhe urgently jana hoga , bye bye ...

Aur woh waha se rafu chakkar hogaya ..

Faizi : kamaal hai , meeting hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi hai , chal kya Raha hai ??

Monu release a signing breath ...

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Parellel scenes ..

Karan office and veer office , param and faizi were talking with karan , here veer and Sid talking with monu ..

Param : tum subha se kuch ajeeb behave kar rahe ho chote , kya hua hai ??

Veer : ithna  ice cream toh tum tabhi khathe ho jab stress mein lagthi ho bathav kya hua ?!

Moran look at them annoyingly..

Faizi : ab bologe ya ayise pura din inthazaar karwavoge ??

Sid : come on bro , it's me you sid bro , tum jante hona tum mujhse kuch bhi share kar sakthi ho ..

Moran : huva yeh hai ki ..

Param : ( excitingly) what really matlab tum dono apne relationship mein aage bad gaye ho ?? That's great news chote , .

Faizi : arey yaar tum dono bhi na khamaka Dara Diya humme ..

Mo : mein kya bol rahi hunn , tum kya soch rahe ho ??

Sid : arey ismein sochne ki kya baat hai , tum dono ki shadhi hogaya hai , aur tum dono apne relationship mein aage bad gaye ho fhir kya ( excitingly) mein jaldi mamu banjavunga .

Karan : ( by throwing a shoe on faizi ) chachu nahi tum Shaheed hojayega mere haath mein ,, tumhe chachu banane keliye jo kuch bhi hona hai na humare beech ayisa kuch bhi nahi huya hai

Param : toh bathayega ithna weird behave kar rahe ho ..

Veer : monu usse baad mein maarlena par pehle yeh bathav ithna pareshaan kyu ho ..

Moran says everything to their friends..

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Mo : maine unhe ayisa dhur kiya jaise woh mere saath jabardasti kar rahe ho .

Karan : mein unhe uncomfortable feel karwaya , un safe feel karwaya , kayi mujhe chod kar na chala jaye , what if woh apni mom dad ko complaint ki toh , already humare beech kuch khass nahi hai ..

Mo : already woh pagal hai , ab toh maha pagal hogaya hoga , what if woh cheeson ko galat samje aur kuch ulta seedha decision leliya toh , waise bhi decisions metro rail ki speed mein lelrha hai ..

Faizi : ( palming his face ) har baat ko ulta Lena jaruri hai ?? Agar kuch ayisa hotha toh abhi tak woh chali gayi hothi , and ek kiss keliye ithna pareshaan koun hotha hai ??

Param : accha ek kaam karo , tumne shadhi ke baad ki bhi gift nahi di na monu ko , iean humara Ghar ka ritual hai , shadhi ke baad pati apni pathni ko koi gift le aakar detha hai , tum monu ko gift lekar auo agar leliya toh samjho ki woh gussa ya uncomfortable nahi hai , bus abhi in sab keliye prepared nahi hai ,, samje ??

Veer : tum sach mein humari monu hai na ?? Ya fhir koi aur ho tum kab se ithni simplesy baath ko complicate karne lage ho , married couple ke beech aur bhi bahut kuch hotha hai , aur tum ek simple  kiss ki wajese ithna pareshaan horahi ho ..

Sid : huhhh mere sari armaano par paani fher di paga , mein chal raha hunn Sanju ke saath Paris , humara honeymoon keliye , tum dono apna ladayi khud lado ..

He left from there with a sada huva face ,, veer smiles by seeing her antics ..

Mo : tum kya kikiki kar rahe ho ??

Veer : dekh raha hunn kithna pagal hai , sukhar hai mera peecha chut gayi ..

Mo : yeh sab na tumhare wajese huva hai , dekhna mujhe se bhi zyada pagal milegi tumhe , aur ithna hi nahi tumhari jeena haram kardegi , fhir rmtum rote huye , USA wapas bhaag jayega ..

Veer : excuse me ayise waise ladki se shadhi nahi karunga mein , mera bhi kuch priorities hai ,, mujhe koi Desi ladki nahi chahiye ..

" haryana ...

Ek ladki khethivaadi mein tractor se kaam kar rahi hothi hai "

Veer : ladki khoobsurat ho ya na ho dil ki saaf honi chahiye ..

" amrutha beta , ithni garmi mein kaam kyu kar rahi ho , chehra peela pad jayega " her dadi asked her ..

Amrutha: dadi ek kisaan ki beti kabhi kaam karne keliye garmi ya tand nahi dekthi ..

Veer : she has to be well educated and we'll mannered..

" agar , padayi acchi ki hothi toh aaj riya ki tarah college gayi hothi amrutha , ayise lethi vaadi mein aam kar a nahi padta " her chachi nimrit taunted her ..

Dadi : nimrat shayad tum bhul gayi ho  , amrutha apni padayi mein humesha top karthi thi , woh toh riya ki padayi keliye woh kudh kheth mein kaam kar rahi hai ..

Veer : aur woh khud ke baremein baad aur apnon ke baremein pehle sochna chahiye bilkul tumhari tarah .

Chachu : aur humara ammu toh apni MBA bhi complete kar chuki hai , woh bhi first-class mein , par meri tabiyat teek nahi tha isiliye kethi sambhal Rahi hai ..

Riya : agar woh chahthi hai na maa , kisi badi company mein job mil sakthi unhe , par di ko kethi mein kaam karna bahut pasand kyuki usse mitti se pyaar hai ..

Amrutha climbs down from tractor and says ..

Am : bus bus kuch zyada hi bolne Lage ho chachu aap , mummy papa ke Jane ke baad aap hi toh mujhe sambhala hai ,, waise bhi mein yeh mitti ko sirf respect karthi hunn , kyuki jo respect humm iss mitti ko nahi ko dete na woh respect khud asmaan bhi swekaar nahi karegi ..

Veer : aur ladaku toh bilkul nahi hona chahiye , especially tumhari tarah bathuni toh bilkul bhi nahi ..

Am : waise chachi , aapko maine pechle hafte , ghar ke karche keliye 3 hazaar rupai dedi thi , sirf 2 hazaar rupai karch huyi hai , baaki ka ek hazaar Kaya hua hai ??

Nimrit : woh... Woh .  Mein apne liye do sadiya leli thi , woh kya hai na ..

Am : koi nahi chachi , kheti vadi mein kaam karna aapko bahut asaan kaam lagthi hai na , do din mere saath aake kaam karlena , fhir woh ek hazaar rupai ka bhar payi bhi hojayega ..

Nirmrit sees everyone with bichari look but who cares , sab ko amrutha se khauf jo hai , sabhi log bahana maarke aha se chale gaye ..

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So here is the story in the twist , I mean twist in the story ..

Amrutha brar , daughter of maan Brar and astha brar , her parents died in her childhood only , and dada dadi took her responsibility, dada dadi , chachu , choti behen , amrutha ko bahut pyaar karte hai , only chachi , nimrit hates her bcoz ghar mein sari log ammu ki decision ko oppose nahi karte hai , kyuki they knows ammu is a matured girl ..

Her best friend is dollar and he is interested in riya , which is obviously ammu ko pata hai ..

Ab ammu and monu ke beech koi rista hai ?? Ya nahi ?? Yeh toh mein abhi disclose nahi karne wali hunn ..

Uske liye thoda inthazaar karna hi padega aapko ..

Yeh twist khafhi pehle soch rakhi thi , but lane keliye 45 chapters lagi thi ..

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