Love Action Bromance

By d_silent_reader

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A simple story that revolves around 3 brothers and their love life. Ee storyil kurach romance, brotherhood... More

1 : Take a look 🙄
2 : Begins
3 : College
4 : Accident
5 : First sight/fight
6 : Infatuation
7 : My girl
8 : Mission- Love
9 : Bad decision?
10 : Fighting!
11 : Meant to be
12 : Tables turned
13 : Unknown Feelings
14 : Guilty or not?
15 : Truth wins
16 : Jealous?
18 : The second fight
19 : Injured
20 : Flashback
21 : Confused feelings
22 : Possessive
23 : Villain?
24 : Lost?
25 : Confession?
26 : One side love?
27 : Everything is fair in love!
28 : The Hidden Enemy
29 : Complicated
30 : With you, forever
31 : Misunderstandings..
32 : Moving on
33 : One step ahead
34 : Silent love
35 : Calm after the storm
36 : The final proposal
37 : Face to face
38 : Action
39 : Occasion
40 : Tying the knot
41 : Tough times
42 : Love wins
43 : Pleasure [M]
44 : Surprise
45 : Expect the Unexpected
46 : False hope

17 : Party

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Within split seconds, Joe roseinte kayyinu mele koode avante 2 kaiyyum vach break randum pidichu.. ennittum, avar athyaavashyam nalla speedil vannath kond thanne, aa humb chaadiyath valare mikacha oru forceil aayirunnu..

Ath kazhinj vespa sudden break aayi. But aa forceil Joe roseinte purakiloott veenu.. his chin placed on her left shoulder.. hands above her long, slender arms..

She could feel his unbalanced heartbeat on her back, athrakk ottichernnaanu ippo avan irikkunnath..

Rose kannadach handleil muruke pidichu..Avante ee closeness enthokkeyo strange feelings avalude ullil undaakkunnu.. she can feel his hot, ragged breathing, really close to her ear..

After some seconds, Joe pathiye avalude kaikalkku mele ninnum avante kaikal eduthu.

Rose kurach pedich poyirunnenkilum, athineekkaalaare avalude hridayamidipp koottiyath avante presence aayirunnu..

Joe vespayil ninnum irangy, with raised eyebrows and kalipp face, he faced his bestie.

Joe : nee irangikkee ingotte..😤

Rose avane thanne nokkikkond pathiye scooter stand ittathinu shesham irangy ninnu. Mukhath no expression at all, she's keeping a blank face.

Joe : inganeyaanoodee koppe vandiyoodikkunnee..?manushyane kollaaan nokkuvaa aval..🤨

Rose : (pout) joeppa..🙂

Joe : ayya.. konchanda nee.. oronnu oppichvachitt ingane angu ninnaa mathiyallo..?🤧

Rose : (pout intensified) sorry~🥺

Joe took a deep sigh and gazes at her helplessly.. kaaranam, her pout and big puppy eyes are his weakness. Aa mukhath nokki deshyappedaanum maathram krooran alla joe..😌

Joe : hmm i-

Eda drohikale... Enne onnu helppedaa..😫😩

Rose : ehh..😲

Joe : ee vrithiketta shabdham njaanevideyoo...🤔

Feli : eda saamadrohee.. aa thala thirich ingottekk nokkeda pullee..😫

JoSe aa shabdhathinte uravidam thedi sideileekk nokkiyappo.. dhaande kidakkunn thaazhe mannil.. felimwon..🙂

Feli : enne aareelum hospitalil kondovoo.. ayyoo..😫😫

Rose : uyyoo.. feli! 😳

Joe : feliyee..! 😲

Avar randaalum vegam feli kidakkunna road sideilekk chennu. Joe avane pidich ezhunnelppichu, with utmost care. Rose avante tshirtil pattiya podi okke thatti kalayaan thudangy.

Feli : kaiyyedukkedi koppe.. manushyane vandeennu thattiyitt kollaan nokkeett..😫

Rose cheruthaayi ilichoond maari ninnu. Meanwhile Joe was busy scanning feli.

Joe : ayyo dhee blood! Eda ninte kai potteettond!😯

Feli : (valathu kaimuttileekk nokkunnu) ayyoo karthaave.. chora..😫

Feli joede melott chaari nilppaayi.. rose ithokke kand antham vittu nilkkunnu... Pinne ee road oru cheriya shortcut aane, clg to main road. Mattee vazhiyiloode poyaal police checking okke ullath kaaranam aane Ivar ee vazhi vannath. Ivide adhikam vandikalum thirakkum onnum illa. So ee sambhavam nadannappo aarum avide undaayirunnilla..

