Meetha sa Ruhani ISHQ

By AnupreetKaur347

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Trying to write my version of Sounoor as Mineil. The story goes on from where it was stopped in the show "PAT... More

Intro
Story promo 1
1. I need my chef in the kitchen
2. Neil shares his feelings with Mini.
3. Arya excited for the trip
4. Isha to hurt Mini
5. Will Ritwick Help?
6. Neil's possessiveness and Dadu's Warning
7. Isha played dirty
8. Neil's Guilt
9. Dadu's anger
10. Mini had lost hope in love again
11. Second hearing for the court case
12. Kirpal gives testimony
13. Neil to win the meeting rights?
14. Shocking news for Neil
15. Surprising News for Mini
16. Khatri gets what he deserves
17. Mini and Cooking
18. Neil found Mini's letter
19. Neil's lovemania 1
20. Arya is back from the trip
21. Arya praises Mini's cooking
22. Arya gets to know about Neil's past
23. ArMi's prank on Neil
24. Mini's lovemania
25. Neil's lovemania 2
26. Mineil moments 1
28. Neil drenched in heavy rain
29. Neil has high fever
30. Neil confesses in fever
31. Mini's diary entry after years
32. Neil's lovemania 3
33. Dadu Biji's Anniversary
34. Neil's dreamy behaviour
35. Who will propose?
36. Bike Road trip
"Sorry but need a break"
"I am Back"
Story promo 2
37. Mini has fever
38. Mini and injection
39. Neil mollifies his upset Mini
40. Mini's admirer
41. Neil overhears Mini's confession
42. Mini visits Khurana House
43. Enjoying movie together
44. Mickey's call
45. Neil is insecure
46. Neil insecurities rises to the peak
47. Mini calms down Neil
48. Mini's possessiveness
49. Sandhu Aunty Taunts Neil
50. Trio's Delhi trip
51. Armineil on their way to Delhi.
52. Reaching Delhi
53. Keya happy with ArMiNeil
54. Neil's hidden talent
55. Neil plays guitar for Mini
56. Mini's stern reply to Isha's shit
57. Mini's hidden talents
58. Mineil's musical pairing
59. Arya and Keya enjoys Mineil's musical pairing
60. Mini talks to Keya
61. Mineil couple moment 1
62. Mini's philosophy
Story promo 3
63. Is ArKeMi upto something?
64. Mini's Feelings
65. Mini's proposal
66. Neil's feelings
67. Mini surprises Neil
68. Mineil sizzling romantic dance
69. Mineil's first kiss
70. Neil's Birthday started amazingly
71. Neil's Birthday party
72. Correct explanation of Equality
73. Neil feels the fulfilment
74. Ritwick spots Mineil together
75. Neil self doubts.
76. Mini develops complacency in Neil
77. Saraswati comes a day earlier
78. Mineil couple moment 2
79. Keya gets emotional
80. Isha's plan backfires due to Mini
81. Mineil corn date at Delhi
82. Mineil happy moments 1
83. Arya's new session of school
84. Proposal for Mini?
85. SHAADI?
86. Preet to tease Mini
87. ArNeil first meet wasn't in restaurant?
88. Mineil hearty convo
89. Mineil movie date
90. Surprise for their little munchkin
91. Arya's birthday party
Story promo 4
92. Saroj Mami scratches Mini's old emotional scars
93. Why Mini hated to hope?
94. Neil able to coax Arya again
95. Mini is not well
96. Restaurant's profits
97. Restaurant expansion ideas
98. Neil's allergy
99. Restaurant expansion party
100. Neil's nightmare
101. Mini takes stand for Sundar
102. Are Neil's nightmares really intuitions?
103. Mini's accident
104. Was the accident planned?
105. Mini relaxes Neil
106. Neil takes care of Mini
107. Neil brings Mini to the haveli
108. Suspicious arrival at the haveli
109. Mini scolds Neil
110. Hot fomentation for Mini
111. Neil spots Mini's new diary.
112. Mini's emotions residing in her diary entries.
113. Mini is also a heavy sleeper like Neil?
114. Mini has recovered from sprains
115. Neil's friend at the restaurant
116. Vaishnavi and Mini bonds well
117. Vaishnavi confides in Mini
118. Cool teasing session
119. Neil mollifies his upset Mini musically.
120. Neil teases Mini
121. Nee meets Nee
122. Mini enjoys the brosis banter
123. Mineil romance 1
124. Mineil romance 2
125. Restaurant hiring
126. Mini in trouble?
127. Mini is forcefully drugged.
128. What are Rape drugs?
129. Mini speaks her heart out in sedation
130. Drug side effects 1
131. Neil hides the severity of Mini's health from her.
132. Drug side effects 2
133. Drug side effects 3
134. Mini suffers a cardiac arrest.
135. Arya affected by Mini's health
136. Mini consoles Arya
137. Mini is out of danger now.
Story promo 5
138. Mini has recovered completely
139. Mineil visits the temple.
140. Neil advises Mini.
141. Mini and Abhay
142. Abhay is Neil's Cousin
143. Neerja's Mr One?
144. Preet is back
145. Friends get together 1
146. Friends get together 2.
147. Rakshabandhan 1
148. Rakshabandhan 2
149. Neil upto something?
150. Neil's surprise
151. Passionate Love
152. Mini's Birthday Celebration
153. Engagement date finalised
154. Stern Reply to Saroj Mami
155. Neil calms down Mini
156. Mineil's evening at Delhi
157. Mineil's evening at Delhi 2
158. Mineil's evening in Delhi 3
159. Mini's departure to Australia
160. Mini and Neil miss each other.
161. Neil's sudden outburst.
162. Mini doesn't talk to Neil
163. Neil comforts Mini in Australia
164. Teasing session in Australia
165. Mineil to go to a party
166. Neil surprised by Mini's possessiveness
167. Neil cools down Mini's rage
168. Cruise Couple competition
169. Mineil enjoys the cruise party
170. Vidyut admires Mini
171. Mini comforts Neil
172. Cutie
173. ArNe Tiff.
174. ArNe has fever.
175. Arya's emotional introspection
176. Poonam Maasi meets Neil
177. Poonam learns Neil's past.
178. Where is Neil?
Story promo 6
179. Neil to have... urges?
180. Neil suffers from drug reactions
181. Neil's inhibitions lowered.
182. Neil is intoxicated.
183. Neil's sensuous move
184. Mineil steamy night
185. Mineil's steamy night 2
186. Getting up in each other's arm
187. Neil feels broken
188. Neil's reports
189. Neil is finally fine
190. Mini receives another offer.
Sneek Peek of the story further

