Hey guyss
I am very sad with the response i got in last chapter..i mean majority of u were waiting for saumeer's date but very less votes and literally 2-3 readers commented..i am feeling very bad..pls learn to appreciate someone's hardwork..i was very depressed and wrote this chapter with great difficulty..
Anyways,lets start from prvious chapter..
Outside shergill house..
Veer(holding her hands)-thanku soo much for this date baby..(kissing back side of her hands)
Baby(smiling)- you are welcome veer(kisaing his cheek)
Veer smiled..
Baby-acha bye..drop me a message when u reach
Veer-ok..
After saying byes to each other they left towards their homes
In shergill house..
All were having dinner when baby entered
Baby-hello everyone..
All-hello..
Monami-(teasingly) hmm..kaisi gyi date..??
Baby remembered her first kiss with veer and blushed a little but composed herself and replied
Baby(blushing)- ac..achi thi..uss restraunt ka khanna bhut acha tha..
Monami-hmmm..
Baby-aa samaira kha h..??
Monami-vo so gyi..
Baby-ohh ok..ma..mai sone ja rhi hu nind aa rhi h..(composing herself as monami was giving her teasing looks)
Barkha-ok bachee..
She went from there
Barkha(to param and karan)-tum dono ne kyu muh bna rkha h..??
Monami also looks at them.
Monami-kya hua apdono ko..??
Param-barkha..tumhe nhi lgta baby ka es trah veer ke sath itni raat tk bhar rukna glt hai..
Karan-bhaiya is right..
Barkha-kya right..tum pagal hoge ho param..she is not a kid now..
Param-exactly..she is not a kid..bddi ho gyi h ab..itni der raat tk bhar rukna shi nhi h..its not safe..
Monami-bhaiya-karan aplogo ko uske der raat tk bhar rukna glt lg rha h ya veer ke sath der raat tk rukna glt lg rha h..??
Karan-hume uska veer ke sath der raat tk bhar rukna glt lg rha h..
Monami-whyyy..????
Karan-why kya monami..?? Tum ache se janti ho ki hume etraaz kyu h..
Barkha-nhi..hume nhi pta..ap btao hume..
Param-theek h toh suno..they are adult and are in love what if dono ne emotions m akr kuch aisa krdia jiski wjah se unke future pr asr pde..(angrily) and wait..tumne mujhe itna bhi btana zruri nhi smjha ki baby veer ke sath jane vali h vo bhi itni raat ko..kiski permission se jane dia tumne usee..
Barkha(angrily getting up)-r u for real param..i can't believe tumhari soch aisi ho skti h..veer ka shodo don't you trust ur daughter..?? or permission lene ka kya mtlb h she is my daughter as well..sirf tumhari beti nhi h..maine de usa permission..
Karan-lekin..bhabhi jo bhi ho dono ko es trah late night bhar nhi rehna chahiye..
Monami-really karan shergill..apni beti ki bari m tumhe sb rules bhut yaad aa rhe h..tb kya tha jb shaadi se pehle tum mujhe adhi raat ko outings pr le jaya krte thee..bike pr bure deolali m ghumaya krte thee vo bhi bina kisi ko btaye chori se jb ki papa ko tum bilkul pasand nhi thee fir bhi..whereas baby toh humari permision se gyi h or vo bhi 10 bje pehle vapis bhi aa gyi h..
Karan-hmari baat alag thi hmari shaadi hone vali thi..
Monami-toh undono ki bhi toh hogi na shaadi..
Param-lekin usme abhi kaffi time h..or agr endono ko koi vha hmara known dekh leta toh..
Barkha-toh kya..hm..toh kya..
Param-m nhi chahta koi unke bare k ulti sidhi battein kree
Barkha-log kya battein krege..jb ghr vale hie aise behave kr rhe h..
Monami-bhaiya..plss smjhiye..dono ka rishta tehh ho chuka h..dono date pe chle gye toh kya hogya..
Param-tum chup rho monami..tum nhi smjh skti
Monami-kaise..meri kya kuch nhi lgti voo
Param-nhi..kuch nhi lgti vo tumhari tum sorf uski chachi ho maa nhi or maine keh dia na..jb tk shaadi na ho jaye veer or baby sath m bhar nhi jayege..that's it
Monami was shocked by hearing "Nhi" from him..baby was just like her own daughter to her..she loved him more than she loved samaira..she felt like param stabbed a knife on her heart..while karan and barkha also looks at monami becoz they know that what baby meant to her
Barkha(angry)- param..how dare u say that..monami baby se bhut pyar krti h..mujhse zyada baby ne monami ke sath wkt guzara h..she is not just her chachi or a mother but also best buddy
Monami(teary eyes)-its okay bhabhi..akhir aj bhaiya ne sabit kr hie diya ki ek chachi kitni bhi koshish krle maa bne ki but duniya vale usse daily soap ke villian jaisi hie dekhte h..
Barkha-monami..(but monami went to her room)
Karan-veer(shocked)
Barkha and param also looks at door and found him standing there..
Barkha-(shocked) ve..veer tum kb aye..
Veer-just abhi..actually car m baby ka phone rhegya tha isliye..(showing her phone)
Karan-ohh..lao mujhe dedo m dedugi usse vo sone chli gyi..
