TANHAYEE (Book1- Birla Broth...

By Taani10

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This story is of a boy Who is devoid of emotions .. He has nothing in his life apart from hollowness... he d... More

Introducing the characters
Information regarding the book
Prologue
Introducing Another set of Characters
1. Two Different Worlds
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2. Clash of Two Tornado
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3. Soulful voice
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4. Meeting with Elder Brothers
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5. Stolen Moment
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6. Score settled
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7. Shocked
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8. Destiny's game
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9. Unexpected Truth
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10. Taking Responsibility
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12. Testing Time
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13. Family Equation
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14. First Step towards Understanding
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15. Hidden love and Pain
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16. Taking A Chance
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17. Blending
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18. Acceptance
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19. Protective Brothers
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20. Realisation
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21. Forging a New Beginning
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22. Birla Family Dynamics
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23. Manipulation
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24. Hurt Brothers
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25. Ultimate Reality Check

11. New reality

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In Dehradoon

Dhir was shocked and crying - ye sab ap kia bol re h mamaji

Satish - Jo keh ra hu thik keh ra hu

Dhir with tears - Neevan mera bestfriend h mamaji... usk itne bure wakt pe ap mujhe usk pass bhi nhi jaane de re ho mujhe ghar se bhi ni nikalne de re.... or ab ap keh ro ho ki mai Mumbai bhi ni jaa sakta

mamaji angrily - Haa nahi jaa sakte ..

Dhir flinched by the harshness of his voice

mamaji - Yaha pe ache ache colleges hai...  yaha tumhara admission krwa dia jaega ..

Dhir eyes had tears mumbai was the only source he could see his brother  may be je could never reveale his identity to them but atleast he could meet his bhaiyu in college and he can see his bhai from far ...

Dev with tears - Par kyu mamaji.. mai mumbai wapas kyu ni jaa sakta

mamaji angrily - Tujhe samaj ni ata... vo sheher me tu kisk sath rahega akele? neevan to apni family k sath jaa ra h.. mumbai

Dhir suprised he was glad neevan agreed whatever may be the reason atleast he will be stayibg with his family now... he will get his identity now ....

Dhir weeping his tears - Neevan agar usk bhaio k sath rehne wala h ye to acchi baat h na mamaji

mamaji angrily - usk liye achi baat h but tere liye nhi... wese bhi us sheher me akele to hum tujhe chorenge nhi...

Dhir - mamaji i have got the scholarship mujhe waha k hostel me bhi stay mil jaega apko chinta karne ki zarurat ni hogi but please dont stop me.. mujhe mumbai jana h mamaji please

mamaji  angrily - Enough!!!! ek bar keh dia na tu kahi nahi jaega bas nhi jaega!!

Dhir cried - please mamaji don't do this us college me padna mera sapna hai...  or neev . neev bhi chala jaega to me kisk sath rahunga...please mamaji

Mamaji angrily - esw nhi manega na tu? us neevan k sath rehte rehte tu bhi usi ki tarah bnta jaa ra h Ziddi ..tujje to mai.....  

Mamaji was about to slap him.... dhir closed his eyes to get the hit but he felt nothing.... he look up and froze in shock that was Devansh Agnihotri standing there holding his mamaji's hand...

Mamaji shocked - D..dev...???


In Basu Bhawan...

Neevan was staring at Nani's picture from past  two hours ... he dont want to speak to anyone don't want to talk anything ...

Nishant saw him he was really confused to see the sight of neevan... that boy whom he knew never stayed quiet now but from past 2 hours he was just being gazing at the picture ... he dont know what to tell to him.. they need to leave now but neevan is being just like this ..

Nirbhay saw nishant plight and went upto him

nishant look st him - bhai... hume to niklna h na but ye to....

nirbhay saw how neevan is just sitting lifeless...

Nirbhay - tu jaa me dekhta hu... 

nishant nodded n left....

