TANHAYEE (Book1- Birla Broth...

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This story is of a boy Who is devoid of emotions .. He has nothing in his life apart from hollowness... he d... अधिक

Introducing the characters
Information regarding the book
Prologue
Introducing Another set of Characters
1. Two Different Worlds
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2. Clash of Two Tornado
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3. Soulful voice
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4. Meeting with Elder Brothers
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5. Stolen Moment
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6. Score settled
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7. Shocked
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8. Destiny's game
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9. Unexpected Truth
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10. Taking Responsibility
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11. New reality
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12. Testing Time
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13. Family Equation
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14. First Step towards Understanding
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15. Hidden love and Pain
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16. Taking A Chance
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17. Blending
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18. Acceptance
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19. Protective Brothers
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20. Realisation
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22. Birla Family Dynamics
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23. Manipulation
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24. Hurt Brothers
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25. Ultimate Reality Check

21. Forging a New Beginning

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Scene starts from the beach

The moment neevan collapsed....nirbhay felt like his heart skipped a bit....  if anything happens to that boy ... he will not be able to survive it ....

Nirbhay bend down and clutch neevan tightly to his chest




Nirbhay shocked and panicked he tabbed his cheeks -neevan...

but no response....

the guards had already protected them.. nishant was shocked terrified he saw the way neevan ran to save nirbhay amd the way he collapsed it shook the hell out of him

Divya and all wanted to go to Neevan but guards stopping

Divya furious - Just stop it khanna hume neevan k pass jane do

khanna - Mam please halat yha k thik nhi h... hum sir ko gari tak safely pohchs denge... right now u cannot go there we cannot risk your all safety

nishant panicking - bhai.. neev.. mujhe unk pass jana h... 

nishant just pushed khanna aside and ran to nirbhay not caring anout the constant firing..

All shocked

but nishant rush to nirbhay and hold neevan's hand

nishant panicked - bhai...kia hua neevan ko 

Nirbhay panicking his brain had stopped working the moment neevan fainted.... he checked for his injury but there was none .... but then why was the boy not waking up...









Khanna tensed - Sir...  please gari me bethiye....  the bullet did not hit him....  

nishant angrily - then why is he unconsious.. kesi security h apki.. apke rehte itna bara incident i..

Nirbhay ,- nishant.. this is not the time to discuss all this neevan ko leke jana hoga

nishant teary - ye uth kyu ni raha bhai...

fear was evident in nishant eyes... neevan had unknowingly made a huge place in his heart....

Nirbhay just picked neevan up and take him inside the car... while Nishant was also there....

As neevan was not injured physically so they decided to take him home fast as nirav was stuck in an emergency...  they called Kabir who immidiately told them to bring him home fast...


Birla mansion

Neevan was unconsious... kabir was already there he was checking on neevan the boy was completely senseless his lifeless forme scared the brother







Nirbhay was too shocked to react he clearly remember neevan running towards him and the gunshot....  and neevan falling down it was sheer luck that the gun shot was to the shooter ... not directed towards them... or else it could have been fatal ...

Nishant eyes had tears while jiya hold his hand .. she was herself feeling guilty about all this because it was her plan to go out and enjoy together she didnt have the slightest clue that something like this could happen too ...

Divya saw how much both the kids were upset... and guilty...

Divya went upto them and gently - kuch ni hoga neevan ko....  kabir ne kaha na external injury nhi h

nishant with tears - vo uth kyu ni raha bhabhi..  kyu dara ra h sabko ese... 

jiya with tears - sab meri galty h i shouldnt have

Divya - no baccha kisiki galty nhi h ... esa kuch hoga kisine ni socha tha ...  relax

Nishant just hug divya and let his tears fall - use kuch hoga to nhi na .. bhabhi...  

Divya knew how much nishant is protectiv towards neevan ..   she just hoped for nishant's sake .  neevan should wake up....

while her husband was completely silent as if the incident has sucked the life out of him.. neevan had conquered his heart long back if anything happens nirbhay will be shattered.... 



Nirav came rushing inside he was stuck in an emergency the moment he got the news he just rushed  back to home....

