The results for the Best Title is here! This mini genre was judged by marina_swampert. We request you to not show any hate to the Judge as they have tried their best to support the talented and undiscovered.
We, the DA offer the winners our hearty congratulations and the others, a wave of support and good luck!
Without any further ado, let's dive in!
Thoughts, Feelings, Experiences by Azulatz
Hook (4/5)
Grammar, Punctuation and Spellings (10/10)
Personal Interest (5/5)
Creativity and Uniqueness (9/10)
Relevance to the plot (10/10)
Total: 38/40
This title is catchy and gives the idea that the book is about well thought out poetry! However, I feel that it is a tad bit monotonous. Perhaps adding 'and' in between 'feelings' and 'experiences' would give it a dramatic flair, the way poetry is written but still, I really loved it!
Black or White by DeathBlade__
Hook (5/5)
Grammar, Punctuation and Spellings (10/10)
Personal Interest (5/5)
Creativity and Uniqueness (10/10)
Relevance to the plot (10/10)
Total: 40/40
Gives a mystery feeling just the way it should. The 'or' caught me off guard because I'm mainly a designer and I've come across 'black and white' so often that my brain just thinks of that whenever it sees the words 'black' and 'white'. It may indicate the internal fight of the MC against the darkness and/or for the Light so it's really catchy.
Tumbling Through Time → James Potter by slytherclaw_seeker
Hook (4/5)
Grammar, Punctuation and Spellings (10/10)
Personal Interest (5/5)
Creativity and Uniqueness (9/10)
Relevance to the plot (8/10)
Total: 36/40
Quite a nice alliteration there. I personally love alliteration in titles (the reason why I try to do that often with my own works!). The grammar is perfect and the title hooks the reader with the question, 'how can you tumble through time?' Of course, being a Potterhead I know it's possible in the Potter verse and this is a fanfiction of the same fandom but what I found a little bit off was that Marcella McGongall time travels only once. That's the impression that I can get after reading through the blurb. There seems to be the romance part and the 'what will happen to the future' part which is particularly emphasized. Perhaps reading through the whole book will tell me what it means. Nevertheless, I liked this title.
Art of a Bleeding Heart by strawberry1d
Hook (5/5)
Grammar, Punctuation and Spellings (9/10)
Personal Interest (5/5)
Creativity and Uniqueness (10/10)
Relevance to the plot (10/10)
Total: 39/40
Loved this title! You have played with the words in the most amazing manner here! Just a suggestion to capitalise the 'H' in 'heart' as that stands out against the other capitalised starting letters in the title.
Aim on The Mystery by eXpelliArmuS_4ever
Hook (5/5)
Grammar, Punctuation and Spellings (10/10)
Personal Interest (5/5)
Creativity and Uniqueness (10/10)
Relevance to the plot (7/10)
Total: 37/40
A really attractive title which gives off enigmatic vibes. It seems like a story which has to be read completely to understand the title. I love how you have capitalised the entire title showing that it is a book containing two powerful leads. However, I don't really get mystery/thriller vibes from the blurb when compared to the title. It gives off more of a slow burn romance vibe. It's definitely a book worth a read!
Now for the prizes!
We are proud to present the first prize to DeathBlade__ for their book Black Or White
We are proud to present the second prize to @strawberry1d for their book Art of a Bleeding heart
We are proud to present the third prize to Azulatz for their book Thoughts, Feelings, Experiences