Unnai Pirinthal.....(If I Sep...

By Halcyon_g

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(ENGLISH TRANSLATION AVAILABLE ) Two families were downstairs waiting for the couple who went to talk alone... More

Prologue
Characters
Yours alone
Shiva......
who is he...
Mother's Love.....
Nila....
Found her... but...
Yov Grey shirt uh....
Don't make people wait.....
What's mine....
Do you still want me in your life???
Is that possible....
Crazy.....
Gowri - The treasure
How are you sure.....
It was me who was obsessed
Treat me like your wife....
First Day...
Moments to be cherished...
Time has more power..
Romance 🧐🧐🧐😜...
Samaikaporom -ft. Mynthu and her appa
I saved for our daughter
Different yet same.......
Is there anything you don't know....
The break up
Neyum Nanum
I want one.
Epilogue..

I want Daughter

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Author's POV....

As usual day for Shiva he woke up then called the detectives to know about her..... But he got the negative ones alone which he was tired of hearing.....

He got ready to leave for office... Once he came to Hall he saw both his father and Father in law waiting for him....

He somewhat know why they are here....

Yes Shiva lives alone in that house which he built for them to live happily......He even asked his parents to shift here but they didn't agree... They wanted to give the couple some privacy...

It was on the outer region of the city.... Because that's how she loves..... A peaceful and silent place....

Coming to the present he wished them and sat there with the coffee kamala ma made.....

She is maid but for Shiva she is another mother as she used to be a babysitter to him.....

Seeing both keeping silent Shiva asked...

Shiva : Solunga mama ena kalailaiye inga vanthurukeinga

Ena achu appa

(yes mama what is the matter you and appa came together in morning itself)

Ram : Mukiyamana visayam tha mapla.... Nama Kayal  marriage pathi tha pesanumnu vanthein....

(indeed important matter mapla (Son- in Law).....I came here to talk about Kayal's marriage )

Shiva : Kayal chinna ponu mama last year thane college mudicha athukula ena kalyanam.....

Ipo tha ava work pandra mama.... Kathukatum vidunga....

Sari thane pa...

(Kayal is child mama...she just finished her studies last year and started learning work .....let her explore more and gain more Knowledge mama.......what you say appa...)

Shekar : Nama onu nenaikurom ana pasanga apdiye irukarathu ilaiye Shiva....

(we think something but the younger generation have different plans shiva....)

Shiva : Apdi ena panita..... Ena achu mama nenga solunga...

(what happened....mama you explain me )

Ram : Kayal oru paiyana love pandralam antha paiyan vetla ponu pakuranga nenga poi pesi engaluku kalyanam pani vainga nu ore Adam nethu fulla....

(Kayal loves a boy and his family started bride hunting for marriage....yesterday she came to me and said all this and asked me to speak with the boy's parents and she is ready to get married )

Shiva : College love la sagajam tha mama..... Paiyana pathi visaricheingala.

Nala paiyana iruntha.. Nama kayal ku virupam iruntha marriage ah mudichidalam....

(hmmmm Its not that much bad thing to be in Love mama.....did you enquired about the boy .....should I ask my detectives to get information .......if she loves and he and his family seemed good we can go ahead with the proposal mama)

Shekhar : Nanum atha da sonein.. Visarika solirukien.... Neyum un side la irunthu visari da...

(I said the same....if you could then enquire about his family da)

Shiva : Hmm sari pa.. Panidalam........ Office ku vera time achu vanga en kudave saptutu kelambalam... Na ungala vetla drop panidrein....

(hmmmm Okay Paah..I will look into this matter....I am getting late for office join me for breakfast then we will leave ...I will drop you at home)

Ram : Ila mapla ivlo kalaila  vena...

(No mapla its too early for breakfast )

Shekar : Un ammavum already samachirupa... Na veliya saptein nu sona sami aduva ethuku naa vetla poiye sapdrein nee sapdu.....

(your mother also will be waiting for me....if I said I ate here them I am finish....I will go and eat with her ...you have your breakfast )

Shiva : itha solatha kalailaiye vantheingala.... Nanum enamo ethonu bayanthuta....

Ena mama oru call panirukalam la....

