Seven Minutes in Heaven [Larr...

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Prologue.
Chapter One.
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Five
Chapter Six.
Chapter Seven.
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine.
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven.
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen.
Chapter Fourteen.
Chapter Fifteen
Epilogue

Chapter Four

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**SKIPPING OVER AIRPLANE RIDE BECAUSE IT SEEMS LIKE THERE'S A PLANE RIDE IN ALL MY STORIES AND I'M OUT OF IDEAS. SORRY** 

Louis's P.O.V.~~~~

I grabbed my 2528652 pound suitcase.

Harry smirked when he saw my struggling, I'm not THAT weak!!

I saw a man with a black hat and he was holding a sign that said JAMES PAYNE in very large letters.

Liam walked up to the man, let me just say Liam looks like a criminal with a black hoodie and dark shades on.

"I'm James Payne." Liam said confidently.

The man looked unsure, but nodded, as the rest of us strolled up to him.

"Well, I'm ya'lls driver. I'd like to welcome ya'll to the Great Smoky Mountains. I will pretty much be your big man." The driver said in a thick country accent.

"Big Man? As in dad?" Niall asked.

"No! I don't wanna be ya'lls pa. I mean the big city folk you work for." The man chuckled.

The man glanced in my direction, "Lemme take that bag from ya, boy." He grabbed my suitcase and held it with no problems.

"Oh no sir, I can't let you do that." I protested.

"It's called southern hospitality. Get used to it my boy. It happens 'round here a lot." The man chuckled.

"May we know your name?" Zayn asked.

"Well, where are my manners?" He asked himself, "My name is Bill. Ya'll can call me Billy, that's what they call me because of my goats."

"Who are they?" Zayn asked, his accent contrasting from Billy's.

"They are my partners. I work the herd with them." He said as if it was unbelievably obvious.

"The herd?" Liam asked.

"Lordy, ya'll have a lot of questions. C'mon now. Let's go to ya'lls lodge. You'll understand when we get there." Billy lead us to a black, sleek car. 

"Now, since ya'll are famous, "He said when we were all buckled, "ya'll ain't supposed to be seen.," He let out a breathy laugh, "so stay away from the Gatlinburg city.  Ya'hear?" 

"Yes, um, what is Gatlinburg?" I asked. 

"It's a city here. A large one at that." 

Harry slapped my arm, I was going to smack him, but I was distracted.

"Holy shit." I breathed out.

"Ain't it beautiful?"  Billy smiled.

"This.. Is unbelievable." Zayn laughed.

Niall was practically glued to the window, blocking Liam's view.

We pulled into a forest, with a huge sign, Gatlinburg Falls. 

He stopped in front of a large, large, LARGE, lodge.

Niall fumbled with the door handle and charged out, twirling around trying to take it all in.

Liam gasped.

Zayn was completely mesmerized.

"Ya'll best be gettin' inside." Billy chuckled.

"Which one?" Harry asked, "There are like 5."

"Big Sky Lodge." 

Harry found it first and charged in. 

"Holy Fuck." He said stopping short, "It's ginormous." 

Billy laughed, "I know. Over 36 people can sleep here at once. Plenty of room for you boys."

"Thank you." I said. It's amazing. I just can't-

"I CALL THE LARGEST ROOM!!!" Zayn yelled and ran toward the first door he saw.

Niall and Liam sprinted upstairs.

Harry and I dashed downstairs dragging our luggage behind us.

I opened a door..... bathroom.

Next door....... A movie theatre.

FUCK YES.

Pool table, Hockey table, flat screen..

"Lou!"

I walked into the room to see a giant bunk bed.

Then a smaller one.

I had a grin on my face, "Wanna share room Haz?"

"I thought you'd never ask." He smiled, causing my smile to grow larger. He came closer towards me.  He placed his hands on my hips.

"Maybe we can come closer to each other." He said in a low, raspy voice. 

"W-wh-what d-do y-y-ou mean?" I stuttered. My hear was beating soo fast.

"I don't know, lately it seems you've keeping something from me." He leaned closer and closer to my ear. "I don't want that. I'll find out."

"I haven't been keeping anything from you." I said.

He looked straight into my eyes, "why don't I believe that?"

"Harry? Louis? COME UP HERE."

"Yeah?"

"Niall and I are going to get some food. Zayn's in a hot tub. Okay?"

"Okay!" Harry called.

"Wanna play something?" I asked, nonchalantly

"Sure.... um... truths?" He suggested.

"Perfect." 

We sat cross legged on the bottom bunk bed.

*~~~~~*

"Stop laughing at me!!"

"I'm sorry."

"okay, well I'm going to go watch some telly." Harry excused himself.

Thank god. 

I need to think. I  grabbed my phone, clicked music shuffle, and put my headphones on.

-

Today is gonna be the day
that they're gonna throw it back to you
By now you shoulda, somehow, realized what you gotta do
I don't believe that anybody feels the way I do about you now

-

I know no one feels the way I do.

-
Back beat, the word is on the street
that the fire in your heart is out
I'm sure you've heard it all before
but you never really had a doubt
I don't believe that anybody feels
the way I do about you now

-

I haven't seen him happy with any girl. Not even past girlfriends.