Rose : (tries to have a look at feli's hand) eda Njaanonnu nokkatte..👀

Feli : vendaa..🤧 ayyooo.. njaanippo blood vaarnnu chaavuve... (Clutches on Joe's shirt) ennekkond melaayee..😫

Joe : (irritated) ooohh.. 🥴 2 stich ittaa theerunna prashnam ollu ente mone...

Feli : karthaave stictch aa..!! 😳 Appo vedhanikkoolleee...!😫🤧

Joe : onnu mindaathe iriyeda..🙄 (to rose) nee jimmichane vilichitt ee vazhi varaan para.

Rose nodded and avalude jeans pocketil ninnu phone eduth jimmyde number dial cheythu.



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Meanwhile at college -

Jimmy staff parking lotilekk nadannu varumbo aane vere randu per kayyokke korth pidich nalla 24 carot chiriyokke chirich angotte varunne..

Jimmy : ah.. ningalithuvare poyillee appo?👀


Taevin : illa.. enthaayalum ichaayan vannittalle paripaadi thodangullu.. appo orumich povaannu karuthy 😁.


Along with Taevin, as usual nadiyum und... Avante kai korth pidich jimmye nokki chirichu nilppaane kakshi.

Jimmy : Nadi, veetil paranjittalle ponnath, innu late aavunn..?

Nadi : ah, spl class undenn paranju 😊, athond kuzhappallia jimmicha 😁..


Jimmy : hmm.. ennaa pinne namukk irangaam.. ini ninnu time kalayanda..

Pettenn jimmide phone ring cheyyunnu..after taking a look at the caller id, he attends the call.

Jimmy : ah rosey para..eh!😮 Ennitt!? Hmm..Sheri avide thanne nilkk.. ippo varaam...

Avan call cut cheyth phone eduth thirike pocketil ittu.

Taevin : entha ichaaya kaaryam?

Both Nadi and taevin looks at him with curious eyes.

Jimmy : oh athonnullada.. oru chinna accident. Feli onnu vandeennu veenu. Appo avane hospitalil kondoonam..

Nadi : ayyo! Ennitt entheelum pattiyoo..? 😟

Jimmy : eyy.. kaaryavaayitt onnulla.. pinne avante swabhaavam arinjoode, urumb kadichaa polum van scene aakkunna partya.. pinne ithu parayandalloo..

Taevin : Ivarippo evideyaa?

Jimmy : nammude shortcut road ille, avide vach. Hmm..., Appo ningal Chelle.. njaan avaneyum kond onnu hospital vare poyitt..nere angotte vanneekkaam..

Nadi : (worried) ichaaya, njangalum koode varano..?

Jimmy : eyy.. athinum maathram serious onnuvalla.. ningal poikko.

Taevin : hmm.. vaa nadi..

Nadi : ahh..

Angane TaeNadi taevinte bullet park cheythirikkunnidathekk nadannu. Jimmy avante car eduth JoSeFeliyude adutheekku thirichu..

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After 5 minutes -

Jimmy carum kond spotil ethi. Joe feliye thaangippidich Caril prathishttichu. Feli appozhum mongikkond irikkuvaane..

Jimmy : (from driving seat, thala purathitt choikkunnu) ningal randum vandeel alle varunne?

Rose : ah jimmicha.. (turns to Joe) vaa joeppa..

Joe : alla mole.. neeyaano vandi edukkaan povunne?🤨

Rose : allaathe pinne..🧐

Joe : ayyadiii.. ini ennekkoode ithupole roadil uruttiyitt kollaanolla purappaadaanallee.. ath nadakkulla🤧

Rose : itheyy.. ente vandiya... My babygirl.. ente vandi njaan enikkishttolla pole oodikkum.. vendenki keranda.. maari nikkeda..😏

Aval joene unthi maattaan nokkiyenkilum, no raksha. Chekkan anangunna mattilla.. last rose sahi kett appurathekk maari ninnu.

Rose : nee maarillenki Venda.. njaan appurathoode pokkoolaam..🥴

Appurath park cheythirunna avalude vespakk arikileekk nadakkaan poya rosune Joe kai vach thadanju, and successfully thattipparikkal the key from her hand.

