It's My Twin

By Wordsmithqueen

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Love between 2 couple ๐Ÿ’œ with different attitudes.Soul of twin, One is introvert and other one is extrovert... More

Announcement
Prologue
Characters sketch
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Thank you note
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chpater 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
sneak peak...
Q and A
November 14
Chapter
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 32
Chapter 31
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Thank you
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Love's Encore
Chapter 46
Strangers in Love's Shadow
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
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Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Bulletin ๐Ÿ’œ
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
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Chapter 60
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Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Sneak peak
Chapter 67
Sneak peak
Chapter 68
chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
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Chapter 17

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By Wordsmithqueen

Disclaimer: This story is purely imagination..Nothing to do with reality.

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At night

Shivaani took the passenger seat while Ashwin and Sivaangi took the back seat. Both twin of twin couple started their journey with a contentful heart.

Journey was continued with a heartfelt silent which is gonna continue rest of their life without a mere silence. That night moon too joined with them with joyfulness. Everyone was enjoying the darkness personally and professionally in that chill climate. Silent occupy the moment till ashwin break the chain....

Ashwin turned and see that everyone is busy with admiring, he tuck sivaangi slowly.

Sivaangi : Enna da

Ashwin : Kathatha d....

Sivaangi: Sari sollu... she whispered with an irritation.

Both Ashwin and Sivaangi start to whisper.

Ashwin : Enna d, ivanga lovers ngrathukku oru symptoms um illa..Ipidi silent aa varanga ?

Sivaangi: Ipo avanga enna pananum ngra....

Ashwin : Jokes apart. Nee note panniya?

Sivaangi: Aama da....same doubt... oru vela namalum ivanga kooda irukurathala nu nenakkuren...

Ashwin : Naana irunda inne....he was cut offed.

Sivaangi : Aama ellam mudichu.... 10 months la appa aayiruppa. Idea illa tha mamz ... she shrugged.

Ashwin : Adiyei avan en Anna d.. he kept his palm on mouth with a shock.

Sivaangi: Dei athu en akka da...both faced each other where ashwin glared her.

Sivaangi : sari morakathe...

Ashwin : Kuttachi he whispered...

Sivaangi: ipo enna da...Sollu...

Ashwin : Naama thoongura mathiri nadikkalama. Apo Ivanga enna panraanga nu pakalm...

Sivaangi: Unakkum brain irukku da...winked at him.

He glared and both executed their plan.

After some good few minutes....Aarav broke the silent.

Aaarav : Achchu and Kutty ma tomorrow construction site poreengala....

He didn't get any reply.....

Aaarv : Ashwin.... He called again seeing through the rear view.

He didn't get any reply.

Shivaani turned and seen that both of them were sleeping cutely.. A lovely smiled bloomed on her lips.

Shivaani: Avanga thoonguraanga..

Aarav : Rendu peruma, he asked still looking at the road.

Shivaani: Aama....

he sighed..

Aarav : Sari nee ethavathu pesitu vaa... bore adikkuthu enakku..

Here whispering couple...


Here,

Ashwin : Workout aaguthu pa...Plan success d thiruttu poonai.....

Sivaangi : Aama da LIC. Both giggled.

Sivaangi: But intha moolaya konjam business la potu irukkalam...mmmm

Ashwin glared her...she gave a seepish smile.

Ashwin : Kuttachi, naama oru lovers da privacy la invade aagurathu thappu illa. Ipo avanga pesurathu namakku kekume..... he whispherly asked with a pout.

Sivaangi: Everything fain in love and war da.. nee kekalana kaatha moodikkittu iru.... Naa kekuren... She was eagerly waiting for their upcoming conversation.

Shivaani: Innki neenga romba happy pola...

Aarav : Romba.. solla mudiyathu alavu he turned and gave his ever charming smile.

Shivaani: Kannulaye therithu.....Yen nu therinjukalama...

Aarav smiled.

Aarav : Annakki nee sona mathiri thaa...

Shivaani: Naa enna sonne...she was confused now

Aarav : Sivu unakku ponnu mathiri nu sonna la... Uankku epd kutty ma ponnu mathiriyo.. athe mathiri thaa enakku Ashwin.

Shivaani smiled

Aarav : naanga rendu peru 7 seconds thaa different. Unga rendu perayu vida naanga periyavanga thaa.... But avanukku un kitta irukka maturity kooda illa.....he smiled.



Here,

Ashwin : Enna d.. enna immature nu solran..

Sivaangi : Unma thane.... he glared at her.