-
And all the roads we have to walk are winding
And all the lights that lead us there are blinding
There are many things that I would like to say to you
But I don't know how

-

Like, I have a huge crush on you. You've been the light distracting me because you're blinding.
I want to know how. 

-

Because maybe
You're gonna be the one that saves me
And after all
You're my wonderwall

-

Maybe

-


Today was gonna be the day
but they'll never throw it back to you
By now you shoulda somehow realized
what you're not to do
I don't believe that anybody feels
the way I do about you now

-

You're never going to like me back.

-


And all the roads that lead you there were winding
And all the lights that light the way are blinding
There are many things that I would like to say to you
But I don't know how

-

I want to know.

-
I said maybe
You're gonna be the one that saves me
And after all
You're my wonderwall

-

You are my bestfriend.

-

I said maybe
You're gonna be the one that saves me
And after all
You're my wonderwall

-

I want to be more.

-
I said maybe
You're gonna be the one that saves me
You're gonna be the one that saves me
You're gonna be the one that saves me.

-

So hurry up and save me.

"LOUIS, FOOD." Niall yelled down the stairs.

 I jumped up, and set my headphones on the dresser.

"What did ya'll get me?" I mimicked a country accent, I turned around to see Billy.

"You best not be makin' fun of my accent." Billy said.

My head was screaming, AWKWARD AWKWARD AWKWARD. 

"Of course not sir." I said immediately.

"Good." Billy eyed me, as I shifted uncomfortably.

"Boys, tomorrow I'm taking you to a restaurant named Cracker Barrel."

"Cracker Barrel?" Harry repeated, I just noticed he's only in pajama pants, he looks insanely irresistible. A faint 6 pack in progress, showed. His four nipples being as cute as ever. His luscious lips moving- 

SNAP OUT OF IT! WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK ARE YOU DOING? 

"Right, Louis?" 

Shit, they asked me a question.....um...."Yeah."

"Okay, it's settled, we won't leave the cabin until tomorrow."

Well. 

Billy left and the lads tormented me for the whole accent thing.

"So, what'dya want to do?" Niall asked, jumping on Zayn who was trying to sleep on the couch.

"Oh, I dunno." Liam said.

"I want to take a spin at the pool table." I winked at Liam.

"One on one?" He asked me.

"Bring it, big boy." I flirtatiously smiled and winked again.

Liam ruffled my hair walking downstairs where the pool table sits.

I stood up and glanced at he others. 

Niall was continually poking Zayn's face.

Harry looked like he was ready to kill.

Zayn snapped at Niall's finger. Almost catching it between his teeth.

"What are you doing, Harry?" I asked.

"I'm going to unpack." He said more to himself than me. 

I shrugged and stumbled downstairs with Harry following.

~~*~~

"LOOOOSER, LOOOOOOOOSER, LA-WHO ZA-HER." Liam chimed.

"Fuck you." I scoffed, shuffling into Harry and I's room.

The first thing I saw was clothes on the dresser, wait. Scratch that. It was Harry, changing.

"Shit, sorry." I said immediately, covering my eyes. But that didn't stop the growing bulge in my pants.

This situation is becoming more and more uncomfortable.

Harry laughed at me. "You're safe."

I looked to see Harry fully clothed.

That didn't help, for now I'm imagining ripping the clothing off of him, and-

Harry is smirking. Why? 

I followed his gaze.

Oh. THAT'S why.

Harry gave a subtle cough, "Problem?"

"N-no! It's ju-just-" 

Harry's smirk grew larger with every stutter.

I sighed, my cheeks were flushed and my bulge wasn't going anywhere.

"I'm sorry," I said.

Harry came closer, "There's nothing to apologize for."

I took a step back.

He advanced towards me.

We did this until my back was against the door.

I gulped.

"What are you thinking about right now, Lou?"

Oh, you definitely don't want to know.

"It's hard to think.. right now." I said.

"Mmhmm. I bet it is. Especially because," He dropped his voice to a whisper, "it keeps growing."

Does he realize what he is doing to me? I'm going to die. Fuck, fuck, fuck.

He put his index fingers through my belt loops. 

Pulled me towards him. 

And.....

"Louis!!!"

I shook my head. Harry stood before me, still naked.

"Stop staring. You're making me self-conscious." Harry said.

"Sorry. I guess I zoned out for a second."

It's official. I'm insane. 

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Now where they're at is a real place. *GASP*
Yeah, I went there with my church last year.
 The room Louis and Harry are staying in is the room I stayed in with 7 other girls. (On the side.)
It's HUGE. And AMAZING.
Now, how Billy talks is how my grandmother talks, so YA'LL BEST NOT MAKE NO FUN OF US SOUTHERNERS. YA' HEAR.
No, I have never heard of a place in Tennessee called Crowley Corners.
Then again I live on the East side.
I know nothing of the West side. 
Dedicated to Real_Mckenna for commenting on my last chapter.
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If you did love it....

YA'LL COME BACK NOW YA'HEAR? 

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