TANHAYEE (Book1- Birla Broth...

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This story is of a boy Who is devoid of emotions .. He has nothing in his life apart from hollowness... he d... Více

Introducing the characters
Information regarding the book
Prologue
Introducing Another set of Characters
1. Two Different Worlds
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3. Soulful voice
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4. Meeting with Elder Brothers
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5. Stolen Moment
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6. Score settled
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7. Shocked
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8. Destiny's game
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9. Unexpected Truth
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10. Taking Responsibility
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11. New reality
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12. Testing Time
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13. Family Equation
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14. First Step towards Understanding
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15. Hidden love and Pain
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16. Taking A Chance
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17. Blending
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18. Acceptance
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19. Protective Brothers
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20. Realisation
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21. Forging a New Beginning
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22. Birla Family Dynamics
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23. Manipulation
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24. Hurt Brothers
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25. Ultimate Reality Check

2. Clash of Two Tornado

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Nirbhay went to his office and going through thw upcoming project file. frustrated

Nirbhay annoyed - what the hell is this nonsense Mihir ! tomorrow we have a meeting with the khannas and what do u want me to show them... this crap??

throwing the files .. mihir flinched Nirbhay Birla is furious which only means his job is at stake ... 

Nirbhay shot him a glare - Speak up Will you?

Mihir tensed - S .sir vo actually last minute project detailings change hogye to we were not able to ..

Nirbhay turned - who is the Project Head of the team

Mihir tensed

Nirbhay - u know how our company works .. we cannot compromise with the quality of our products agar last minute changes design huye h then there has to be a reason.... 

mihir look down.. 

nirbhay - You have today's time correct the errors and show me the new presentation before leaving office... 

Mihir nodded and left he was glad that his job was not sued he will give his best shot now...

Nirbhay annoyed he was going through some files that is when a person entered

person - I hope i m not disturbing you Nirbhay...

Nirbhay look up and sighs - Sehgal uncle please come in

Mehraj Sehgal entered with a smile 

Mehraj - Kia hogya beta ajkal ghar nhi ate ....  jabse hum business associate se Rishtedar bane h .. mujhe to laga tha tumhara ana humare ghae me or zyada hojaega

Nirbhay smile - esi koi baat nhi h uncle its just workload thora zyada h

Mr sehgal sighs -  dekho beta Divya bohot achi ladki h meri beti h isliye nhi keh ra hu ..  i know ye shadi ka deceision itna achanak hua ki tum dono ko kuch sochne samajne ka wakt bhi nhi mila ..   par beta mai bhi to baap hu na i just want to see her settle down and tumse zyada acha ladka use mil he ni sakta...

Nirbhay hold his hand. - uncle please u dont have to be so formal we both are adults humne agar shadi k liye haa ki h to soch smjke he ki h ... 

Mehraj - to phir meri ek baat manoge?

nirbhay nodded

Miraj - Kal tum or divya sath milke gurudware jake matha tek k aoge? meri  mannat thi meri beti or hone wala damad sath milk matha tek k ayenge ...  mai jnta hu Ajkl k generation k bacche insab pe yakin to ni karte but...

Nirbhay hold his hand - Apne keh dia na ...  bas...   hojaega ...

Mr sehgal smiled and left...

while Nirbhay eases back on his chair his memories went back to the memory lane....  where all this started

******** Flashback ********

Nirbhay was in his home that is when he got a call from midnight that Mr sehgal has collapsed....

nirbhay shocked he rushed to Nirav tensed

Nirav tens - kia hua bhai sab thik h?

Nirbhay tens - Nir... Mehraj uncle has been collapse unhe hospital le gye h....  

Nirav shocked

Nirbhay tensed  - Nir tu chal mere sath....

Nirav nodded and both rushed... 

In hospital... Nirav immidiately entered to get to know about the update of Mr sehgal..

Nirbhay tensed Mr sehgal is a very important person in his life he has helped them when he was all alone lost in the business world  when his father had made the business to losses  it was Mehraj Sehgal who helped him...

