Devir FF-Saanson Ko

By srushtiloveskv18

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Karanvir Sharma a strict IAS officer crosses path with Debattama Saha a budding singer and a student,The stor... More

Character Sketch
Chapter-1
Chapter-2
chapter-3
chapter-4
chapter-5
chapter-6
chapter-7
chapter-8
chapter-9
chapter-10
chapter-11
chapter-12
chapter-13
chapter-14
chapter-15
chapter-16
chapter-17
chapter-18
A good bye note
chapter-19
chapter-20
Chapter-21
chapter-22
chapter-23
chapter-24
chapter-25
chapter-26
chapter-27
chapter-28
chapter-29
chapter-30
chapter-31
chapter-32
chapter-33
chapter-34
chapter-35
chapter-36
chapter-37
chapter-38
chapter-39
chapter-40
chapter-41
chapter-43
chapter-44
chapter-45
chapter-46
chapter-47
chapter-48
chapter-49
chapter-50
chapter-51
chapter-52
chapter-53
chapter-54
chapter-55
chapter-56
chapter-57
chapter-58
chapter-59
chapter-60
chapter-61
chapter-62
chapter-63
chapter-64
chapter-65
Chapter-66
chapter-67
chapter-68
chapter-69
chapter-70
chapter-71
chapter-72
chapter-73
chapter-74

chapter-42

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By srushtiloveskv18

NextDay
Night
Karanvir's House
Kitchen

This was Debattama's Outfit

Debattama was looking beautiful in simple light blue color floral print night dress with her hairs open and red vermilion was applied on her head and pink lipgloss was applied on her rosy lips and she was looking beautiful

Debattama was preparing for tomorrow's mehndi ceremony and gayatri was helping her

Gayatri-beta bas ab bohat hogaye kaam,subha se kaam kare rahi ho,baaki saare kaam main dekh loongi tum ab jao aur padhai karo kal paper hai tumhare

Deba smiles after hearing this and says thank you chachi

Gayatri pats her face and says haan jao aur padhai karo

And she and debattama walks out from kitchen and enters in drawing room

And Finds Bua ji standing infront of her

Deba smiles at her But Bua ji glares at her

Bua ji-kahan jaa rahi ho

Gayatri-ji usski exam hai na kal toh padhai karena jaa rahi hai woh

Bua ji gets angry after hearing this and looks at deba in anger

Bua ji-accha yeh padhai karegi toh ghar ka kaam kaun karega,ghar ki bahu hai na yeh,toh ghar ka kaam karene ki zimmedari isski hai,yahan ghar mein shaadi hai aur issko padhane hai,tum iss ghar mein padhai karena ke liye nahi aayi ho,ladki ho ghar ke kaam mein dhyaan do,smajhi

Deba feels bad after hearing this and says Bua ji par kal mera University paper hai mujhe padhane zarrori hai please

Bua ji-arre waah jawab de rahi ho mujhe,maine kaha na nahi padhai karogi tum,kise ne tumse kaha ki shaadi ke baad tum padhai karogi,nahi padhai karogi tum,jao aur ghar ka kaam karo aur Karanvir ka khayaal rakho

Tears forms in Debattama's eyes and she was feeling helpless because of Bua ji and her behavior as whatever she says infront of her she always takes it in other way

Bua ji looks at debattama and says kya dekh rahi ho mujhe,jao aur ghar ka kaam karo

And Just when  they hears a husky loud voice Debattama ghar ka kaam nahi karegi

And all looks on door and Finds Karanvir

This was Karanvir's Outfit

Debattama looks at him and Karanvir walks towards Debattama and stands beside her And looks at her and then looks at Bua ji

Karanvir-Debattama ghar ke kaam karena ke liye nahi bani hai Bua ji,woh nahi karegi ghar ka koi kaam ab woh padhai karegi

Bua ji gets more angry after hearing this and says karan ghar ki bahu hai woh usse ghar ka kaam smabhale na chahiye na ki padhai karena chahiye smajha tu,pagal hogaye hai tu biwi ko padha rahe hai college bheja rahe hai

Karanvir gets very angry after hearing this and says Meri biwi padhai karegi,main usse padhaunga

And Debattama hears this and looks at him

Bua ji shouts Bohat zyadya hi modern thinking nahi hogayi hai teri,ghar ki bahu ko woh hi karena chahiye jo usse shobha de

Karanvir was getting angry now but his gaze falls on debattama and sees tears brimming in her eyes and he feels a pain in his heart after seeing tears in her eyes and he didn't wanted to make her sad or upset more as she was already sad due to Bua ji's word and to keep her away from all this

Kv-tum kya dekh rahi ho debattama

Deba looks at him

Kv-jao room mein aur padhai karo kal University paper hai tumhare,ghar ke kaam pe dhyaan mat do kaha hai maine tumhe padhai pe dhyaan do,aapne priority jo hai na usse pe dhyaan dena ki zarrot hai tumhe