Sivaangi: Chumma chumma moraikatha....

Here,

Aarav: Naa enna solren na.. avanukku sincerity illa. Epovu vilayatu.. chinna kozhndhai mathiri Adam pannuvan. Enna pananlau appa kitta kekura mathir en kitta kepan. Naa avan mela kova paduven thaa..but athu avan nallathukkaga thaa. Athu avanukkum theriyum. Avanukku talent irukku but avan input pana matenguran. Elarayum nallavan nu nambiduvan. Business oda deepness innu puriyala avanukku. Ellarayu nambi avan emanthuduvano nu bayama irukku ma..

His eyes were glistened.

Shivaani: Avaru unga thambi nga..she patted his shoulder while consoling.

Aarav smiled in tears

Aarav : Naa irukkum vara avana pathupen. But avan oru business thaniya pannum pothu.. just think.. avan yaravathu nambi emanthu povan nu thaa enakku bayam.. But avanukku romba talent iruku. Chutti thanam konjam adhigam..... avan adhiga pasam ullavangala thaa kalaipan kova paduven... more over.. adhigama rights eduthupan....


Here,

Ashwin had tears in eyes

Sivaangi: Dei aluriya da

Ashwin : En Anna sweet la..

Sivaangi: En maamz epovu sweet thaa.. nee thaa pavakkai mathiri irukka...

He glared her again..

Sivaangi: Moraikatha ashwineyy

Ashwin: Naa moraikala ma

Aarav : Naa epovu avana guide pananum nu nenakala. But avanukku avan oda talents a purinjikkanum. Avan life la happy aa irukkanum. Athu pothu...epovu avana irukkanu ipidiye.. maaridama...

Shivaani: Impressed...

Aarav smiled...


Here,

Sivaangi: Naanu...she said with a blush.

Ashwin : Avan un mama.....

Sivaangi: Aama... athukenna poda velakkenna...ipo avaru en crush u....

Here,

Aarav : Avanukku vara pora ponnu avana apidiye pathukanum. Avan kitta iruka imperfection a accept pannikanum. She should accept him as he is..

Shivaani: Kandippa nadakkum parunga... neenga manasa potu kolpikatheenga...


Here,

Sivaangi : Enakum athu mathiri nalla payyana kedakkanum kadavule... pathu setting pannu she sincerely prayed God...

Ashwin : Enna mathirya , he asked teasingly...

Sivaangi: Athuku naa sanniyasi aave iruppen...she huffed at him...

Ashwin smiled seeing this mini angry bird. He urged to pinch her red smoky nose. But controlled him self from doing that.

But both jerked when Shivaani shouted.....

Shivaani: Heyy stop stop

He put a sudden break.

Aarav : Enna aachu ma, he was panicked. And turned to her with a panicked face.

Shivaani: Solam (corn) sapuduvoma

Aarav : Bayanthe poiten ma..

Shivaani gave a sheepishly smile. He too reciprocated seeing her cuteness.

Aarav : sapudanuma? asked in base voice

Shivaani: Venama? Sapudanu pola irukku... unga kooda she too dragged...

Aarav : Vaa polam.. he gave a ever charming smile..

Aarav : Sari avanga thoonguraanga la..

Shivaani: Mmm..

Both got down and went. Both entwined their hands and smiled at each other. Aarav hold her safely with a promise that he never drops these hands in any circumstances.


Here,

Ashwin : Akka vum thangachi um sapatu la mattu Onnukku onnu salachathu illa d...

Sivaangi : Ithaa nee solra paaru....she glared at him.

Both moved to corn shop.

Aarav : Anna sooda rendu solam..

Shop man : Sari thambi..neenga ukarunga... naa potu tharen.

both seated in a place which was made by some wooden. Till they receive the corn they were engaged in a beautiful yet conversion.

Aarav : Sari sollu... yen thideernu ipd...

Shivaani: epidi.....

Aarav : Ipd en kooda sapudanum nu...

Shivaani: Yaru apd sonna she asked with raised eyebrow.

Aarav : Enna ma.... nee thaa sonne...

Shivaani : Naa chumma sonne... enakku sapuda company ku aal venum la she wantedly teased him.

Aarav pouted.

Aarav : apo en kooda sapuda pudikalaya..

Shivaani smiled seeing his kiddish side. Even though he is a great business man, only they act as child infront of their loved ones.

She pinched his cheeks and laughed at him.

Shivaani : Pudikkume....

Aarav : Pudikkuma he grinned widely.

Shivaani: Romba.... ungalukku onu theriyuma?

