Devir FF-Saanson Ko

By srushtiloveskv18

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Karanvir Sharma a strict IAS officer crosses path with Debattama Saha a budding singer and a student,The stor... More

Character Sketch
Chapter-1
Chapter-2
chapter-3
chapter-4
chapter-5
chapter-6
chapter-7
chapter-8
chapter-9
chapter-10
chapter-11
chapter-12
chapter-13
chapter-14
chapter-15
chapter-16
chapter-17
chapter-18
A good bye note
chapter-19
chapter-20
Chapter-21
chapter-22
chapter-23
chapter-24
chapter-25
chapter-26
chapter-27
chapter-28
chapter-29
chapter-30
chapter-31
chapter-32
chapter-33
chapter-34
chapter-35
chapter-36
chapter-37
chapter-38
chapter-39
chapter-40
chapter-41
chapter-42
chapter-43
chapter-44
chapter-45
chapter-46
chapter-47
chapter-48
chapter-49
chapter-50
chapter-52
chapter-53
chapter-54
chapter-55
chapter-56
chapter-57
chapter-58
chapter-59
chapter-60
chapter-61
chapter-62
chapter-63
chapter-64
chapter-65
Chapter-66
chapter-67
chapter-68
chapter-69
chapter-70
chapter-71
chapter-72
chapter-73

chapter-51

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By srushtiloveskv18

Night
Karanvir's Room
Karanvir's House

Debattama walks out from washroom by changing her clothes

This was debattama's Outfit


She was looking mesmerizing in dark blue color night dress,her hairs were open and a her hairline was filled with pinch of vermilion

Deba looks at clock and says raat ke 10 baje gaye abhi tak karan aaye nahi office se

And deba picks her phone and dials his number and finds it unreachable

Deba-pata nahi kaha reha gaye karan,number bhi network area mein nahi hai inka

And she walks here there and in room and waits for him

Deba-ab jab tak karan aaye nahi jaate mujhe bhi neend nahi aayegi kal subha jaldi bhi toh uthane hai mujhe

And a blush crepts on her face and she says karan plz jaldi aao jao

And she sits on bed and again dials his number but finds it unreachable and she dials bipin's number and makhan's number too but no one answers her call

Deba-sab pata nahi kaha busy hai

And she gets worried as karan's number was unreachable and even his staff was not answering her call

Deba-karan thik toh honge na

And her eyes gets moist and just when she hears voices and she goes in balcony and she finds people gathered around Priyanka's house

Deba-priyanka ke ghar se itna awaaz kyun aaye rahi hai

And deba goes down

Priyanka's House

Deba enters inside her house and what she sees next scares her a lot,she sees the same dreadful scene which she use to witness before getting married to karan,she sees Rohan who was beating Priyanka by belt and hand and deba shivers in fear As before also she use to get scared after seeing such scenes

And deba starts shivering and Rohan beats Priyanka with belt and throws her on floor And raises his leg to kick her but debattama remembers that how her father use to beat her and her mom and how she(debattama) use to cry entire night in pain

And deba gets a little courage and she holds Priyanka by shoulder and makes her stand and Priyanka was shivering and crying in pain as Rohan beat her like anything

Deba comes infront and says aap yeh kya kare rahe ho Rohan yeh biwi hai aapki koi janwar nahi hai jo asie maare rahe ho,woh insaan hai usse bhi dard hote hoga

Rohan gets furious after hearing debattama's words

Rohan-tum dur raho smajhi

And Rohan drags Priyanka from debattama's back and pulls her infront and gives her 5 slaps and was about to slap her more but deba takes Priyanka in a hug

Deba-aap asie maare nahi sakte Priyanka ko domestic violence ka case baneta hai aap par

Rohan shouts tumhe kya tum kyun aaye rahi ho beech mein jao aapne karan ke saath muh kaal karo waise bhi raat hogayi hai