Nirbhay entered to find him staring at the picture of nani lifelessly as if he just want to be in that moment

Nirbhay sat beside him but there was no reaction from  his side as if the boy was not in this zone only

Nirbhay tab him gently neevan startled and it bring him out from his lost world

Nirbhay - Taiyyar hojao hume nikalna h

Neevan startled - Kaha?

Nirbhay look at him does the boy not know

Nirbhay - ghar..

Neevan lost - Kiske ghar? 

That question painned nirbhay so much... he was asking him which home? But he cant expect anything from a boy who has been abondoned all his life ...

Nirbhay sighs - apne ghar tumhara apna ghar...

Neevan look away - mera ghar ye h.... 

Nirbhay shocked

nirbhay - Neev... baccha... ye tum

Neevan cuts him - Neevan...

nirbhay startled

Neevan with emotionless eyes - Mera naam neevan hai... mujhe nani k elawa or koi us nam se ni bulata....  and i dont even want that

The message was clear you cannot call me that you dont have that right he did not say it out loud but nirbhay had understood it enough he gulped his hurt....   

Nirbhay sighs - Fine...  neevan...  we need to start in an hour neevan... taiyyar hojao hume Mumbai Jana h

Neevan stiff - mujhe kahi nhi jana...

nirbhay look at him stunned

Neevan - Mai yahi rahunga ye mera ghar hai...  

Nirbhay - vo bhi tumhara ghar h neevan

neevan agitated - Aap log Nani k kehne pe Yaha aye unk akhri iccha ka samman kia i m very greatful for that but ab please aplog chale jaite

nirbhay shocked







neevan - mujhe mere hal pe chordijiye please

neevan was not crying but his tone voicing out only pain...

Nirbhay sat beside him - Dekho neevan i dont know what is your problem with us... hum tumhari family h ..

neevan look away the world familu comes to him like a slap on his face... nirbhsy noticed the stiffness in his body language

Nirbhay - tumhe humare sath he chalna hoga

neevan shocked - Are u trying to force your deceision on me 

Nirbhay - U have given me no other choices

Neevan got up angry and agitated - Dekhiye Mr Birla ye apka ghar nhi h ye mera ghar h mere nani ka ghar i m thankful for whatever u did but ab ap please chale jaiye!!






Nirbhay shocked for the first time he was reacting but too in this way he could see a clear hate in his eyes.. what did he do to get so much of hate

Neevan - mujhe apk sath kahi ni jana .. kahi nahi... 

Seeing his loud voice divya and Nirav came rushing ... 

Nirbhay was too shocked to react.. while neevan was agitated

Neevan - mujhe kahi nhi jana.. kahi nhi jna apke pass!! kahi bhi nhi ..

saying he rushed out from there.....   while nirbhay stood shocked and numb

Nirav went to nirbhay and hold him - bhai...

Nirbhay shocked confuse - he.. hates us nir.

nirav taken a back

nirbhay - i have seen it in his eyes i...

divya -its too early to judge anything nirbhay...  vo baccha emotionally disturbed hai... hume usk sath pyaar or patience se deal karna hoga ... 






Nirbhay look at her and nodded theres no way he is giving up on him but the hate which he saw in his eyes for him is really hurtful....

Divya went to go and see the boy... he was sitting in a corner near window pane in a dark room as if he just want to lost himself in the darkness.....

Neev gaze at Nani's picture with tears - how could u do this to me nani...  ? ap janty thi na mera apke siva koi nhi hai ... 

Divya came and sat beside her - Tumhare pass ek bhara pura pariwar h neev....

Neevan stiff - Neevan it is Mrs Birla!

divya corrected - Bhabhi..

neevan look at her startled

Divya - Bhabhi hu me tumhari neevan...  and i would want you to call me by that name

neevan shocked for the first time someone is showing her right to him

Neevan - meri koi bhabhi nhi h

Divya - Agar tumhare keh dene se sab kuch hojata to shayed aj hum yaha nhi hote na neev... 