Rose : key thaada!🤨

Joe : tharathilla..ini nee innu vandi edukkanda.. chumma vazhiyiloode povunna aalkkaare kuruthikk kodukkaan njaan sammaikkoolla.🤧

Rose : oh pinnee...🙄. joeppa... Nee maryaathakk key thannekk..🤨

Joe : pattathilla. Venenki ente koode backil irunnu vanno.. innini ninnekkond njaan vandi eduppikkathilla.

Rose veendum avanood oronnu paranju tharkkikaan nilkkumbolekkum Jimmy idapettu.

Jimmy : atheyy.. ningal innu thanne entheelum oru theerumaanam aakkuvo?🙄

Rose : ah jimmicha.. njaan ichaayante koode varuvaa..

Rose Joene onnu tharappich nokkiyitt jimmyude carinte backseatil kayari.

Jimmy : (to joe) eda nee appo nere angotte vittoo.. njangal hospitalil poyitt varaam.

Joe : ah jimmicha..

Joe then looks at rose, but aval appurathoott nokki kayyum ketti mukham veerppich irikkuvaane.

Rose : aa konthante maramontha kaanaan nilkkaathe vandi edukk jimmicha...

Jimmy : ooo.. Sheri madam.

Angane Jimmy car start cheythu, avar poyi. Joe smiles and rosunte vespa eduth taevinum nadiyum poya sthalatheekk thirichu..

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At govt. Medical clg
General ward -


Feli oru moolakkittirukkunna bedil irikkunnu.. Avante kaimuttinu mukalil muriv pattiya bhaagam stitch iduvaane oru medical student. Ith medical College aayathoond thanne house sergancy cheyyunna piller aane ithupole immaathiri kunj kunj casekul okke attend cheyyunne..

So aa penkoch aane felide kai stitch ittond irikkunne. Appurath vere 3 students koode nokki nilppund. Feli aanenki ee kochine thanne nokki vellamirakki irikkuvaane..🌚

That kutti : ippo vedhana undo chetta?

Feli : eeyy... Nalla chukam..🌝

She smiles and continues what she is doing.

Feli : kutti eth yearaa?

That kutti : final. Mm..(looks at the wound) ithenth pattiyatha..?

Feli : oh.. onnum parayanda kochey.. oruthide koode onnu scooteri keriyatha.. (looks at rose with a done look)

Rose kurach maari chumarum chaari ithu nokki nilkkunnund ketto..


Rose pov : uh.. shavam...oru gap kittiyappoleekkum angotte keri aalaavaan nokuvaa.. kaattukozhi.🙄

Feli : (again eyes on that kutti) ah athokke potte.. kuttide perenthuvaa.?

Rose rolls her eyes with annoyance and avide ninnu puratheekk nadannu..

Meanwhile at "Royal Feast" restaurant -


Tae-nadi and Joe poyath ee spotilekkaane.. kaaranam ee sthalam avarude sthiram place aane.. enth celebration undenkilum, chilav kodukkaan aanelum ividekkaane avar pokaarullu.. pinne, jimmichante oru friend nadathunna restaurant aane ith.. so, obviously avar ingottekkallee varu..

Appo taevin and Nadi first thanne vannu sthalam pidichittund ketto.. oru corneril ulla valiya tableil aduthaduthaayi avar irikkuvaane.

Taevi : nee ee juice kudichitt food kazhikkuvo Nadi..?😐

Nadi : (sips the musambi juice infront of her) athokke njaan kazhikkum..😁

Taevin : uvva.. last baakki aavunnath motham njaan thanne kazhikkande varum... Athaanallo nammade pathiv.🥴

Nadi : eee.. athupinne... (Straw itt 2 vattam ilakkal in the glass)

Taevin : oru pinneyum illa. Mathi ith kudichath.. ingu thanne..

Taevin aa juice eduth maatti vachu. Nadi pouts and looks at him with a sad face.

Taevin : nokkeettonnum kaaryavilla.. njaan tharathilla..😁

Nadi : oh.. Venda.. 🙄

Angane avar oronnu mindeem paranjum irikkumbo athaa angotte vespade key kayyil karakki kalichoond nadannu varuvaane.. aare?




Joe : halloo love birds..🤓

Randaalum avane kand onnu chirichu. Joe avarude opposite oru Chair valichitt irunnu.

Taevin : appo avarokke enthiyee..? Nee maathram ollo?