Now deba gets furious and says don't cross your limit aur main issliye beech mein bol rahi hoon kyun ki Priyanka meri dost hai aur kise bhi ladki ke upar domestic violence hone galta hai issliye main toh stand loongi,ruko main abhi police ko call karti hoon woh hi tumhe seedha karenge

And deba was about to dial police's number but Rohan throws her phone on floor And deba glares at him and says tumhari itna himmat ki tumne mera phone phek diye

Rohan-mat bolo tum beech mein

And Rohan drags Priyanka from debattama's hold and deba says chodo usse

And she holds Priyanka's hand and Rohan gets angry and says ruko tum toh aaj debattama,aaj tak maare nahi padi na tumhe karan ki issliye itna ud rahi ho,tumhe toh aaj main dekh loonga

And he holds debattama's hand very tightly and he raises his hand to slap her and deba tries to free her hand but he holds it very tightly and deba starts getting the flashes that how her father use to raise his hands on her mother and on her

And Rohan raises his hand and was about to slap debattama but just when someone holds his hand and Rohan looks at that hand and then at that person and deba looks at that person and she smiles a little as he was none other than karan

Deba-karan

And Karan's gaze falls on rohan's other hand by which he was holding deba's hand very tightly and he gets furious and frees her hand from his hold and jerks his hand and pushes him by his shoulder away

Karan-himmat kaise huaein teri meri biwi par haath uthane ki kiseki itna aukat nahi hai ki woh debattama par haath uthaiye

And deba looks at karan and thinks that gone are those days when anyone had a right to harm her or beat her,as now karan will not allow anyone to even put a single finger on her

Rohan tries to come on karan but karan pushes him and slaps him and twist his hand

Karan-kya smajhte hai tu khud ko,bhagwan,ladkiyoon par haath utha kare khud ko powerful smajhte hai tu,janwar hai tu

Rohan shouts mard hoon main

Karan-l doubt

And Rohan gets furious and tries to free himself from his hold but karan was holding him very tightly

Rohan-tu bhi debattama ko roz maare kare itna sar par mat beithane de usse warna ek din tu hi royega

And Karan kicks him on leg and says bakwaas band kare aapni smajha tu aur aapne biwi par haath uthane band kare

And Rohan gets angry and comes out from karan's hold and tries to go towards Priyanka but karan drags him by collar from behind and makes him turn and gives him many slaps and throws him on floor And says biwi par haath nahi uthane chahiye,biwi ko princess ki tarah treat karena chahiye na ki kise cheez ki tarah jise chaho waise use kare hum aur ek baat dhyaan rakhane tujhe main chodega nahi kyun ki mujhe domestic violence bikul pasand nahi hai

And Karan kicks him on his stomach

And Karan goes towards deba and says mishti Priyanka ko humare ghar lekar chalo usska iss janwar ke saath rehna thik nahi hai

Deba nods her head in yes and looks at Priyanka and Priyanka bursts in tears and hugs her tightly and deba sooths her hair and says chalo hum ghar chalte hai

And deba holds Priyanka by shoulder and takes her with her and Karan walks out from house and locks the door from outside

And all colony people were looking at Priyanka,deba ignores them and takes Priyanka with her

And Karan looks at everyone and says maze aaye free ki picture dekh kare

And all puts their head down and looks at floor

Karan-sharam aane chahiye aap sabko stand Nahi le sakte tha aap Priyanka ke liye jise kise janwar ki tarah maare jaa rahe tha,kya fayaad aap lok ka humanity ka bhi faraz nahi nibha paye aap lok

And Karan walks inside his bungalow

Karanvir's House
Guest Room

Deba makes Priyanka to sit on bed and she gives her glass of water

Deba-yeh lo pani piyo Priyanka

But Priyanka's hands were shaking and deba makes her drink water and Priyanka pulls her beside her and hugs her and bursts in tears and deba too cries as she could feel Priyanka's pain as she herself has gone through all this and even now her bhabhi and mumma goes through all this

Deba pats her hairs and says Priyanka sab thik hojaiyega plz royane band karo

And deba comes out from hug and cups her face and Priyanka winces in pain and deba finds bruises and cuts on her face and brings first aid box and cleans her wounds and applies oniment

