Keesh- The Revenge Story(comp...

By Paruthivaishali

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keerti who wants to take revenge from her love Naksh and his wife Tara.... wants to know why... so stay tuned... More

Prologue character intro
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Part 10
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Starcast
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Part 18
Part 19
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Epilogue

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By Paruthivaishali

Late night
Naksh wake up from sleep and look at Keerti.

As she ruffled her fingers in his hairs

Naksh- Keerti.

He look at her and smile.

Naksh- aapko hosh aa gaya.

She tried to get up.

Naksh- please don't lye down. When you got up.

Keerti- just 5 minutes before.

Naksh- 5 minutes before why didn't you wake me up

Keerti- tumhe  dekh rahi thi. You know Naa I love to adore you.

He hold her hand and kiss on her palm.

Naksh- thank god you're fine Keerti. Thank god You came back to me.

He caress her head and she writh in pain

Naksh- sorry Keerti I'm really sorry are you ok wait let me call the doctor.

He got up to go She hold his hand and look at him.

Keerti- Naksh me thik hu.please sit I want to say something.

Naksh- but Keerti

Keerti- please Naksh

Naksh- ok

He sit and hold her hand

Naksh- say I'm listening.

Keerti- you know that's the problem I forget everything when I see you.

She held his palm in her and caress it.

Keerti-I have to go they are calling me.

He look at her confused.

Naksh- Kahan Jana hai tumhe kaun bula raha hai?(where are you going and who is calling you?

Keerti- our babies. Our sons you know they both are too cute they are just like you. They both need me. They are calling me.

Naksh- what are you saying Keerti please take rest we will talk later.

Keerti- Naksh please listen to me. Please promise me you will take care of our Amyra and tell her that her mumma love her the most.

Tears brimmed in his eyes.

Naksh- Keerti.

Keerti- please let me say.

Keerti- please tell everyone that I love them

He didn't look at her.

Keerti-Naksh look at me. At least bid me bye properly.

Naksh- shut up just shut up. You're not going anywhere. Suna aapne. You're not going anywhere.

Keerti- ok I won't say that again. But you promise that you will take care of my Naksh.

Naksh- stop it enough Keerti
Just stop it.

Keerti- promise me Naksh.

He nodded no. Tears rolled from their eyes.

Keerti- please.

She spread her arms and sign him to hug her.

He hug her she hug him back

They both have tears in their eyes

Naksh- you can't go anywhere. I love you Keerti I love you so much.

Keerti- I love you Naksh.

Her grip loosen on him.

He move back and look at her shocked.

He wake up from his dream with a jerk. He look at her who is still unconscious.

He is breathing heavily.

He composed himself.

Naksh- I thought that you love me. But you don't you really don't care about my feelings.

Naksh- listen it's enough now get up Keerti kab se wait kar raha hu aapka. Please get up you know what you're hurting me. If you don't get up I swear I'll never talk to you. You have to get up keerti for me for our Amyra and for our junior. You don't have any option please get up now.

He jerk her but she didn't respond.

He hold her and cry resting his head on it

He open his eyes as her grip tighten on his hand.

He look at her shocked. As she breathing heavily.

Naksh- Keerti.

Keerti- Naksh.ahh.mere babies. ahh.

He was shocked

Keerti- Naksh

She jerk him.

Naksh- haan calm down keerti kuch nahi hoga (Shout) Doctor.

He hold her hand and caress her head she is screaming in pain.

Naksh- Keerti take breath please. Kuch nahi hoga ok you just relax

Doctor and Nurse enter inside running

Naksh- Doctor Keerti.
Doc- Mr Naksh please go out and let us do our work.

Nurse- Sir patient is sinking.

Naksh look at them shocked.

Doc- keep the injection ready and call the
Gynaecologist

Nurse- yes doctor

Keerti held his hand tight.

He bend down and caressing her hair.

Keerti- Naksh mera baby Naksh

Naksh- Keerti look at me just calm down please kuch nahi hoga hamare babies ko. Ok you just calm down.

Doc- Naksh go out please.

Nurse made him leave her hand.

Yash and Naitik hold Naksh and take him out.

He is standing outside of room lost.

He felt a hand on his shoulder he turn and look at her.

Naksh- maa aap

He hugged her crying.

Swarna caressed her hair and try to console him.

After sometime

Swarna is sitting holding Naksh hand.

Doctor come out of room

Naksh- Doctor how's she?