Joe : avar felineem kond hospitali poyi. Njaan pinne rosunte babygirl adich maatti ingotte ponnu.. 😁

Taevin : oho..

Nadi : felikk kuzhapponnullallo.?

Joe : ente itthaa.., kai onnu oranju potti.. ayinaane aa mothal avide kidannu nenjathadich nilavilichondirunne..🙄

Nadi : 🤭

Joe : alla.. (taevinte aduth vachirunna juice Avante aduthekk neekki ) ningalappo nammale onnum wait cheyyaathe paripaadi thudangiyallee..😶😐

Taevin : illada.. ith ivalkk vishakkunnenn paranjappo order cheythaya..

Joe : appo njaan ithangu edukkuvaane.. nalla daaham..😁

And Joe athu motham vaayiott kamizhthi..

Nadi : ninakk venenki vere order cheytho.. ath kurach alle ullu.?

Joe : (finished the juice and wipping his lips) eyy.. thaalkkaalika aashwasathinu ithu mathi.. allenki food varumbo kazhikkaan vayattil sthalam kaanulla..😁

Taevin : hmm.. alla, jimmichane onnu vilich nokkiyaalo? Avar late aakuvo ini?

Nadi : (looks at her watch) enikk 6.30kk aa ichaaya bus..

Taevin : ennaa onnu vilichekkaam..

Joe : ah vilikk vilikk.. (opens the menu and reading it with myaaraka concentration)

Taevin phone eduth jimmye vilikkunnu..

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Athee timeil Jimmy wardinu purath nilkkuvaane.. appozhaanu taevinte call varunnath. Aal call attend cheyth sideile oru verandayiloode nadannu..

On the call -

Jimmy : ennaa da? Ahh.. illa late aavathilla.. njangal dhee vannu.. ningal order cheytho.. njangal appozheekkum enthiyeekkaam.. aah da.. Sheri.

Angane aal phone pocketil thiruki povaan thirinjathum... Dhaante nilkkunnu... Aaraa...?

Kannu thurannu nokk Bebo... Dhoo ang attath.. aa Verandayude moolakk oraal nilkkunna kandaa..?🧐🧐



















Jimmy pov : eh.. ivan enthaa ivide..? Aarodaa ingane samsaarichond nilkkunne..?

Jimmy kurachoode onnu munnoott nadannu enthi valinju nokkiyappo.. abhi samsaarichond ninnath..ee kochinood aane..🌝


Jimmy squinted his eyes and avar samsaarich nilkkunnath nokki mindaathe avide ninnu.. silently invigilating them.

Aa kutti nannaayi chirich kalich varthamaanam parayuvaane. Abhiyum angane okke thanne.. angane around 3 minutes kazhinjappo aa koch watchileekk nokki abhiyood entho paranju. Ennitt abhiye nokki oru wide smile vach koduthitt avane kettippidichu.

Jimmy : oh oh oh.. 🌝😌

Abhi shyly smiles and waves her a bye. Avanu tata bye bye okke paranj angane aa koch appurathekk nadannu poyi.. abhi naanich thala kunich thirich ingott nadannu.. angane nadannu nadannu vannappo.. athaa munpil oru Jimmy ser..😁


Abhi : (right hand on his chest) nte Krishna..!😧

Meanwhile Jimmy with a teasing smile, oru sideil aayi chumarum chaari kaiyyum ketti avane nokki nilkuvaa.


Jimmy : baa abhi mone.. ingotte vaa..😊

Abhi gulped helplessly chirichond jimmyude adutheekk nadannu chennu.

Abhi : s-sir entha.. ivide?🙂

Jimmy : athokke avide nilkkatte.. aa poyath aara..? 🌝

Abhi : eh.. eth?🙂

Jimmy : ee medical uniform itta penkoch.. ha.. ninne ippo thanne kettippidicha aa koch..🌝

Abhi : (gulps) a-th.. f-frienda..

Jimmy : Aahnoo.. ennathaa pere?

Abhi: Abhishek.🙂

Jimmy : ayyente mone.. ninte alla.. aa kochinte..

Abhi : (forceful smile) Jennie.. Jennifer.

Jimmy : hmm... Verum friend aano.. athoo...?🌝

Abhi : friendaa.. friend.🙂

Jimmy : ah.. athenikk kandappozhee thonni..

Jimmy payye abhiyude tholathoode kayyitt avaneyum kond munpileekk nadakkaan thudangy.

