TANHAYEE (Book1- Birla Broth...

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This story is of a boy Who is devoid of emotions .. He has nothing in his life apart from hollowness... he d... More

Introducing the characters
Information regarding the book
Prologue
Introducing Another set of Characters
1. Two Different Worlds
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2. Clash of Two Tornado
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3. Soulful voice
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4. Meeting with Elder Brothers
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5. Stolen Moment
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6. Score settled
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7. Shocked
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8. Destiny's game
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9. Unexpected Truth
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10. Taking Responsibility
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11. New reality
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12. Testing Time
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13. Family Equation
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14. First Step towards Understanding
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15. Hidden love and Pain
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16. Taking A Chance
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17. Blending
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18. Acceptance
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19. Protective Brothers
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20. Realisation
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21. Forging a New Beginning
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22. Birla Family Dynamics
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23. Manipulation
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25. Ultimate Reality Check

24. Hurt Brothers

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Birla Mansion

Next day morning

Neevan felt some cold thing above his forehead...    he felt weak but the cold strips were soothing ...

He open his eyes slowly to see Nirbhay changing cold strips to him





Neevan weakly blink his eyes he was confused why was he here

Nirbhay saw him waking up and sighed in releif .. last night he was burning with fever that had worried them a lot...

Nirbhay caressing his face - Neev... abhi kesa lag ra h... baccha?

Neev gently tried to get up....  Nirbhay stopped him

Nirbhay - Kia kar re ho baccha aramse.... 

neev - i.. i m fine...

Neev sat up while nirbhay gently put some Pillows behind his back...

Nirbhay checked his temperature .. body was not warm now ...

neev - Mai thik hu...

Nishant and nirav entered inside that time

Nishant rushed to him tensed - neev...  kesa h abhi

neev nodded

Nishant gently whack him - pagal h kia tu... itna temperature h tujhe batana chahiye tha na

nirav - exactly.. kal agar nishant tere sath nhi sota to hume to pata bhi nhi chalta... bukhar me ese he tapta rehta....

Neevan quiet... nirbhay could see how broken and upset he was

Nirbhay - Acha bas hogya... abhi abhi utha h baccha use mat daat hum baad me discuss karenge

Nishant annoyed - Aap na kuch zyada he Sar pe charha re ho ise bhai....

Nirbhay - to tu ye kehna chahta h meine kabhi tujhe sar pr ni charhaya

nishant look away...

nirav just sighs and check on neevan

neevan - mai thik

nirav glared - Doctor mai hu is ghar me neev so better hoga agar mai ye baat decide karu ki .. kon thik h or kon nhi

Neev sighs.... while nirav check him up..

nirbhay - he is fine nir?

Nirav sighs - thori kamzori rahegi better hoga rest kare....

Nishant - vo to isr karna he parega esi halat me koi ise college Jane dega kia

While neevan - nhi mujhe

Nirbhay cuts - You are not going anwhere neev.... Nir ne keh dia na .. u need rest....

Neevan look away he dont know what to beleive anymore his words or the things that Mrs chauhan showed him....




otherhand in Chauhan nivas

Rajvir woke up from his drunk sleep... he was stepping down while mild headache was still there

Rajvir - Ramesh... just give me a strong coffee uhh my head is killing me ...

Rajvir stepping down look arround and he was shocked to see so many things breaking his living room looks like a disaster...

Rajvir shocked - what the hell.. ye? ye sab kia h?

Anamika came with a glass of lemonade

Rajvir look at her furiously

Anamika - have it.... raat ka nasha utar jaega!

Rajvir angrily - what the hell is going on Anamika...! what is this happening in my house....

Anamika angrily - dont raise your voice at me! agar kal raat nashr me dhut nhi hote to tumhe saaf pata chalta ye kisne kia or kese kia!!

Rajvir angrily - mtlb

Anamika showed him the files Rajvir went through it he was shocked and beyond furious!!