Priyanka looks at debattama and she feels guilty for creating misunderstanding between her and Karan,she was hurting a pure soul like debattama who was so kind that today when she was crying for help no one came to her rescue but deba came and saved her and she is grateful to God for giving her a friend like debattama

Priyanka-debattama thank you

Deba hears this and looks at her and says it's okay Priyanka main tumhare liye haldi wale doodh lekar aati hoon

And she was about to go but she holds her hand and says nahi it's okay

And she looks away and deba realizes that she was feeling so scared and deba says main aaj raat tera saath hi ruk jaati hoon

Priyanka-nahi debattama plz tu jaa room mein jiju tera wait kare rahe honge waise bhi raat hogayi hai aur yeh time jiju ka hai,tu jaa unka saath rahe main thik hoon waise bhi main yahan hoon toh safe hi hoon,tune aur jiju ne bohat help ki hai meri

Deba-asie kuch nahi hai,accha thik hai main jaati hoon par tujhe kuch bhi chahiye hoga tu mujhe bula lena okay aur

And she cups her face and says bikul darr mat karan aur main hoon na,Rohan kuch nahi kare payega tera saath

Priyanka nods her head in yes and deba leaves

Karanvir's Room

Karan was Standing near the window and just when deba enters in room and sees him and says karan

Karan looks at door and walks towards her and says Priyanka kaise hai

Deba-maine dressing kare di usski par woh bohat darri huaein hai

Karan-hogi hi na janwar ki tarah maare hai usse Rohan ne

And he holds her hand which Rohan holded tightly and looks at it

Karan-tum thik ho

Deba-haan thik hoon main karan

And Karan makes her sit on bed and he sits on floor infront of her and deba moves a little but karan holds her hand

Karan-aaj Priyanka ko dekh kare bohat bur lage mujhe na jaane asie kitna aur ladkiyaan aur ladies hongi jinka saath roz yeh sab hote hoga

And deba remembers how Ramesh use to slap her and use to throw her on floor And use to kick her and she even remembers how her mumma use to get beatings from Ramesh even for small things

Karan-mujhe toh smajhe nahi aate ki aadmi ko kya sukoon milte hai ek aurat par haath utha kare

Deba looks at him and she starts shivering as all the flashes from her past was making her sacred

And Karan looks at her and finds her shivering and he gets worried and sits beside her on bed and says mishti kya huaein tumhe tum thik ho

Deba hears this and looks at him and she feels like today she will blurt out everything infront of him

Deba-Karan main agar kaho ki Priyanka ki tarah infact usse bhi bur domestic violence maine dekha hai mehsoos kiye toh aap...

Karan gets shocked after discovering this and he cups her face and says tum baato mujhe kya huaein tha tumhare saath

Deba-papa ji mujhe aur mumma ko maarte tha roz,mujhe thappad maarte tha,floor pe phek deta tha

And she burst in tears and Karan's heart shakes from inside after knowing this and Karan pulls her in his arms and hugs her tightly

Deba-unko meri padhai se problem thi mumma ko toh woh har choti baat par maare deta tha karan aur mujhe bhi aur kanchan bhabhi ke saath Yash bhaiyan asie hi karte hai,main darr jaati hoon jab bhi main kise bhi ladki ke saath domestic violence hote huaein dekhati hoon toh

Karan-issliye tumhe darkness se darr lageta hai mishti

Deba-haan karan,jab media mein woh news aayi thi aapki aur meri usse din bhi aapka aane ke pehle mera papa ji ne mujhe maare tha,mera character par baat ki aur mujhe room mein lock kare diye

Karan-tum issliye munna wali baat bhi kiseko nahi bol payi

Deba-haan kaise bolti mujhe pata tha ki mera papa ji meri padhai band kare denga aur woh munna ke saath hi meri sha...