Deba hears this and looks at him and Kv says jao aur padhai karo

And deba quitely goes upstairs

And Kv sees her going in room and He looks at Bua ji in anger and says Bua ji mujhe baar baar ek baat bolne pasand nahi hai aur na hi mujhse bade lok ko jawaab dena pasand hai mujhe,aaj ke baad agar aapne phirse debattama ki padhai ke baare mein kuch bola toh phir main bhul jaoga ki aap mujhse badi ho aur ek aur baat next time kabhi usse padhai ke waqt ghar ke kaam karena ke liye mat bolne kyun ki usske husband ko pasand nahi ki woh kitchen mein kaam kare usse bas aapne biwi books aur aapne goals pura karte huaein acchi lageti hai

And Bua ji was quiet after hearing this and Kv looks at Gayatri

Kv-chachi dinner room mein bhej dena aap

Gayatri-ji beta

And Kv goes in room

And Bua ji makes a face

Bua ji*in mind*-jadoo kare diye hai iss ladki na karan par,par main keha rahi hoon ek din karan ko isski padhai aur career ke wajah se bohat bade dard mileage jisko woh zindagi bhar nahi bhula payega

And she makes a face

Karanvir's Room

Debattama was standing near study table and was collecting her books

Deba-mujhe pe kyun gussa kiye karan ne,main toh jaa hi rahi thi na padhane

And she makes a sad face

And Just when Karanvir enters in room and sees her and his all anger goes away And he smiles and closes the door and locks it and Deba hears the sound and she turns and finds Karanvir

Kv looks at her and smiles and walks towards her

Kv-wifey chalo padhai karte hai

Deba-mujhe nahi kareni aapse baat,mujhe pe chilla diye aapne sabke samne

And she makes a face

Kv smiles at her cuteness and says maine asie kyun kiye woh tum nahi smajhe payogi

And He picks her up in his arms as if she is a doll


And Deba holds his arms and looks in his eyes and Kv intensely looks at her and He walks towards bed and Places her very softly on bed without breaking the eyelock

And Deba moves back on bed shyly and Kv sits infront of her and Deba looks at him

And Kv cups her face and leans on her and Deba closes her eyes

Kv-you are looking very beautiful today

And He places his lips on her cheeks and kisses her and deba blushes

Kv leaves her and sits beside her by placing his hand on her waist and deba looks at him

Kv-chalo ab padhai karte hai,subha se kuch bhi padhai nahi ki hogi tumne,Bua ji ke wajah se hai na

Deba nods her head in yes and Kv was very angry at Bua ji as she didn't allowed debattama to study since morning that means if today he wouldn't have came early from office then debattama had to go for her university exam without studying

Kv looks at deba who was seeming worried and he smiles to cheer her up

Kv-chalo ab padhai karte hai,hojaiyega sab kuch

And He starts teaching her and helps her in study

Kv-smajh aaye rahe hai na mishti

Deba looks at him and says haan bas darr lage rahe hai,main zyadya padhai Kare nahi payi aaj

Kv-koi baat nahi,ab kare lenga hum padhai puri

And He smiles at her and Kv teaches her and whole night they study

Around 2 o'clock

Karanvir was taking her revision but he sees that she was feeling sleepy and to remain awake she was rubbing her eyes and Kv holds her hand and deba looks at him

Kv-neend aaye rahi hai na tumhe

Deba-nahi

Kv-jhoot mat bolo l know,thak gayi ho tum,ek kaam karo tum soya jao ab,revision hi baaki hai na kal subha 5 baje Kare lenga hum

Deba-par itna jaldi hum kaise uthange

Kv-mujhe kuch office ka kaam hai,pehle woh karogi main phir shower loonga phir tumhe utha dunga

Deba hears this and says aap raat bhar nahi soyane wale

Kv-haan aadat hai mujhe,kahi baar kaam ke wajah se mujhe night owl bane pade hai

Deba-par aapko kal phir office mein neend aayegi na

Kv-nahi aayegi don't worry,tum sab jao ab,chup chap

And Deba quitely lays down on bed and Kv stands up and goes towards study table and starts doing his work,in between he was feeling sleepy but He looks at deba

Kv-main soya jaoge toh kal subha issko kaun uthage,isska kal ka paper bohat important hai

And He stays awake just for debattama as he was sure that if he will doze off then both he and her will awake straight away at 8 in morning as both where tired

Morning

Karanvir looks at clock and finds its 5 in morning and He goes towards debattama and strokes her head softly and says mishti utho,subha hogayi

But deba was in deep sleep so she says hmm,par mujhe soyane hai aur

Kv-paper hai na tumhare utha jao

And deba hears this and in worry she sits on bed and looks at Kv

Deba-bohat late hogaye kya

Kv looks at her and says nahi huaein late,jao tum fresh hojao main tanu se kehta hoon tumhare liye chai bane na ko

Deba hears this and says ji

And she stands up and goes in washroom and Kv goes down

Morning
9'o clock

Debattama was revising what all she studied till now and Karanvir was helping her

Just when Bua ji enters in room without knocking and she sees deba who was studying with Kv and she fumes in anger

Bua ji-yeh kya lage rakh hai subha subha

Kv deba hears her voice and looks at door

Deba looks at Bua ji and says ji woh mera paper hai abhi kuch time mein issliye padhai kare rahi hoon main