Rajvir angrily - He cannot do this Anamika!!

Anamika - but he did it...! meine tumse pehle he kaha tha Nirbhay neevan ko khudse dur nhi hone dega.....  par tum mane nhi.... 

Rajvir eyes darkened furiously - Nirbhay ko kia lgta h ye chand kuch investments rok k vo mujhe hara lega ? Rajvir Chauhan ko... never .!! never ever!!! and for the things which he did  he has to pay!!!

Anamika gasped she could see clear vegence in his eyes now what will Rajvir do?

Rajvir with a dangerous hint in his voice - khel abhi khatam nhi hua h Nirbhay ... khel to bas shuru hua hai.....  You bloody have to pay hard for messing with me ..!!!

Anamika shocked n tensed  because Rajvir's tone doesn't  look good

Anamika tensed - Kia karne wale ho hum....

Rajvir gave her a witty smile and left ... while Anamika knew rajvir will not stay quiet....   he is definitely upto something...






Time passes a bit

Neevan was getting more and more into the shell he was just not opening up...

first nirbhay thought to give him some space he dont want to stress  him out but the more nirbhay tries to make him comfortable it seems like he is distsncing himself.  .

Nirbhay entered neevan's room he was quitely gazing at the sky

Nirbhay entered neevan look at him but then closed his eyes

Nirbhay sat beside him with a plate of food - u need to have your food neev.... dawai ka wakt ho ra h

Neevan controlling his self - aap rakh dijiye.... me kha lunga

Nirbhay - me khila du to koi problem h,

Neevan numb what should he say to him when he is being so sweet ... or faking it

Nirbhay tore a bite and fed him - Jab ghar ka ek baccha udaas hota h na to Ghar k sare log udaas hojate hai....  isiko family bolte h neev... hum ek dusre se jure huye h... tumhari khushi se hum khush h.. or tumhar dukh se hum dukhi.....  if u stay like this ...  u r not only effecting yourself but also us

Neevan closed his eyes

Nirbhay made him look up - Ankhe band karlene se Raat nhi hojaty neevan... its high time u should understand that

Neevan was getting agitated it was just impossible to stay quiet....

Neevan stood up from his place agitated - Aap mujhe akela kyu nhi chordete.... kyu mere piche pare rehte ho .. cant u just give me space

Nirbhay knew he was bottling up his emotions a lot. but they needed to talk

Nirbhay turned him towaeds him - Ye baat agar Dehradoon se aya hua vo dara hua tuta hua baccha mujjse kehta to me shayed samajh bhi leta  lekin ab me ni samaj skta neevan kyuki mai tujhe akele ni chor sakta!  

Neevan look at him stunned his words always   filled his heart but then....all this is a lie ...  he mentally reminded himself.... 

Nirbhay could see him lost in his  thoughts

Nirbhay make him turn - neevan u can talk to me.... agar koi baat h jo tujhe pareshan kar ri h tu mujhe bata sakta h

Neevan tensed he dont know what to say to him... he dont know what to trust him any more ...

Nirbhay - kal tu kisse mila tha

Neevan look up shocked

Nirbhay - u think keeping things from me will be that easy?? 

Neevan look away ...

Nirbhay sighs sadly the boy did not trust him yet and it just doesn't going well with him... he know he has trust issues somewhere down the lane he can understand but as a brother its just hurting him too much that neevan is just not ready to open up.... what more he can do to reach him....

Nirbhay sadly - trust.. khairat me nhi milty neevan i know that ...   but mujhe laga tha itne time tak mere sath rahega humare family k sath tere dil me zyada na sahi... thori si jagah shayed humne bna li h.... but i guess i was wrong

neevan closed his eyes why did it hurt so much when he is hurt....