Neev look away tears were forming in his eyes he dont know how to make her understand

Divya cub his face and turned him the boy looked absolutely vulnerable - Ghar chalo neev apne ghar... 

Neev with tears - ye mera ghar hai

nirav entered and sat beside him - nhi neevan. tumhara ghar Mumbai me hai... humare sath humarw bich

Neevan joined his hands - dekhiye please me aplogo se hath jorta hu ..  please chalw jaiyee aplog....  please mujhe apne hal pe chordijiye... 





Nirav and Divya's heart went out for the boy .. nirav wish he could hug the boy and tell him that he is not alone but he has created such a big wall against him that its tough to go through it

Divya went up to him neevan was broken to drained out to fight

Divya - Neevan...  i know jo kuch bhi hua usk baad tumhare liye sabkuch kitna difficult ho ra hoga  par .. tum apne gam me apni nani ki akhri baate bhi yaad ni rakhoge?

Neevan look at her numb

Divya - yaad h na unhone tumsw kia bola tha?

*Tujhe apne bhaiyo k sath rehna h neev apni nani ki ye akhri baat manega na beta*

Divya knew she had to play the emotional card or else it wont be easy to convince him

Divya - humarw liye na sahi.. apne nani k liye unki akhri iccha ka samman karne he chal do....   please

Neevan quiet .. divya tensed she look at nirav

Nirav - Neevan... koi tumhe kisi chiz k liye force ni karega.. just come with us ...   nani k liye please...

neevan sighs and closed his eyes his nani knew how much he hated them.. he dont want to be a part of that family then why did she told him to do something like that... why did she put her trust so much on the birla family...

Divya sighs neevan's silenc told her many thing ..

Divya - gari nikalo nir..  neevan chalega humare sath

nirav sighs in releif he turned to see nirbhsy standing there he was both glad and happy atleast neevan trusted his wife somewhere down the lane ...    but it doesn't mean that his Apprehensive behaviour hurt him any less...

Scene Changes To Rathod villa

Satish shocked to see Devansh there how did he come here.... 

Satish - Devansh??

Devansh angrily - ji ... you did not expect me here do you

Satish shocked and look at dhir who was equally shocked by seeing him

satish - Devansh tum yaha?? tum yaha kese i mean kyu

he was sweating

Dev - Aplog to udaipur shift hogye tha na? to yaha kese??

Dhir confused what was he saying they have never been to udaipur....

Dhir - mamaji ye

satish cuts him - Dhir apne kamre me jao...

Dhir shocked - but

satish angrily - tumne suna nhi meine kia kaha jao apne kamre me warna...

Dev angrily - AwaZ.. niche... Mr Rathod! ek bacche se ap kis tarah baat kar re h

Dhir look at him with moist eyes...... 

dev look at dhir and gently - tum andar jao... 

Dhir scared to go..

dev hold his hand - Andar jao thori der me.. mai khud tumsw milunga

Dhir look at him with hopeful eyes.. dev numb those honey brown doe eyes could melt anyone how could someone behave so harsh with that boy...

Dhir gently left from there

Dev turned and glared at Mr Rathod - vo ladka kon h Mr Rathod

Satish shocked and tensed - k..koi nhi h esa koi bhi nhi jise tum jante ho.... 

Dev sighs - mai apse akhri baar puch ra hu ...  Mr Rathod .. vo ladka kon h?? warna child abuse k case me itni buri tarah se phasaunga ki puri zindagi jail me he katni par jaegi.... Devansh Agnihotri kon h.... ap bht achi tarah se jante h

Satish tensed Devansh was brilliant lawyer ... he had hardly lost any case  it wont even take him a second to ruin anyone .. in this case he was the culprit here

Satish - D..hir.. hai

Devansh numb - Dhiraj.??,

Satish sighs and nodded Devansh shocked and numb...  