Bua ji-zubaan dekho isski kaise palat ke jawaab de rahi hai mujhe

Deba feels bad after hearing this and Kv looks at Bua ji and says Bua ji subha subha aap kyun Shanti bhaagne chahti ho iss ghar ki aur debattama ne kise ke saath aaj tak ulta jawaab de kare baat nahi ki hai

Bua ji gets irritated after hearing this and says tu kyun bane DM,usse accha tu lawyer bane jaate,din bhar aapne biwi ka naam leta rehta hai ussko sahi bolte rehta hai,lawyer hai ki tu usska

Kv-main lawyer hoon ya nahi woh toh nahi pata par aap zarror villain wale kaam kare rahi ho

Bua ji hears this and says karannn bohat hogaye ab aur tum Debattama yeh sab chodo aur neech aao mehndi hai shaam ko ghar mein tayaari kaun karega

Deba hears this and looks down as she can't argue more with Bua ji

Kv hears this and says haan aur usske hissa ki padhai aap kare lena Bua ji

Bua ji-main kyun karo padhai

Kv-haan toh woh nahi karegi abhi koi kaam,usse padhane dijiye please

Bua ji-phir kaam kaun karega ghar ka

Kv-bipin,ujjwal aur tanu hai unse keha dijiye woh kare lenga aur unse bhi nahi ho rahe toh main kuch aur house help arrange kare dunga

Bua ji gets quite after hearing this and murmurs paise ki garami dekha rahe hai mujhe

Kv hears this and says abhi thandi hai waise Bua ji

Bua ji hears this and glares at him and Kv smiles at her and she makes a face and goes away

Deba looks at Kv and says aap kyun itna bolte ho unko,badi hai na woh humse

Kv looks at her and says par isska matlba yeh toh nahi na ki woh sahi hai

Deba-par karan

Kv-shhh padhai karo chup chap

And keeps his finger on his lips and deba quitely looks in book and continues her study

After one hour
Drawing Room

Karanvir was waiting for debattama in living room

This was Karanvir's Outfit

He was looking very handsome in white shirt with blue color blazer and pant
Kv looks at watch and then looks at stairs and he sees debattama who was walking downstairs and Kv smiles at her

This was debattama's Outfit

She was wearing a beautiful pista color salwar kameez,with her hairs open and she was looking breathtaking

Kv sees her and walks towards her

Kv-all ready

Deba nods her head in yes and says haan par darr lage rahe hai

Kv-aree kuch nahi hoga,chalo

And he holds her hand and leaves

Bua ji sees them from kitchen and makes a face

Bua ji-bohat pyaar aur bharso hai karan ko aapne biwi par,par koi baat nahi karan ek din tumhe smajhe aayega ki kitna galat ladki se tumhari shaadi huaein hai

And she makes a face

Chitkara University

Karanvir stops the car infront of college gate and Deba gets down from car followed by Karanvir

Kv looks at her and says all the very best mishti,l know tum best karogi

Deba-l hope

Kv-have confidence in yourself

And deba nods her head in yes and goes inside the college and searches for her class room and she sits on her bench and supervisor gives her answersheet

Deba fills in the detail and finds a column and gets confused and looks at supervisor and says mam yeh PRN No kya hai

Supervisor-Yeh tumhe aapne marksheet pe mileage

Deba-but mam woh toh abhi mera pass nahi hai

Supervisor-Haan toh main kya karo usske bine tumhare paper ka assessment nahi hoga

Deba-par mam mein kaise arrange karogi,paper time bhi start hogaye hai

Reema-deba main bhi teri help nahi kare sakti sabki marksheet pe different PNR number hote hai

Deba hears this and gets worried and looks at supervisor

Supervisor-mujhe mat dekho aapne paper likha lo par yeh baat smajhe lena ki number nahi huaein toh tumhare paper check nahi hoga university se

And she walks away And deba says to herself kise ko kaho marksheet ki photo bhejane ke liye,time bhi jaa rahe hai

And she sadly starts writing the paper

After 15 minutes

Principal enters with a classroom and deba's gaze falls on him and she sees Karanvir infront of him

Deba-karan yahan

Kv's gaze falls on debattama and he smiles at her

Principal-yeh humare inspection officer hai,sabki checking hogi ki kahi koi cheating toh nahi kare rahe hai ya koi problem toh nahi hai

Supervisor looks at deba and says haan issko nikal do exam se waise bhi isska paper likhna ka koi matlba nahi hai fail hi hogi

Kv hears this and looks at deba and then glares at Supervisor and says asie kyun bol rahi hai aap

Supervisor-isska Pass PRN Number nahi hai issliye

Kv looks at deba after hearing this and puts his hand in his pocket and takes out his phone and opens the gallery and opens the pic of her marksheet and goes towards her

Kv-yeh lo mishti PRN No likha lo iss mein se

Deba hears this and gets happy as he solved her problem,she looks at him and says aapke pass pic kaise aayi

Kv-bhul gayi humein online scan karena tha documents tab maine hi toh pics click ki thi upload karena ke liye

Deba smiles and says thank you karan

Kv-its okay

And deba writes the number and supervisor was looking at him

Kv looks at supervisor and says yeh sab cheezein aapko students ko one day before toh inform karena chahiye,last moment par kahan se lekar aayenge woh