Nirav saw how devastated his brother look ..

Nirav tensed - Bhai....

Nirbhay look at him with absolutely broken look... nirav shocked

Nirav - Bhai.... neev!!??

Nirbhay - kabir is inside checking him... hosh ni aya use abhi tak...

Nirav tensed without asking anything further he entered  inside to see neevan lieng on bed unconsious.. kabir was checking him






nirav tensed - Kabir bhaiya....

Kabir look at him

nirav controlling his panick - how is neevan

Kabir sighs - extreme shock se he unconsious hua h....  but....

Nirav tensed - but..? but what

Kabir tensed - his heartbeat is shallow nir.. thats what is worrying me...

nirav tensed - what?

Nirav checked him himself and ya heartbeats were slow....

Kabir and nirav look at each other and then come out

Nirbhay and nishant rushed to them

nishsnt tensed - bhaiyu... neev kesa h? kab hosh ayega use

Nirbhay controlling his fear -. vo thik h na kabir?? 

Kabir sighs - Behosh severe shock ki wajah se hua hai ... 

Nirbhay could see nirav and kabir both looked  tensed

nirbhay - Agar yhi baat h to tum dono itne Tensed kyu lag re ho.... 

Kabir knew how sensetive nirbhay is regarding his brothers he dont want to scare him by saying anything which they are not sure about may be they are over thinking

Nirbhay raised his voice - why the hell are u gyzz quiet? mera baccha thik h na kabir??

Kabir made him sit - vo thik h nirbhay... its just usk heartbeats thore slowdown hogye hai...





Nirbhay shocked. - whatt

Kabir hold his hand - it can be because of the shock too nirbhay....  hosakta h use hosh aa jay....  

nish tensed - iska kia mtlb h? use hosh to aa jaega na bhaiya

Kabir and nirav look at each other if neevan doesnt gained consiousness and his heartbeat doesnt regularise then they have to admit him in the hospital but they donr want to scare anyone like that.... now...



2 hours passes by

Neevan was still not consious....

nishant was sitting there holding his hand tensed his unconsious form was scaring him within this short span of time they have fordge a very strong bond together and it was hurting him seeing him like this ... 

While nirbhay entered ... nishant look at him with tensed face

Nirbhay gently pulled Nishant to his chest

nishant mumbled - vo thik to hojaega na bhai ..  kab tak ese sota rahega mujhe ni acha lag ra

Nirbhay - uth jaega vo baccha...  kuch ni hua h use nirav ne kaha na thik hojaega vo....  tu niche jaa teri bhabhi bula ri h tujhe .. jiya bhi bht upset h baccha .. go to them ..

Nishant look at neev he dont want to leave him

Nirbhay - mai hu yaha jaa ... 

Nishant nodded and left from there....

Nirbhay caress neevan's face he could vividly remember neevan calling him Bhai   and then the push

Nirbhay caress his face and kissed his forehead - please get up neev... i cant see u like this baccha ....  

while neevan gave him no response...

otherhand

Nirav was tensed - bhaiya i dont think we should waste more time... neevan ko hospital le chlna hoga....  humne abhi tak bhai ko ni bataya ye sochk may be its our over thinking but neevan kafi time se behosh hai....

kabir tensed - yeah .. lets talk with Nirbhay ...  

otherhand

Nirbhay eyes had tears - wake up neev please i know u r hurting a lot par isks mtlb ye to ni na tu is tarah apne family ko pareshan kare.... why did u came there neev! i dont know where i stand in your life ... but u have become my life baccha .... agar tujhe kuch hogya to me khudko maaf ni karpaunga neevan .  uth jaa please .... 

Nirbhay tears drop to neevan's finger while he flinched a bit... 

nirav and Kabir entered to tell nirbhay about neevan

kabir - Nirbhay ...

nirbhay look at him - kabir ... tune to kaha tha neevan ko hosh aa jaega why is he not getting up its been 3 hours almost ...

kabir tensed - Nirbhay actually i think ... neevan ko hume....  hosp..