***** Flashback *****

15 years ago his mother and father were Screaming at each other. with there lungs out 

Sanyukta Agnihotri and Darsh Agnihotri are the name of Dev's parents

Darsh agitated tensed - Sanyukta samajne ki koshish karo

Sanyukta angrily - kia sunu me darsh? ab sunne ko baki kia reh gya h....  apne jo kia hai mere sath usk baad ap ummid bhi kese kar sakte h ki mai apko maafi dungi

Darsh sighs - sanyukta please

Sanyukta cried - No Darsh.. ab apne sare hade par kardi hai mai dhruv or Dev ko leke isi wakt ghar chork jaa ri hu

darsh shocked - es mat kaho Sanyukta please

sanyukta - Agar ap sachme chahte hai ki humara ye pariwar tutne se Bach jay to apko us ladke ko Is ghar me lene ki zid chorni hogi

Darsh - he is hardly one year sanyukta.. usk maa bhi nhi h .... kisk bharose choru me use

sanyukya angrily - to hume chordijiye...!

darsh shovked

sanyukta -shayrd ap faisla kar ni paa re hai... thik hai...  mai he kardety hu apk liye...  me jaa ri hu

Darsh stop her - ruko sanyukta

sanyukta seething in anger...

Darsh - tumhe kahi jane ki zarurat ni h.... vo baccha meri zinmedari hai.....  mai use na rishte tor sakta hu na he use chor sakta hu....   isliye me jaa ra hu use lekar dehradoon..

sanyukta shocked - Ap us bacche k liye hume chorne ko taiyyar ho? dev look upto you as a role model use bhi ap?

Darsh - tumhare pas sabkuch h sanyukta ... dhir k pas mere elawa kuch bhi nhi h... 

Darsh turned to go he saw Dev standing there hurt ... 

Darsh - beta i..

Dev step back the person who hurted his mother like that cannot be his father

Darsh - beta mai jnta hu tu mujhe kbhi maaf ni karega lekin ummid karta hu kisi na kisidin tu mujhe smjhega ki meine ye deceision kyu lia mai dhir ko nhi chor sakta beta vo bht chota h

Dev look away... that is when driver came with one year old dhir

driver - sir ye baccha bht ro ra tha gari me sambhl he ni raha

Dev saw a one year old kid who was gaxing at hin with innocent doe eyes when dev look at him he gave him. a toothy grin    aww that pure smile could melt anyone

Dhir hold his finger and smiled dev heart swell up he wish he could pick up that bany

sanyukta furious - ye manhus mere ghar k andar kia kar ra h

dhir scared and hug darsh... 

dev - maa... baccha dar ea h

sanyukta disgusted - tujhe is bacche ki takliff dikh ri h apne maa ki nhi??

dev sighs - esa ni h maa...     bas vo

darsh - hume niklna chahiye...

dhir sadly look at dev... while dev knew this relation was not meant to be.....



that night was a stormy night... and the most dreadful thing happened...

Darsh car met with an. terrible accident ...the news shatterrd everyone...

Agnihotris rushed to Hospital darsh was dead

deb tens and panick - us gari me to dhir bhi tha .. mumma dhir?? kaha h..

sanyukta cried - bas kar dev... tujhe dikhati ni de ra vo baccha kitna manhus h.... janam leta apne maa ko kha gya or ab tere pitah ko bhi

Dev agitatd - mas vo bas ek saal ka ek baacha h .. abhi papa bhi nhi h kaha h vo thik to hai.. na

satish rathod came - Gari bht buri tarah se khayi me gir gyi thi... humara dhir bhi ni bacha...  

satish rathod teary - humne socha bin maa k bacche ko pitah ka pyar to milega darsh ji zimmedari uthane ko taiyyar tha... lekin uski kismt itni kharab tbi

Dev eyes had tears that was a baby his brother who was hardly one year old... he wished he could have taken him once .. but he couldnot even do that ..    Destiny was too cruel...