Principal-sorry sir yeh notice humko bhi half an hour pehle hi mile

Kv-haan toh tabhi hi bol deta kuch toh arrange kare leta students,asie toh inka saal,inka career barbaad hojaate na aaj

And Principal realizes his mistake and says sorry sir

Kv-next time asie nahi hone chahiye

And Kv leaves and Principal follows him

Supervisor looks at deba and says kaun tha woh inspection officer tumhare

Deba was about to reply but just when reema says from behind woh Karanvir jiju tha debattama ka saiyaan l mean usske pati,kyun deba

Deba shyly smiles And starts writing her paper and supervisor makes a face

Deba while writing paper says in mind Mata rani bohat bohat shukriya aapka aaj finally meri degree pura hojaiyegi,bohat mushkil aayi par sab sahi ho gaye

And she controls her tears and continues writing

Evening
Karanvir's House
Drawing Room

Bua ji was standing with gayatri and was looking at clock

Bua ji-dekho shaam ke 6:30 hogaye abhi tak woh debattama nahi aayi,yeh hi zimmedari hai kya usski ghar ko lekar

And just when Debattama enters and gayatri smiles at her

Deba looks at Bua ji and gayatri and says sorry woh aane mein late hogaye,paper 6 baje khatam huaein

Gayatri smiles and says koi baat nahi beta,kaise gaye waise paper

Deba-ji bohat accha gaye,easy tha

Bua ji-haan raat bhar padhaiye jo hai karan ne issko

Deba don't says anything and looks at Gayatri and says chachi baatiye kuch kaam mujhe main kare deti hoon

Gayatri-nahi beta sab kaam hogaye hai,tum jao aur ready hojao guest aate hi honge

Deba-ji chachi

Gayatri-aur karan kahan hai

Deba-unka message aaye tha,unki koi meeting aaye gayi hai ussko pura kareke aayenge

Gayatri-accha thik hai

And deba goes upstairs in room and Bua ji says yeh aaye jaiyegi phirse middle class kapde pehna kare,galati usski nahi hai,hai bhi toh middle class hi na

Gayatri hears this and says asie mat boliye Bua ji debattama ek bohat acchi ladki hai aur humare karan ke liye iss se acchi koi ladki nahi mile sakti thi

Bua ji-tu chup kare,ek se badh kare ek ladkiyaan thi karan ke liye par usse din woh media ke samne karan ko bolne pade woh sab aur phir yeh aaye gayi usski zindagi mein

And she makes a face and goes away And gayatri feels bad for debattama

Evening
Karanvir's House
Drawing Room

Entire drawing room and house was decorated with beautiful flowers and lights and all were beautifully dressed
Guests were arriving and Rajiv was welcoming them

Bua ji looks at clock and says dekhi 7 bajne ko aaye hai,kahan reha gayi tumhari karan ki vohti aayi nahi abhi tak

And just when their gaze falls on debattama who was walking towards the small circular pillar by holding a plate in her hand

Gayatri looks at her and smiles as she was looking like a doll

This was debattama's Outfit

She was looking beautiful in dark green lehenga type sharara and sleeveless short top which was fillee with work and beads and her small dupatta was around her neck and she was wearing beautiful diamond earrings and 2 diamond rings were in her finger and her hairs were open and curly from down and pinch of vermilion was applied on her hairline and pink lipgloss on her rosy lips and her milky hands were filled with dark green color matching bangles and she was looking perfect match of Karanvir Sharma

Gayatri was mesmerized by her beauty but Bua ji was fuming in jealous as deba was looking beautiful yet elegant with minimal makeup also

Gayatri-debattama

Debattama hears her and stops and smiles at her

Deba-ji chachi

Gayatri smiles and puts a Kala tika near her ears and says kise ki nazar na lage mera karan ki vohti ko,bohat beautiful lage rahi ho beta aur yeh dress kitna pyaari hai

Deba blushes and says thank you chachi

Gayatri-simple make hai par phir bhi sabse zyadya beautiful tum hi lage rahi ho

Deba smiles and says kya chachi aap bhi

Bua ji walks towards her and says ek dum middle class look lage rahe hai tumhare,itna toh smajhe hone chahiye na tum mein ki kaise kapde pehna chahiye,yeh koi choti shaadi nahi hai,bade bade lok aayenge,asie look mein samne jaogi unke,asie nahi hosakti karan ki biwi

Deba feels bad after hearing this and without replying her she walks near that small pillar and starts decorating it

Bua ji sees her and says dekho issko koi tameezi hai iss mein

Gayatri-Bua ji aap kyun baat ko itna aage lekar jaa rahi ho,ghar mein shaadi hai humare,guest aate hi honge,humein unka welcome karena chahiye na ki debattama jaise pyaari bacchi ko bur bolne chahiye

Bua ji hears this and says tujhe badi zubaan aaye gayi hai

And gayatri gets scared and looks down and Bua ji looks at deba who was placing candles and flowers but was looking sad

And Just when Richa and her family enters

Gayatri and Bua ji sees them and goes towards them

Gayatri says debattama richa aaye gayi hai

Deba hears this and turns and she also walks towards richa

Richa sees debattama and looks at her from top to down and makes a jealous face as she was looking more beautiful then her