Neevan groggily woke up - Ummm... mmm....

nirbhay alert n immidiately clutch his hand - neev....

kabir and nirav suprised and rushed...

nirav immidiately check his pulse it was stable ... 

nirbhay eyes had tears - neev... neev baccha ankhe khol.... 

Neevan heard the voice of neevan he fought againsr the darkness that was covering him he needed to wake up... he needed to see if his bhai was ok...that... bullet... that firing.... he saw the bullet firing towards nirbhay

Neevan woke up Shocking - BHAIIIIIII...

Nirbhay n everyone shocked

Neevan panick zone - Bhai.. bhai... vo gun..vo shooter ... bhaiii

Nirbhay tensed and clutch him closer to his heart - sshh sshh baccha me yhi hu

neevsn was panicking - bhai.. bhai ap thik ho apko kahi to ni lgi vo.. vo shooter vo... (he cried)

Nirbhay shocked n just pulled him closer - Neevan.. neevan relax baccha me yahi hu....

Neevan snuggle closer to nirbhay he needed to assure himself that he was fine his brother was fine.... 

Nirav went upto neevan who was just holding on to nirbhay still in that trauma

Nirav hold his hand - neevan...! meri taraf dekh baccha....  bhai bilkul thik hai... dekh tu unk pas he hai...just look at urself ..

his slow calm voice going through his head neevan calmed down a bit..... n look at nirbhay ..

Nirbhay caress his head - yahi hu me baccha ... see

neevan eyes had tears what would have he done if anything would have happened to him neevan placed his head back on his chest n cried he let his tears fall silently.... 

Nirbhay just let him be there if he is comfortable being snuggling to him then he has no problem in that ... 

Kabir sighs in releif the boy was just in. shock there was nothing serious about it for a moment he got scared too but now looking at him he felt releifed nirav look at kabir and both were thinking the same and sighing......

Neevan was holding on to nirbhay as if his life depend on him so kabir just smiled n left may be the boy is realising the importance of nirbhay in his life... finally both the brothers were getting there moments ... n no one should disturb them..

All left giving them there moment...

Neevan just couldnot get that image out from his head that a shooter was trying to  kill his bhai...

Nirbhay could understand he was terrified neevan had never experienced such things so its natural for him to React that way

Nirbhay - Neevan...

Neevan scared voice - K..kaun tha vo log bhai .. kyu? kyu marna chahte tha vo apko... vo guns vo shoot it was so...so...  scary i .. (his voice hitched)

Nirbhay immidiately handed him a glass of water but neevan was just not ready to leave him

Nirbhay coaxed him to have some water neevan had it ... his hands were shivering nirbhay fed him gently ...

nirbhay was giving him ample of time he firsr needed the boy to calm down.    

Nishant and divya came rushing ..   when they heard neevan gain consiousness

Divya went upto him .. nirbhay moved back to give her space but neevan was just not ready to leave nirbhay he was fearing that if he dont hold nirbhay tightly he will vanish away .... the feat of loosing him was overpowering him

Divya hug him tightly and cried - kitna dara dia baccha....  kyu gaye tum waha..  haan? agar kuch hojata to..

neevan have nothing to defend himself and right now he was scared too divya understood it so she didnot push further

Divya hug him again - never do that again baccha .  never scare us like that . humari jaan nikal di tune baccha

Nishant angrily - ise bolk koi fayda ni h bhabhi ise to superman bnne ka shok h na.... isliye aa gya bich me

neevan flinched but didnot say anything

nishant angrily. - were u completely out of your mind neevan!!! kia sochk gya tu... waha ...  khudko kia smjta u superman ya batman??

Neevan quiet

nishant raised his voice - Answer me dammit whey the hell u...

neevan flinched but quiet nirbhay stopped nishant

nirbhay - nishu... not now

Nishan tens - ye ap bol re ho bhai.. pichle tin ghnte se humari jaan atki pari thi ye ankhe ni khol ra tha ... or me puchu bhi nhi ..  yehi galty me karta to ap jane dete mujhe? nhi na....

Nirbhay - har chiz ka ek sahi wakt hota h nishant..  not now... (eyed him)

nishant eyes had tears he just left from there because he knew if he stay there he will blast on neev.... he just couldn't accept it that neevan has put his life on danger .. in his concern he didnit see the otherside of the coin that neevan did not care about his life to jump into save there bhai... everyone was so high on emotions that they were missing out the important thing ...