Swarna- is she fine?

Doctor look at them

Doctor- we are sorry Mr Singhania but her condition is worsening every moment.

Naksh and everyone got shocked listening that

Doctor- we have to do cesarean.

Naksh- but Doctor she is seven months pregnant cesarean.

Doctor- Naksh we have to do cesarean asap other we can't save anyone.

Naksh- what do you mean?

Doctor- we can save only kids or their Mom. Please decide and tell us whom you want to save.  I know It's not easy for you but I'm sorry but you have make this choice.we will try out best to save them.

Naksh look at them shocked

Swarna fall unconscious

Naksh fall down on his knees

Naitik- Naksh

Akshara- duggu

They both hold him and made him stand.

Naksh- how can I choose. I. I love them papa. They are my kids. How can I take their lives. No I can't do this. I want my babies but I can't put Keerti life in danger. If something happened to her. I'll die.I can't Amyra mumma from her.

Naitik- Naksh calm down. Naksh.

Naksh- papa I'll die without my family I love them so much. Papa me Keerti ko kya bolunga ki me mere babies ko protect nahi kar paya. She will hate me papa. Papa I'll die.

Naitik tried to calm him but he is blabbering continuously

Naitik slapped him.

Tears rolled down from his eyes.

Naitik hold his hand and hug him tightly.

Naksh- Papa me.

Naitik- shh calm down.

He broke the hug and cupped his face in his palm.

Naitik- I know it's not easy at all but you can't broke like this. You have to be strong for your family option nahi hai tumhare pass

Akshara- Duggu beta everyone need you your Amyra your babies and most importantly your Keerti needs you. You have to stay strong for her.

Naksh wiped his tears and nodded halfheartedly

Doctor and nurse enter there with consent form in his hand

Naksh look at them.

Doctor- Nurse get the OT operation theatre ready Mr Naksh please sign this consent form

Naksh- consent form

Doctor- we will try to save both but unfortunately if something happens to patients or babies you will not blame Doctors and hospital authorities

Naksh- (shout) how can you say this Doctor. You have to save them. Kuch nahi hoga mere babies ko. You have to save my Keerti and my babies. Please Doctor please save them.

Doctor- calm down Mr Singhania please don't worry we will try our best.

Naksh nods.

He hold form in his hand to sign it. His hand is shivering.

Akshara Naitik put their hand on his shoulder.

Naksh nodded and sign the form.

Naksh- aap meri wife ko bachiye. I know my kids love me and their mumma so much. They will not leave us like this. They know their elder sister is waiting for them eagerly. They will not break her heart

Naksh- nahin jayaenge naa vo mujhe chod ke? Mumma!
Nahi jayenge naa.

Akshara nods and hug him.

After sometime

Ward boys come out taking Keerti on stretcher

Everyone look at her.

Naksh walked toward her and hold her hand.

Naksh- you have to come back for me I'm waiting for you.

Naksh- Amyra and I need you. We need you Keerti

Naksh- I love you

He caress her belly

Naksh- I love you my babies.
Please come to Dadda I'm waiting for you.

Ward-boys pull stretcher and take her in operation theatre

He look at his hand without her hand in it.

He look at door of operation theatre

He stood there silently.

He look at Swarna and hug her as she is really worried for Keerti.

He broke the hug and look at Amyra as she is crying in yash arms

Everyone look at her composed themselves

He walked toward her and take her in his arms

Naksh- princess what happened why my princess is crying.

Amyra- Dadda mumma

He didn't said anything

Amyra- mujhe mumma ke paas jana hai abhi

She tried to get down from his arms.

He again hold her properly

Naksh- princess you can't meet mumma now. Actually aapke little babies aanewale haina. Toh mumma abhi aapse nahi mil sakti.

Amyra- really mere babies aanewale hai

Naksh nods

She hug him happily he caress her head

Amyra- Dadda put me down

He put her down she look at his face.

Amyra- Dadda are you worried

Naksh nods no

She hold his hand and take him toward temple inside hospital

Everyone enter in temple

She sign Naksh to join hand infront of god

Naksh did as she said he look at her innocence and request god not to break her heart

He caress her head she wiped his tears and hug him

After sometime
Amyra is in Akshara arms. She looks for Naksh but he is not there.

Naitik and Yash search for him who is hiding himself in an empty dark room.

Naitik hear his sobs and enter in room.