27. Mini stressed about Arya's exam

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By AnupreetKaur347

Next Morning,

Mini woke up due to Rani's call. She informed her that she would be coming late today due to some personal work. Mini got tensed as today was Arya's exam and what if she forgets anything in haste. 

She quickly got ready and went to Neil's room drying her hair. She shook him through his shoulders.

Mini: Neil! Neil!

Neil held her hand, wrapped his palms around it and turned in sleep.

Due to the sudden pull, She closed her eyes and was on the bed taking support of the bed by the other hand with her face inches apart Neil's face.

Few droplets of water fell on Neil's face.

Neil opened his eyes lightly feeling the droplets on his face and saw Mini's face so close to him with her eyes closed. He thought it to be his dream. He held her by her waist and pulled her closer, snuggling to her.

She opened her eyes to see Neil's face so close to hers when she felt his pull and he snuggled to her.

She tried to get parted but couldn't due to Neil's grip. 

Mini: (loudly in his ears) Neil!

Neil hearing Mini's loud voice in his ears, left her waist and kept his hand on his ear.

Neil: Subah subah itna kaun chillata hai... Kya ho gaya Mini?

Mini parted from him but her hand was still in hold of Neil's so she could get up from the bed.

Mini: Uthoge?... Suno na...

Neil: (got up) Ha bolo...

Mini: Arya ka exam hai aaj... usko ready karna hai... kuch gadbad nahi honi chahiye.... Ekto pata nahi Rani di ne late kyu aana hai aaj... kisi important day pe hi na... siyappe ho jaate hai.... nahi to sab kuch manage ho jaata na aaram se... lekin nahi ji... aisa kaise ho sakta hai... Rani di bhi aaj hi late aayengi.....

Neil understood that Mini is in tension as she was speaking continuously without even looking at him as if talking to herself. 

He kept his hand on her mouth.

Mini made a what-happened face.

Neil: Kitni der se bole ja rahi ho.... itni tension kis liye.... sab manage ho jayega... stress lene se kya hoga..... Calm down.... take a deep breath.

Mini took a deep breath.

Neil: Relax... ho jayega sab kuch.... Ok?

Mini nodded.

Neil removed his hand from her mouth.

Mini: Ab jau Arya ko uthaane?

Neil: Hmm... Panic karne ki koi baat nahi hai.... Relax hoke manage karna.. Sab ho jayega....

Mini nodded but she didn't get up.

Neil: Kya hua?.... Jao... uthao Arya ko...

Mini gave him a confused look.

Neil: Aise kyu dekh rahi ho?... What happened?

Mini: Kaise jau?

Neil: Chalke....

Mini gave him -oh-really- look.

Neil: Aise looks kya de rahi ho... sidhe sidhe bolo...

Mini: Tum chodoge to jaungi na...

Neil: Kya chodunga?

Mini: Mera haath... Neend me the tab pakda tha... abhi tak pakda hua hai... chodoge to jaungi na.

Neil looked down and realised he was holding her other hand. He left her immediately.

Neil: Sorry.

Mini: it's ok... breakfast bana dena ready hoke jaldi se....

He nodded.

She went from the room.

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In the kitchen,

Neil prepared the breakfast while he saw Mini keeping exam stationary in Arya's bag and checking everything multiple times to ensure nothing is mistakenly forgotted.

Arya: Veerbalika! Mera bag pack ho gaya?

