NAYA AASHIYANA

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Slow Updates Based on 5 years leap Join the journey of two adorable couples tanshi and abhira This story i... Xem Thêm

Author's note
Character sketch
Oberois
Birlas
Yaadein
Responsibilities
Maa Ka Vada
London Calling
Ajeeb sa Ehsas
Angel Or Zindagi?
Toota Hua Dil 💔
badalti cheejhe
Inauguration Ceremony
Beeta Kal ?
Purane Dard, Naye Ghaav 💔
Heartbroken Goodbye 💔
Jana Anjana Rishta 🥹
Miracle Baby
Shocking Reality (Tanu's Entry🎉)
Sach Ka Samna
Regret🥺
Abhi's Pain 🥺💔
Akshu's Guilt😭💔
When Abhi Met Junior 💕
Opening the curtains from the Past
Announcement
Manshi Met Akshu🥹
We Are With you 🫂
Family Ka Pyar🥹
Dosti ka Dard 🫂
Aaj din chadheya😍💕
Akshu's firm stand🔥🔥
Accha ji main Hari 😌😂

Phir Le Aaya Dil ❤

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Happy 2 years My Abhira Babies
On this special occasion this part is surprise gift for u all enjoy 💖

In flight:
Ab: yehi samay hota hai jab mai tumhe khat likhta hun varna har roj ke busy schedule main chand ke samne tumse baat hoti hai par mujhe dono pasand hai dono ways main sirf tum ho ye aise conference jaate waqt flight mai jo samay milta hai tab mujhe tumhe apne haatho se khat likhna accha lagta hai post toh kabhi kiya nahi kabhi kabhi mann bahot karta hai ki kar du tumhe batau that I miss you har waqt har pal par address hi nahi hai pata hi nahi tum kaha ho sach main Akshu tum kaha ho kaisi ho iss puri dunia mai aisi konsi jagah hai jaha meri akshu hai mahadev

London:
Abh: oh no mai dad ko batana bhul hi gaya aaj raat ko hume football match dekhni hai Abhi batake aata hun

Abhir goes to rishi's room
Rishi is talking on phone , phone is on speaker

Ri: kya matlab file nahi dega vo adami use deni padegi paperwork ke liye liya bol ke aaj 4 din ho gaye Abhi tak wapas nahi ki mehra you know right vo file humare next presentation ke liye important hai I want that file now you have only 2 hours I don't know anything mujhe vo file chahiye bas

Mehra: ok sir, abhi abhi pata chala hai vo aaj jaipur ke flight se London aa raha hai airport se uski gadi nikalte hi we will catch him and brought him in our office

Ri: kya tumhe car ka colour model kuch pata hai

meh: yes sir, abhi abhi unki white car airport ke liye nikli hai unke driver pe najar rakhi hai maine

ri: ok good come on fast yeah bye , aaj ye file milna bahot important hai varna presentation kaise banega itne dino ki sari mehnat barbad hogi

abh: lagta hai dad bahot pareshan hai koi bad uncle ne unko unki file nahi di how dare he unke wajah se handsome tension mai hai ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga par mumma ki health bhi thik nahi hai kya karu par dad unki bhi toh problem solve karni hai sorry mumma mujhe jana hoga (runs from there)

abhir reaches outside of the airport , he saw many white cars

Abh: offo yaha kitne sare white cars hai innmain se bad uncle ki car kaunsi hogi

Suddenly he sees one man is reading a file in his white car

Abh: mil gayi yehi vo uncle honge chehra nahi dikh raha par file hai inke haath main

for stop that car he acted like he fell while playing but accidently he fell for the real

abh: Paaaa (screams in pain)

one man quickly get down from the car he fell something in his heart after hearing his scream he quickly rushes towards him
(he is non other than our abhi, he was reading London branch hospital file for more information when abhir saw him from outside)

ab: oye kya hua (Abhi bends down and put him on his lap carefully asks him softly)

Oberoi mansion:

akshu felt something in her heart as if her heart tells her about father son first meet

ak: ye kya ho raha hai aaj subah se man behlane ke liye pura ghar ki safsafai ki abhi bhi koi na koi kaam kar rahi hun par ye jo ajeeb sa ehsas hai vo aur badhta jaa raha hai jaise ki kuch hone wala hai kya hone wala hai kya hai ye feelings krishna ji, jo bhi ho mere parivar mere abhir ko nuksan na pohoche unpe koi musibat na aaye

abh: hoye dekhai nahi deta chot lag gayi

ab: i mean lagi kaise

abh: uncle aap kitne buddhu ho mere haath main ball hai mai kheltey kheltey gir gaya simple

ab: oh i am i am so sorry beta vo aapke cheenkh aur aapki jakham dekh ke mai thoda sa darr gaya