(so you both came here early morning for this....I was worried seeing you both....what is this mama you could have said this in phone call itself why are you straining yourself )

Ram : ila mapla... Athu....

( No mapla...that)

Shiva : Vera ethachu solanuma mama..

(anything else mama)

Ram : Ama mapla ana epadi solrathunu therila...

(yes mapla ....but I don't know how to start)

Shiva : En kita sola ena thayakam solunga mama..

(what is there to hesitate with me mama...tell me )

Ram : athu.....(That)

Ram looked at shekar who was his long time best friend for help.... Shekar signed......

Shekar : Athu onum ila Shiva...... Un ammavum atthaiyum senthu....

(that nothing Shiva...both your mother and mother in law said )

Shiva : Senthu ena pa.... Theliva solunga...

(said what paah....come to the point )

Shekar : unaku oru ponu pathurukanga da... Nee evening vanthina poi avanga family ah meet panitu vanthudalam......

(They choosed one girl for your marriage da...if you come home early we will go and meet the family)

Shiva become silent....... Ram continued...

Ram : Engaluku mattum varutham ilaiya mapla..... Ava en ponnu.... Avlo pasam kuduthu valathein.....ipo ava ila.... Athu tha nejam.... Nanga elarum accept panikitom... Nenga mattum ava vitu pona edathulaiye nikureingale..... Ungaluku inum vazhkai iruku mapla.. .... Evlo nal ipadiye irupeinga...

(even we are going through the pain mapla....she is my daughter.....my whole life ....but she is no more....that's the truth....we accepted that....but still standing in the same place where she left.....you do have a life to live.....you can't be like this all your life... )

Shekar : Gowri en ponu mari tha da pathein..... Yarukum ava mela pasam koraiyala... Ana unmaiya accept panikitu tha da aganum...... Enaku iruka ore paiyan life ipadi kanu munadiye spoil aguratha pakura shakti enaku ila da... Un amma atha vida vethanaila iruka....

(Gowri was like my daughter ....no one forget and want to replace her .......you have to accept the fact da....she is not with us ....you are my only son how can I see you living like a corpse right infront me ....I don't have that strength da....think about your mother too)

Ram : Gowri ipadi nenga vethanaila irukaratha suthama virumba mata..... Ungaluke theriyum yaraiyum kasta paduthi pakka avalala mudiyathu..... Ipo nengale kastathula iruntha ava athma epdi santhi agum..

(Gowri wouldn't want to see you like  this mapla.....you know her already she can't see her loved ones in pain and hurt.....if you be like this her soul won't rest in peace )

He was about to continue but flinched by the loud bang on the table.... Shiva was at the top of his anger....

Shiva : Naa unga elarukum pala mura solitein.....

En chellama uyiroda tha iruka enaku theriyum..... Avala thavira  vera yarukum en valkaila edam ila...En chellama va naa thedi kandu pudipein....

(How many times I should say you all......

my chellama is alive and I know that.....I won't give her place to anyone else.....wait and see I will surely find her )

Shekar : Purinjiko da Shiva..... Gowri eranthu poita.... Un kannu munadi thane antha accident nadanchu.....

Antha car ah kandu pudikave 1 month achu neyum thane paithiyakaran mari antha katula thedi alanja......

Antha car kela viluntha force la petrol tank leak agi fulla erinju poiduchu da ... Nee un kannala atha patha la....

(please understand Shiva......Gowri is dead....that accident happened right Infront of your eyes......it took 1 whole month to find the car...due to the height and the force it fell from the petrol tank leaked and the car was fully burned....you saw that right..)

Shiva : Anga car mattum tha irunchu... En chellama ila.....

(only car was there...... Not my chellama....)

He said gritting his teeth... Yes they couldn't find her body..... As that forest area has dangerous animals to police concluded her body was taken away by them... And closed the case

Shiva was not ready to believe that.....

Ram : Mapla.....

Shiva : Pothum...... Yarum ethum sola vena..... Nenga solra ethaiyum na nambavum mattein....... Vantha vela mudinchu la kelambunga rendu perum...