He got shocked seeing his vulnerability and feel bad for him

He sit beside him and hold his hand

Naksh- why me dad? Always why me?

He put his head on his lap. He caress his hair.

Naksh- why I have to choose between my loved ones. First I had to marry Tara to save Keerti life then many times I choose other over Keerti why I always end up hurting her

Naksh- I promised her that I'll protect our babies but nahi kar paya. How will I face her I know she will hate me for this. She will never talk to me. Shayad vo meri Amyra ko bhi

Naitik- jo hua hi nahi hai uske baare me soch hi kyu rahe ho may be aise kuch ho hi naa

Naksh look at him and sit.

Naitik- ye bhi toh ho sakta haina ki Keerti aur dono babies safe ho jaye. Now don't think too much we all know it's not our hand right?

Naitik- so get up and come with me Keerti and your babies are waiting for you

He forward his hand.Naksh hold his hand and get up. He hugged him.

Naksh and Naitik walked toward operation theatre

Naksh is getting restless by every passing moment

When he hear cry of a new born baby. He stopped moving for a second. His heart skipped a beat He turn and look toward door.

Tears rolled down from his eyes.

Everyone look at him then at door.

Naitik and Akshara hugged him. Then they hear another cry sound of baby

A big smile come on their faces with tears in their eyes

Naksh was numb to react he is happy for his child but scared for his love his wife his Keerti. For a moment he thought that he lost her world seem to end

He is lost in his thoughts

When two nurses come out holding his babies in their arms
They stopped in-front of him Everyone look at babies and got happy and emotional at same time

Nurse- congratulations it's twin baby boys he look at his sons

Naksh- nurse Ker. Meri Keerti vo thik haina

He asked getting scared everyone look at him

Naksh- please tell me how's she?

Doctor- she is out of danger

Naksh look at doctor

Doctor- don't worry she is absolutely fine.

A took breath of relief

Naksh- thank you Doctor thank you so much can I meet her please

Doctors- let us shift her to ICU ward and once she get conscious then you can meet her

Naksh nods

He look at his babies and caress their faces lovingly tears rolled down from his eyes

Nurse- Mr Singhania take your babies in your arms

Naksh- what? No! I I mean me kaise

He wiped his tears

Naitik and Akshara look at him and smile

Akshara- Duggu Sit

She made him sit on bench then Nurses made him hold his babies one by one.

He hold both babies together in his arms his heart stopped beating for a second as look at them. His sons symbol of their love

Baby look at him and blink his eyes and another baby smiled seeing him.

Unknowingly tears rolled down from his eyes

Amyra wiped his tears

He look at her

Amyra-Dadda don't cry nahi toh mere dono brother ko lage ga ki Dadda cry baby hai.

He smiled listening her.

Amyra- they both are too cute.

Naksh- yes ab meri Amyra ke brother hai cute toh honge hi but you know what my princess is the cutest.

She kiss on his cheek He kiss on her cheek.

Naksh- I love you princess and I love you my both cute little prince Dadda love you all.

Everyone look at babies and shower their love on them.

Then nurses took babies and put them in incubator as they are premature.

Naksh stand outside room and look at his babies. As he is still scared and don't want to leave them for a second

Naitik and Yash walked toward him. 

Yash- bhai.

Naksh- Yash me vo

Yash- I know you din need to say anything but you should go and meet bhabhi and don't worry I'm here and won't leave this place

Naksh- but Yash

Yash- bhai trust me. me kahin jaunga yahin rahunga mere bacho ke pass

Naitik- Naksh don't worry security guard and bodyguard are also here they will not let anyone inside without my permission so you come and meet keerti

Naksh nods

Naksh- Don't worry chachu hai aapke paas Dadda bhi mumma se milke jaldi aa rahe hai aapke paas love you my babies

Naksh and Naitik walk toward ICU

Naksh entered in ICU and look at Keerti.

He don't know why but after seeing her tears rolled down from his eyes.

He walked toward her and caress her head.

Naksh- you scared me jaan

He sit on bed and took her in his arms

He hug her and cried.

Naksh- I love you so much Keerti. I love you.

"I love you too Naksh"

He got shocked listening her voice

Tears brimmed in his eyes.

That's all for now.

Precap- Naksh and Keerti family moments babies naming ceremony ❤️❤️ with lots of love and fun Naksh efforts to make her feel special.

Do vote and comment guys
Bye for now
Lots of love
Vaishali
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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