Nirbhay sighs and about to go out of the room to make some soup for neev

neevan clutch his hand tensed - dont go

nirbhay shocked while divya too....

Neevan terrified - please dont go bhai please .. bahar vo log pta ni .. ap kahi mat jao

Nirbhsy immidiately sat beside neevan n neevan just put his head on his chest he just hold on to him as tightly as he can so that nirbhsy shouldnot go

nirbhay tensed - Kahi ni jaa ra me baccha...  me yhi hu....  i was just going to bring something for u

neevan shook his head - i dont need anything ap bas yhi raho please ..

Fear was driving neevan paranoid ..  divya was concern but she was happy at the same time because the love which was hidden deep down was coming out ...  neevan's feeling was coming out ... 

Divya - tum ruko nirbhay... me kuch leke aty hu neevan k liye

Nirbhay nodded because he cannot let go of neevan now .. 

Neevan just closed his eyes the heartbeats of nirbhay was giving him assurance that his bhai was fine ....


Time passes

Kabir - Nirav...neevan is fine bas bht dara hua h... jo kuch bhi hua it created an impact in his mind he had never faced such things to uska reaction natural h ...  just raat ko ekbar uska bp check karlena

nirav tensed but nodded he was also terrified...

kabir hold his hand - thik h vo nir.. bharosa nhi h mujhpar? uske heart rates abhi normal h fir bhi agar tumhe koi doubts h we can go for an ECG

Nirav - vo baat ni h bhaiya i know he is fine its just the way he put himself at risk ..  i just cannot make myself come interm with the fact that he took such a huge risk

kabir - nir i know u all are very high on emotion tum sab ka dar mujhe samaj ata h .... lekin jo me dekh ra hu vo tumlog ni dekh paa re

nirav look at him

kabir - finally that boy has opened himself did u saw the way he was holding on to nirbhay did u realise he called him bhai ... is hadse me ek achi chiz ye hui h ki neevan k dar ne uske dil me jo daba hua pyaar tha vo jo khudko rok ra tha vo  resentment chla gya h he is accepting nirbhay already... 

Nirav realised that kabir was stating the fact but the brother in him couldnot just digest that he took such a big risk

kabir - tere feeling samaj ra hu me nir... agar esa kuch krish ne kia hota i dont even know what i have done ... but hume smjna hoga neevan is new to all these use nhi pata how things work ... use ni smj aya hoga ki security thi  nirbhay ko kuch ni hota he just reacted on impulse ...n yahi to wakt h jaha tumlog use sikha sakte ho smjha skte ho... taki future me vo khudko prepare kar sake.... 

Nirav palmed his face and nodded

kabir smile - chalta hu me  dont worry everything is under control now ... koi zarurat ho to call me

nirav - ap bhai se ni miloge ekbar

kabir smile - Aj un dono bhaio ko ek sath samay bitane do bht mushkil se pass aye h i dont want ro intrude in that place ....  

nirav nodded while kabir left ...  


Time passes

Neevan was feeling much better..

nirbhay gently - feeling better now?

neevan nodded ..

nirbhay took the soup and about to fed him neevan cringed seeing the soup

nirbhay - Dont make that face.... pio chup chap

Neevan could feel a pinch of anger in his voice

Neevan look at him nirbhay gave him a dead serious look

neevan - Aap gussa ho mujhpe? .

nirbhay - nhi hona chahiye?

neevan taken aback that was direct ..