Nirbhay tensed when he heard miffle cries he turned to see a beautiful girl.... her cries were breaking his heart 

Nurse came to her - mam you need to sign this

She look at the nurse with blank eyes her hands were shivering... that was her father...  how can she sign on that bond ...

Her hands shivered that is when Nirbhay sat beside her he felt she needed it

She look at him with teary eyes

nurse - Mam please sign this bond or else we wont be able to proceed further with treatment...

Nirav came out tensed

Nirbhay - Nir

nirav tensed - artery me 40% blockage h .. we need to prepare him for the OT immidiately

She gasped - papa?

nirbhay and Nirav look at her

Nirbhay confused - Divyanka??

Divya teary eyes nodded nirbhay gasped he never thought he will meet her like this  on the hospital... she studied in abroad and came to India few months back they never got the chance to meet each other

Nurse - Mam please sign it

Divya was feeling helpless shatterrd

Nirbhay -  Divyanka ... i know situation is very difficult for you but Mehraj uncle ko immidiate treatment ki zarurat h... please sign it

Divya with tears - Agar papa ko kuch.... 

Nirbhay - Mehraj uncle always said he has a very strong daughter....  so be that.. right now you need to be the pillar of strength for your father ...! aap tut gayi to unhe kon sambhalega..

Words of him make her realise that she couldnot fall weak she weeped her tears and sign the form ....  

All sighed in releif...  

Time passes... 

Operation went successful Mr sehgal was shifted to his cabin.... 

Divya saw Nirbhay and Nirav were still waiting... 

Divya went to them - Papa abhi stable h...  doctors to keh reh h hosh bhi aa jaega unhe...  aplog ghar jaa sakte h... wese bhi aplogo ne bohot help ki h..  agar aplog nhi hote to pata nhi me kese...






Nirbhay sighs - Divyanka .. Mehraj uncle is a family to us...  u dont worry. we are just fine  ekbar unhe hosh aa jay we will leave

Divya gave a smile on the hour of need she can be just greatful....

Nurse came - Patient ko hosh aa gya h... 

All were relaxed

Divya was about to enter

Nurse - Apme se Nirbhay Birla kon h

All confused

Nurse - patient wants to meet him ... 

Divya look at Nirbhay confused while Nirbhay was himself confused... he entered inside to meet    him

Mehraj weakly smile - Nirbhay... 

Nirbhay sighs - dont scare your family like that Uncle... 

Mehraj sighs - that was a close call i know

Nirbhay sighs - Doctor ne kaha h apko stress bilkul nhi lena h just Relax... kuch din aram kariye office ki tension mat lijiye i will look after that

Mehraj weakly - Office ki tension ni h beta...   chinta to mujhe bas meri betiyo ki h

Nirbhay tens

Mehraj - this is the second stroke i m having this year

Nirbhay shocked

Mehraj sadly smile - third stroke me shayed....

nirbhay tens - uncle please kuch nhi hoga  apko 

mehraj - beta me jnta hu apna health condition i know i dont have much time

Nirbhay - Uncle please! ap is tarah se baate karenge to apke betio ka kia hoga Divyanka look upto you... you are there only family..

Mehraj - tabhi to me chahta hu i want you to become there family

Nirbhay gasped...

Mehraj weakly - Meri bht dino se iccha thi ki  mai tumse Baat karu is bare me.   lekin ho ni paya or aj jab zindagi ne dubara ek mauka dia h me ise gawana ni chahta me jnta hu tum se acha ladka meri divya k liye ho he ni sakta...  i have seen you protecting your family ..   i know you are the one

Nirbhay shocked - Uncle ap ye kia bol re h i .. i dont even know her properly

Mehraj sighs -  beta mai ye ni keh ra ki kal k kal rishta jodlo i just want u two to give each other chance .     itna to kar sakte ho na beta please meri akhri iccha smjk he man rkhlo

nirbhay tense - uncle shaddi ek bohot bara faisla h me is tarah ni le sakte ap Divyanka se baat kijiye if she is ready then we will talk about this ... 