*********** Flashback ends ***********

Dev shocked - vo dhiraj.. h . ? humara dhir..??

satish nodded

dev shocked n furious he clutch his collar and pushed him to the wall - youu bloody.... how dare you lie to us!!! u told us that he is no more!!! why. why dammit why

satish shocked - Hums esa karne ko sanyukta ji ne bola tha

dev freeze in shock - whatt

satish - unhe pta tha tum apne papa ki zimmedari uthane se piche ni hatoge or vo kisibhi halat me dhir ko apnana ni chahty thi isiliye unhone humse sauda kia .. dhir ka sauda

dev shocked

satish - unhone kaha  agar hum dhir ki zimmedari uthaye to vo har mahine hume ache khase paisr bhijwangi jisse humari zindagi aramse kat jay or yhi krty ayi h

Dev shatterrd - to iska mtlb mumma jo har saal dehradoon aty h vo

satish - humse milne aty h... dhir ka bhi pta tha unhone galty se meine use MUMBAI jne kia de dia tumhari maa ne jina haram krdia h mera.... paise bhijwana bnd krdego agar use wapas bhja to isiliye use rok re tha... 

Dev shocked numb.... his brother whom he thought to be dead is alive.... he donr know what to do with that kind of information.... dhir deserved his father name.. he deserv to get everything what an Agnihotri should get.... oh god how will he mend up those 16 years....  of his life.....

Scene changes to Mumbai

Birla Mansion 

Nirbhay was outside Neevan's room.. the boy had completely shut himself off again....   the moment they entered birla mansion.... nirav showed him his room... neevan just entered and closed the door...

Divya noticed him staring at the door from good 15 minutes

Divya came from behind nirbhsy composed himself and turned

Divya - Sab thik hojaega Nirbhay...

Nirbhay with sad smile - Pata nhi divya....  neevan kab humsabko apnayega... vo agar hume apne pass he ni ane dega to Hum use smjhenge kese or na he vo hume samaj paega

Divya - Is wakt usne apne charo aur ek dewar bna li h.... jiske as pass vo kisiko ane ni dena chahta... shayed kisi baat ka dar h use

Nirbhay sat down palming his face the last 48 hours was nothing but nerve wrecking for him he just got to know he has another brother his nani died  .....  everything was too much stressful

Nirbhay sadly - mai usse baat karna chahta hu divya vo mera chota bhai h.... uski sari takliff dur karna chahta hu .. me chahta hu ekbar k liye vo mujhpar bharosa kare.. bas ekbar

Divya - trust doesn't come that easily for some people nirbhay.... for now we should be happy with the fact atleast vo humare sath ghar ane ko taiyyar hogya... 

Nirbhay sadly - tum or nirav ne use nani ki duhai ni di hoty to shayed vo ata bhi nhi....

Divya - Neevan bachpan se akele raha h nirbhay.... use shayed pata he ni h rishte kia hota h .. kese nibhate h kese jiya jata h unko leke.. usk liye uski ek choti si duniya thi jaha vo or uski nani h... lekin ab usk pas ek bhara pura pariwar hai..... dhire dhire vo is family ne is tarah ghul jaega na ki dekhna ap ko khudko yakin ni hoga ki vo yahi baccha h ...

Nirbhay sadly smile and nodded ...

While otherhand

Nishant was in his bed he just dont know how to react with the fact that he has another brother that too that boy who always fight with him In the college.... 

Nirav entered he saw nishant sitting in his bed

Nirav went upto him and gently pulled him closer he know how stressful it is for Nishant

Nirav - tu thik hai

Nishant - pata nahi...   aap thik ho?

nirav sighs - pata nhi...

Nishant - kitna kuch hogya na bhai in 2 dino sab kuch ek bure sapne jesa lag ra h mujhe... 

Nirav - i know it's shocking... but there is good part too

nishant look sty him

nirav smile - you got a brother... we all got a brother

nishant look away...

nirav sighs and made him turn - Nishu..?

Nishant - what bhaiyu?

nirav - tu khush nhi h?

nishant upset - kis baat ki khushi bhaiyu... 

nirav shockrd

nishant - vo ladka to hume apna kuch manta he ni... kese badtamizi se baat kar ra tha vo bhai se..... dehradun pe.... agar itni he problem thi use humse to aya he kyu... reh jata wohi....