Nirbhay - jo harkat tumne ki h na neevan isk liye u should be punished...!

neevan tensed - vo log marne wale tha apko ...

nirbhay sighs he put the soup bowl aside they needed to talk first

nirbhay - Vo log kuch ni karpate security was already there ... koi mera bal bhi baka ni karpata but tumne jo kia vo sheer stupidity thi....  how could u run away like that ..   u could have got shot!

neevan teary - then what do u expect me to do .  vo nere bhai pe goli chla re h or me dekhu khara hoke

nirbhay numb for the first time he was accepting the relation and stating *mere bhai*

neevan - Apko me stupid lag sakta hu but i don't care...  i cannot sit back n see someone hurting you...

that brought nirbhay back into senses ... n his words scared him

nirbhay made him look up - u will not ever put your life at risk neevan ..! and i mean it

neevan - par vo gunde

nirbhay - they have been taken care of... with fame there comes lot of negativity.... i m a public figure... we have lot of business rival jo ese attacks karwate h .. thats why itni security rehty h birlas have a list of enemies this security are not for show off

neevan now realised why was the security so important he was actually thinking it was for show off

Nirbhay - i hope you are understanding my point

neevan tensed but nodded

nirbhay could see the fear in his eyes still he hugged him - i will be fine neev kuch ni hoga mujhe kbhi ...

Neevan look at him with tears - promise? 

Nirbhay startled for the first time neevan was showing an actual side of a kid... he behave so maturely sometime he forgt that he is actually a kid of 16 years who is terrified

Nirbhay cub his face and kissed his head - pakka promise ....

neevan smiled he love all the attention he was getting from nirbhay... he never thought he will get so much love from that person whom he hated all his life

Nirbhay - Now have this soup ... Nishant or nirav ka gussa jhelne k liye energy ki zarurat hogi tumhe

neevan shocked

nirbhay - what? the stunt y pulled do u think they will let u go that easily

neevan tensed - Ap smjha do unhe....

nirbhay - bilkul nhi... mai kyu smjhau... fight ur own battles... 

neevan  tensed -par ap to smjte ho na meine jo kia vo kyu kia.... 

Nirbhay - me smjta nhi hu.. i m just letting this go... because this was your first time agli bar agar esa kia to tange tork hath pe de dunga smjha

Neevan shocked n suprised

nirbhay - Ajtak bhai na mana tha na he bhai hone ka haq dia to meine kuch ni bola... par ab jb bhai mana h to rishte bhi wese he nibhayi jaenge... teri jgh nishant hota h to u  have no idea what i would have done...

neevan look away..

nirbhay gave him soup - chalo ab muh kholo..  issw pehle ki volcano or tsunami ek sath hit kare ...

neevan - yr ap dara kyu re ho.... vo dono kuch ni karenge they love me

nirbhay bite his smile and said nothing but neevan knew that smile was dangerous god knows what is store for him...

Time passes

Nirbhay had strictly told neevan  to be in his bed but he was neevan will he listen

Neevan thinks - bhai to keh re tha bhaiyu or dada bht bhuchal karne wale h but vo log to aye he ni.... 

Neevan thought to check on them once he step down of the bed and about to Walk out he turned and Stilled to see Nirav standing there

Neevan shocked - Bhaiyu

Nirav angrily made him Sit on his bed - kisiki baat na sunne ki kasam khayi h tune neev ...

neev flinched

nirav angrily - tujhe bhai ne bola na not to step out fir bhi tu wohi kar ra h i mean what the hell is your problem....! Kisiki sunni ni h ya humari sunni ni h

Neevan - bhaiyu me

nirav angrily - Shut up!

neevan flinched

nirav - what do u think you were doing neevan? kia sochk tu is tarah se bhaga? how on earth you could be so casual about your life you.....

Neevan just hug nirav and nir stilled he dont know what just happened

Neevan mumbling -  sorry bhaiyu...  meine bht pareshan kardia na sabko...  i m really sorry ...

nirav stuck now what should he do when neevan was being so cute

Neevan - mai bht dar gya tha bhaiyu...  agar bhai ko vo goli lag jaty to..?

nirav break the hug and look at him - aur agar tujhe lag jaty to?

neevan look down

nirav - bhai ki zindagi ki value h lekin khudki zindagi ki nhi?

Neevan dont know what to reply there

nirav - tujhe andaza ni hoga neev... lekin the moment u stepped in our life you became an integral part of our life .. we cannot loose you....