Richa*in mind*-mujhse zyadya acchi lage rahi hai yeh aaj,jaise ki isski hi mehndi ho,mujhe bohat jalan ho rahi hai

Gayatri holds richa's chin and says kitna pyaari lage rahi hai meri bahu,ek dum chand ka tukkad lage rahi hai

And deba smiles after hearing this and richa fakes a smile

But reality was richa was wearing a heavy work green lehenga and she did a very heavy makeup and she was not at all looking pretty as her heavy makeup covered her to be bride's glow and she was not looking like a bride

Bua ji goes towards richa and holds her by chin and says kitna pyaari lage rahi hai satvik ki hone wali biwi

Richa smiles after hearing this

Gayatri-richa yeh satvik ki Bua ji hai

Richa hears this and bends down and touches her feet

Bua ji-waah kitna pyaari bacchi hai sanskar kitna saare hai iss mein

Bua ji makes her stand and says aao beta

And she takes her towards a bed and makes her sit on that and Bua ji pats her face and says Jodi ho toh satvik aur richa jaise ho,dekho kitna beautiful ladki hai,bikul satvik aur iss ghar ko suit karegi,best bahu mile hai Gayatri ko aaj se tum meri favourite bahu ho

Bua ji looks at deba and says warna kuch toh jodiyaan asie hai jinka koi match hi nahi hai,richa debattama se bhi zyadya acchi hai,l wish ki karan ki bhi asie hi biwi hoti,itna hi beautiful aur Jodi bhi acchi lageti karan ke saath

Deba feels bad after hearing this and she decides to answer her back but Gayatri encircles her hand around debattama's shoulder and deba looks at her

Gayatri-bua ji meri debattama toh bohat pyaari baachi hai usske jitna koi beautiful aur saaf dil ka koi nahi hai,debattama aur karanvir ki Jodi best hai aur mera liye debattama hi karanvir ke liye perfect hai

Deba looks at Gayatri with a smile and gayatri smiles at her

Richa gets angry after hearing this and so was Bua ji too

Bua ji-toh aapne opinion khud tak rakho na

And just when they hears a voice namaste Gayatri

And all looks at door and finds 6 girls and 4 ladies

Gayatri smiles and says arre aap sab aayie

And they all walks towards then

Gayatri-kaise ho poonam,Pinky,sapna aur laxmi

Poonam-ek dum thik hai,jaise hi sun ki satvik ki shaadi hone wali hai hum toh pinda se seedha yahan aaye gaye

Gayatri smiles and says accha kiye na

Pinky-aapne Karanvir ki shaadi mein toh boliye nahi humein,toh humne soch kyun na ab aaye jaiye

Gayatri-aree ab mile lo na karan ki biwi se aur iss bhi mera bade beta ki hi shaadi maano

And gayatri looks at deba and says yeh hai debattama karanvir ki biwi

Deba smiles at them and folds her hand

Poonam-karan ki vohti toh badi sundar hai,hayye rab ne bane di Jodi,nazar utra ki nahi isski tune

And poonam puts a Kala tika behind debattama's ears and says bohat hi pyaari bacchi hai,karan ke toh dhan bhag hai jo asie biwi mile hai,DM saheb ka duty pe dhyaan rehta hai ki yahan hi pura dhyaan rehta hai

Deba blushes after hearing this

Gayatri was feeling very proud after hearing such praising words from poonam

Bua ji and richa were jealous

Gayatri-aao ab richa se milo

And they meets richa

Pinky-yeh bhi sundar hai,par jo baat karan ki vohti mein hai woh iss mein nahi hai

Poonam-sahi kaha dulhan toh debattama lage rahi hai

Deba blushes after hearing this and Bua ji makes a face

Richa hears this and says in mind aaj tak ki sabse badi insult hai yeh,matlba main aapne hi shaadi ke din dulhan nahi lage rahi ajeeb baat hai,sab kuch iss debattama ke wajah se iss kya zarrot thi itna acchi dress pehna ki aur itna accha make up kareni ki,isski beauty meri beauty ko overshadow kare deti hai

And she makes a face and looks at debattama

Poonam-waise debattama kaha hai DM saheb

Deba smiles and says ji woh office gaye hai unki koi important meeting aaye gayi thi afternoon mein

Pinky-kab tak aayega woh

Deba-pata nahi,par keha toh rahe tha woh ki mehndi ke function mein zarror aayenge

Sapna-aaye jaiyega phir itna phool jaise vohti mile hai,mehndi ka function miss todha kare sakte hai humare karan,aayega time se aur tumhare haatho par mehndi bhi lagaega

Deba blushes after hearing this and Richa makes a face

Richa*in mind*-yeh sab baatoein mein main toh bhul hi gayi ki iss ghar ka hero Karanvir dekhaiye nahi diye itna time se,kitna good-looking aur handsome hai woh,yeh debattama toh bohat lucky hai jo asie pati mile hai

And richa makes a face

And just when satvik too enters,he sees richa and sits beside her

Satvik-hello richa kaise ho

Richa hears his voice and looks at him and finds him standing beside her

Richa smiles and says ek dum thik hoon,tum kahan tha tabse dhunte rahi thi tumhe main