Nirbhay sighs - mujhe nhi batana mat bata mujhse share ni kar sakta its fine.... but atleast talk it out with someone...   so that u can feel better

Neevan agitated

Nirbhay - har rishte ki buniaad trust hota h neevan... jab tak tu apne rishto pr trust ni karega tujhe kabhi vo sukoon ni milega jiski tujhr talaash hai

neevan gasp in shock these man can just read his face  without even knowing anything.. how?

Nirbhay walked out from there as a brother it just hurt to realise that he is letting a wrong women define there relationship...

While Nirbhay walked out Nishant was there he heard each and every word of the conversation and he just couldnt come up with the fact that neevan was still showing cold attitude towards there bhai...

Nishant was furious he marched towards neev and turned him to face him

neevan shock - Dada

Nishant angrily - teri problem kia hai neev...

neevan taken a back - huh?

Nishant angrily - why are u hurting bhai like this

neevan sighs - i m not hurting him

Nishant angrily - You are ..! tu jo ye cold attitude unhe de ra h na use hurt karna he bolte h

Neevan sighs - Ap kuch nhi jante dada just let it be

nishant -kia nhi janta? or agar tu batayega nhi to koi bhi kese janega tere dil me kia chal ra h

Neevan quiet

nishant irritated - u know what neevan silence sometime kills a relationship and u r doing the same

neevan look at him shocked

Nishant. - mujhe samaj ni ata teri problem kia hai.... look we all know you have suffered a lot...  par iska mtlb ye nhi h na tu hurt hua h to hum sabko bhi hurt karega

now neevan was getting angry

neevan angrily - Kisko hurt kia h meine dada? kisiko kuch bola? kuch jataya? nhi na ... me to chup he hu

nishant angrily - hurt karne ka mtlb srf ye nhi hota  ki tu zubaan se kuch bole... kabhi kabhi silenc bhi bht hurt krty h.. but u clearly never get the taste of it...  once we show u na to trust me tere pas rone k elawa or koi option nhi bachega..


neevan angrily - bas kijiye dada u r unnecessarily dragging things

nishant - see yourself in the mirror and say this! tujhe dikhayi kyu nhi deta neevan ki bhai tujhse kitna pyaar karte h... 

neevan look away

nishant angrily - puri raat bina soye unhone tere patti ki taki tu thik hosake tera bukhar kam hojay and in return what he gets? this cold shoulder attitude of yours...

Neevan shocked ... he didnt knew that

Nishant - Mujhe nhi pata tujhe kisne kia bola h ... or kyu tu ese behave kar ra h ek raat me... lekin ek baat tu sunle.... humare ghar me sare rishte vishwas k neev pe he bnte h... jha bharosa nhi waha rishta nhi and i cannot take it someone not keeping his trust on my brother and hurting him....

Neevan hurt - do u think i love doing all this? do u think i enjoy it...? 

nishant look away

neevan hurt - trust apke liye jitne easily ata h na mere liye nhi hosakta... bevausey zindagi bhar thokare he khayi h meine...

Nishant - or un thakora ka zimmedar tu bhai ko manta h?

neevan gasped and look away

nishant - bhai se zyada pyaar tujhe koi ni kar sakta neev... i have seen him changing for you...! tere ane se pehle is ghar me kabhi kisiko room me khana serv ni kia jata tha untill he is sick... its our rule that we eat together in the dining table... par tujhe kbhi un rules ko bataya nhi gya because he was trying to make u comfortable  tune jo chaha jesa chaha wesa he hua taki tu comfortable hosake.... fir bhi tu bhai pe trust ni kar paa ra

Neevan numb he dont know what to say to him anymore

Nishant - sambhal jaa neev isse pehle teri ye KHAMOSHI hum sab ko chup karade..  please smbhal jaa...

saying he walked out.....

while Nirbhay was sitting in his relaxing chair gazing at the wide sky with a longing hope that one day neevan will trust him...

trust him enough to share his sorrows and troubles with him...  

Abeer entered that time he knew things are going again back to square so he thought to Talk with Nirbhay....  because his friend needed someone to talk...