Mini: Ha... yeh lo.... aur jaldi se breakfast kar lo... aaj late nahi ho sakte... 

She said while serving the breakfast.

Neil was packing her tiffin.

Mini filled her water bottle and turned to Neil for the tiffin.

Neil gave her the tiffin and she kept it in the bag.

Mini: Ab sirf tumhare shoes reh gaye hai... niche saamne hi rakhe hai... par kuch to bhul rahi hu main.... (She tried remembering) 

Neil held her from her shoulder.

Mini: Kya hua?

Neil: Breath in... Breath out... Breath in... Breath out... Breath in... Breath out... Relax.

She did so and relaxed a little. 

Neil: Panic karke kuch yaad nahi aayega... aur vaise bhi sab kuch to tumne rakh diya hai... Arya ready bhi ho gayi hai... Shoes niche jakar pehen legi... No big deal... right?...

Mini: Hmm... 

Neil: Ab aur kya bhul sakti ho tum.... ho gaya na sab?

Mini: Are ha.... Exam hai aaj... maine dahi cheeni nahi di.... 

Neil: Bas?... Itna hi na?

Mini: Ha... 

Neil: Relax... abhi 15 min hai bus aane me... relax.

Mini relaxed by deep breathing and then sighed.

Neil: Good.

Arya: Veerbalika ko to tum hi sambhaal sakte ho Neil. Bahot tension le leti hai.

Neil: Hmm.... 

Mini sat on her knees to match Arya's level. 

She forwarded a spoonful of dahi cheeni to Arya and she ate it.

Mini: (smiling) All the best chutanki! 

Arya hugged Mini.

Arya: Thank you Veerbalika!.... (pecked her on her cheeks) Love you... 

Mini: (pecked her back) Love you too...

Neil: (caressing her hair) All the best Choti Madam.

Arya hugged him by his waist.

Arya: Thank you Neil!... Ab chalo nahi to late na ho jaye...

Mineil together dropped Arya to the bus stand and then came back to the haveli.

Mini: Main apne purse lekar aati hu... phir chalte hai Restaurant.

Neil: Hmm... Main bhi apna wallet room me hi bhul gaya tha.... Main bhi lekar aata hu.

Mini went upstairs and Neil to his room.

Neil came to the hall and saw Mini descending from the stairs.

She slipped at the last stair and fell in his arms.

Neil held her tightly.

Both were looking in each other's eyes.

Few secs later, 

Neil: Mini... Tumne pata hai?

Mini: H?

Neil: (laughing) Tum pakka 70 kilo ki to hogi.... haath thak gaya mera...

Mini stood up and punched him.

Mini: I am only 55... 

Neil: Liar...

Mini: (punching him) You liar.

Neil held her hand and pulled her closer...

Neil: To bolo sach sach... kal sapna dekh rahi thi tum mall me?

Mini was shocked as how he knows.

Neil: Arya ke jagane pe.... has has ke sharma rahi thi?... Kaun aaya tha sapne me?... 

Mini understood that Arya had told him that.

Mini: Ai... Aisa ku... kuch bhi nahi tha.... Chalo restaurant late ho raha hai?

Neil pulled her closer by her waist.

She kept her hands on his chest and held his shirt in reflex.

Neil: Tumhari aankhein to kuch aur hi keh rahi hai....

Mini rolled her eyes.

Mini: (trying to control her smile) Whatever... Restaurant chalte hai... late ho rahe hai... Bakwaas band karo... Chalo...

They parted and went to the restaurant.

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At the restaurant, Mini was sitting in her cabin and discussing with Neil about the profits in the restaurant were still less than expected.

Mini: Ab kya improve kiya ja sakta hai taaki profits increase ho?

Neil: Time....we can give them best quality food in less time.....

Mini: Ab vo kaise...khana banne me to time lagega hi na....

Neil: But agar ek insaan par sab kuch dependent na ho to jaldi banega na...

Mini: To what can we do now?

Neil: I can do one thing....

Mini: what?

Neil: I can train our staff to work faster and efficient. It will not take much time... maybe.... 3-4 days or so...

Mini: Brilliant idea....

Neil: So....Kab se shuru kar sakte hai ?

Mini: Abhi batati hu....

Mini called Naeem bi and said to call everyone in her cabin.

Mini: See abhi bhi restaurant utna fastly grow nahi kar raha hai jitna karna chahiye....to Neil aap sab ko training dena chahta hai taki restaurant faster and more efficiently serve kar sake....yeh jo training hogi restaurant timing me hi hogi to kisi ko timing ki koi issue nahi hona chahiye.... Zyada din bhi nahi lagenge.... maybe 3-4 din hi.. to aap log ready ho?

Staff agreed.

Mini: Good ! So Chef Neil Oberoi make the necessary arrangements and you can start the training from today itself.

Neil: Sure Mini madam.

Neil went into the kitchen with the staff and started the training.



Want a small hint about the next part, then Stay tuned for: Neil drenched in heavy rain.

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