Veer nooded and giving her phone to karan he went after saying bye..
Barkha-i hope veer ne vo sb na suna ho..kya impression jayega uspr..ki jis ldki se uski shaadi hone wali h uske ghr vale uspr itna bhi trust nhi krte..tumse ye umid bilkul nhi thi mujhe param(she also went to her room)
Param sat there frustately..
But unknown to them veer listened each and everything param said and felt very hurt and scared..
Moran's room
Monami was crying while karan side hugged her..
Monami-kya sach m bhaiya ko aisa lgta h ki m baby ka bura chahti hu..
Karan-nhi monami..aisa nhi h..unhone gusse m kuch bhi kehdiya..i am sure vo bhi guilty honge..
Monami-gusse m insaan sach hie bolta h karan bhaiya ko aisa lga h isliye toh kha unhone..
Karan-monami..calm down yaar i know aisa nhi h..
Monami-vo jo bhi ho but i swear karan ek second ke liye maine baby ka kbhi bura nhi socha..hmesha use samaira ki trah hie pyar kia h..
Barkha-(coming to their room) tumhe hume ye btane ki zrurat nhi h monami..we know that how much u love and care for baby..param ki taraf se i am sorry..
Monami-no bhabhi pls..ap sorry mt khaiye..
Barkha-toh fir tum rona bhi bnd krdo or khana khalo..baby ko pta chla na tum bina khaye so gyi toh gussa ho jayegi...
Karan-watt lg jayegi meri..
They chuckled..
Other side..
Veer came out of shergill mansion and drove his car towards his house..
All those words said by param was revolving in his head..
"Indono ko itni der raat tk bhar nhi rukna chahiye tha"
" Jbtk shaadi nhi ho jaye veer or baby sath m bhar nhi jayege"
"Agr emotions m bhekr unhone ne kuch aisa krdia jiski wjah se unko future m problem hui toh"
Veer-(shaking his head) ohh noo..param uncle toh kaffi gusse m lg rhe thee..what if unhone hmara milna bnd krdia..nhi nhi..m baby ko dekhe bgair nhi rhe skta..god pls help
Parkha room
Barkha-baby ko tumhari soch ke bare m pta chla na toh disgust feel kregi vo tumhari soch pr..kya hogya h tumhe param..baby sirf date pr gyi thi veer ke sath what's a big deal kyu ye 70's-80's ke fathers ki trah behave kr rhe ho tum
Param-tum nhi smjogi..
Barkha-m smjh rhi hu tumhari soch..lekin tumhe bhi smjhna hoga param..hum ajkl ke bacho pr restrictions nhi lga skte..kyu pehle apni beti ko pankh dekr ab katna chahte ho param..
Param-aisa nhi h..
Barkha-tumhe realise nhi ho rha but aisa hie h..sirf studies m support krne se tum ek supportive father nhi bn jate param..u have to support her in every phase of her life..phir chahe vo studies ho ya phir uska realtionship..Apna time bhul gye ho tum..college ke badd na jane kitni barr ghumne gye h hum vo bhi bina papa ko btaye..or hmari beti toh hume inform krke jati h hmesha fir bhi shikayat h tumhe..tum kya chahte ho vo bhi bina btaye jaye
Param-fine i get it..ab shak nhi kruga..pr ye dono date pr gye kyu thee
Barkha-what do u mean by that..date pr kyu jate h log..
Param-i mean achanak..
Barkha-veer ne apna lecture miss krke baby ki help ki uska test prepare krne m jo vo prepare krna bhul gyi thi so baby ko usse appreciate krna tha isiliye..
Param-ohh ok..sorry..zyada hie react kr gya
Barkha-i know that..but monami ko vo sb khekr tumne hdd par ki h apni param..how can u say that..tum nhi jante what baby means to monami..or baby bhi bhut pyar krti h monami se.. agr puri duniya bhi mujhe ye bole na ki monami baby ka bura chahti h toh bhi yakeen na kru m..
Param-i am really sorry for that..maine gussa m kuch bhi boldia..
Barkha-pta kitna ro rahi thi vo..
Param-what m abhi dekhe ata hu usse..or sorry bhi bolduga..(getting up)
Barkha-abhi karan ne suladia h usse..kl boldena..
Param-hm..mujhe aisa nhi kehna chahiye tha usse..es baat pr toh karan bhi gusaa hoga mujhse.
Barkha-ofcorse..apki jgah koi aur monami ko rulata na toh haddiya todd deta uski..vo monami ko rote hue nhi dekh skta..
Param nooded
Malhotra mansion
Veer entered with sad face..his parents were in hall
Ishita-hmm..kaisi rhi date..
Veer-(composing himself) bhut achii..
Harsh-kya hua..sad lg rha h..ldai toh nhi hogi saumya se..
Veer-no no dad..vo bs thak gya hu..aj bzy day rha na bhut..
Ishita-ohh..hmm.ja tu jake change kr or soja..u need rest
Veer-ji mom..good night both of u..
Both-good night..
So that's all for know..hoping for better botes and good comments..
If i dont get good comments i will stop writing this book..aorry but i have to take this step..becausw i am giving my best input but is bot gwtting anything from u guys..