Satvik-upar tha ready ho rahe tha

Richa*in mind*-kitna bhi ready hojaa tu kabhi aapne bhai Karanvir ke jitna handsome nahi lage sakte tu

And she smiles at him

And rest all goes towards food stall to eat snacks but deba was still standing and she was smiling and looking at satvik and richa

Satvik holds richa by waist and pulls her closer and kisses her forehead lovingly

Satvik-aaj tum bohat acchi lage rahi ho,main bas mera naam tumhare haatho pe likha huaein dekhane chahte hoon

Deba gets shy after hearing this and she leaves

Richa and Satvik spend some time with eachother

And debattama was looking after guest with gayatri

And Satvik selects a mehndi design for richa and mehndi wali starts applying mehndi on her hands

Gayatri sees this and goes towards debattama who was standing near dinning table

Gayatri-debattama tum yeh nimbu ka ras,richa ko de aao,usske haatho pe jab mehndi lage jaiye tab woh yeh lagegi toh color accha aayega mehndi ka

Deba smiles and says ji chachi main de aati hoon usse

And debattama takes the bowl from her hand and goes towards richa who was sitting with mehndi girl and no one was their

Richa sees deba and makes a face

Deba smiles at her and says richa hogayi tumhari mehndi

Mehndi girl-ji nahi bas ho rahi hai

Deba looks at design and smiles and says design toh bohat acchi hai satvik ne select ki

Richa hears this and says haan aur kaun karega

Deba smiles and says softly yeh nimbu ka ras hai issko aapne mehndi par lage lena,iss se mehndi ka colour accha aate hai

Richa hears this and gets angry and says aapko kya lageta hai ki pura duniya mein sab cheezein aapko hi best milte hai aur aap hi beautiful hai aur aapki hi mehndi dark hosakti hai,meri dark nahi hosakti,issliye mujhe nimbu ka ras lagane chahiye jise meri mehndi dark ho,meri mehndi aapki mehndi se bhi zyadya dark hojaiyegi yeh nimbu ka ras aap lagaye,mujhe lagane ki zarrot nahi hai,aayi badi mujhe bolne wali

Deba was hurt after hearing her words and she was shocked too as infront of others richa use to behave sweetly with her,but behind she was misbehaving with her by saying such taunting and harsh words

Deba don't says anything and goes away

Richa makes a face and says pata nahi khud ko kya smajhti hai

Deba keeps the bowl on a table and her gaze falls on small circular pillar she finds all candles blown and she lits up one candle with matchstick and by picking one candle she starts ligting other candles too

Just when Karanvir enters and everyone sees him and smiles

This was Karanvir's Outfit


He was looking very handsome in light dark brown color three piece suit with a bow tie

Richa sees him and says in mind issko kehta hai handsome ladka,kaash satvik bhi itna hi handsome hote

Karanvir don't looks at anyone as his eyes and heart was searching for his mishti and just when He finds her but he sees her half face as her back was facing towards her,but he was mesmerized as from back too she was looking beautiful

Kv goes towards her and back hugs her,Deba don't gets scared as she got his scent

Kv puts her hairs strands behind her shoulder and roams his hand on her milky neck softly and deba feels butterflies in her tummy And she closes her eyes

Kv pecks her chin and earlobe and whispers in her ears in his husky voice beautiful hi lage rahi hogi tum

Deba gets shy after hearing this and Kv notices that she was not wearing any necklace and he puts his hand in his pocket and takes out a diamond pendant and he very softly puts the diamond pendant in her neck and buckles it from behind

Deba touches the pendant and then looks at her neck and she turns

As she turns Kv slides his hand around her waist and his gaze falls on her and he looks at her from head to toe and he losses his breath as she was looking very beautiful in emerald green color dress with her hairs open and curly from down and a pinch of vermilion was on her hairline and pink lipgloss was applied on her rosy lips and her milky hands were filled with bangles and bracelet

Kv holds her hand softly and says in his husky voice aaj tum bohat beautiful lage rahi ho

Deba blushes after hearing this and she too looks at him and her breath stops for a moment as he was looking like a prince charming in brown three piece suit and his killer smile was making her heart skip a beat

Kv keeps his hand on her bare arms and  says aaj richa nahi tum dulhan lage rahi ho,waise thank you mera diye huaein dress pehna ke liye

Deba hears this and says aapne diye tha yeh dress,mujhe toh yeh bed par ek box mein rakh huaein mile

Kv smiles and says humare room mein mera siva kaun tumhare liye dress rakh sakte hai

Deba hears this and gets shy and says par yeh diamond pendant ki kya zarrot thi

Kv-thi,meri biwi princess lage rahi hai aaj,bas ek pendant missing tha aur being a responsible husband maine woh bhi complete kare diye

Deba blushes after hearing this and Kv smiles

Richa was seeing all this and was fuming in jealously

Satvik sees Karanvir and goes towards him

Satvik-kya bhaiyan aate hi bhabhi ke saath busy hogaye,bhai ko bhul gaye aap

Kv turns and looks at him with a smile and says haan tujhe bhul gaye kyun ki tu bhi toh ab aapne biwi ke saath busy hone wale hai