(That's enough ....I don't want to hear anything ....and I won't belive anything you say......I hope your purpose of visit is over....leave )

Shekar: Shiva...

Shiva : Ponga nu sona.....

(I said Leave )

He shouted.... Their face fell and left the house... Without having his breakfast Shiva went to his office..... By indulging himself in work and gym only he managed to survive all this year's...... But he was tired now..... Tired of the immense pain he was feeling every second without her....

He entered into that 15 floor head office of him....

He directly went to his cabin and asked about his schedule to his PA Karthik... His morning session was free but had 3 meetings back to back in the afternoon...

Shiva was reading a important deal related file.... His sight fell on the photo frame of them... In which he was hugging her from the back and looking at the camera while she was kissing his cheeks.... He smiled at that photo..... And indulged into the memories of that day .... Which she made him agree for that mountain trip which changed his life upside down.......


Shiva was in his cabin typing something seriously... Until he heard the door opening sound... That to without asking his permission.... He knows who it is... Without raising his head away from  the computer screen he asked....

Shiva : Ena CEO madam inga vanthurukeinga....

(what a surprise CEO madam graced her presence here..)

Gowri : En husband office na varuvein... Yar ena keka pora....

(I don't need anyone's permission to visit my husband's office )

Shiva : Athu sari ena dii work lam over ah.... Correct ah lunch time ku vanthuruka...

(That's right....is your work done...you came at lunch time )

Gowri : hmm ena pana na tha varanum because I got very unromantic husband in this whole world...

(hmmmmm what to do ...I only have to come ....I got a very Unromantic husband in this whole world )

He narrowed his eyes at her....

Shiva : Are you sure about that.....

Gowri : off course

She said and pulled his rolling chair back and sat on his lap.... He immediately encircled his hands around her waist keeping her in place.... She kissed his cheeks...

Gowri : Romba busy oh.... Disturb panitein pola theriyuthu....

(Are you busy....seems like I disturbed you...)

Shiva : Nothing is more important for me than my wife.... okay tell me what is the matter ....

Gowri : Nothing serious.... Next 2 hours free so angaiye ukanthu laptop screen ah pakka pudikala atha kelambi vanthutein un kuda time spend pana.....
Inaiku na tha samaipein... Already karthik kita ketein inga iruka kitchen la things iruka nu.... So sir work ah parunga naa samaikurein....

(Nothing serious .....I am free for next Two hours and I don't want to stare at the laptop screen there...that's why I came here to spend sometime with you.......already I asked Kathik about the availability of things here in kitchen so you work and I will go and prepare something for lunch....)

He kissed her neck...

Shiva : 2 hours free na ethuku dii samachu waste pandra nama atha vida mukhyamana vela lam pakalam.... Na food order poturein....

( why  wasting 2 hours in cooking ....I will order something ....lets use this time productively ) 

He spoke sucking her neck and collar bone...she moaned when his hands entered inside her shirt touching her bare waist....

Gowri : epovum athulaiye irukatha da..... Night fulla nee ena thonga vidrathila already... Athu pothatha....

(Don't Think about that all the time man....you already won't let me sleep at nights ....isn't that enough)

Shiva : Pathalaiye dii ena pana..... U know na intha mail ah anipitu anga kelambi varalanu tha fast ah panitu iruntha neye vanthuta.....

(no...its not enough for me ....you know I was about to come there after sending this mail....and you came before that...)

He said nibbling her earlobes and cupping her bra cupped bosom....

Gowri : Shivaaaaaa...... Office hours daa.... Yar vena varalam.....

(Shivaaaa.....its Office hours...anyone might come...)

He pressed her bosom hardly and bites her neck leaving a mark......

Shiva : Etho office romance eh panathila dra mari solra....

(Don't speak like we never had office romance ...)

She struggled to push his head away....

Gowri : Naa summa paka vantha kuda ena vidama ena enamo pani ena samathika vachidra.... Kedi.. ...

(Fraud ....I came here just to meet you but you lead this to somewhere else)

He chuckled and about to pull her for a kiss... They heard a knock..... He groaned at the disturbance

She stood up from his lap immediately and corrected her dress along with his..... He shouted....

Shiva : who is it.....

Karthik : Sir  .... its me... karthik.....