Neevan sighs

nirav - me ekbar apne life me is dard se guzar chuka hu dubara ni bardash karpaunga

Neevan taken aback... nirav realised what he just said and immidiately regretted

neevan - Ap Mr.birla ki baat kar re ho (there father)

nirav sadly smiled there father was never there father for whom they could grief for

Nirav look at his watch - tere medicine ka wakt ho ra h.... 

nirav took out the medicine while neevan knew he was diverting the topic

neevan - Aap kuch chupa re ho na mujhse....

Nirav shot him a glare neevan immidiately knew that was a wrong question to ask

Nirav gave him the pills and neevan took it silently

nirav - kisi apne ko khone ka dukh kia hota h ... i guess vo tujhse behtar koi ni janta.....  jo chla jata h vo to lautke ni ata lekin jo reh jate h unk liye jina kitna difficult hota h mujhe ni lagta ye mujhe batane ki zarurat  h...  dont give us that pain neevan.. we will be the last person to take it...!

Neevan gasped

nirav - Tu humsre zindagi me ane se pehle Tak shayed tere pas khudki zindagi ki koi value ni thi... lekin ab honi chahiye... kyuki teri zindagi k sath humari zindagi bhi juri hui h ..!

neevan eyes had tears his bhai had also told the same thing the context was bit different but the meaning was same... they all are different yet so similar.... each and every day he is just falling more and more deeply love with the family ... the walls which he has created so strongly they have cracked it successfully.... he thought Birlas could never effect him and now these Birla had become his identity.... 

Nirav saw the tears he wiped his tears

nirav - acha hogya tujhe rulane k liye ni kuch nhi bola meine just take your health seriously Neev...  warna...

Neevan - warna

nirav - u dont want to see the doctor side of me trust me thats a very bad one...

Neevan - r u threatening me 

Nirav - No.. warning you.. no compromise with your  health..... warna ye jo sare tablets h usko injection me convert kardunga

neevan look away - i m. not scared of injection

nirav - really? dekhu to zara chehra

neevan just threw the pillow at him everone of them could read his face so easily ..  how? he love it but he hates it too sometime ...  

Nirav chuckled and hug him neevan stayed there... while nirav was trying to assure himself that his brother was safe nothing had happened. 

while neevan look at door for nishant he had not come yet....

nirav saw his eyes were searching for nish

nirav - Aajaega vo tujhe vo jab tak khudse ni jharleta usko chan ni ayega... so dont worry

neevan pouts - subsh to kitna jhar dia ab or bhi baki h kia

nirav - that was not even 5% .. bhai ne roklia tha .. nishu is hell protectiv about everyone neev... jitna asani se vo apnaleta h utna he sensetive bhi h...  agar kuch bole to sunlena... bht dar gya tha vo

neevan smiled once nishant said the same thing about nirav... now nirav was doing the same ...  they are so cute....


Jiya entered to meet neevan who was resting

Jiya sat beside neev.. and neev opened his eyes and gave a smile

jiya sadly - abhi kese ho neev

neev could sense her sadness - kia hua Di... 

jiya sadly - i m sorry neev

neev baffled...

jiya - bhaiya mana bhi kar re tha....  fir bhi meine zid ki bahar jane ki or ye sab hogya

neevan - are apki kia galty h apko thori pata tha esa kuch hojaega or vo to me he tha jo bhag gya bhai k pass or ye sab hogya

that was the wrong thing to say jiya's eyes immidiately glinted with anger

jiya angrily - exactly! kyu bhage tum... us taraf pagal ho kia...dimag vimag h ya? fit kara parega

Neevan shocked while jiya hit him on his shoulder

jiya angrily - ek stupid birla brother kam tha kia is ghar me jo tum bhi aa gye oh god what m i going to do with u

Neevan - are aree lag ri h mujhe

jiya - lag ri h k bacche aj jo tum hum sabko heart attack dene wale tha uska socha? or bhaiyaa unki to jaan he nikal gayi thi....  kitna dar gye tha vo ese koi darata h apne bare bhai ko!!

neevan annoyed - dekho Jiyaaa....

jiya twist his ears neevan scrwam in pain - aah aahh ouch mere kan choro choro are pagal ladki

jiya - kia kaha tha meine call me Di...! kia di... its very simple D and I .. DI...