And deba smiles after hearing this and satvik sees and says bhabhi aap bhi bhaiyan ko hi support kare rahi ho,meri side nahi le rahi ho

Deba smiles and says karan sahi toh keha rahe hai,tum richa ke saath zyadya busy rehta ho

Kv smiles after hearing this and says dekha mishti meri tarah sach bolti hai

Deba smiles after hearing this and Karanvir goes with satvik

And deba goes towards Gayatri who was sitting with richa

Gayatri sees deba and says aao beta tum bhi beitho

Deba smiles and sits beside some girls who were applying mehndi to their hands

Neha sees her and says aap humare haatho par naam likha dijiye na

Deba smiles and says ji

And she takes cone from their hand and holds her hand and says baato kya naam likhna hai

And all girls looks at karanvir who was standing with satvik and was talking to him

Neha-Karanvir naam likha do,hum inka neighbour tha pinda mein par dil se inko bhaiyan nahi saiyaan maane hai humne,sun hai unki shaadi bhi hogayi hai par unke naam ki mehndi toh lage sakte hai hum

Deba hears this and gets jealous and glares at Neha and her friends

Deba*in mind*-ek number ki chudali hai yeh ladkiyaan karan ke naam ki mehndi lagane hai inko aapne haath par,sharam nahi aati inko kise aur ke Pati ke naam ki mehndi aapne haath par lagate huaein,inka haath par main mehndi nahi gobar lagogi

And deba writes something in everyone's hand and they sees their hand and makes a crying face

Neha-aapne mera haath par likha hai Pagal

Renuka-aur mera haath par likha hai chudali

Rinki-aur mera haath par likha hai Dayan

Jyoti-aur mera haath par likha hai bhootni

And they all looks at deba and says aapne humari puri mehndi bigaad di

And they makes sad faces and goes away And deba says karan ka naam likhna tha na haath par,ab khud ke alag naam jab likha diye maine haath par toh royane aaye rahe hai,inka saath toh asie hi hone chahiye

Karanvir was seeing all this by standing near a wall And he laughs as debattama was looking very cute in jealously and the way she treated the girls was making it difficult for him to control his laugh

Just when poonam says debattama,Karanvir,satvik aur richa kuch nach gaane toh karo ghar mein shaadi hai

And just when satvik goes towards richa and holds her by shoulder and mujhe pyaar hua tha plays

Kahani Suno Zubani Suno,
Mujhe Pyar Hua Tha Ikrar Hua Tha,

And he starts taking circle around richa and spot light was on them

Ruswayi Tere Pyar Mein Kamayi
Diwana Hua Mastana Hua,
Tere Chahat Mein Kitna Fasana Hua,

And he goes on his knees and sits infront of richa and gives her a rose and she smiles and takes the rose from his hand

Tere Aane Ki Khushboo Tere Jane Ka Manzar,
Tujhe Milna Padega Ab Zamana Hua,

And He stands up and twirls her around

Sadaiyein Suno Han Jafayein Suno,
Mujhe Pyar Hua Tha Ikrar Hua Tha

And Karanvir comes on dance floor and pulls debattama in his arms by holding her hand

music says

Hai Tamanna Hume Tumhe Dulhan Banayein,

And Kv looks into her eyes and remembers that how beautiful she was looking on their wedding day

And Kv holds her hand and says
Tere Hathon Pe Mehendi Apne Nam Ki Sajayein,

And deba looks at him shyly and Kv starts dancing with her and twirls her and she falls back in his arms

Tere Le Lein Balaye Tere Sadke Utarein,
Hai Tamanna Hume Tumhein Apna Banayein,

And He picks her up in his arms and All looks at them and all claps

Nahi Mushkil Wafa Zara Dehko Yahan,
Tere Ankhon Basta Hai Mera Jahan,
And Kv twirls by picking her up in his arms and then keeps her down on floor


And again holds her hand and starts dancing and Deba tries to free her hand from his hold as she was feeling shy but He looks in her eyes and says

Kabhi Sun To Zara Jo Main Keh Na Saka
Meri Duniya Tumhi Ho Tum Hi Asra

And Kv remembers that how she consoled him on that day when he was missing his parents and deba too remembers that whenever she feels scared she hugs him

Duwayein Suno Sazayein Suno
Mujhe pyar Hua Tha Ikrar Hua Tha


And Kv leans on her and both looks at eachother

And all claps for them and they both comes out from their thought

Satvik goes towards them and says kya dance kiye hai aap donno ne bhaiyan bhabhi,maze aayega

Gayatri-Haan par ek dance se kaam nahi chalega,kuch masti bhi toh hone chahiye

And song plays

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna

And Satvik does some steps on this song and intimates that he is in groom attire and signals richa to be ready

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Oh.. ho.. oh.. ho..

O.. aa..

