TU HI HAI ASHIQUI

By preeshaasharmaa

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Jali to bujhi nah...
Kasam se koyla ho gayi, HAAN!

Rishitaa goes to dev and showed her moves .

Dev - rishitaa baby kya kar rahi ho!? Yeh koyi jagah hai!? Naachne gaane ki!? Bhabhi ki arthi uthne waali hai...aur tumhein dance sujh raha hai!?

Mila nah koi aisa,mere sapnon ke jaisa.

Raavi goes to shivaa and winked at him, she placed her index finger on his chest. Shivaa gets shocked after seeing her bold avtaar.

Shivaa - Chipkali kya kar rahi hai!? Dekh natak mat kar...pandyaa nivas ke liye nikalnaa hai.

Baaki dance imagine karlenaaa...after raavi and rishitaa's brilliant performance both shivaanand dev forget about dharaa maa.

Raavi - aree rishitaa..mujhe yaad aaya, maine aaj chhole bhature banaye hai...

Dev - really raavi!? Mujhe bahut pasand hai...

Shivaa - aree toh chal nah...ghar! Saath mein dophar ka khaana khalenge!

Raavi and rishitaa shares a hifi to each other.
Dev nodded they leaves for admission and than prafulla's house.
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In prafulla's house.

Raavi - aree dev shivaa yahan baitho nah...main aur rishitaa khaana laate hai.

Both goes to kitchen.

Raavi - sach batanaa rishitaa..humne kuch galat toh nahi kiyaa nah!?

Rishitaa - nahi raavi...humne kuch galat nahi kiyaa, aur kiyaa bhi hai toh dharaa bhabhi se kam hi...mujhe pura yakeen hai ki woh natak kar rahi thi. Taaki dev aur shivaa unke paas wapas chalein jaayein.

Raavi - sahi keh rahi ho tum....mujhe bhi waise hi lagta hai.

Rishitaa - chhodon unhein...chalo khana bahar lekar chalte hai.

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On the other hand.

Dharaa - main itni asaani se haar nahi maanungi...mere bacche mera pallu nahi chhod sakte, meri powers nahi Jaa sakti.

She looked here and there her eyes fall on the pillara something cringy coming on her mind.
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Scene shift to shiVi and DiShitaa's side.

Shivaa - wahh... Chipkali kyaa khana banayaa hai tune...mithoo aayegaa toh khush ho jaayega!

Dev - shivaa tujhe yaad aa gaya ki mithoo teraa baccha hai!?

Rishitaa - haan shivaa..mujhe jaanke khushi hui.

Raavi and shivaa looked at each other.

Shivaa - mujhe nahi samjh aa rahaa dev, bas itnaa kahungaa ...ki uske saath hotaa hoon toh joh ehsaas hotaa hai woh ehsaaas mujhe usse jodta hai. Woh ehsaaas hi hai joh mithoo ko mere kareeb laata hai aur mujhe uske kareeb leke jaata hai.

Dev and rishitaa smiled and said." Sab bahut jaldi theek ho jaayega, shivaa!."

"Shivaaa!! Dev!!!." Horror voice came.
But our intelligent raavi and rishitaa recognised who's she. "Dharaa bhabhi!?". DeVaaa together.

Dharaa - shivaa...dev.... meraa sar... Ahhh.

She gets fainted unconsciously.
After seeing dharaa maiyyaa faints both shivaa and dev's inner love wakes up both runs to her....

Dev - bhabhi!! Bhabhi aap theek ho!?

Shivaa - bhabhi aapke sar mein yeh chot!? Kaise!? Kisne kiyaa yeh!? ( Crying )

Raavi ( in mind ) - dharaa di se pehle toh iss ki haddi tod dungi...

Rishitaa making faces. 

Dharaa - shi...dev...mera sar...mujhe ghar lekar chalo... pleaseee!!

Rishitaa - yeh behosh hone ke baad apne aap hosh kaise aa gaya!? ( Sternly )

Dev glared at her angrily.

Rishitaa - mujhe kyaa dekh rahe ho tum!? Samjh nahi aata tumhein!? Tumhari bhabhi natak kar rahi hai.

Dev - JUST SHUT RISHITAA!!!

Rishitaa - dev-" before he could say anything dev shouts on her.

Dev - har waqt dharaa bhabhi ko galat kyuu kehti rehti ho tum!? Dikh nahi rahaa chot lagi hai!?

Raavi - TOH KYAA GALAT KAHAN DEV!?

Raavi replied while coming between the two.

Shivaa - haan aur yeh kehne waali tuu kaun hoti hai!?

Raavi - shivaa kaise baat kar rahaa hai tuu!?

Shivaa - aur tuu kaise baat kar rahi hai raavi!? Jaanti nahi kyaa kaun hai yeh!? Bhool mat inki wajah se hi aaj hum dono ki shaadi hui hai.