Nirbhay angrily - Nishant!!

nishant flinched ...

nirbhay went towards him and turned him - Ye kesi baate kar ra h tu..

Nishant - me wohi keh ra hu bhai jo usne hume feel karwaya... usne ek bhi baat boli humse? apna muh tak ni khola or jab khola to ye bolne k liye khola kj we should leave him?? isks kia mtlb hua bhai? yahi na ki vo hume apna kuch nhi manta

Nirbhay sighs in this anger he could sense a hidden hurt in his voice

Nirbhay pulled him closer - nishu vo chota h na baccha ... use shayed nhi samaj aa ra ki is new environment me vo kese khudko adjust kare.... isiliye shayed vo ese react kar ra h...

Nirav - kabhi kabhi hum jab ek strange environment me jate h jaha hum kisiko ni jante .. we feel anxious na hum kisi anjaan se jhat se baat ni krte na...

nishant upset - but vo mujhe jnta h bhai...   me ye ni bol ra hu ki he should behave like my brother even i m not ready for that kind of change in my life i just want him to be cordial... mujhe acha ni lag ra ki koi humare sath to reh ra h par humare beech nhi...

Nirbhay knew nishant cannot see anyone that upset but he has ego too to accept that...

nirbhay - sab thik hoga beta... thora wakt dena hoga right now we all need to be patient...

Nirav and Nishant sighs... 

Otherside

Divya saw servant bringing out untouched food from neevan's room

Divya tensed - neevan ne khana ni khaya

Staff - ji nhi mam... humne bht koshish ki but bole le jane ko

Divya sighs and took the plate and entered to see neevan blankly staring at the stars

Divya - khana kyu nhi khaya neevan...

Neevan turned and become angry seeing her - why are u here Mrs Birla

divya corrected - Bhabhi!!

Neevan annoyed - bar bar khudko bhabhi bolne se ap meri bhabhi ban ni jaengi!!

Divya - or bar bar mujhe mrs birla bolne se tum humare rishta ko jhukla ni paoge

neevan highly frustrated this lady always backfires him why can't she just shut up and leave him alone...

Divya - Tumnr kafi der se kuch ni khaya hoga kha lo... warna bimar par jaoge

neevan - mujhe bhuk nhi hai
..

divya didnt flinch.. - Apne hatho se khaoge? ya me khilau?

Neevan was getting too much agitated she was testing his patience no one do this with him whenever he wanted to stay alone his nani given him space but she is just not ready to give up what the hell does she want to proof

Divya tore a bite about to fed him neevan threw the plate away and it break into pieces...

Divya gasped . neevan yelled in anger - nhi khana mujhe! why cant u understand that!! leave me alone!!!! just leave me!!

Divya could see neevan was getting agitated but in his anger she could only see a vulnurabl child... who is just trying to protect himself...  

Neevan - agar ap sachme mera bhala chahty hu to kindly leave me alone!!!

Nishant who was passing by saw all this and entered shockrd - kia hua bhabhi?

Divya weeping her tears - kuch nhi chalo

Nishant saw the broken plate and shocked - Kese hua ye sab

divya quiet while nishant saw how neevan was agitated

nishant angrily - ye tune kia h??

divya immidiately - nhi nish.. mere hath se galty se gir gya h...

Neevan angrily - Ha meine kia h... kyu jhut bol ri h ap Mrs birla... kia h meine! kia karloge tum?!

Nishant was furious he was about to go to him but divya stop him

divya - No.. nishant stopped

nishant - Ap choro bhabhi iski badtamizi mai abhi thik karta hu.... is ghar me koi is tarah badtamizi ni karta.. is baat ko ise smjna hoga

Neevan - mai esa he hu badtamiz!! agar tumhe itni problem to bhej do mujhe wapas Dehradun... ya nikal do ghar se bahar.. akele ji sakta hu me.. !! kisiko zarurat ni h mujhe kisiki bhi nhi...