Abeer - ese betha he rahega... kuch karega nhi tere life k us musibat k liye






Nirbhay look up startled to see Abeer

Nirbhay - Abeer...

Abeer angrily - what did that venomous women do now nirbhay

Nirbhay palmed his face..

Abeer - Nirbhay tune unko or unk so called pati ko. humesha maaf kia h.... lekin this is not going out of the league... after warning her how could she try to talk with neevan

Nirbhay - she is doing all this for the property

Abeer angrily - i know that nirbhay but does that boy know it!

Nirbhay shot him a glare - Abeer...

Neevan was his brother and no one has the right to talk in that tone

Abeer - innocence or Stupidity me ek thin line hoti h nirbhay ...  jo Neevan kar ra h vo stupidity h... he is trusting her!

Nirbhay - I know that! but i cannot blame him for trusting her! vo sahi thi galat thi jesi bhi thi... nani k baad vohi ek esi insaan thi jisko neevan ne dekha h... deep down vo unki baato ko trust kar ra h.... shayed use khud bhi ni pata kitni zyada importance de rakhi h usne unhe...!!

Abeer angrily - to use smjna hoga na Nirbhay this cannot go on forever... vo aurat dubara mauka milega to dubara neevan se milne ki koshish karegi use manipulate karne ki koshish karegi

nirbhay sadly - dukh mujhe us baat ka nhi h ki he trust Mrs chauhan... dukh mujhe is baat ka h ki he dont trust me... itne mahino me..  bhi mai use vo security vo assurance dila ni paya it's my failure Abeer...!

Abeer - No Nirbhay! its not your fault mujje lgta h u r being too lineant towards that boy.... tujhe use sach k rubaru karans he chahiye

nirbhay - Jab vo apne dil me dabi hui baat kisiko batana he ni chahta to me kese us tak pohchu Abeer

Abeer -Nani k zariye ...

nirbhay look at him

Abeer - he need to understand Nirbhay that uski maa kitni bari jhuti h.... agar vo zara sa bhi Capable hoty to to neevan ki zimmedari tujhpr nhi thopke Mrs chauhan ko dety

Nirbhay - abeer stop it...

Abeer - mujhe chup karake kia hoga nirbhay....  Mrs Chauhan to Un property k liye ye sab kar ri h and vo yahi sab karty rahegi jab tak vo property usk pas ni aa jata

Nirbhay angrily - Vo property nani ka ashirwad hai neevan k liye....  usk ek katra bhi mrs chauhan ko nhi milega ...

Abeer sighs

Nirbhay - Vo property  Mrs Chauhan ko kbhi nhi milegi Abeer...!  Neevan meri zimmedari hai.... and us zimmedari k nate usse or us property se related sare deceision mere he honge.... i will not let Mrs chauhan Touch that because if she even tries to She needs to face Nirbhay Birla for that...! Nani ne zimmedari di h mujje neevan ki mai . kese....

Suddenly he heard a gaspe sound... both turned to see neevan standing there shocked

after listening to nishant... neevan felt like he should talk to nirbhay once... and while he was coming he heard only the last half of the conversation and misinterpreted the entire Situation

Nirbhay startled - Neev...

Neevan shocked and angry - Mai apke liye bas ek zimmedari hu?

nirbhay tensed n shock - neev

neevan angrily - Hath mat lagaiye mujhe!! do not touch me Mr.Birla!!

Nirbhay shocked Mr Birla??,

Neevan hurt with tears - So Mrs chauhan was right... all along!! i was never a brother to u.. i m just a RESPONSIBLTY!!

