Meetha sa Ruhani ISHQ

By AnupreetKaur347

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Trying to write my version of Sounoor as Mineil. The story goes on from where it was stopped in the show "PAT... More

Intro
Story promo 1
1. I need my chef in the kitchen
2. Neil shares his feelings with Mini.
3. Arya excited for the trip
4. Isha to hurt Mini
5. Will Ritwick Help?
6. Neil's possessiveness and Dadu's Warning
7. Isha played dirty
8. Neil's Guilt
9. Dadu's anger
10. Mini had lost hope in love again
11. Second hearing for the court case
12. Kirpal gives testimony
13. Neil to win the meeting rights?
14. Shocking news for Neil
15. Surprising News for Mini
16. Khatri gets what he deserves
17. Mini and Cooking
18. Neil found Mini's letter
19. Neil's lovemania 1
20. Arya is back from the trip
21. Arya praises Mini's cooking
22. Arya gets to know about Neil's past
23. ArMi's prank on Neil
24. Mini's lovemania
25. Neil's lovemania 2
26. Mineil moments 1
27. Mini stressed about Arya's exam
28. Neil drenched in heavy rain
29. Neil has high fever
30. Neil confesses in fever
31. Mini's diary entry after years
32. Neil's lovemania 3
33. Dadu Biji's Anniversary
34. Neil's dreamy behaviour
35. Who will propose?
36. Bike Road trip
"Sorry but need a break"
"I am Back"
Story promo 2
38. Mini and injection
39. Neil mollifies his upset Mini
40. Mini's admirer
41. Neil overhears Mini's confession
42. Mini visits Khurana House
43. Enjoying movie together
44. Mickey's call
45. Neil is insecure
46. Neil insecurities rises to the peak
47. Mini calms down Neil
48. Mini's possessiveness
49. Sandhu Aunty Taunts Neil
50. Trio's Delhi trip
51. Armineil on their way to Delhi.
52. Reaching Delhi
53. Keya happy with ArMiNeil
54. Neil's hidden talent
55. Neil plays guitar for Mini
56. Mini's stern reply to Isha's shit
57. Mini's hidden talents
58. Mineil's musical pairing
59. Arya and Keya enjoys Mineil's musical pairing
60. Mini talks to Keya
61. Mineil couple moment 1
62. Mini's philosophy
Story promo 3
63. Is ArKeMi upto something?
64. Mini's Feelings
65. Mini's proposal
66. Neil's feelings
67. Mini surprises Neil
68. Mineil sizzling romantic dance
69. Mineil's first kiss
70. Neil's Birthday started amazingly
71. Neil's Birthday party
72. Correct explanation of Equality
73. Neil feels the fulfilment
74. Ritwick spots Mineil together
75. Neil self doubts.
76. Mini develops complacency in Neil
77. Saraswati comes a day earlier
78. Mineil couple moment 2
79. Keya gets emotional
80. Isha's plan backfires due to Mini
81. Mineil corn date at Delhi
82. Mineil happy moments 1
83. Arya's new session of school
84. Proposal for Mini?
85. SHAADI?
86. Preet to tease Mini
87. ArNeil first meet wasn't in restaurant?
88. Mineil hearty convo
89. Mineil movie date
90. Surprise for their little munchkin
91. Arya's birthday party
Story promo 4
92. Saroj Mami scratches Mini's old emotional scars
93. Why Mini hated to hope?
94. Neil able to coax Arya again
95. Mini is not well
96. Restaurant's profits
97. Restaurant expansion ideas
98. Neil's allergy
99. Restaurant expansion party
100. Neil's nightmare
101. Mini takes stand for Sundar
102. Are Neil's nightmares really intuitions?
103. Mini's accident
104. Was the accident planned?
105. Mini relaxes Neil
106. Neil takes care of Mini
107. Neil brings Mini to the haveli
108. Suspicious arrival at the haveli
109. Mini scolds Neil
110. Hot fomentation for Mini
111. Neil spots Mini's new diary.
112. Mini's emotions residing in her diary entries.
113. Mini is also a heavy sleeper like Neil?
114. Mini has recovered from sprains
115. Neil's friend at the restaurant
116. Vaishnavi and Mini bonds well
117. Vaishnavi confides in Mini
118. Cool teasing session
119. Neil mollifies his upset Mini musically.
120. Neil teases Mini
121. Nee meets Nee
122. Mini enjoys the brosis banter
123. Mineil romance 1
124. Mineil romance 2
125. Restaurant hiring
126. Mini in trouble?
127. Mini is forcefully drugged.
128. What are Rape drugs?
129. Mini speaks her heart out in sedation
130. Drug side effects 1
131. Neil hides the severity of Mini's health from her.
132. Drug side effects 2
133. Drug side effects 3
134. Mini suffers a cardiac arrest.
135. Arya affected by Mini's health
136. Mini consoles Arya
137. Mini is out of danger now.
Story promo 5
138. Mini has recovered completely
139. Mineil visits the temple.
140. Neil advises Mini.
141. Mini and Abhay
142. Abhay is Neil's Cousin
143. Neerja's Mr One?
144. Preet is back
145. Friends get together 1
146. Friends get together 2.
147. Rakshabandhan 1
148. Rakshabandhan 2
149. Neil upto something?
150. Neil's surprise
151. Passionate Love
152. Mini's Birthday Celebration
153. Engagement date finalised
154. Stern Reply to Saroj Mami
155. Neil calms down Mini
156. Mineil's evening at Delhi
157. Mineil's evening at Delhi 2
158. Mineil's evening in Delhi 3
159. Mini's departure to Australia
160. Mini and Neil miss each other.
161. Neil's sudden outburst.
162. Mini doesn't talk to Neil
163. Neil comforts Mini in Australia
164. Teasing session in Australia
165. Mineil to go to a party
166. Neil surprised by Mini's possessiveness
167. Neil cools down Mini's rage
168. Cruise Couple competition
169. Mineil enjoys the cruise party
170. Vidyut admires Mini
171. Mini comforts Neil
172. Cutie
173. ArNe Tiff.
174. ArNe has fever.
175. Arya's emotional introspection
176. Poonam Maasi meets Neil
177. Poonam learns Neil's past.
178. Where is Neil?
Story promo 6
179. Neil to have... urges?
180. Neil suffers from drug reactions
181. Neil's inhibitions lowered.
182. Neil is intoxicated.
183. Neil's sensuous move
184. Mineil steamy night
185. Mineil's steamy night 2
186. Getting up in each other's arm
187. Neil feels broken
188. Neil's reports
189. Neil is finally fine
190. Mini receives another offer.
Sneek Peek of the story further