Shiva stood up and made her sit on his chair.. He opened the atomatic door....

Shiva : didn't I said no one is allowed to disturb me when my wife is here....

He said with irritation...

Karthik : Sir....

Gowri : calm down  Shiva..... you tell  karthik  what is the matter and that sweet box is for????

His face brightens again..

Karthik : Mam.... Sweet mam.....from your favorite sweet stall....

He gave that sweet box to her...

Gowri: why Suddenly sweets and all...

Shiva : Any good news ah karthik....

Karthik : ama sir.... Enaku ponu poranthuruka....

(yes sir....yesterday night my daughter born...)

Gowri :wow congratulations......both mother and child is healthy and safe right...

Karthik : Yes mam.... Normal delivery only.......

Shiva : congratulations man...

Karthik expected a handshake but Shiva gave him a manly hug..... Yes Karthik is his friend in fact all the studied in the same college.... He was Shiva's Junior...

He shouts at him only when things goes wrong or disturb him at inappropriate times like today....

Shiva : Wife um daughter um hospital la irukapo inga ena man pandra... Kelambu mothala... Na tha unaku 1 month leave kudutha la...

(what are you doing here now leaving your wife and daughter in hospital....leave first...I already gave you a month leave right)

Karthik:ama sir but I wanted to share this news with you first....

Gowri : sarii.... Soliyachu la sekiram papa kita ponga... Evening vanthu pakurom nanga...

(okay ....its done right now go to them....we will visit hospital in  evening )

Karthik : leaving mam, Thank You....

They both smiled at him which he reciprocated and left. . . .

Shiva sat on the sofa.... She came and sat next to him leaning on his shoulder
Gowri went to deep thoughts after that... Shiva noticed it and came near her..made her look up to him.....

Shiva : Ena diii...

Gowri : Onum ila..... Namaku epo baby porakumnu yosichein....

(Nothing ......just thinking about our baby.....)

Shiva : That will happen on its own and I still want more time to romance with my wife........

what's there to hurry....its only 3 years of our marriage and none of our parents forcing us to have a baby ...don't stress yourself okay.....

Gowri : Therila daa.... Konja nala kolanthaingala patha aasai ya iruku.... Nama ipo vara baby planning eh panala.....

(I don't know da......in recent days I constantly think about babies....that would be lovely right....we didn't panned for a baby so far....)

He pulled her on his lap.....

Shiva : Ivlo nal panala na ena ipo paniduvom......

Madam ku ena baby venum ponna paiyana.....

(okay we will plan now......so what baby madam wants....boy or girl)

Gowri : Sir ku ena venum...

(what about Sir's wish)

Shiva : enaku yara irunthalum okay healthy ah una kasta paduthama porantha pothum... I will cherish them...

(I fine with who ever it is .....I just want they don't cause more pain to you that's it....I will cherish them )

Gowri : Oh....but I want daughter first....

Shiva : Enn....(Why)

Gowri: amma soluvanga... First born daughter is female version of the father nu....

So enaku unoda female version tha first venum....

(Amma always says ....first born daughter is female version of Father ......so I want the female version of you first....)

Shiva : Don't you think you are obsessed with me....

Gowri : So what I didn't find anything wrong in it..... My shiva is always my first priority....

She pulled his beard and kissed his forehead... ....

Shiva : Daughter venumnu sona mattum pathathu diii....

(wishing for daughter is not enough dii)

Gowri : apram.....(Then)

Shiva : Athu konjam hard work pananun..... Panuvoma.....

(we should work hard for it....shall we...)

He said and captured her lips in his for a hungry and passionate kiss.... Without breaking the kiss he carried her inside the bedroom in his cabin which he arranged only for their office romance....
.
With in minutes all the fabrics that convered thier body find it's way all around the room except on them...

The room filled with thier loud moans and groans..he already made his cabin soundproof for thier activities.....

After a pleasure filled hour both were cuddling naked under the comforter.....

She presses her face in his bare chest while he was playing with her hair......

Shiva : Chellamaa.....

Gowri : hmmmm....

Shiva : Next week is our 3rd wedding anniversary...what you want for that......