Richa goes towards him and by looking at satvik signs him to hide his face and keep his feelings in his heart and sings
Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna
Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna
Yeh dil ki baat apne
Dil mein dabake rakhna

Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna

And Karanvir signs at deba and holds her hair strands very softly and says
Ud udke teri zulfein
Karti hain kya ishaare
Dil thaamke khade hain
Aashiq sabhi kanware
And he keeps his hand on his heart,deba understands that he is flirting and she controls her blush and pushes him playfully and says
Chhup jaayein saari kudiyaan
Ghar mein sharamke maare

And points her hand at him and says
Gaanv mein aa gaye hain
Paagal shehar ke saare
And she hits him playfully on his forehead and laughs and Kv was very happy as it was the first time that she was looking so happy

And Kv holds her dupatta end and pulls her closer and ties his hand with her dupatta and says
Nazrein jhukake rakhna
Daaman bachake rakhna
Nazrein jhukake rakhna
Daaman bachake rakhna

And points at him and touches his blazer collar and says
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna

Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna

Oh.. ho.. oh.. ho.. aa..

And Kv dances by saying
Main ek jawaan ladka
And then he points at deba
Tu ek haseen ladki
And keeps his hand on heart and gives her a red heart balloon and says
Ye dil machal gaya toh
Mera kusoor kya hai

Deba takes the red heart shape balloon from his hand and leaves it in air and sings
Rakhna tha dil pe kaabu
And then propers her hairs and says
Ye husn toh hai jaadu

And Kv acts as if he is been hypnotize by her
Jaadu hi chal gaya to
Mera kusoor kya hai

And then he points at door and does a srk pose and says
Rasta hamara takna
Darwaaza khula rakhna
Rasta hamara takna
Darwaaza khula rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna
And They both dances with eachother And satvik and richa too joins them
And while dancing Karanvir taps debattama's shoulder with his shoulder and she looks at him and he winks at her and deba blushes and he twirls her and dances with her

Richa sees this and gets jealous

Gayatri smiles after seeing devir and looks at Bua ji who was making faces

Gayatri-dekha kitna pyaari Jodi hai inki

Bua ji makes a face and says Andhi ho tum

And she makes a face and goes towards food stall and gayatri shakes her head in disbelief

AfterSometime

Debattama was talking with tanu and gayatri sees her and goes towards her and says debattama tumne mehndi lagi

Deba hears this and looks at her and says chachi woh bas abhi lageti hoon

Gayatri holds her hand and makes her sit on bed and says lago mehndi,aap issko mehndi lagaye aur accha se lagane,meri bahu ki mehndi ek dum nayi dulhan jaise hone chahiye

Deba smiles after hearing this and Gayatri pats her face and goes away

Mehndi girl-dekhaiye aapka haath

And she holds deba's hand and says kitna pyaare haath hai aapka koi bhi mehndi design suit karegi aapke haath par toh

Deba smiles and says ek acchi si design lage dijiye aap

And the girl was about to apply mehndi on her hand just when Kv comes and sits beside debattama and says mishti mehndi lage rahi ho mera naam ki

Deba blushes after hearing this and turns her face to hide her blush

Kv makes her turn and says mera samne blush kare sakti ho

Deba-kise ne kaha ki main blush kare rahi hoon

Kv-tumhare cheeks red lage todha

Deba controls her blush more and says gussa mein bhi gaal laal hi hote hai

Kv-par gussa jaise toh abhi kuch huaein hi nahi,yeh blush wale color hai tumhare cheeks pe

Deba smiles and Kv holds her hand and picks mehndi cone and puts a small dot on her hand and deba sees this and says aap yeh kya kare rahe ho

Kv-shagun kare rahe hoon,sabse pehle mera haq baneta hai tumhe mehndi lagane ka

And then he starts writing something in her hand

Deba sees this and Kv looks at her and says with a smile don't worry main mehndi nahi lagoge tumhare haath par,bachpan se bas drawing asie subject tha jise mein mujhe kam marks aate tha,issliye agar maine tumhe mehndi lagaye toh kal sab tumhari mehndi dekh kare royange

Deba-toh aap kya kare rahe ho

Kv-kuch nahi bas ruko tum

And Kv writes something on her hand and shows it to her and deba reads the name and says Karanvir

Kv smiles and says haan spelling wrong na hojaiye issliye thik se likha diye maine

Kv looks at girl and says accha sa lagane mehndi ab aap meri biwi ko

Deba looks at him and before she can argue or say anything to him he quickly goes away

Girl applies mehndi on her hand and says design se bhi zyadya accha naam lage rahe hai aapka haath par,bohat accha se likha hai aapke pati ne naam aapke haath par

Deba looks at Karanvir's name which was written on her hand and automatically a smile comes on her face

Girl-hogayi aapki mehndi complete,raat bhar rakhane if possible color accha aayega

Deba smiles and says thank you

And gayatri enters and looks at debattama's hand and says pura design kal dekhogi par karan ka naam accha se likha hai haath par,usse ne hi likha hai na

Deba blushes after hearing this and says aapko kaise pata chachi

Gayatri-handwriting se,waise beta sab kaam hogaye hai bas garden mein check karena hai ki saare arrangement hogayi hai ki nahi dinner ki,toh tum check kare lena beta

Deba-ji chachi main dekh leti hoon

And Debattama stands up and goes in garden

Garden

Debattama goes in garden and was about to walk towards food stall but just when she sees something and she is shocked and she shivers in fear
As she....

Next Update-Whom did debattama saw in garden...

Twist will open up in next update

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