37. Mini has fever

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She opened her diary and started writing again.

"Hi Dear diary... Aaj mera mood bahot accha hai... I am really on cloud infinity.... Aaj ki shaam bahot lovely memories dekar gayi mujhe... vo Neil ka jealous sa, insecure sa, cute sa face... uska scooty puncture kar dena.... phir vo lovely bike ride.... aur garden me uske saath khule aasmaan ke niche vo sky view enjoy karna... phir vo rain dance... Maine aaj tak kisi ke saath itna free hona allow nahi kiya tha khudko..... Itna freedom to akele bhi enjoy nahi kar paati thi.. Lekin with Neil, everything seems different.... because you know.... He is different... no.. no... he is unique... and perfect for me."

She closed the diary, kept it under her pillow and slept with beautiful smile on her face.

Next morning,

Arya woke up very early as she after getting tired playing with Neil, had slept in the evening itself with Biji. Biji was with her because Dadu had went to meet his friend.

Arya saw that Biji was still sleeping, beside her.

Arya: Biji! Biji!

Biji woke up.

Biji: Ha Arya... Uth gayi?... Are abhi to sirf 5 hi baje hai... so jao... ek ghante baad utha dungi main.

Arya: Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai.

Biji: To kya karna hai?

Arya: Mujhe ready kar do school ke liye... phir main Neil ko utha dungi aur uske saath khelungi.

Biji: Ok.

She got her ready for school.

Arya went to Neil's room to wake him up to prepare breakfast for her.

He got up due to sneezing.

Arya: Bless you.

Neil: (rubbing his eyes) Choti Madam?... Uth gaye aap?... (opened his eyes) Aap to school ke liye ready bhi ho gaye... Time kya ho raha hai? (sneezed) Sorry.

Arya: Bless you.... 6.30 ho raha hai..... Tumhe zukham hai?

Neil: Ha... (sneezed) thoda sa... itne jaldi kaise uth gaye aap?

Arya: Jaldi so gayi thi na kal Biji ke saath.... Maine socha tha tumhare saath khelungi par tumhe to zukaam hai... ek kaam karo... mere saath upar chalo... breakfast karenge saath me.

Neil nodded and got up. They came upstairs and saw Biji making breakfast.

Neil: Are Breakfast (sneezed) main bana dunga... aap (sneezed) kyu bana rahe ho Biji?

Biji: Are tu baith... main bana deti hu... vaise bhi tujhe zukaam hai.

Neil and Arya sat on the dining table and was having breakfast.

Mini came out of her room drying her hair.

Neil looked at Mini. She was smiling but her face seemed a little pale.

Biji: Aaja Mini tu bhi khaale breakfast!

Mini: (sneezed) Hmm..

She also sat with them and was having breakfast.

Neil: Tumhara face itna (sneezed) dull kyu lag raha hai?

