Fitoor

By shravanii19

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You call it madness, but I call it love." More

Chapter 1
chapter 2
Chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 7
chapter 8

chapter 6

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By shravanii19

Ritik is in his room and got ready for the office and Shivanya came

Shivanya: Ritik wo

Ritik : wo ?

Shivanya: Mom aur dadi ne yeh dhaga aapko bandhne ko Diya hai aaj Krishna puja ke liye diya hai .

Ritik : ohh ok . Par kyu bandhna hai ?

He gives her right hand

Shivanya: left hand par bhaandte hai . Buri Nazar se bachne ke liye .

Ritik : Aacha ! Shivanya tum ek baat batao ki tum maanti ho in sab cheezo me ki buri Nazar lagti hai yaa Aisa kuch ?

Shivanya: haaa ! Buri Nazar lagti hai agar aap khush ho life me toh logo ko dhekha nhi jaata hai aur log buri Nazar lagaate hai.

Ritik : wo nahi main yeh keh rha hoon ki tum in cheezo me maanti ho yaa nahi

Shivanya: haa maanti hoon

Ritik: Main nhi maanta in cheezo me bas dadi aur maa ki khusi ke liye. Mujhe lgta hai ki kismat se jada aur kaam kisi ko nhi milta hai aur jiski kishmat me jeena likha hoga wo jiyega aur jiske nhi wo nhi jinda rahega.

Shivanya: Aapki baat sahi hai. Kishmat se jada aur kaam kisi ko nhi milta hai. But kahin na kahin yah baat sach To hai Puri duniya is baat per believe to karti hai musibat ko talne ke liye Aisa karna chahie vaisa karna chahie per andhvishwas nahin hona chahie. Insan ko Vishwas hona chahie per andhvishwas nahin hona chahie kisi bhi chij per.

Ritik: Hm ! ab main ja raha hun office

Shivanya: Shaam ko puja hai yadd hai naa

Ritik: hm !

Then he leaves for the office and Shivanya came into the kitchen and started preparing Prasad for the puja and thinking about something and Rudra and Shesha came to the kitchen

Shesha : Shivanya wo dadi puch rahi hai ki pandit ji kitne baje tak aayenge?

Shivanya: 9 baje tak

Shesha: ok!

Rudra: kya baat hai tu itna khyoi kyu hai ?

Shesha: Apne Ritik baby ke khaayalon me

Shivanya: Shut up Shesha! Pata nhi jaisi uss maid ne ring ki design batai hai mujhe lag rha hai ki kahi naa kahi maine wo ring dheki hai

Shesha : Aacha ! Toh yaad kar ?

Shivanya: wahi yaad nhi aa rha hai

Rudra: Shivanya tujhe lagta hai ki aaj ki puja me wo aayegi ritik ko nuksaan pahuchane ?

Shivanya: Nahi mujhe nhi lagta hai kyunki yeh Puja me bas family aur closesd ones hi aayenge toh mujhe nhi lagta hai .

Shesha: haa wo bhi koi bada mauka ka intezaar karegi

Rudra : haa

Then yamini came

Yamini: Shivanya beta parasad ban gaya kya ?

Shivanya: haa mom almost ho Gaya hai . Mom main Temple ki decoration kar dun ?

Yamini: Nahi beta wo divaya aur angad kar rhe hai. Subah se saari preparation kar rhi ho tum . And she left.

Shesha : Shivanya Ritik kab tak aayega?

Rudra: are aata hoga ! Waise bhi aaj Ritik and Shivanya ko puja karna hai naa

Shivanya: hme ?

Shesha: haa ! Dadi ne bola hai

Shivanya: kyu?

Shesha : kya kyu kar Rahi hai ?

Shivanya realise that there no solution to argue with them .

And it's almost 7 pm and pandit ji came and he checked that everything is present in the place for the puja. Then yamini, Anky and dadi came to the puja place and asked pandit ji to everything is ok and presented in the puja and he doesn't want anything.