Gowri : ena gift venum nu en kitaiye kekatha da... Neya kandupudi....

(Find it yourself man...don't ask me which gift I want....)

Shiva : Gift la already plan panitein... Athu ilama unaku ena venum nu kelu na seirein...

(Gift and all I already planned...apart from that what you want...I will do that...)

She looked up at him....

Gowri : Nejama...(Are you sure)

Shiva : ithula ena di doubt uh... Enaiku nee ketu na mudiyathunu soliruka.....

(why are you asking this....when is the last the I said no to your wish????)

Gowri : Then.. One week enaku venum... Nee naa mattum.... Oru hill station polam....

(Then I want one week for me....just you and me....lets go to any hillstation..)

Shiva : why specifically  hill station ....

Gowri : Romba nala ponum nu thonite irunchu atha.....

Next week unoda schedule um pathein perusa important meeting ila... So ena kotitu poriya.. Apdiye oru long drive...

(Its been long time wish that's why......

I already checked your schedule for next week and asked them to clear it.....so lets go there long drive...what you say..)

Shiva : Nee solita la... Nama next week hill station ku long drive porom... ... Sari vaa kulichitu poi sapdalam then nane una office la drop panitu varen...

(you wish my command .....we are going for long drive next week.....now lets take shower  then have our lunch I will drop you at your office later)

Gowri : ila na car eduthutu tha da vanthein.... Nane...

(I came by car..I will goo....)

He glared at her which made her stop from saying anything further...

Gowri : okay....

He kissed and bites her cheeks making her wince and bite his chest..... He laughed at her antics.... .....






How badly he wished he should have  disagree with her that day... She would be with him now......

Shiva : En diii..... Ena  vitu porathula avlo asaiya unaku..... Please thirumba vanthudu di en kita.....

(whyyyy....were you that much eager to leave me....please dii come back to me.....)

He pleaded to the picture of hers.....



















On the other end in a remote area inside a huge villa......

A lady was trying to make her 5 year old daughter sleep.....her daughter was laying above his mother who was running her fingers in her hair and patting her back to make her sleep

It's 3rd story but her daughter was wide awake...

Lady : Ena Mynthu..... Thokam varaliya ma....

(what.... Mynthu aren't you sleepy yet...)

Mythavika : Ila maa...... Na mathiyam patti kuda thongitein ah... Atha ipo thookam varala....

(No ma....I already slept afternoon that's why...)

Lady : Intha kathaiyum mudinchu... Ipo mynthu ma ku vera ena katha venum.........

(okay this story is over ...now which story Munthu ma wants to hear next...)

Mythavika : amma.....

Lady : solu thango....(yes Thango)

Mythavika : Naa onu keta nee bathil soluviya.....

(would you answer my question....)

Lady : ask ma.....

Mythavika : Elarukum appa irukanga en enaku mattum ila.......

(All my classmates have appa....why mynthu don't have appa???)

Her breath stuck..... She couldn't answer her.... Controlling her tears she asked her daughter...

Lady : En thango... Amma una nala pathukaliya.....

(why Thango....amma didn't take care of you well now...)

Mythavika : Apdi ila ma... You are the best amma..... En frends la ena kekuranga un appa yar nu...... Nee tha enaku solave ilaiye yar en appa nu......

(its not like that ma....you are the best amma.....my friends asks me who is my father....how can I tell them who...because you never told me...)

That little girl said in sad tone.... She couldn't control her sobs... She hugged her daughter tightly and cried.... Making that little girl panic and feel bad for making her mother cry....

She wiped her mother's tears....

Mythavika : Amma..... Alatha. Ma... Enaku appa vena... Naa inimel keka matein.....

Raj sonna avanga appa God kita poitaram... En appavum God kita safe ah irupar la amma....

(amma...don't cry ma.....I don't want appa....please don't cry....I won't ask you after this.......Raj said his father went to god.....then my appa would be with God only na amma.....)

She don't know how to answer her daughter.........

Lady : I hope soo... Thango....

How could she say that to her own daughter that she herself don't know who is her father...... How he looks... What is his name........ Is he alive or not.......

Her situation should not comes to any other mother in the world.........
















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