Nirbhay turned to see Divyanka standing near the door he dont know how much she heard but  whatever her deceision will be .. he will respect that

************* Flashback ends ***********

Suprisingly Divyanka agreed for the marriage they hardly talked .... but the deceision of marriage was taken......

Scene changes to Dehradoon..  Basu Bhawan

Neevan palmed his face as Dhir was dancing in his room with scattering things

Dhir - ye finally finally exams are over  yr meine to socha he nhi tha questions itne easy ayenge ....mujhe to lga pichli baar ki tarah bht tough ayenge isbar to basics he diye yr... 

Neevan yelled - Get off your shoes from my couch!!

Dhir eyes widen he realise he is been jumping with his shoes on

Dhir step down immidiately Neevan glared at him and then clean the place

Dhir irritated - why are u so neatness freak

Neevan - why are u so messy!

Dhir - are baba itna bhi kia h tera ... 

Neevan was picking up the things which dhir had scattered all arround

Dhir jump back on the couch and lazily munched his chips - tujhe pata h tujh jesa neatness freak meine kahi ni dekha...  upar se ye aag se bhi zyada garam temper .  u know you are a deadly combo man ..

he laughed out while few chips fell from his packet

Neevan saw this dhir immidiately grab those chips and threw it in the trashbin...  before his friend ear him alive

Nani entered with grilled sandwhich and pasta

Nani - Kia kar re ho tum dono ghar pe... khane pine ka hosh h ya nhi..

dhir smiling - mujhe h princess dekho chips kha ra hu ap apne ladle se bolo ..  exam khtn hogya h ye room saaf kar ra h batao.... esa bhi koi krta h

Neevan mock - kia kare i have a moron friend like you . who loves to spead mess

dhir pouts - yrr ese kyy bolta h.    meine bola na mai saaf kardunga tune he mana kia na .. or ab tane de re h

Nani chuckled - dhir tera ye dost esa he h ..  ya fir should i say isk pyaar karne ka tarika he esa h...  tujhse kam ni krwayega vo

Dhir pouts - but tane de sakta h ji bhar k...

neevan roll his eyes - as if tu sudhar jata h usse

Dhir - Aree par

nani - ok times up  aoo chalo betho ... lunch krlo... or neevan subah se kuch ni khaya tune chup chap abhi tu yaha bethega

Neevan sighs he washed his hands and came back. 

he saw dhir was all set to pounce he stopped dhir

dhir annoyed - not again neevu khane de yr

neevan drag him to the wash basin clean his hands and then let him go... 

dhir hug nani - princess ye apka pota meri jaan leke manega itna kon krta h...

Neevan - hath bina dhoyw thuslega kia ..   pta bhi h kitne germs. hote h ese

Dhir roll his eyes he saw white pasta and Grilled sandwhich

Dhir pouts - parathe?

Neevan - ek din parathe k bina bhi jee le...

dhir - par mere fav h alu wale

neevan - tujhe pata bhi h Alu me kitne calories hoti h

Dhir shut up and started eating he dont want that lecture now....

They started having food that is when dhir got message n shock

neevan - kia hua

Dhir tens - Royals k mock test ka result out hogye

Neevan tense but nodded this was there dream college will they get a chance there

Dhir tensed started sweating ...

neevan rushed to his side and hold his hand - dhir relax...

Dhir tensed - agar me select ni hua to

neev sighs - i told you na .. koi baat nhi hum kisi. aur college admission le lenge

Dhir teary - pagal h kia tera dream college h yr vo ... and extremely selected student ko mauka milta h 11th se admission lene ka ek to wese he Its one of the expensive college in India. .. guaranted future h uspe ..

Neevan - haa but esa bhu nhi h is college me admission ni hua to humara koi future nhi h

nani tens - ese mat bolo neev kyu ni hoga tum dono ka selection zarur hoga... 