And she don't feels like to complete and Karan thinks that may be this was reason that made her hate him in initial days of their marriage and that's why she was not ready to accept this marriage

Karan-mishti

And Karan comes out from hug and says sorry maine kabhi tumhe hurt kiye ho toh

Deba-aapne todhi kabhi mujhe par haath uthaiye karan bas aap na gussa bohat karte ho aur tushar bhaiyan ki toh band hi bajate ho par gussa karena aapki aadat hai par aap na gussa kam kiye kijiye

Karan smiles after hearing this and says okay main abse gussa kam karoge

Deba-good

And Karan hugs her more tightly and deba too hugs him tightly

Morning
Karanvir's Room

Karan was standing infront of mirror and was tieing his tie and just when he hears anklets sound and He looks at door and his heart skips a beat,he sees debattama who was beautifully drapped in pink saree with her hairs open and her hairline was filled with vermilion and her hands were filled with pink color bangles and she was looking a perfect match of him

Debattama's Outfit


Deba smiles at him and says good morning Karan

Karan smiles at her and says good morning mishti

Deba walks towards him and stands beside him and says aaj itna jaldi jaa rahe ho aap office abhi toh bas 6 baje hai

Karan-haan woh ek meeting hai

And he holds her in his arms by putting his hands around her waist and deba looks at him shyly

Karan eyes her pink lips and says aaj itna ready kyun huaein ho tum,koi special reason

Deba-haan woh aaj month ki chauth hai na toh chachi ne kaha tha ki vrat rakhane hai mujhe aaj ki chauth badi hai karwa chauth ki tarah issliye

Karan teasingly says meri lambi umar ke liye

Deba gets his teasing and she gives him back by saying nahi shyamlal ke lambe umar ke liye

Karan gets possessive after hearing this and says kaun hai shyamlal

Deba smiles and says humare doodh wale

And she laughs and Karan too smiles after seeing her laugh

And he keeps his hand above her elbow and deba feels a current in her body by his touch and she looks at him and Karan roams his hand till her shoulder and again roams it down till her elbow
And intensely looks at her and deba looks at him

And he says in his husky hot voice waise tum aaj bohat beautiful lage rahi ho

Deba blushes after hearing this and Karan says accha main nikalte hoon office ke liye

And Karan turns towards bed to take his blazer but deba picks his blazer and Karan smiles at her and deba puts the blazer on his shoulder and makes him wear

Karan turns and deba looks at him with a smile as usual he was looking smoking hot and extra handsome in his black formals

Karanvir's Outfit

Karan holds deba by waist and softly kisses her cheeks and says bye

And deba smiles and says bye

And Karan leaves

AfterSometime
Guest Room

Priyanka was sitting on bed and Deba knocks on door softly and Priyanka looks at her and smiles a little

Priyanka-debattama aao

Deba steps inside the room and sits beside her on bed and Priyanka keeps on looking at her and holds her hand and deba smiles at her

Priyanka-bohat beautiful lag rahi ho tum

Deba smiles and says thank you aaj mera vrat hai

Priyanka-accha

Deba-ab tum kaise ho?

Priyanka-todhi thik hoon tumhe pata hai debattama yeh sab 6 months se chal rahe hai,jabse humari shaadi huaein tabse maine sab kuch kiye to keep Rohan happy but woh bas complain karte tha

Deba hears this and says Priyanka l will suggest you ki tum Rohan ko bhul jao dheer dheer cheezein bohat toxic hojaiyegi,you don't deserve a husband like Rohan who don't respects you or love you

Priyanka-aur tum,tum toh bohat lucky ho debattama jo tumhe karan jiju jaise husband mile hai,woh teri kitna care karte hai aur kitna respect karte hai,tujhe kitna freedom hai

Deba hears this and thinks that she never did anything special for karan or never did anything for him which can make him happy,though she look after him but she didn't did anything special as a wife and he respects her so much,it's true that she is lucky to get a husband like karan,who truly cares for her and never raises his hand on her and he supported her in completing her MBA and then pursue a job,he never created hurdles for her but instead cleared the hurdles which came in her way

