HATE STORY

By RitikaBisht

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a new story on kavi More

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part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7
part 8
part 9
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 14
part 15
part 16
part 17
part 18
part 19
part 20
part 21
part 22
part 23
part 24
part 25
part 26
part 27
part 28
part 29
part 30
part 31
part 32
part 33
part 34
part 35
Part 36
Part 37
part 38
Part 39
part 40
part 41
part 42.
part 43
part 44
part 45
part 46
part 47
part 48
part 49
part 50
part 51

part 10

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By RitikaBisht

Soon purvi's dad call avni.

Avni: who's this.
P. Dad: beta m purvi ka father hu.. kya tumhne purvi ko khi dekha h actually woh kl gusse m ghar se nikal Diya tha

Avni: really itni raat ko... Pta nhi yha toh nhi h

P. Dad: us ladke ka number h tumhare pass joh video m tha uske pass... Toh nhi.

Avni; hello uncle woh ladka Mera Bhai hai mein puchti Hu waise toh nhi gyi hogi...

Avni; call Kavin...

Kavin; agar important nhi hai toh mein baad m call krta hu..

Avni; important hai bro... Woh purvi missing hai Ghar se..

Kavin; ha kl neil laya tha usko Ghar pr... Lekin woh chli gyi thi... .. ek min tumhko kaise pta hai.

Avni; woh bhai kl heena auf mein . Gye the Purvi k ghar aur waha woh video dikha Diya toh uski family n ....

Kavin: what...

Avni; uske dad ka call aaya tha woh kha hai..
Kavin; I don't know woh raat ko chli gyi thi mujhko nhi pta...

Avni; shout toh phir kisko pta hoga..

Avni: neil ko phone do..

Kavin put the phone on speaker ..

Avni: neil woh.

Neil without letting her speak

Neil; purvo ab kaha he mujhko pata nahi..meine use dundane ki koshish ki ye sochke ke woh itne raat ko akeli kaha jayegi..its not safe..but I couldn't find her..n then I back to flat..

Saying this he give phone back to Kavin and left..

Kavin : neil ruk..

But neil has already left..Kavin again put phone near his ears..

Avni; I cant believe this..tum usse apne flat pe ek raat ke liye rukne nahi de sakte the..

She cut the phone in anger..

Kavin throw his phone in frustration..

Here avni told her parents that Kavin too don't know where is Purvi , they get worried for her more..

Choti maa: aare tum kyu itna pareshan ho rhe ho .... Aanag hi thi na...

Her dad; aanat nhi hai woh mere beti hai smjhi...

Choti maa: aacha baade aaye ... Woh bilkul apni maa ke jaise hi hai.... Ab in aanat baacho ko Jo paal the ho inki maa k saath bhi toh ... Tumahara affair.. ..

Dad: chup ek dum and leave..

Here after sometime..purvi and neil sitting in a train....

Purvi: mujhko laga ke aap sirf hume railway station tak drop karne aa rahe he..par aap toh train me baith gaye..

Neil! pehle mein wahi karne wala tha..par fir socha ek baar tumhe tumhare nanaji ke paas safely pahocha du toh thik rahega..isiliye..

Purvi get silent..though she look little irritated,but truth is she is feeling little secured n comfortable because of neil is with her..

N neil too has realized that his decision is right to go with her,as just now he had seen the way she get feared seeing the crowd n unknown peoples..n the way she become uncomfortable thinking she is going to travel alone (which she had not done before)

Neil; by the way..Avni ka call tha kavin ko..tumhare bareme puch rahi thi..aur mujhse bhi puch rahi thi..

Purvi; toh..? Kya kah tumhne.

Neil; mein kha ki mujhko nhi pta hai ki tum kha ho.. aur shyd tumhare pap bhi bhut worried the

Neil; waise tum chaho toh unhe khabar karna chaho toh kar sakti ho..mere phone se..

Purvi; nahi..

Neil; mein tumhare sath hu ye baat snehal ke sivay kisi ko pata nahi..kavin ko bhi nahi..

Purvi: aapne apne best friend ko nahi bataya..

Neil: pehli baar usse zoot bola..par sahi kiya..mein nahi chahta ab woh koi problem khadi kare tumahre liye..

Purvi  look away..neil took one book from his bag n started reading it..

Purvi is looking outside window..though she is going to her nanaji's place.she don't know how they will react..?will they agreed to let her live with them..??

After a long n almost silent journey they reach to Delhi

Neil; ahh..badi bhuk lag rahi he yaar..tumhe bhook nahi lagti kya..?itne lambe safar me tumhe kuch bhi thik se nahi khaya..

Purvi (mutter to herself but audible to neil): mujhko bhuke rehne ki aadat he..

Neil; matlab..??khair chodo..mein bhuka nahi reh sakhta..chalo..kuch khayege pehle..

After sometime both are sitting across a table in a small restaurant..

Neil(eating): waise tumhare nanaji ka ghar kitna dur hoga yaha se..? Mujhko lagta he taxi kar leni chahiye..

Purvi: mujko nahi pata ke unka ghar kitni dur he..