Jimmy : abhi mone..

Abhi : (starts to sweat) e--entha sir?👀

Jimmy : Sathyam para.. ith thudangiyitt ethra naalaayi..?

Abhi : eth..? 😶

Jimmy : nee pottan kalikkaallee.. athum ente aduth.. (stood opp. to him) neeyaayitt parayunno.. athoo njaan kandupidikkanoo.?🤨

Abhi : (thala thaazhthi ninnu) 1 Ara kollam aayi..

Jimmy : ahm.. angane varatte.. appo details para.😌

Abhi : ath.. njangale.. Facebook vazhi parichayappettatha.. aadhyam nalla friends aayirunnu.. pinne ath eppozho.. ishttam aayi maari.. jenni kottayamkaariyaa.. pinne ivide vannu padikkunnathokke.. enne kaanaan venditta..

Jimmy avan parayunnathokke kettu ninnu.

Abhi : sir ith aarodum parayaruth.. please.. 🥺

Jimmy : ninte chechiyood maathram... parayaavo?😌

Abhi : ayyo chathikkalle sir...chechi engaanum arinjaa pinne theernnu.. please.. aare arinjaalum chechi maathram ariyaruth..🥺

Jimmy : hmm.. Njaanonnu alochikkatte..

Abhi : sir please..🥺

Jimmy : Sheri. Njaan aayitt onnum aaroodum parayulla. Pakshe.. (hands on Abhi's shoulder) nee enikk chila sahaayangal idakkokke cheythu thareendi varum.. oru paalam ittaal.. angottum ingottum venollo..😌

Abhi : enth sahaayam?🤔

Jimmy : athokke njaan vazhiye parayaam.. pinne, nee premikkanda ennonnum njaan parayullla. Athokke ee praayathil aarkkum thoonnaavunnatha.. pakshe, ninte sneham aatmaarthamaayirikkanam.. ellaam kazhinj odukkam aa penkochine itteech povaruth. Kettallo?

Abhi : ahh..🙂

Jimmy : ippo nee nannaayi padikk.. ennitt oru joli okke vaangyitt ee kaaryathil concentrate cheyy ketto..

Abhi nodded with a smile. Jimmy smiles and avante tholath thatti onnu chirichitt avide ninnu poyi.

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Meanwhile rose avideyokke jimmye anveshich nadakkuvaairunnu.. last randaalum kandumutti.

Rose : jimmicha.. ningalithevide aayirunnu..? Ethra neravaayi call cheyyunnu? Phone switched off aanallo?

Jimmy : (taking phone from pocket and checks it) oh.. charge theernnatha..njaan chumma ivide onnu karangaannu vachu.. alla,avide enthaayi? Kazhinjo stitch idal okke.?

Rose : oh onnum parayanda.. aa kaattukozhi avide irunnu kokkunnund..🙄

Jimmy : nee post aayalle?🤭

Rose : ichaayan vanne.. povaa..

Rose athum paranj jimmyde kai pidich felide adutheekk valichoond poyi.

Avar feliyude aduth chennappo avan avide aa penpilleerkk paatt paadi kodukkuvaane..🙄 avar shradhikkunnilla ennullath vere kaaryam.. they're so busy with writing something on their registers.

Feli : viral thottaal viriyunna penpoove~~ onnu thottootte njaan~ 😉

Jimmy : ah.. thottathum pidichathuvokke mathi kutta.. kaaryam kazhinjenki eneettatte.. nammakk povande?😌

Feli : (awkward smile) ah.. ichaaya.. povaam..🙂

Jimmy : ennaa vaa..

Rose : vaa vaa.. mathi nokkiyath..

Rose feliye pidich valichoond puratheekk nadannu, followed by Jimmy.

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After 15 minutes...
At restaurant.

Atlast team motham ivide ethi, angane avar food okke order cheythitt irikkuvaane.

Jimmy, Feli and rose. Opposite to them, Taevin, Nadi and Joe. Ingane aane seating.