Deba looks at Priyanka and says haan main lucky toh hoon kyun ki mujhe karan jaise husband jo mile hai

Priyanka-har koi itna lucky nahi hote debattama itna saare qualities ek hi ladka mein milne bohat rare hai

And deba quitely looks at her

Deba-priyanka tum life mein move on karo

Priyanka-main akeli kaise karogi l mean bine kise support ke

Deba-tumhare parents

Priyanka-unse share tak nahi kiye hai maine woh lok Delhi mein rehta hai par main unse ab sab kuch share kare dungi aur chali jaogi unka pass

Deba-haan yeh sahi rehage aur main toh hoon hi tumhare liye hamesha

And Priyanka debattama shares a hug

Afternoon

Debattama was sitting on swim and just when she hears footsteps And she knew who was it

And she looks towards stairs and she finds karan

Deba smiles at him and says karan aap itna jaldi

Karan-aaj break mile gaye toh socha kyun na ghar chalo aur aaram karo

Deba-accha kiye

And Karan sits beside her on swim and says tumne kuch fruits khaiye

Deba-haan subha chai pi thi bas ab raat ko hi khaogi chand dekhane ke baad

Karan-what?aur agar tumhe dizzy feel huaein toh

Deba-nahi hoga chalo main lunch lage deti hoon aapka aap kha lo lunch phir aaram karena

Karan-tum aaram karo main tanu se kehta hoon woh lage degi lunch mera liye

Deba-but

Karan-please

And he leaves and deba smiles at his caring nature

AfterSometime
Karanvir's Room

Debattama was sitting on bed and was scrolling down her phone just when karan enters in room and deba looks at him and Karan removes his blazer and  looses his tie and opens first three buttons of his shirt and deba looks at him shyly as he was looking too hot while loosening his tie and opening his shirt button

Karan jumps on bed and deba looks at him and Karan lays on bed

And Karan smiles at her and says hello karan

Deba-hii,waise mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha

Karan-Haan bolo

Deba-woh Priyanka ab move on karena chahti hai maine usse smajhiye hai,hum usski help karenge karan,koi acchi si job mile jaiye usse Delhi mein toh woh aapne parents ke saath rahe kare bhi ek independent life jiya sakti hai

Karan-Haan main usski life dekhate hoon koi job baat karte hoon mera friends se

Deba smiles and says okay

And she was about to leave but karan holds her hand and deba looks at him

Karan-tum bhi soya jao na mera saath aur waise bhi mujhe tumhe hug kareke soyane ka mann hai,aaj tumne mera liye fast rakh hai toh tum mera liye itna toh kare hi sakti ho na mishti

And Karan pulls her beside him and puts his both hands around her waist and faces his face towards her and he kisses her cheeks and takes her in a hug and deba hugs him back and his soothing scent was giving her a beautiful feeling

And they both doze off in eachothers arms

Evening
Karanvir's Room

Karan was still sleeping with debattama in his arms and hugging him

Priyanka sees this by standing on door and she smiles

Priyanka-l wish asie happy life sabko mile 

And Priyanka knocks on door and deba lazily opens her eyes and her gaze falls on karan who was sleeping by keeping his both hands around her waist and he was looking so cute while sleeping and a smile forms on deba's face after seeing this and Priyanka again knocks on door and deba looks at door and sees  Priyanka And she gets shy and she tries to remove karan's hand from her waist but karan tightens his hold around her and pulls her closer 

Deba gets shy and she puts her hair strands behind her ears and looks at Priyanka and says main aati hoon

Priyanka smiles and says okay

And she goes away And deba again tries to remove his hand but he says in sleepy husky voice kya hai mishti soya jao na chup chap

Deba-mujhe Priyanka bula rahi hai aap soya jaiye

And she picks her doremon and places in between them and she removes his hand and Karan places his hand on doremon and deba smiles and says doremon ko hug kareke soya jaiye
And she stands up from bed and walks out

Balcony

Priyanka was Standing near the railing and deba walks towards her and says haan Priyanka bolo