Neev - ha nani hona h to hum dono ka ho... kyuki agar iska ni hya to mai bhi ni jaunga waha

dhir - shut up  tu kyu ni jaega mera ho na ho tu zarur jaega... 

nani - uffo pehle se hw decided krk bethe ho tum dono ... chalo dekho pehle select hua h ya nhi...

dhir tense while neevan took the laptop ... and opt for the Roll no

Neevan was Selected..... dhir hug him but his tension doubled now what will happen if he doesnt get

dhir with tears - yrr i will miss you yrrr

Neevan whack him. - tera ni hua to mai wese bhi ni jaunga

dhir glared - esa  kuch nhi h tu jaega smjhaa!!!

and they were going on and on

nani glared - Tum dono firse shuru hogye... neev tu dhir ka roll no kyu nhi check karta....

Neevan nodded while dhir tensed his heart beat raced... neevan hold his hand tightly whatever the result will be he will be always there with his friend ...

The server was taking time to load the Result

Dhir cried - yrr dekh kitna time lag ra h tera to minto me hogya tha i m suree  mera nhi hua hoga.... 

Neevan prayed to god for patienc because he was loosing it with this crack piece... 

Soon the screen pop out Nani beamed with Joy - SELECTED!!!

Dhir eyes numb in shock it was one of the PRESTIGIOUS college in India....  




neevan hug him with a smile they both have cracked it

neevan - kaha tha na hojaega...

dhir took the laptop and Did checked some other criteria

Dhir face beamed with Happiness - Scholarship mil gaya hume....  oh my god...  m so happy.

neevan hug him

nani - Aj to mitha banta h me le aty hu tum dono k liye  aj to thora neev bhi khayega h na neev

neev smiled....

while Dhir hug him with tears

neevan took out some tissue paper and give it back to him - ab yaha bhi royega? select hone k baad bhi

Dhir - mujje dar lag ra h neev

neev sighs  - vo kab nhi lagta tujhe... exam do tab tujhe dar lgta h result nikle tab tujhe dar lagta h....  Ab select hogys tab bhi tujhe dar lag ra h .?

Dhir - DRIC kaha h tujhe pata h na....  

neev quiet

Dhir - Its in MUMBAI...!! 

neev felt heavy in his chest yes it is in Mumbai but he cannot fall weak for that...     all his life he had fought for himself . he is strong....  no one can break it

Neev nonchalantly - ya so...

Dhir made him turn - Ya so??? really neev?? ye tu keh ra h ... tujhe Pta h Mumbai me tere bhaiya rehte h teri family vo ..

neevan stop him - meri family sirf meri nani h Dhir.... 

dhir sadly - Agar kabhi sachai samne aa gyi to bol payega unhe ye baat

Neev - kis sacchai ki baat kar ra h tu dhir? there is nothing hidden to them.. unhe sabkuch pta h .  fir bhi they never bothered to think about me... so kisi sachai ki baat nhi h....   and secondly Mumbai ek bohot bara sheher har roz lakho log jate h Apne Dreams ko Chase karne mai bhi wohi kar ra hu DRIC is the platform jo mujhe Newyork pohchayega mujhe bohot padna h Dhir Age barhana h ek successful business empire khara karna h...  itna Rich bnna h ki ek din Un BIRLAS ko bhi piche chordu....!

dhir gasped - Tu apne he bhai k khilaf

Neev sadly - bhai vo me tha he kab dhir jo me unk khilaf hojau me to India's leading business tycoon ko Beat karna chahta hu....  or vo me kark rahunga....  

Dhir - to matlab tujhe koi fark ni parta agar vo tujhse mile to or tere to baki 2 aur bhai bhi h na.. meine to bas Nirbhay Birla ko he news magazine cover me dekha h... but baki 2

Neev - i dont know and i dont care and tu please unhe mera bhai bulana band kar they are no one to me he left irritated ..  trying to compose himself.....

nani entered she heard whatever neev said

Dhir was tensed nani made dhir sit

Dhir tensed - nani vo

nani sighs - Khun ka rishta h dheer ye chahe kitni bhi koshish karle bhagne ki bhag ni payega...    mujhe pura bharosa ekbar ye Mumbai chala gya na to kismat ise iske bhaio k samne zarur khara kardegi

dhir sadly smile

nani cub his face - aur tujhe bhi...

dhir eyes had tears he dont even know what will happen if he clash with his brother... will his brother accept him ??..