Mini: Aisa? (sneezed)

Neil nodded.

Biji: Tum dono ko zukaam hai?

Mini: Ha... (sneezed) Kal baarish hui thi na... hum tab baahar the... to shayad... (sneezed)

Neil: Maine bola tha..... health kharaab ho jayegi... par tum sunti nahi ho...

Mini: Kal to bahot maze aa rahe the tumhe.... ab chid chid kar rahe ho phir se...

Arya: Kya maze kiye?

Mini: Breakfast karo nahi to school ke liye late ho jaogi... Aaj last exam hai na... Phir to chuttiyan hai... shaam ko baat karenge... abhi kha lo.... Biji aap bhi aao na.

They ate breakfast together. Neil got up to keep the plates in the kitchen.

Arya then held Mini's hand to go with her to the bus stop and walked ahead with her.

She stopped and turned to her. 

Mini: Kya hua?

Arya kept her hand on Mini's forehead and cheeks. 

Arya: Tumhe bukhar hai?

Mini: (checking her temperature herself) Halka sa hoga... tum tension kyu le rahi ho? 

Biji: Bukhar hai?..... 

Neil heard them and came to her. Biji kept her hand on her forehead.

Biji: Ha Mini.... Bukhaar to hai tujhe...

Mini: Main theek hu Biji.

Neil: (to Arya) Thermometer kaha hai?

Arya took out the thermometer from the side drawer.

Arya: yeh raha.

Mini: Are par main theek hu..... Sab ke sab tension me aa gaye ho ekdum se...

Neil: Temperature check karne do phir...

He kept the thermometer in her mouth before she could say something and checked the temperature to be 102.5

Neil: 102.5 temperature hai aur tum bol rahi ho theek hu.... 

Mini lowered her head.

Biji: Bachpan se aisi hi hai... (hit her softly on her head) Jhalli hai bilkul... chal aaram kar...

Mini: Ouch... Biji!

Neil: Ab bed pe baitho shaanti se... main Dr. ko bulata hu... aur Arya ko main chod dunga bus stop tak.

Mini: Par..

Neil: Shhh... Chup raho.. lie down on your bed and rest karo.

Mini: I am fine... Tension lene ki koi baat nahi hai...

Arya: Tum letogi ya Neil ki tarah hi nakhre karogi?

Mini sat down making faces and Biji smiled at their cute banter.

Neil went with Arya and came back after dropping her to bus stop.

Mini was doing her work on the laptop while Biji was making some kada.

Neil came upstairs and saw her. He took the laptop from her hands.

Neil: Tumne kisi ki baat na manne ki thaan rakhi hai na....?.... Aaram nahi kar sakti 2 min bhi....

Mini: To kya karu.... bed pe leti rahu?... aise to aur bimaar ho jaungi main.... thodi si weakness hai... theek ho jayegi.... main thodi der me paracetamol le lungi.

She forwarded her hand to take back her laptop but Neil kept her laptop behind his back.

Neil: Thoda sa rest kar logi to aasmaan sar pe nahi gir jayega... Go to your room and rest.... Abhi Dr. Ahuja aate hi honge.

Mini: Vo jo pichli baar aaye the?

Neil: Hmm.. 

Mini was a bit reluctant.

Neil: Kya hua?

Mini: Kuch nahi... 

Biji smiled knowing why she was so.

Biji: Le kada pi le...

Biji gave her kada and she drank it. 

Neil: Ab Jao... bed pe leto... rest karo.... mujhe bukhaar tha to yaad hai na... tumne uthne bhi nahi diya tha couch se... Go... 

Mini making faces went to her room and lied on the bed.

Doorbell rang.

Neil went down to get Dr. Ahuja upstairs.

Neil: Aayiye Dr. Ahuja...

Dr: Ms Mini ko fever hai?

Neil: Ji... Aap last time bhi aaye the... agar aapko yaad ho to?

Dr: (scared) Ms Mini jaisi patient ko main kaise bhul sakta hu.... 

Neil: (sneezed) Sorry...... Matlab?

Dr: Aap mujhe yeh batayiye ki ghar pe kaun kaun hai?

Neil: Main, Biji aur Mini... Kyu?

Dr: Phir to main chalta hu... aap kisi aur ko bula lijiye... 

Neil: Are... Matlab?... 

He turned to go.

Neil: Problem kya hai aapko?... Aap ek doctor hoke kaise kisi patient ko mana kar sakte hai?.. You know na it is wrong. You have to treat her.

Dr: Vaise bhi kuch kar nahi paunga main... chaliye...

He went upstairs with Neil.

Mini got her checkup done with slight reluctant face. Biji was sitting on the bed opposite to her while Neil was standing near the bed.

Dr: (scared) Aap injection lagwa lengi to better hoga. 

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