Raavi - par shivaa-" iske aage mujhe kuch nahi sunna...chup chap kamre mein Jaa aur bag pack karke aaa..bhabhi ki haalat dekh, chot lagi hai aisi haalat mein hum inhein ghar par akelaa kaise chhod sakte hai!?." Shivaa ordered.

Dharaa opened her one eyes to see the scene which was created by her. She smirked. It was noticed by both raavi and rishitaa but still they didn't said anything because they know very well that their husbands are fool.

Dev - aur tum kyaa dekh rahi ho!? Chalo ghar...

There's no option left for them except going back to the kandya Nivas.

Shivaa - raavi bag pack kar!!

Raavi - rishitaa tum jaao hum aate hai.
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In pandyaa nivas.

As soon as they reached pandyaa nivas.
Dharaa stands properly on her foot and said.

Dharaa - maaa!! Dekhiye...maine wada kiyaa tha nah!? Ki aapke bacche aaj shaam tak ghar par honge!? Yeh dekhiye main le aayi....

Suman gets overmelt.

Suman - meri dharaa kuch bhi kar sakti hai.

Seeing this dev and shivaa shocked. But raavi and rishitaa stands normally because they already knew about it...they looked at their wives both looked hurt and insulted they leaves from there without saying anything. Shivaa and dev wanted to stop them but they knew it's their fault their bhabhi blind trust again become the reason of their wives insult.

Shivaa - bhabhi yeh aapne sahi nahi kiyaaa...

Dev - aapne yeh tarika dhoondha humein ghar wapas laane!? Aapki wajah se raavi aur rishita-" meri wajah se dev!? Meri wajah se woh dono naraz hai!? Haan sahi hai...woh log ek maa ko ( while pointing towards suman ) unke bacche se durr karna chahte the... maine tum logon ko ghar wapas laakar maa se milayaa aur main galat hoon!?". Dharaa maa's struggle story by her own self.

Dharaa - aree jis maa ne tumdono ko janm diyaa...tum log unhein chhod kar kisi praaye ke ghar mein reh rahe the!?

Prerna - youu are right dharaa bhabhi! Bhaiyaaa...how can youu guys do this!? Ek baar ke baarein mein sochiye...kaisaa lagtaa hoga unhein...thanks to dharaa di aap amazing ho...aapne family ko phirse ek kardiyaa...aapke jaisaa koi nahi....

Their gheesa peeta yaadon ki baarat dance.
Raavi and rishitaa watching everything from terrace . Their eyes meet with each other.
Dev and shivaa was feeling guilty for not trusting their wives.
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In diShitaaa's room.

Rishitaa was on her bed. She was sobbing under blanket. Just than dev came and remove her blanket.

Dev - I'm sorry rishitaaa...mujhe tumpe bharosaa karnaa chahiye thaa...

Rishitaa didn't said anything. She just turned to the other side of the bed.

Dev - rishitaa pleaseee mujhse naraz mat raho... I know and I'm guilty-" she looked at him hurtfully.

Rishitaa - tumhein pataa hai dev!? Tumhari problem kyaa hai!? Tum stupid ho...tumhein pyaar ki nahi dharaa bhabhi ki bhasa samjh aati hai.
I wish ki mujhe shaadi se pehle pataa hota iss baarein mein. Main shaadi hi nahi karti. Kyaa lagtaa hai tumhein!? Asaan hota hai!? Jab pati bharosa nah karein...apne hi gharwaalon ke saamne aap par chillaye usey sunna!?

Dev became numb.

Rishitaa - nahi hai nah jawab!? Pataa tha mujhe...
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Scene shift to shiVi's Room.

Raavi was folding her clothes just than shivaa came and hugged her from back.

Shivaa - gussa hai!? ( Romantically )

Raavi still doing her work.

Shivaa - sunna... main kyaa bol rahaa tha, mithoo abhi school se nahi aayaa hai ek round kar sakte hai teraa mood sahi ho jaayegaa... ( Even more romantically )

Raavi removed his hands from her waist and replied " tujhe kyaa lagtaa hai shivaa!? Ek ladki ko sirf romance chahiye hotaa hai apne pati se!? Uske aage yaa peechhe aur koi cheez nahi hoti!? Tune aaj dharaa di saamne mujhse ounchi awaaz mein baat ki...aur chup chap kamre mein aa kar romance karegaa aur baat khatammm!?".

Shivaa - raavi mujhe maaf karde aaj ke liye...lekin uss time bhabhi ke sar se khoon beh rahaa thaa, main dar gayaaa...

Raavi - issliye tune mujhpe awaaz utha di!? Mujhpe bharosaa nahi kiyaa!? Tuuu thakkan hai kyaa shivaa!? Agar kisi insaan ko sar par itni gehri chot lagegi toh kyaa woh do gali paar karke kisi ke ghar jaayegaa!? Itnaa dimag nahi lagayaa tune!?
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