Morning time

Nani was taking neevan's arti while dheer also came with his luggage....

Dhir - jaldi kare...  flight ka time ho ra h

Neev annoyed - ye galat baat h nani why are u not coming with us ... apne to kaha tha ap sath chalogi

nani sighs - me aungi na beta ..but is tarah sabkuch chorke ni aa sakty.... give me a month time me yaha k sare chize niptake i will just come

neev tensed - ap time se apni medicin loge na...

nani kissed his forehead - i will baccha trust me...

neev - me roz call karunga or agar apne mujhse jhut bola na to dekh lena!!  

dhir - to hum dono dusri flight pakrk dehradoon wapas sa jaenge... 

nani chuckled - okay baba chal ab jaldi niklo tum dobo

neev sighs - sabkuch ese last moment pe hua na nani kal raat achank he mail aya ki sare selected students  ko kal tak apne sare hardcopy submit karne h verification k liye to isiliye i.... 

nani cub his face - Janty hu beta... tu mujhe batayega apne nani ko? just go and live your dream.... 

neevan hug her tightly for some reason he was not feeling good leaving her alone here ...

nani smile - jaah beta .. wese bhi  Ajay jaa ra h na vo tumdono ko safely  pohcha dega humare Mumbai wala Flat h na filhal k liye tum dono wahi rahoge.... jab tak me nhi aa jaty waha house help hongi 

neevan and Dhir sighs and   left for  Mumbai with heavy heart.....

The moment neevan stepped out  Nani sat on the couch exhausted..

brijesh  rushed with a glass of water - Maa ji.... 

Nani took the glass of water while she have her medicine...

brijesh tensed - Maa ji apne neevan baba ko jane kyu dia.... apki tbyt thik nhi h....   is sakt uska rehna zyada zarury tha

nani sadly smile - nhi brijesh uska waha jana zyada zarury h ...  itne saalo tak neevan apne bhaio se dur raha apne pariwar se dur raha apne pehchaan se dur raha...  ab wakt aa gya h use vo sabkuch mile.... 

brijesh - par

nani - bas brijesh mai thik hu ye baat yahi khtm kardo...  neev ko kuch pta ni chalna chahiye.... 

Brijesh sadly nodded while nani had her own share of thoughts .....


In Mumbai..

Dhir was so tired that he just retired on the bed. .. while neevan was gazing at the stars. 

neevan thinks - mujhe nahi pata meine yaha ake sahi kia ya galat ... mujhe ye bhi nhi pata nani jo keh ri thi vo sach h ya nhi...  but i really dont want to meet any of them please god please!!

That is when he heard Church bell...

Neevan gasped he turned to ask house help - ye awaz kesi?

House help - ye.. awaz...? ye to pass me he ek church h waha se h

neevan suprise - church h? can i go there

dhir sleepily - abe yr Mumbai me hum pehli bar aye h tujhe raste wagera pata thori h...  or wese bhi Kal ROYAL bhi jana h ...  please neev abhi tu agar kho gya to mera kia hoga

Neev annoyed and hit him with pillow

Dhir - ouch... lag ri h yrr... 

neev - shut up and sleep mai bas abhi gya or Abhi aya...   pass mai he h .. church

dhir sighs .. neev loves to pray in church ... 

dhir - ruk me bhi ata hu

neev - Its okay dhir tu thaka hua h so jaa i will be just fine

dhir nodded while neev left ... 

In church

Neev gazed at the church it was so beautiful a serein smile played in his lips

priest saw him - hey son what are u doing here

neev - uhh nothing father its just ...

priest - Church k band hone ka wakt ho ra h ..  if u want to go then go hurry

neev nodded and rushed inside that is when he saw a young man placing candles at the church..

Nirav every evening without any fault light candles as it was Manya's thing to do....

Nirav thinks - i dont know where are you but i hope you are happy... 

Then he placed another candle otherside.... 

neev come inside it was fascinating to see so many candles  he step further that is when nirav got a call...

nirav frowns it was from hospital must be some emergency he took the phone aside... n walk past neevan...

priest - aree hold on son...  your candles...

neev look up - what happened

priest - he didnt light that bunch of candles

neev saw two different pairs

neev confused - ye alag alag pairs kyu ? 

priest smiled - that one is for someone whom he lost and this one is for his family...

neev surprise - apko kese pata... 