Neil; hmm..koi baat nahi..taxi wala pahocha hi dega..

Purvi; woh mere pass ghar ka address nahi he..

Neil (puzzled):-what do u mean by that..??

Purvi (with innocent face): mujhko nahi pata woh kaha rehte he..mein bas unka naam pata he..

Neil choke his food n started coughing..riya pass him water glass..

Neil (after getting normal):aise kaise..??mazak kar rahi ho na..??

Purvi; mein mazak karne ke mood me hu aisa lagta he aapko..??

Neil; oh god..tumhe sirf naam pata he..address nahi..??are itne bade sheher me ham unhe dundege kaise..?

Purvi too get worried n tensed hearing this..

Neil; aur tum akele unhe kaise dundane wali thi..??

Purvi; mein socha tha ke mein yaha pahoch jaye toh kisi tarah dund lenge..

Neil look to her with disbelief..n then shook his head..

Neil; ruko..kuch sochte he..

He started searching telephone dictionary of the city requesting the restaurant owner..

Finally they found purvi nanaji's name..

Neil vall on the phone n ask them their address pretending he is from some company n want to give them gift hamper..

Neil; lo..mil gaya address..

Purvi; aap toh kamal he..kitni asani se pata dund liya..mein toh ye soch hi nahi pate..

He smile..

Neil; par ye batao..tumne unhe mujhko batane kyo nahi diya ke tum mere sath ho aur tum unse milna chahti ho isliye hum address chahiye..?

Purvi; kyo ki mein nahi jante ke woh mujhko dekh ke kaise react karege..

Neil; kaise react karege matalab..??of course khush hi honge..

Purvi; shayad utne nahi jitna aap soch rahe he..

Neil; matlab..??

Purvi: maa ne nanaji ke khilaf jake mere  papa se shadi ki thi.. isliye unke shadi ke baad unn logo ne maa se sare rishte tod diye the..shayad unhe pata bhi nahi hoga ke mere maa ab nahi rahi..aur unki koi beti bhi he..

Neil is confused... But he feels it's her personal matter he don't have need to know this..so he don't ask her anything..

They just got into taxi n headed to her nanaji's house..

After sometime they are standing infront of a big Banglow..

Neil; mujhko lagta he tumhe andar Jana chahiye.. mujhko baad me signal de dena ke Sab thik he ya nahi..mein andar Nahi aauga Kyu ki pata nahi tumhare sath Kisi ladke ko dekh woh kaise react kare..

Purvi  nodded softly..n enter inside Banglow..she press the doorbell..

A man nearly about his father's age open door..

Man:-ji..?

Purvi (with dry throat): ji mein ..purvi ..shobhna ki beti..

Man stared her with lots of emotions..a lady come near her running..

Lady:-shobhna ki beti.

She hug purvi quickly..

A man nearly in his 80's come into picture...

Man:-dur raho usse..?Kyo aayi ho Yaha..?

Purvi just staring them..

The lady:-mein Tumhari mami hu beta..Aur ye tumhare mamaji(she point to man nearly to her father's age)Aur ye tumhare nanaji..(she signal to old man)

Purvi touch her mami's feet ,she softly caresses her hairs n give her blessings..she bend down to touch her mama's feet but he moved away..she walked to her nanaji but he too don't let her touch his feet..
Purvi: nanaji..

Her nanaji: mujhko Nana kehke mat bulao..tumse ya Tumhari maa se humara koi rishta Nahi..

Purvi (with tears):-aap abhi bhi maa se naraz he..?ab toh narazgi chod dijiye na..ab toh mere maa iss duniya me bhi nahi rahi..

Hearing this they all get sad..but her nanaji cover his emotions..

Nanaji: woh toh humare liye tabhi mar gayi thi jab usne tumhare baap Jaise ghatiya insaan se shadi ki..

Purvi; nahi..aap humare papa ko galat samjh Rahe he..Woh bahot acche insaan he..

Nanaji: agar itna hi Accha insaan hota Woh toh tumhare MAA Ka Sath na chodta..agar itna hi Accha insaan hota Woh toh tumhare MAA ko abortion karne ko nahi bolta jab woh pregnant thi..

Purvi shockingly staring to her nanaji hearing this new revelation..

Nanaji: chali jao Yaha se..humare Purane zakhmo ko kuredo mat..

Purvi walked out of house with tears..

Neil (who is waiting outside gates):-kya hua..?

But her tears had told him everything..

Before they move away from there..

Purvi saw her mami coming with a man who elder than purvi ..

Mami: purvi  beta ruko..

Purvi  just stared her..

Mami: ye Mera beta dushyant ....Mumbai me job karta he..chutti thi kuch din toh aaya hua he..

Purvi and dushyant. both look each other n gives little nod..

Mami: tum Mumbai me hi rehati ho..?padai Kar rahi ho..?

Purvi; ham imperior college(imaginary name)me computers padh Rahe he..

Mami(caresses her hairs softly): buhot hi pyari ho..bilkul shobhna ki tarah..

Purvi (get teary):-nanaji ne humare papa ke bare me aisa Kyo Bola..?