Aarav : Ennathu

Shivaani : Ithu en bucket list la onnu.

He smiled at her.

Aarav : Vera enna Ella irukku un bucket list la....

Shivaani: Time varum pothu ovvona solren ok aa

Aarav : Mmmm❤️

Both smiled and continued their enjoyment.







In car

Here sleeping birds who pretend to sleep were gone mad seeing them.

Ashwin was in deep thoughts. His eyes were glistened..

Sivaangi: Enna aachu da... nammala vittu sapuda poitaanga nu feel panriya..
Konjam kooda pasam illa la da... nammala eluppi kooda pakala...she huffed and puffed.

Ashwin : Athellam illa d.

Sivaangi: Appuram enna da

Ashwin : Anna en mela evalo pasam vachu irukkaru. He is always best la..

Sivaangi wiped his tears using her tiny palms.

Sivaangi: Neeyu best brother thaan da..Nee prove pannu. You are capable for his trust nu.. I beleive you. Definitely you will achieve it.

Ashwin felt like flying, that there is one person who trust him blindly without any expectation.

Ashwin : Thank you....he dragged and said..for beleiving me.

Sivaangi: Sari naa thaa unna namburen la.. enaku treat kudu.

Ashwin : Thinni pandaram...Konjam enotional aa pesa koodathe....ellam waste pannitta....he knocked her head.

She galred him..and both burst out with a laugh which shows only pureness of their heart❤️

Slowly both started to share the things which was kept as personal until they share with each..till loving budding couple arrive.

Ashwin : sari sollu....Unnoda Aim athavathu kanavu Ennathu?

Sivaangi: Naa sonna sirikka maatala nee...she asked a with a yearning.

Ashwin : Naa yen di sirikka poren.. unakku ok naa sollu...illa na vena..

Sivaangi: Athu... mmmmm... Singer aaganum nu than.... she didn't look at him after saying that.

Ashwin : What seriously... apo yen inga?

She was shocked that he is the first person who did not tease her.

Sivaangi : Nalla vela naa kooda nee en voice a vachu kalaplippa nu nenachen..

Ashwin : Heyyy..... enna pesura... nee paadi naa ketathum illa and unna avalo quick aa naa epd judge panna mudiyum? Anyway I trust you. Nee nalla paduva. One day enakku paadi kaatu ok aa?

Sivaangi: Thanks pa... Kandippa paadi kaaturen...

Ashwin : Ethukku thanks..

he was confused now

Sivaangi: Enna judge pannama purinji kittathukku...

Ashwin : Apo unakku friends yarum illaya...Best friend apd nu..

Sivaangi: Irukka ne.. ithu vara en kooda best support aa irundan. Inimelum irupan.. naa unakku oru naal intro kudukuren.ok aa

Ashwin : ok.. Aama yen unakku friend zone kuttiya irukku... un vaai ku oru padaye irukkum nu nenachen d.

Sivaangi smiled.

Sivaangi: Naa ipd irukuratha ellaru accept pannikuvaanga nu nenaikuriya?

Ashwin : Illaya pinna... ipd irunda yarukku tha pudikathu

Sivaangi: Athu thaa thappu..

Ashwin : Thappu na... enakku puriyala...

Sivaangi: Epd solrathu.. Athu naa nambuna yarum unmaya illa en point of view la. Enna hurt pannaatha oruthan naa athu avan thaan. Naan naana irukuratha accept pannikittavanum avan thaan. Un kitta onnu sollata,

Ashwin: mmm

Sivaangi: naa romba velayatu thaa. But unna kalaikura mathiri ellarayu kalaikka matan. Naa unna kalacha mathiri kalachu irunda inerathukku en pallu set Kaila irundu irukkum

He smiled and she giggled.

Sivaangi: I have a bitter past ashwin. En kooda palaginavanga enna oru curry leaves mathiri use panni kittaangale thavira enakkaga yarum irukka la. Thittunanga, sirichaanga, kalaiachaanga... Nanu fun aa eduthuppen. But sometime namakku cloase aanavanga tease panna mattu enakku hurt aagidum.yen nu theriyala. but apo ellam enakku sakthi aa irundathu ennoda sakthi thaa.

She smiled thinking about the memories where he stood as her servior.My everlasting Friend. She smiled thinking about her friendship with him.

Ashwin felt sad. She continued....

Sivaangi: Naama yaar kooda comfort aa feel panromo yaru namma trust a break panna maatanga nu thonutho, even joke naala kooda nammala vittu kudukka maatanga nu thonutho avanga kitta rights eduthupom la. Athu mathiri thaa.. even naa sakthi a kooda ipd kalachathu illa theriyauma?