Joe : (takes a glass and spoon eduth 2 kottal on that) appo guys.. nammude ponnomanayaaya jimmichan case jayich vannathinum... Nammude kannilundayaaya-

Feli : enthonne? Kannil undayo?🤭🧐

Joe : sorry sorry.. kannilunniyaaya taevichaayanu joli kittiyathum pramaanich.. jimmichan sponser cheyyunna ee partyileekk ellaavarkkum warm welcome! 😁

All claps. (Bebo, ninalum clap cheyyunne.. veruthe oru paniyumillaathe irikkuvalle..aa kayyokke onnu anangatte.👀)

Joe : appo... Ellaavarum maximum avaravarkk pattaavunna tharathil food kazhich jimmichane mudippikkanam ennu paranjkond njaan ente vaakkukal upasamharikkatte.. 😁

Feli : ath njaaneettu mahne.. nee paranjilleelum njaan aa karyam cheythirikkum!🌝

Jimmy : njaan loan edukkandi varuvooda..?👀

Joe : mikkavaarum..😊

Appozhekkum food okke vannu.. waiter ellaam servr cheythoond irikkumbo Jimmy ezhunnettu.

Feli : bill kodukkaathe mungaan ulla paripaadiyaana? 🧐

Jimmy : ente ponno... Onnu washroom poyitt varaanne.. 🙄

Feli : ahh Chelle Chelle..😁

And Jimmy avide ninnu washroomilekk poyi. Angane povunna vazhikk...

Kurach maari oru tableil enthoo oru ochappaadum bahalavum. Avan enthaa sambhavam ennariyaan vendi angott nadannu.

Avidekk nadannadukkum thorum aaro uchathil bahalam vakkunna sound Avan kettu. English+ Malayalan mixed cheethavili aane..

And Jimmy avide nadannethi. Oraal angott thirinju ninnu aareyo nokki cheetha vilikkuvaane. Ayaalude opposite aaraane nilkkunne ennu jimmikk kaanan pattunnilla. Ee bahalam kett ethoo oru waiter angottekk vegathil nadannu varunnund..

That man : Fu** you bit**! 🤬

Ayaal athu paranjathum, Jimmy chennu ayaale thatti vilichu..

Jimmy : hey mister..🤨

But..... Ayaal thirinjathum jimmyude mukhatheekk aaro shakthiyaayi vellamozhichathum orumichaayirunnu..

Actually, ath ayaalkk kittandathaayirunnu.. but for Jimmy's bad luck, correct timeil thanne poyi ayaale vilichu.. ayaal maariya kaaranam, Jimmy nice aayi onnu nananju.

Avan pathiye thante valath kai kond mukham thudachitt munpil nilkkunna, thante mukhatheekk jalaabhishekam nadathiye aale onnu nokki.


To his surprise, it was HER.

(Bebo.. play 🍇paadam 🌝)

Already njetti oru vidhathil aayi nilkkunna Jimmy appuvine kandappo onnude njetti. But slowly, a smirk appeared on his lips.

Jimmy : (hair flip through his wet hair) Appu!👀🌝

Appu : thannoodaara ithinte idayil keri varaan paranje?🤨

Jimmy : shedaa.. ente mel vellam Kori ozhichathum poraanj.. ini kuttam motham enikkaayo?😐 Alla.. enikkariyaan paadillaathond choikkuvaa... Appune ennee kaanumbo kaanumbo ingane kulippikkanam ennu valla nercha undoo..?😐

Appu sighs with a done face and matte aalude nere thirinju.

Appu : ippo thaan paranjathinulla marupadi njaan courtil thannoolaam..kettodoo?🤨

That man : (ultimate pucham) nee podii.. ninnekkond pattunna enthaannu vachaa cheyy..😏

Jimmy appuvinte munpil kayari ninnu.

Jimmy : ah.. athokke madam cheythoolum.. sir ippo thalkkaalam chell.🤨

Ayaal avare randaaleyum onnu maari maari nokkiyitt deshyathil avide ninnum nadannu poyi.

Appu : ddo..🤨

Jimmy : ooo~🌝

Appu : thannoodaara ippo ingottekk varaan paranje? Chumma aavashyamillaatha kaaryathil thala vekkanda, ketto?