Ab: ye kya ho raha hai subah se ye feelings aur ab ye baccha isko dekh ke aisa lag raha hai jaise koi rishta ho aur mai itna darr kyu gaya tha come on Abhi u are a doctor toh iss bacche ka dard kyu nahi bardaasht ho raha mujhe hospital main aise kitne bacchon ko treat kiya hai toh ab iski chot dekhke itna bura kyu lag raha hai (In his mind)

abh: oh it's ok

Abhi comes back to his senses after hearing his voice

ab: accha chalo aap apna ghar ka address do mai aapko ghar chod deta hun

abh: ye uncle toh acche lag rahe hai toh phir handsome ko kyu file nahi de rahe, mumma keheti hai stranger ko ghar nahi late par dad ko unki file dene ke liye inhe ghar le jana padega par mumma ne danta toh kya karu mahadev (in his mind)

ab: beta kya soch rahe ho chalo jaldi mummy papa pareshan honge aapke

abh: thik hai chalo

abhi picks him up and takes him in his lap in car , abhir tells the address of his home

abhi and abhir reaches oberoi mansion abhi carefully puts abhir down and both enter in the house as soon as they enter in house abhir started screaming making abhi confuse

abhir: dad dad dad jaldi aa jao maine pakad liya ( abhir shouted)

ri: champ aa raha hun beta kya hua shor kyu macha ke rakha hai kise pakad liya

abh: dad yehi hai na vo bad uncle jinhone aapki file li hai aur de hi nahi rahe

Ab/ri: what

ri: bad uncle champ ye kya (rishi is so engrossed with abhir that he didn't look towards abhi , then he turned and notice him) champ ye kon hai kise laye aap

abhi started to speak but abhir doesn't give him a chance

abh: hain , aap inhe nahi jante ye wahi hai na bad uncle jo subah aap mehra uncle se baat kar rahe the maine sun liya tha isliye inhe pakad ke yaha laya main

ri: (rishi facepalm himself)champ ye vo uncle nahi hai ye toh koyi aur hai hello , i am extemely sorry lagta hai kuch confusion hua hai he assumed you with someone else i am really sorry on behalf of my son

ab: no need, i understand mr.

ri: oberoi hi i am rishi oberoi and he is my son

ab: hi mr. oberoi if you have no problem can i do bandage to your son's wound as you can see he is injured

rishi nods confusingly

abh: aap dr. hai

ab: yes

abh: i am sorry maine aapko bad uncle samjha maine socha ki girne ki acting karunga aur aapko yaha le aaunga toh dad happy ho jaayenge par god ji ne mujhe punish kiya mai sach much gir gaya i am really sorry

ab: hey it's ok junior aap apne dad ki help karna chate the bas, kya mai aapka bandage kar du

abh: ok ,wow I love this name junior

Abhi smiles

abhi requests rishi to bring first aid box and he did abhir's dressing carefully

Ri: kya karta hai yaar champ dad apni problem khud solve kartey na Ab dekh kya Hua Ab teri mumma hum dono ki class legi dekhna tum

Abh: sorry dad maine aapko stress main dekha toh main

Ri:it's ok baby agli baar aise mat karna remember tere dad khud apni problems solve kar saktey hai aur bado ki baaton main baccho ko nahi aana chahiye chal promise kar

Abh: promise

Ri: jyada gehri chot hai Kya dr.

ab: jyada nahi bas halki si chot hai ek painkiller deta hun aur raat ko haldi wala dudh pila dijiye phir kal tak aap khelne ke liye fit and fine ho jaoge ok baby

Abhir nods

Ri: thank you Dr.

Akshu comes downstairs
She saw abhir lie down on bed with bandage on his knee she quickly rushes towards him meantime Abhi saw akshu and stands shocked

Ak: abhir abhir baccha kya Hua ye chot kaise lagi

Abh: mumma shant mai thik hun vo bas

Abhir narrates everything to akshu, akshu angrily turns towards rishi

Rishi gulped down seeing her in anger

Ri: aksh vo

Ak: kitni baar kaha hai office rivalries office main rakho lekin nahi meri sunni nahi hai tumhe, dekha kya ho gaya tumhari wajah se mere bacche ko chot lag gayi

Ri: darling I am sorry I know ye meri wajah se hua hai but see champ is fine yaar just don't worry even doctor also said that

Ak: doctor ? Tum ise hospital leke nahi gaye the

Ri: are jis insan ko champ mere liye laya tha vo doctor hai wait mai Abhi tumhe milwata hun unse

Ak: tum rehne do mai hi baat karti hun
Tum abhir ke pass ruko

Meanwhile Abhi thought he is dreaming

She turns to see that dr. But slips and feels two strong arms held her she open her eyes to see that person and shocked to see abhi both are shocked to see each other after 5 years abhi realise he is not dreaming his akshu is in his arms after years, tears automatically fell down from their eyes

Imagine song in bg

Phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
Raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
Dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

Karte hain hum aaj qubool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si... aanch baaki hai

Both are remembering their girija moments

Akshu's hairs are touching abhi's face and disturbing his view he slowly tucks her hair behind her head and they are just lost in each other's eyes


So face-off is done and the correct answer is abhir and harsh , manyubhir face off is also done, get ready to see abhi's reaction when he sees his sir, akshu's harshu there 🤭😁😁





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