The Book Café

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The Book Café-Introduction
PROCESS
RULES
⇓ TEAM OF REVIEWERS ⇓
⟪ ASSIE ⟫
⟪ JULES ⟫
⟪ SRI NACHIYA ⟫
⟪ ILIARA ⟫
⟪ DAYDREAMERSW ⟫
⟪ GLORY ⟫
FORMS(OPEN)
Reviewer Sienna (THE FIRE TOUCH)
Reviewer Leticia (THE ROYAL CONTRACT-BOOK I)
Reviewer Glory (THE RUTHLESS VIRGIN MISTRESS)
Reviewer Leticia (FALLING, FALLEN)
Reviewer Iliara (FAKING HEARTS)
Reviewer Leticia (PLAYING WITH FIRE)
Reviewer Sienna (TRUSTING BITS AND PIECES)
Reviewer Sri Nachiya (TALE OF THE PRINCESS)
Reviewer Jules (ALL THE WAYS)
Reviewer Sri Nachiya (The ENDURLON)
Reviewer Assie (THREE OF A KIND)
Reviewer Assie (SHAMANS OF THE DARK)
Reviewer Assie (Ruin or Salvation)
Reviewer Assie(A Twisted Love)
Reviewer Assie(Flowers Are Better When They're Fake)
Reviewer Jules (Lawless Heaven)

Reviewer Jules (Autumn Finch)

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Book: Autumn Finch

Author: Snowheart19__3

Reviewer: Juleove


Cover-5/5

It's cute and I love how you don't show their face so readers can still picture the characters. 

Blurb-5/5

It tells us how it's about teenagers and one has a secret past without giving away the secret. So we know it's going to be a nice classic cliché which I love as much as the next person. (5/5)

Content-5/5

You hooked me in, and we can feel Leo's frustration as he digs his fingers into the leather seat.

Originality-10/10

I have read a lot of teen fiction (YA/NA) and I have read nothing where the guy is a new student before. So it's a breath of fresh air. 

Character development-13/15

I have only read the first ten chapters and there don't seem to be any changes in the characters 

Grammar & Spelling-20/20

There were no spelling errors that my eyes caught and the grammar was good as well. 

Flow-20/20

The story flows well, you kept the chapters short and sweet, which is great for Wattpad. 

Enjoyment-20/20

 I enjoyed my ride so far and will return to see how the characters and their relationship develop. 

Total: 98/100


***Please take the criticism in a positive manner***

 ~REVIEWER JULES

~THE BOOK CAFE

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