The Sun Shone at Dawn

By BirtheV

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The wind blows harder under many shades of grey. The sun shone at dawn. *** A collection of haikus, tankas, p... More

1 | haiku
2 | haiku
3 | haiku
4 | haiku
5 | haiku
6 | haiku
7 | haiku
8 | haiku
9 | haiku
10 | haiku
11 | haiku
12 | haiku
13 | haiku
14 | haiku
15 | haiku
16 | haiku
17 | haiku
18 | haiku
19 | haiku
20 | haiku
21 | haiku
22 | haiku
23 | haiku
24 | haiku
25 | haiku
26 | haiku
27 | haiku
28 | tanka
29 | tanka
30 | haiku
31 | haiku
32 | haiku
33 | haiku
34 | haiku
35 | haiku
36 | haiku
37 | haiku
38 | haiku
39 | haiku
40 | haiku
41 | haiku
42 | If I die tomorrow
43 | Iceland
44 | Silver teapot
45 | Sad Sundays
46 | See you soon
47 | Silent voids
48 | Competition
49 | You are born
50 | I breathe
51 | You are the body
52 | I well up from the dust
53 | This is a love poem
54 | For the one who touches my mind
55 | In the first days of spring
56 | Builders of Babel
57 | I miss you
58 | When we meet
59 | Biting through
60 | I'm like a car
61 | Imagine I'm a car
62 | you were birthed again
63 | I will walk with you
64 | Ave atque vale

Preface

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By BirtheV

This is a collection of all poems I have written in English or translated to English. It contains mostly haikus, other nature poems, some poems about my burnout, and platonic love poems for important people in my life. Quality may vary, as I mostly rely on inspiration and some of these were written years ago. I currently (July 2023) have a backlog, but once the backlog has been posted, I won't be updating regularly.

For my haikus: I write mostly traditional haikus. A traditional Japanese haiku is about more than the 5-7-5 syllables. It's about (the perfection of) nature, typically a specific season can be derived from it, and you have to be objective in your observations and not interpret (which is not easy, because that also means no figurative language of any kind, or ascribing intentions). For the real die-hards, you can also try to add a volta between the second and third line (i.e. an "unexpected" turn in content, like you also have in sonnets). It's a great exercise for sensory writing and basically a picture in words. If you don't want to write about nature, there's also a senryu, which is a 5-7-5 poem about (the imperfection of) people, or a non-traditional haiku.

I'd love to hear from you if you enjoyed a poem. I'm open to constructive criticism and I like talking about language, metaphors, interpretation, emotions I evoked, ...

You can also talk to me in the Literary Lounge Discord server. The link is in the comments and on my profile.

I hope you enjoy!

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