Pandit ji: nahi saari cheezen hai . Jisne bhi yeh Puja ki tayari ki hai bhot sahi kiya hai.

Ankush: hmari bahu Shivanya ne saari preparation ki hai .

Pandit ji: Aacha !!!

After that Shivanya is ready for the puja and Ritik is also coming back to the office and yamini said :

Yamini: Ritik kya karta hai itna late Puja suru hone wali hai ! Jaa jaake jaldi ready hoke aa jaa!

Ritik: Ma aaj bhot kaam tha itne dino ke baad office gya tha naa isliye .

Yamini: Aacha! Jaa jaake ab ready hoke aa jaa! Aaj tujhe aur Shivanya ko puja karna hai

Ritik : par kyu ?

Yamini: Maa chahati hai isliye!

Then he is about to go upstairs to get ready for the puja but he sees Shivanya and she is busy in the last min preparation of the puja and he is still adoring her and the song played

Ho Ankhiyan Kare Jee Hazoori
Maange Hai Teri Manzoori
Kajra Siyahi Din Rang Jaaye
Teri Kastoori Rain Jagaye

Mann Mast Magan Mann Mast Magan
Bas Tera Naam Dohraye
Mann Mast Magan Mann Mast Magan
Bas Tera Naam Dohraye❤️


He said !

Ritik : How beautiful and perfect she is !

Rudra : who ?

Ritik is still lost in her beauty

Ritik : Shivanya

Shesha and Rudra: ooooooooo

And he is comes back into his sense.

Ritik : kya oooooo

Shesha : Kuch nahi

Rudra : beautiful and perfect she is

Shesha : jiske liye compliment hai isse toh batana padega naa kyu Rudra ?

Rudra: bilkul sahi kaha !

Ritik : kisko kya khena hai .

Shesha : are abhi tune Shivanya ki tariff ki hai naa wo toh usse batana padega

Ritik : kya Shivanya ko kyu . Main main toh mom ki tariff kar rha tha

Shesha : Aacha toh waha yamini aunty hai hi nhi

Rudra: Waha toh mujhe Shivanya dhik rhi hai ..

Shesha : Mujhe bhi

And Ritik is frustrated and he moves from there to ready for the puja.

Shesha : Bichaara ..

And they laughed

Rudra: Chidd gya .

Then they are going to attend the guests and Shivanya calls everyone for the puja .

And they goes to Shivanya

Shesha : kya baat hai bhot Sundar lag rahi hai tu !

Shivanya: well thank you

Shesha: main ladka hoti toh tujhe tere Ghar se utta leti tu shaadi suda hoti naa hoti

Shivanya: Aacha! Phir gharwalo se maar kha jaati

Rudra : Gharwalo se gharwale se

Shivanya: Matlab

Rudra : Ritik se

Shesha : Haa ! Waise bhi Tera pati Teri traiff kar rha tha

Shivanya: Aacha ab Ritik ka naam leke mere saath majak kar rhe ho !

Shesha : Saachii ! Keh rha tha ki you are so beautiful and perfect!

Shivanya: ohooo!

Rudra : Tujhe Majak lag rha hai ? Shesha ki kasam

Shesha : Rudra ki kasam

Shivanya : Aacha

And yamini called Shesha and Rudra for the help. And Shivanya blushed and smiled.

Rivanya's Look

Rusha Look ( inki koi saath me photo nhi mili toh yehi sahi )

And the Ritik is also comes downstairs and he joined the whole family in the puja and pandit ji asked who will start the puja !

Yamini : Pandit ji! Hmara beta aur Bahu yeh Puja karenge .

Pandit ji: thik hai

Pandit ji takes his place and asked Ritik and Shivanya to came and sit there then he said

Pandit ji: Waise kaha jaata hai ki jo joda yeh Puja pheli baar saath me karta hai aur Krishna ko phela jhula jhulaata hai unke ghar bhot jald jhula aata hai .