Priest -  because he always visit here without fail... par aj pta ni kese candles light kiye bager he chala gya...  

neev sighs he took out his bunch of candles  and started lighting it he saw those not lightrd candles something inside him just told him to light those... so he just light those candles also ...

neev smiled - I dont know  kon tha vo but agar apni family k liye pray karne aye tha to vo to puri honi he chahiye....  

neev prayed to god and turned to leave that is when nirav turned back to come but unfortunately neev was gone nirav suprise to see his candles lighten up

Nirav - ye kisne

priest - ek baccha aya tha...   usne light up kardia ... wese bhi church band hone wala h... 

nirav confuse - konsa baccha

priest - Bas abhi abhi nikla h bahar he hoga ..

nirav thought to thank him so he rushed back  but there was none...

Neevan was walking on the streets suddenly he saw high security he was confused. to see so much securrity

A huge Mercedes was parked and someone entered talking with phone ...

neev saw his face ...



neev thinks - ye? yahi tha na shayed church pe ??

before he could analyse...   the car  zoomed out ... neevan was startled to see the security level must be some Richiee Rich?

Next day..

Dhir And Neevan was Standing infront of The Divine  Royal International College .... 

Dhir eyes twinkled with joy it was such a big institute...  

Neevan sighs the campus was huge.... 

They have submitted there documents that is when 5 to 6 farari was coming inside the campus

Dhir eyes widen - isnt that a Farari?

neev - A farari? dude there are N number of Farari... 

Two boys came out of two different cars that Was Atharv and Nishant

Atharv - Acha hua hum thore jaldi aa gye that moron  Yash is flying too high ...

Nish - ha suna h kuch zyada he urr raha h...

Atharv - Vo hume challenge kar raha h ki humari spot pe hit karega ...

Nish - 2 din college nhi aya usi ka fayda uthaya h that worthless monkey lagta h batana parega ise who is Nishant Birla

Atharv hold him - jo bhi karna h sambhal k karna... pichli bar bhaiya ko pata chl gya tha yaad h na

Nish - ha tu pehle he dara de bas ! wese suna h uske gang me koi naya ladka join kia h.... 

Atharv smirk - yeah a  new puppy i guess

nishant chuckle - Chal maza ayega...

nishant and Atharv went to that side while Dhir was feeling uncomfortable standing in the middle of Sun.. neev saw

neev sighs - tu yaha shade k pass beth me pani leke ata hu...

dhir exhausted but nodded ...  Mumbai's weather is not suiting him ..

Neev took the water bottle and left to fill water bottle...

Atharv was all ready with a bucket of water

nish - are ruk jaa pehle dekh to lene de

Atharv - abe kia dekhna wohi h new boy .   isko reality check to dena he hoga ..

nishant - haa par

before he could complere neev stepped  While Atharv threw bucket of water on neev.. Nishant shocked

while neev Felt a Splash of water on his face n he slipped and fall....  





Neev look up to see two guy looking at him one was enjoying it and second one look bit shocked that was colour water neev was all drenched with colors

Atharv laughed out - are iski to Holi se pehle he Holi hogyi...

Nishant chuckled he gave his hand to neev - relax dude its just for a reality check...



Neev stood up without taking his help and scream in anger - What the hell! who the hell are you!!!

Nishant raised his eyebrows no one uses this tone on him 

Nishant - Tone down boy!! tujhe pata bhi h tu kisse baat kar ra h

Neev angrily - pata h... ek Rich Spoilt pampered Brat se baat kar ra hu!! m i right or m i right???

Nishant shot him a glare but it was short live as neev threw the remaining water on his face

Atharv shocked

neevan angrily - Next time think twice before messing with me! Mr. Spoilt Brat!! 




Atharv shocked it was not a arguement anynore it was going to be a Clash of Two Tornado! Who was this boy? challenging Nishant Birla!!!

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