Abeer shocked the boy misinterpreted the entire Thing




Abeer - Neevan tum

nirbhay stop him its his brother he will handle

Nirbhay - Neev baccha meri

neev furious - Do not call me that Mr birla! mujhe neev bulane ka apko koi haq nhi h.... kyuki mai to apka kuch lagta he nhi

Nirbhay shocked - Neevan

neevan hurt - I was an idiot to think ki meri bhi ek family hosakty h meri bhi kuch rishte hosakte...! manna parega Mr.Birla... ap acting bht acha karlete h

nirbhay hurt - neevan

neevan cried and teary - Subah apki baate sunk me dubara behek gya thw mujje lga ki may be i m wrong in judging you... shayed mujhe apse baat karleni chahiye..puchna chahiye apse kuch...  but thank you...thank you apke zabaan se he sabkuch bahar nikl gya
..that i m nothing but a responsiblity...

Nirbhay shocked - Neevan stop it... meri baat sun

neevan hurt - kia baat suni mr birla! ye sunu ki apne mujhse sivay jhut k aj tak kuch nhi bola

nirbhay shock -, konsa jhut

Neevan - Sab jhut Mr birla sab kuch,! Apka pehla jhut ap mujhe nhi jnte tha...! apka dusra jhut apko pta he ni tha i even existed! Apka tisra jhut ki apne nani k kehne k baad mujhe apnaya...! but nhi ap nani k liye mujhe nhi apnaya
.. apko bas vo property chahiye thi na jo nani ne mere nam ki thi

Nirbhay was hurt beyong words

neevsn cried - kyu Mr Birla! kyu?? why did u lied to me? ekbar keh dete mujhe to me ese he sabkuch de deta mujje nhi chahiye to kuch mujhe to bas py...... (he stopped)

Neevan - why m i even wasting my time here! apko jo chahe ap vo kijiye mujhe ab apse koi wasta ni rakhna!! mai akela he khush tha thik tha mai..  koi expectations nhi thi life se.... pta nhi kyu i get myself fooled by you ...!!! but not anymore.... mujhe ab or is ghar me ni rehna...!! mujhe ese ghar me bilkul nhi rehna jha me srf kisik liye  zimmedari hu bhai nhi... BOJH hu






Neevan angrily - or isiliye mai yha se jaa ra hu... humesha humesha k liye!!!

Nirbhay shocked ,- Neevan..!!

neevan walked out angrily from there and ean out of the house

Nirbhay shocked and ran behind him - Neevan.. neevan stop it!! neevan... meri baat suno neevan

but neevan was so blinded in his anger and frustration he just walked out of the mansion before Anyone could stop him...

nirbhay shocked and just followed him the boy was running without a direction

nirbhay yelled - Neevan.. neevan stop it listen to me
..

but neevan cried his mind was roaming with the fact he was not a brother but just a RESPONSIBLTY!!

otherhand

Abeer was shocked the way both of them ran out it was dangerous

Nishsnt panick - bhaiya... bhai or neev kaha gye h

Abeer tensed - pta ni nish.. i need to follow them.... pta ni neev kis halat me hoga.... vo bina puri baat jme sabkuch galat smj betha h

nishant - mujhe bhi apke sath jana h please!

Abeer tense and nodded both followed....  

while otherhand

neevan was running without any hope he just want to go far away from them....everyone just betray them.... may be the world  is just not for him...

He was thinking about all this he suddenly saw a car zooming toward his direction at full speed as if ready to hit him!

Neevan felt his legs paralyzed with the shock... the car was about to hit him...

but his body was pushed away by someone and the car hitted  someone else....

Neevan shocked his head hit with a small stone he hard a crashing sound.... he felt his head heavy... his heart suddenly felt so heavy why

neevan could see people Crowding at the person who saved him

neevan shock n tens - was that person safe??

neev rushed to see who saved him.. he clearly remember someone pushing him and saving him ...  he went in midst of the crowd and shocked to see the person lieng in the pool of blood was nirbhay






Neevan froze in shock - BHAIIIII....

Neevan froze in shock as Nirbhay lieng lifeless on the pool of blood .. what will he do if anything happens to him??




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