He felt proud that she trust him blindly and feels comfort with him. He smiled...

Ashwin : Apo Naa unna vitu kudukka maaten and trust break panna maten nu thonutha?

Sivaangi smiled and...it gave a reply which he needed.

Ashwin : then you trust me he asked directly looking at her eyes.

Sivaangi: Yes. Till you break that. She whispered.

Both had a perfect eyelock which gave promised to each other.

His lips made a beautiful upward movement seeing her .. After good few seconds their eye lock was broken due the horn sound of vehicle.

Sivaangi : Sari...unakku beasties yaru illa ya?

Ashwin : besties nu illa.. But enakku romba periya friend zone..London la niraya friends.... 1st enakku inga varave pudikkala... ipo ok aayiruchu.. and Next week en friends ellaru India varanga.. appuram inga thaa settled aayiduvaanga. Naa unakku intro tharen ok aa....

Sivaangi: Apo next week la irundu naa ellam kandippa un kannuku theriya maaten ngra.....she asked with shrugging her shoulders.

Ashwin : May be... he smiled.

But poor soul doesn't know that his smile made a pang in her little dovey heart. She smiled with a pain which is not new to her.

Ashwin : Enakku girl friends thaa adhigama irundaanga... he casually said.

Sivaangi: What... she was shocked hearing the new piece of information.

Ashwin : Yen d shock aagura...

Sivaangi : Illa nee London la vera irundiya... girl friends thaa kooda nu vera sonniya...atha doubt....

She gave a mischevious yet teasing smile.

Ashwin : Heyyyy..... still naa virgin thaa d.....

Sivaangi : Edheyyy....

Ashwin : Yei kathatha.....ithuku yen d ipd shock aagura...

Sivaangi: Kastam kastam...

Ashwin : Adiyyei... naa enga irundalu tamil payyan d...unamaya thaa solren...naa enga irundalu culture nu onnu irukku.. and enakku nu oru policy irukku... Nee annakki sonna la.. en room la ipd thaa Ella ponnungalyum viduviya nu...

Sivaangi : Hey athu naa chuma sonne, her face fell.

Ashwin : I know.... but umayile unna thavira en room ku yaru vanthathu illa..

Sivaangi: am sorry.. Meera ma poi paka sonanthala tha naa vanthen...she apologies..

Ashwin : Solratha mulusa kelu d...chumma cashewnut mathiri...

She glared him..

Ashwin : nee sonna athe trust comfortable un kitta naanum feel panne.. London la hug pannikirathu kiss panrathu Ella simple. But naa enna irundalu just hug ku allow pannuven..

Sivaangi: Did you any girl before?

Ashwin : Kiss aa... No No No.... Hug naa kooda paravala...Kiss No No.. athuvu oru ponna.. No No..never in my life..

Sivaangi smiled and admired seeing his cuteness...

Ashwin : but enakku nu feelings irukku d. En wife oda enakku nu family. Ava la naa bathrama pathukanu. Yarum hurt pannatha mathiri.

Sivaangi: Apo sir ku romance irukku nu solra...asked looking his eyes..

He replied with a base voice without breaking the eye lock.

Ashwin bv: Egapatta alavu irukku. But atha naa enna nambi varava kitta mattu thaa katuven. I saves my self for her... my dream girl. He dreamily said where she gave a heartfelt smile.......

Sivaangi: she is lucky... whispered.

Ashwin : Enna sonna..

Sivaangi : Illa Apo unakku girl friend irukka nu keten...Ashwin....

Ashwin : Mm...sollu..

Sivaangi : Yaravathu love panriya...

Ashwin: Athu Naaa...









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Before he reply our ANVI couple gave an entry....

Ashwin : Adi kanna moodikka..avanga vanthutaanga....

Sivaangi: Enna ivalo seekiram vanthutaanga....

Ashwin : seekirama va? Avanga poi 2 hours ku mela aaguthu d....

Sivaangi: what...... avalo neram unna nambi enna vittu poi irukaanga... che pasame illa...she twisted her lips..

Ashwin : Apo naa enna panni irukkanum nu nee ethir pakura...he asked with mischevious yetvteasing voice.

Sivaangi: Nee athukellam sari pattu vara maata.... ipo thoongu...

Ashwin : Enna ipd avamana paduthura enna...iru unna appuram pathukuren.... he murmured and both again pretend to sleep...

Anvi seated with a smile.