Neevan - are choro yr

jiya twisted more

neevan - aah acha acha Di choro

jiya left and proudly smile - ab aya na line pe baby boo...

Neevan shot her a glare

jiya - ese ankh dikhata h apne di ko? tujhse pure 2 saal bari hu

neevan- subah to bol ri thi der saal  ab bol ri ho 2 saal pehle ap decide karlo der ya do

Jiya - are jo bhi ho...  bari to hu na that's the point to Di to. me anyways rehty he hu...

neevan frowns she was a crack piece while jiya hug him sideways  while neevan startled

jiya - tujhe pta h tu kitna cute hai... and u r the first person to call me Di... to u will be always special to me...

neevan look at her he could feel the love in her voice

jiya - isliye baby boo age kabhi bhi  apne life ko risk kia na to bht mar paregi smjha....

neevan just smiled while jiya hug him neevan smiled he understood that she has a very big heart today he got one more relation he was getting a clear picture why everyone love her so much she was pure love he has gotten a sister inform of her...  and he will enjoy that bond as well...

Jiya saw his dull face - kia hogya baby boo itna upset kyu ho

neevan - vo dada abbi tak ni aye mujhse baat karne...

jiya - are vo...

That is when Nishant entered neevan look at him happily

Nishant ignored neev - jigs chal...  tujhe ghar drop karna h tere ghar se call aya tha

Neevan sad nishant was not even lookinh at him

jiya - ohh haa ghar me sab wait kar re honge.... i need to rush.... bye baby boo

Neev sadly nodded jiya sighs the boy look extremely upset and he needed his dada

jiya - nish me chali jaunga driver h na tu ruk yaha ...

nish - mai kyu ruku

jiya - are i mean mujhe bakery bhi jana h ghar me sabk liye cake lana h to mujhe wakt lgega tu ruk

nish - ha to thik h mai...

jiya - tu kia mujje bacchi smjta hai...! i can go nish just relax

before Nishant could react jiya hurried away winking at neev.. neev smiled for her help..  atleast he can talk with his dada

Nishant sighs he was about to walk out of the room

Neev - dada...

nish stop but didnt said anything

neev sadly - baat ni karoge ?

nishant - no... mujhe koi baat ni karni tujhse... 

neevan sighs he knew nishsnt will not talk but he needed to stop him

neevan scream in pain - Aahh...

nishant shocked and rushed to him panicked - kia hua...  dard ho ra h?

Neevan cutely nodded

nishant tensed - kaha? are pehle batana chahiye na kia tu.. bhi kaha dard ho ra h

neevan pointed at his heart - yaha...  

nishant baffled...

neevan - Aap baat kyu ni kar re ho mere sath dada...

Nishant look away..

neevan - me kabse wait kar ra tha apka... ap aye he ni

Nishant - Kyu au.. me? nhi au kyu bata... tu to khudko pta ni superman batman pta ni kia kia smjta h to me kyu au

neevan sighs - mujhe ni pata tha itna kuch dada....  i just saw someone pointing gun towards bhai... or mujhse raha ni gya... me dar gya tha i..

nish hit his head neevan look at him

nish angrily - dar gya tha samaj ata h lekin istarah koi bhagta h? pta h tune sabko kitna dara dia... sab vo... (his voice still shivered thinking how he went unconsious )

nish - chor kia baat karu ... i need to go ..

saying nishant was about to go neevan hold his hand - acha thik h baba sorry bol to ra hu itna bhi kia gussa h... humesha mujhe rulake he apko chan milta h

Nishant look at him annoyed and hit him hard with a pillow .. neevan - are are kia kar re ho... lg ri h..

Nishant - ha to lage isiliye mar ra hu...  taki agli baar ese stupidity karne se phle yaad rahe tujhe ..

neevan let him hit him because he knew nishant will  come along after hitting fr few minutes nishant finally let the pillow away..

neevan - hua apka gussa khtm..

nishant look away.. neevan hug him - acha sorry bol ra hu na me . age se ni hoga esa... itna bhao khana bhi achi baat ni h ... chota hu na me

Nishant annoyed - ye kia logic h .. tujhe koi idea h bhai or bhaiyu mujhse kitna papad belwate h jab me koi kand karta hu

Neevan shook his head

nishant sighs -  ha to? me to fr bhi kuch ni karta... vo kia h na nishant birla ka man kuch zyada he bara h... huh

neevan - wao itna mara itna kuta or ab kehte ho dil bara h mtlb har jgh aoko he credit lena h na?