Divya just took nishant away from there both neevan and nishant were hot headed kids she dont want nishant to do something which he will regret later...

Nishant frustrated - apne mujhe nikala kyu bhabhi....  ye is tarah badtamizi ni kar sakta...

divya - badtamizi ni kar ra tha vo khudko protect kar ra tha..!

Nishant confused

divya - nish u r too young to understand beta .. bas me itna kahungi abhi jo hua usk bare me tu kisiko mat bolna apne bhai ko bhi nhi  vo bht paresh hojaenge

nishant - bhai ko pta hona chahiye bhabhi...warna ye ladka pta ni

divya - vo ladka badal jaega nishant... mai keh ri hu tujhe.... please nishu ..apne bhabhi ki ye baat Manle

nishant sighs - okay sirf ap bol ri ho isliye man ra hu

divya smile and kissed his forehead Nishant eyes moist the kind pf love divya gives always warms his heart .. he just wish that idiot understand that love and
not disrespect her

Time passes

Neevan was sitting in his room crying he remembered how his nani used to love him ..

***** Flashback *****

Neevan was sitting in his bed holding his head books scattered
..

nani entered with a plate of food - ye kia baat h baccha khana kyu ni khaya

Neevan - bhuk ni h nani ap jao so jao

Nani - chup kar ... bhuk nhi h.. ese khali pet rahega to headache pr bar jaega

neev shock - Apko kese pata mujhe headache ho ra h

Nani cub his face - baccha h tu mera  kese ni samjhungi chal ab muh khol

Neevan make faces while Nani gently fed him 

after finishing the food she made him lie on his lap.. and message his head

neevan smile - nani apk hatho me jadu h apko pta h

Nani - Time se kha lega to ese headache ni honge na baccha tujhe wese bhi bhuka ni rehna chahiye

neev smile - kabhi kabhi ap ake ese khila dete ho na to accha lgta h





Nani kissed his forehead and tab him neevan slowly fall asleep in a beautiful dream

********** flashback ends **********

Neevan came out of his thoughts as strong wind breeze Enter he look upto the stars n teaea

neevan teary - kyu chali gyi ap nani .. mujje chork kyu chali gyi...  mere pas to ab koi bhi nhi h . koi ni smjhega mujhe nani... i m all alone...

Neevan felt dizzy all of a sudden...  his head spinned so suddenly that he hardly could react

neevan hazily saw vission of nani

neevan - nani...

She was calling him to hug him .. neevan - nani please wohe raho me aa ra hu...

neevan took a step and everything arround him Went black... and he fall down on the floor unconsious.... giving up



In dinner table

Nirbhay and everyone sat... nirbhay look at Neevans place it was empty yet from the morning the boy is not coming

nirbhay - neevan ne lunch kia?

Divya sighs - bht koshish ki.. nhi kha ra h.... na kisiko andae ane de ra h...

nirbhay sighs - Nirav bhi hospital gya hua h..  let me try once..

nishant - Ap ruko bhai.. ap ne kafi wakt se kuch ni khaya h sugar drop kar jaega apka..  mai dekh k ata hu

Nirbhay - nish tu

nish - dont worry nhi larunga usse me...  use smjhake lane ki koshish karunga

nirbhay smile he was glad nishant was not being brat now

Nishant left to call him but neevan was not opening the door

nishant. - neevan darwaza khol ita attitude dikhana bhi achi baat ni hoty...  dinner kar le bhai wait kar ra h... tere

No response

nishant irritated. - ye ladka kabhi sidhe muh baat ni karta..

nishant push open the door - neevan tu...

nishant shocked to see neevan lieng on the floor unconsious....






Precap :- Spoiler Alert to be posted in a while

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Tani :- I hope you all get the answer of the equation Agnihotri brothers ?? why dev and Dhir were apart .. what actually happened

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