Aarav : Innu thoonguraangala....

Shivaani nodded as yes..


Ashwin : Yen.. apidiye innoru film pathu tu vara plan panriya da annaa...

Sivaangi: Such a romantic person la en maamz...

Ashwin got little possessive that she admires his brother....

Here,

Shivaani: Thank you....

Aarav : Ethukku ma

Shivaani: For everything..

Both shared a genuine smile at each other.....which ignited their bubbling emotions.






At Ashwins home


Prithvi : Thoongurala...

Adhya : Aama da.. Romba tired aagitta la.. both admired their apple of the eye.

Pritvi : Romba happy aa irunda... Avanga kooda kayya pudichitu varum pothu devathai mathiri irunda d....

Adahya : Mmmm... Unakku onnu theriyuam.. antha cake, reception Hall and dress ellame avanga design panathu thaan...

Prithvi : Seriously, just perfect.

Adhya : Aama da. Semma ya match panni irukaanga.. but intha plan ellam Aaarv odathu thaa

Prithvi : Naa kekanum nu nenachen d. Aarav kum antha ponnukum ethavathu irukka.

Adhya : Mmm she smield.

Adhya : Enakku therinju rendu perukku pudichirukku.. but vaya thirakka maateenguraanga...

Prithvi : Naa nenachen Ashwin and sivu oda track thaa quick aa odum nu...

Adhya sighed..

Adhya : Athunga rendu keeri um paabum mathirila irukunga.....Enakku avala kandathum priya nenavu thaa vanthuchu da.

Prithvi : Once upon a time namalum apd thaa irundom la..... Ipo parubepd irukom nu...

He hugged her tightly..

Prithvi : Priya pesinala innakki

Adhya : Mmmm. Naa epo ava kooda pesama irundu irukken...

Prithvi : Ava enakku thangachi aa unakku ne puriyala....

Adhya : Porama da..she hit his bicep playfully.

Aira whinned in sleep..

Prithvi : Shhh..satham podatha.. en ponnu thoongura la...

Adhya glared him.. Then he moved and start to talk with sleeping baby.

Prithvi : Apidiya Chari naa Amma kitta solren princess..

Adhya : Ipo ennavam un ponnuku

Prithvi : Ava next year Ava thambi kooda birthday celebrate pannanum aam d ..

Adhya : vekkame illa la

He smiled sheepishly..

Prithvi : Oru gynecologist aa irundu naa onnoda niruthuna thaan d athu avamanam....he winked at her.

Adhya : Sari vaa thoongalam....

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Finally twin reached their home. Shivaani was the one who got down 1st and then Aarav came to her.

Aarav hold her both hands with a smile where she was panicked that they may be caught up to their parents.

Shivaani: Enna panreenga...

Aarav : Bayapadatha ma

Shivaani: Sari sollunga...avanga enthirichida poranga.

Aarav : Thank you so much for this beautiful night.

She blinked her eyes....

His lips was stayed few minutes in her forehead where both cherished the moment.

Aarav : Sari naa avangal elupuren.

Shivaani nodded and he opened the car door and the scenery was made them smiled. Both Ashwin and Sivaangi hugged each and balled up together in sleep.

Shivaani : Cute la ...

Aarav : Not more than you...

Shivaani : Cheesyyyy...

Aarav winked and Patted sivu to wake up her..

Sivaangi: Disturb pannatha da... avanga vanthathum eluppi vidu.. she mumbled in sleep.

Aarav and sivaangi were confused...

Aarav : Kutty ma veedu vanthuruchu...

Sivaangi: Poi solatha... nee thane silent aa avanga pesuratha keka sonna.. ipo neeye satham podra...

Again she start to sleep..

Now the shock was evident in their face.

Aarav : What the hell..

Ashwin : Its not hell.. its heaven....he mumble...

Both eyes went wide seeing this master planners...

Then Shivaani patted sivaangi quickly and she woke up with a jerk...

Sivaangi: Vanthutoma...

Shivaani: Aama madam.

Sivaangi: Ok naa apo ulla poren.. neenga unga lovey dovey talk a mudichitu vaanga... she said and ran..

Shivaani: Ivala...

Aarav giggled hearing her

Aarav : Sari Maa Nee po...

Shivaani: Mmmm... Bye good night❤️

Aarav : Good night ma.❤️

She waved her hand with a smile which he yearns till last.

Aarav drove to their home with a contentful smile.. For couple it's a sleepless night though..

They dreamt for a beautiful journey in future with each as a perfect couple goal...

#ANVI













To be continued.....





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