Ritik and Shivanya are shocked and they see each other but they don't want to say anything then the dadi agrees .

Dadi : Bilkul sahi

But Shivanya feels sad fit for the family members.

Shivanya : maaf karna dadi par aapka yeh sapna kabhi pura nhi ho sakta mere aur Ritik ke beech kabhi koi aisa rishta nhi ban sakta .

Then pandit ji started the puja and the puja is completed well and Shivanya, Shesha and Divaya and Amrita ( today she is in her sense) distribute the prasad to the guest.

Shivanya: Divaya sabbko mil gaya naaa Prasad

Divaya : Haa bhabhi

Shivanya: Haa ab tum log bhi le lo

Divaya: Thik hai bhabhi

Then they take their parsad.

Shesha: Shivanya wo Rudra , Ritik aur Angad ko nhi mila prasad

Shivanya: Suno yeh Bina sugar wala ritik ko aur yehi dono Angad aur Rudra ko de Dena

Shesha : ohoo itna khaayal

Shivanya: shut up

And she gives the prasad to everyone and back to the Shivanya and said :

Shesha: Shivanya tu bhi kab kuch kha le subah se bhooki hai tu !

Shivanya: haa bs aadha ghanta hai varat khatam hone me

Shesha: Thik hai

Shivanya: tu le le prasad.

Shesha: haa ! .

After 1/30 min. Shivanya head is started spinning

Shivanya: Mera saar itna ghum kyu Raha hai !

And she loses control over her and she holds the dining table and she tries to control it but she is too fainted but Ritik sees her and runs towards her and shouted

Ritik : Shivanya.

And everyone looked at her and runs towards her.

Ritik : Kya hua Shivanya?

Angad: Bhai lagta hai ki bhabhi behos ho gayi hai

And Rudra calls the doctor and he told that doctor cames within 15 mins .

The scenes shifted to the Ritik 's room and the doctor checked her and told everyone and ritik is still holding her and he is really worried for her

Doctor: Don't worry! Inhone subah se kuch nahi khaya tha iss liye bhook ke karan behos ho gayi hai . Maine injection de diya hai kuch der me hos aa jaayega !

Ritik : Thik hai doctor, thank you

Doctor: Mt pleasure! Please take care of her .

Then she leaves .

Ritik : Shivanya ne subah se kuch khaaya kyu nahi tha ?

Shesha: puja thi naa Ghar par toh Shivanya ne varat rakha tha

Ritik : par kyu ?

Rudra : Hamne mana kiya tha par wo sunti hai kisi ki ! .

Then everyone is leaving for their room they are really tired and she is still sleeping and Ritik also comes to sleep and he sleeps on the couch and he is continuously checking her whole night if she is ok or not .

Next Morning at 7 am Shivanya opened her eyes and was shocked to see her in the bed and Ritik was not in the room.

Shivanya: main yaha bed par kaise ?

Then he came out of the washroom

Ritik : Good Morning

Shivanya: good morning

Ritik: yehi soch Rahi ho naa ki tum yaha kaise ?

Shivanya: haa ! Main toh !

Ritik : behos ho gayi thi bhookhe rhne ke karaan

Shivanya: Hain !

Ritik imitates her

Ritik : Hain ! Jab bhooka nhi Raha jaata hai.

Shivanya: wo kal toh mera fast tha naa so

Ritik : Ab John ko bol diya hai wo breakfast leke aa rha hai kar Lena breakfast.

And then he leaves for the office and Shivanya does her breakfast.

In the afternoon:

Shivanya is cleaning Ritiks 's wardrobe and see found a photo in his wordrobe and she is shocked to see the photo. And then she calls Shesha and Rudra .

Then they came to her and She show them the photo and they were also shocked to see the photo. ......

Thank you ❤️

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