Mami: mein samjhti hu tum shayad Apne Papa se buhot pyar karti ho..par tumhare nanaji be Jo kaha Sach hi Kaha..(purvi look to her shocked)mein jab iss Ghar me bahu banake aayi shobhna meri nanad Kam par dost jyada ban gayi..tumhare nanaji Aur mamaji bahot pyar karte the shobhna se..bahot vishwas karte the..issiliye USS jamane me bhi usse job Karne ki permission Di Woh bhi Ghar se dur Mumbai me..Lekin Waha shobna tumhare papa ke pyar me pad gayi..jab Ghar me hume pata chala sabne usse tumhare papa ko bhul Jane ko bola..hume laga Woh jaldi hi tumhare papa ko bhul jayegi par aisa nahi hua..

Purvi: phir Kya hua..?

Mami: shobhna pregnant thi..Aur tumhare papa Unke gharwalo ke wajah se apne kadam piche le Rahe the..Unhone toh shobna ko abortion Karne ko bola tha..par shobhna be Kisi ki Nahi suni..usne tumhare papa ko mazboor Kar diya usse accept Karne ke liye..... Tumhare nanaji ko pta chla gya tha ki tumahre papa already married hai.. aur unhone shobhna k saath extra martial affair Kiya hai ..Unn Dono ki kbhi shaadi hui hi nhi hai pr ..sohbana ne tumhare papa ko force Kr rhi thi aur Mumbai mein hi rhne lagi .....phir sabne usse rishta Tod liya Yaha..tumhare nanaji Aur mamaji aaj tak usse maaf Nahi Kar paye..

Mami too in tears now..

Mami: tumne kaha shobhna Nahi rahi..?kaise..?

Purvi: hume janam dene ke baad hi maa chal basi..

Mami wipe her tears..
.
Mami: aaj itne Salon baad tum Yaha..?Kya baat he..?koi problem he .?Mujko aisa Kyo lag Raha he Jaise koi baat he..?tum fikar mat Karo..agar kuch help chahiye..mein Aur dushyant Tumhari help karege..mein tumhare mamaji ko bhi Kisi tarah mana lungi..bas tumhare nanaji se Sab chupana padega.

Purvi; koi baat nahi mamiji..Aapne pucha bas yahi buhot he.....mein .khud hi kuch Kar lenge..

Mami: tum bilkul apni maq ki tarah ho..

Purvi  smiles little n wipe her tears..

Mami(looking to neil ): ye kyon he..?

Purvi (look to neil once then look to her mami):-yeh neil hai dost..

Purvi touch her mami's feet n bid them bye..n walked away with Neil

After some minutes..Neil and purvi  are standing infront of taxi..

Though after hearing purvi n her mami's conversation neil has lots of doubts n confusion,but still choose not to ask about it to purvi

Purvi; toh..ab..?

Purvi lost somewhere : pata nahi..

Neil; iss Anjane sheher me akele rehne se toh accha he..Mumbai Chalo..Kam se kam Waha tum apna college Pura Kar sakti ho..

Purvi  nodded absentmindedly..

Neil; mumbai ke liye train Kal milegi..so tonight we have to stay somewhere..let's get some loudge..

Purvi ask taxi driver to take them a good loudge in city..

The journey is totally silent..the taxi stop infront of loudge..

Neil paid bill to taxi driver.. n both started walking towards loudge building The same time Neil's phone buzz..

Neil: ha maa..boliye. (after hearing other side)Kya..?aise kaise..?Woh aisa kaise Kar sakte he..?Mujhko toh yakin nahi ho Raha..maa plz aap fikar mat kijiye..mein bas abhi nikalta hu ..mein jaldi hi Aapke pass aauga..

Neil  cut phone ,seeing his tensed face, purvi ask him..

Purvi; kya hua..?

Neil; purvi ..umm..Kya tum akele Mumbai ja sakhogi..?mere Ghar kuch problem ho gayi he..Mujhko gaon abhi Jana hoga..

Purvi nodded softly..

Neil; mumbai pahochne hi tum snehal ke room chali Jana..agar kuch bhi help chahiye neha ko bolna..

Saying this neil  turn to leave..

Ek taraf neil  apne Ghar me hue problem ki wajah se pareshan he..Aur dussri taraf usse iss baat ka bhi bura lag Raha he ke purvi ko woh iss waqt akele chod Raha he..usse iss baat ka bhi dar he ke Kahi purvi Inn sabse mayus hoke khud ko kuch Kar na le..

He stop on track when he heard purvi's voice..

Purvi; neil..?Kya mein bhi aa sakte he aap ke Ghar..?

Neil; smile ha of course .

Neil: aapke gharwalo ko kuch

Neil; dont worry..atleast iss situation me unhe kuch problem hogi..let's go..

Both again took taxi to go railway station ..n then took train to go to neil's village...

I know story mein Kavi ke sences abhi km hai pr mujhko Purvi aur neil dono k emotions back story bhi dikahni hai so that ki sab smjh sake unki feelings aur phir ek reason bhi unko milega .. new life start krne ka.....

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