Nishant - lgta h itne se man ni bhara tera.... teri to and

he started hitting again.. neevan defended himself white feathers flew they did not realise they were actually enjoying it... but both of them had sorted things out that was clear .....   


At night

Neevan was trying to sleep but the moment he closed his eyes those shooting scene come infront...

neevan tens up how will he sleep like this? he was about to get up that is when he saw Nishant coming with his pillows blanket and laptop...

Nishant placed all that in his bed ... neevan gave him a look

nishant - what ... shift?

neevan - aj bhi apka AC kharab h?

nishant - Nahi aj lights kharab h... tu chinta mat kar bhai thik kara denge .. .. tu shift kar

neevan shook his head he has too much ego to accept that he cares... 

Nishant - chal so jaa....  or mera charming face zyada dekhne ki zarurat ni h nazar lag jaegi...

Neevan - huh.. apse bara self obsessed meine zindagi me kahi ni dekha

nishant proudly - well i would take that as an complement...

Neevan annoyed and slept while nishant sighs that he slept he knew neevan will be disturbed he is too disturbed to Sleep well ...

Neevan was about to sleep that is when Nirav came with his pillow

neevan shock - Apko kia hua

nirav - Uhh mere room ka  AC ni chal ra h.. so thought to come over here will u mind boys ..

Nishant control his smile and look here and there while neevan highly annoyed they will just not accept it great

Nishant - are bed bht bara h...    bhaiyu aa jao jao maza aa jaega..

nirav smiled and entered between them... neevan sighs... they were talking thar is when neevan saw nirbhay Lookinh at them from the door had a smile

Nirbhay saw them enjoying he was worried about neevan... but seeing these two with him he was rest assured...  he was about to go back...

neevan rush to him and hold his hand

nirbhay startled

neevan - Ap bhi yahi so jao na aj

Nirbhay suprise

neevan - bed kafi bara h

nishant - Ha bhai aa jao na wese he apne sare beds Jumbo king size banaye h... isme hum charo ek sath so sakte h neev tujhe pta h pehle bhi hum tino ek sath sote tha bhai k shadi se pehle... lekin ab to bhai huye paraye

Nirav teased - dushman hua zamana....  

nirbhay - really gyss? tum dono ko abhi ye karna h

nishant and nirav highfived

Nishu - neev rehne de yr.. aa ja hum tino masti marenge ... bhai ko jne de

neevan wanted nirbhay with him but he knew he has some other priorities he is a husband just not brother... he could not complain about it .  as he was not with them earliar.

neevan turned to go nirbhay entered and clised the door

neevan suprised

nirbhay - das minute h tum dono k pas chup chap soye nhi to  esi mar paregi na dono ko

Nirav annoyed - dono? like really bhai... ab hum tin h...ap neev ko kyu ni bolte

Nirbhay - vo mera acha baccha h tum bandaro k chakkar me i cant let him get spoiled...

Nishsnt eyes widen - what the!!!

neevan smiled while nirbhay take him to the bed and four brothers slept holding on to each other .. Forging a new begining together.....



But who knows what is coming next in there life ..  to make there life upside down.... 




Mumbai airport

It was raining like cats and dogs.... Anamika waited outside the airport as a car came she hoped in




Anamika - itna time kyu lagaya Rajvir i was waiting for you from last 3 hours

Rajvir - Neevan se baat hui?

Anamika frustrated - I cant rajvir try to understand Nirbhay mujhe us tak pohochne ni dega

Rajvir - vo ladka mujhe chahiye Anamika...! and u know why... !

Anamika look at him and nodded she needed neevan at any cost....   and for that if she had to seperate him from his brothers ..  she will...





Precap :- Spoiler Alert to be posted in a while

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