Priyanka looks at her and says l am sorry debattama maine tujhe disturb toh nahi kiye

Deba-nahi it's okay,bolo tumhe kuch chahiye

Priyanka-Haan woh mumma papa se meri baat hogayi hai,meri aaj raat 10 baje ki flight hai main Delhi jaa rahi hoon

Deba holds her hand and says okay

And Priyanka hugs her and deba hugs her back

Evening
Drawing Room

Karan was taking rounds in drawing room

This was Karanvir's Outfit

He was looking hot and handsome in pista shade sherwani and he was waiting for his wifey

Karan-mishti kahan reha gayi aayi nahi abhi tak

And just when he hears anklets sound and He looks at stairs and there his heart stops bouncing after seeing the God's most beautiful creation ever

Debattama's Outfit

Debattama was wearing a beautiful red lehenga and her hairs were open and were touching her waist,she was wearing a blackless blouse and she was looking hot and beautiful

And Karan walks towards her and forwards his hand to her and deba gives her hand to him and he help her to walk down stairs

Karan-thank you mera gift kiye huaein lehenga pehna ke liye

Deba smiles at him and says you are welcome

And deba leaves for puja

After completing the puja deba stands up and she finds karan who was standing infront of God and he looks at her and says hogayi puja

Deba-haan

And deba closes her eyes and folds her hand infront of God and says in mind bhagwan ji karan ko bohat lambi umar dena aur inko hamesha khush rakhane,yeh bohat accha hai aur hamesha inka saath accha hi karena

And deba opens her eyes and sees karan who was also praying infront of God and deba smiles and looks at him

Deba*in mind*-aaj toh karan kuch extra handsome lage rahe hai iss sherwani mein,uff itna handsome aadmi samne ho toh concentrate karena mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai

And she blushes

Karan opens his eyes and looks at her and says chalo

And he holds her hand and brings her in drawing room

And Priyanka sees them together and says wow kitna accha lage rahe ho aap donno saath

And Karan deba smiles at her

Karan-priyanka yeh lo Accenture company mein tum place hogayi ho kal subha jaakar ek baar mile lena HR aur Manager se

And Karan gives her offer letter

Priyanka-jiju par aapne yeh Sab kaise kiye

Karan-DM hoon kuch toh contacts mera bhi hai

Priyanka-thank you so much jiju and debattama

Debattama smiles and says main bohat khush hoon tera liye Priyanka

Priyanka-l know aur yeh sab tera aur jiju ke wajah se ho paye hai thank you

And she hugs her and deba hugs her back

Priyanka-accha main chalti hoon

Deba-but take care

Priyanka-Haan

And Priyanka leaves for Delhi and deba goes in balcony and Karan follows her

Balcony

Deba looks at sky and waits for moon and karan was staring at her

Karan-waise lok chand kyun dekhate hai

Deba hears this and says kyun ki woh sabse zyadya khobhsuraat hai

Karan-nahi chand zyadya khobhsuraat nahi hai,chand se zyadya beautiful toh meri mishti hai

Deba blushes and says kuch bhi mujhse bhi zyadya beautiful ladkiyaan hai duniya mein,main kahan itna khobhsuraat hoon

Karan-nahi tum sabse zyadya beautiful ho

And deba looks at him and shyly smiles
And just when moon arrives in sky and deba sees it and says chalo chand aaye gaye

And deba performs the ritual and sees karan and moon and then Karan makes her drink water from his hand and deba smiles

And they together eats the dinner

Karanvir's Room

Karan sits beside deba on bed and says waise main tumhare liye koi gift nahi lekar aaye paye par jo tum kahogi main woh le aaoge tumhare liye

Deba-mujhe kuch nahi chahiye Karan

And she smiles at him

Karan-lekin Jab chahe hoga tab bol dena

Deba-okay pakka

And he gives his hand to her and says promise

And deba smiles and says promise karan

And he kisses her cheeks softly and says good night

And he lays on bed and deba too shifts on her side and hugs her doremon and she too falls asleep

Next Update-Love realization...








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