Jimmy : aisheri.. kollaallo kali.. chumma ee vazhiye poya njaanaa.. ee bahalam kett enthaanaavo prashnam ennu nokkaan onnu keri nokkiyappoo... Mukhathoott vellam kori ozhichu...😣

Appu : ah..ippo manassilaayille, aavashyamillaatha kaaryathil idapettaa inganokke sambhavikkunne..? (Avane nokku kai ketti ninnu)

Jimmy : ennaalum.. (staring at her piercing eyes) oru sorry njaan pratheekshichu..😌

Appu : enthine?🤨

Jimmy : ariyaathe pattiya oru thettinu sorry parayunnath athra mosham kaaryavonnuvalla... 😊

Appu : njaan ariyaathe cheytha allallo.. venonn vachitt thanneyaa..😏

Jimmy : enthine..?😐

Appu : (2 step munnoott kayari ninnu and eye contact) paathi raathri kudich bhodham illaathe.. penkuttikale vilich shalyam cheyyuka..😊

Jimmy : (gulps with a nervous smile) ath... Oru... Kayyabhadham..😬

Appu : ohhoo.. ennaa cheytha aa abhadhathinu sorry paranjeekk.. appo pariganikkaam..😏

Jimmy : sorry.. ini aavarthikkilla..😬

Appu : hmm.. aavarthichillenki.. thanikk nallath..😊

Jimmy : oo..😁

Aval onnum mindaathe jimmye marikadannu munnoott nadannu. Jimmy thirinj aval pokunnath nokki nilppayi.. with a wide smile plastered on his face.

Jimmy : Atheyy..madam..!

Door thurannu purath kadakkaan ninnirunna appu thirinj jimmiye nokki, with questioning eye brows.

Jimmy : njaan angane kannil kanda penpillereyonnum vilikkaarilla... Madathine maathram..😌

Appu rolled her eyes and thirinj door thurannu puratheekk kadannu.. but as she walked towards her car, a smile began to appear on her lips.

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After some minutes..
Back to their table.

Nadi : ennaalum jimmicha.. ningade ellaa meetingum ithupole comedy aanalloo...🤭

Jimmy : ah.. ningakk comedy aa.. pakshe enikk romantic aa..😌

Joe : enthonne romance? Njaan ippozhee parayuva ichaaya.. sherikkum ettathikk enthoo prashnam und.. allenki ingane cheriya kaaryathinonnum immaathiri hyper aavanda kaaryavonnuvilla..🙄

Rose : oh pinne.. onnu poyee.. ingotte theri vilikkumbo pinne athum kett mindaathe irikkano? Ellaarum ninnepole manakunaanjanmaar alla..🙄

Joe : aaraadi manakunanana...

Feli : enth?👀

Joe : oh.. vaayi kollaatha vaakk paranj manushyane thettikkaan nokkuvaa..😤

Jimmy : athee.. enthokke aayaalum, njaan appuvine kettathullu.. (takes a fork and joede kazhuthinu nere neetti pidikkunnu) appo ini avalekkurich parayumbo.. ath ettathy aanenn orma venam.. kettalloo?

Joe : (peeks at the fork with wide eyes and gulps) a-ah.. kettu ichaaya..🙂

Rose : athenikkishttappettu.. 😁

Joe : podii parattee..😏

Rose : nee poda thorappaa..😏

Feli : rosu, ninakk aa leg piece vendenki njaan eduthoottee?😁

Rose : ayyadaa!

Vegam aval aa leg piece eduth kazhikkaan thudangy..

Nadi : (low voice) jimmicha..

Jimmy : enthaa nadi?

Nadi : nikku mathiyaayi..😬

Taevin : (warning tone) nadii..🤨

Nadi : ini ente vayattil sthalam illa ichaaya..😣

Taevin : ithaa njaan munpee paranje... Aa juice kudikkandaanne.. ini ee food motham wast-

Joe : don't worry itthaa.. food waste aakkaan njaan sammaikkoolla.. athokke ee plateiloott thattikkoo..😁

Nadi : (happy) aah..😊

Taevin : onnum kazhikkaathe ingane nadanno..veruthe alla ksheenichu varunne..🥴

Jimmy : da, kochine chumma vazhakk parayallee.. avalkk venenki aval kazhichoolum..

Taevin : ooo..

Nadi : 😁

After 5 minutes...

Ellaarum food okke kazhichu kazhinju, ippo dessertileekku kadannu. Nadikk vegam povanda kaaranam taevin and Nadi kurach munpe poyi.. Jimmy pinne avante friendinood samsaarich appurath cash kodukkunna sthalath nilkkuvaane..

JoSeFeli maathram avide irunnu icecream kazhikkunnund..

Feli and rose full avarude ice cream il concentrate cheythond irunnu kazhikkuvaane..
Joe idakk roseine nokkunnund, rose aanenki messy eater aa.. so aval kazhikkumbo lipsilum mukhathumokke chilappo food aavum.. prathyekich avalude favourite ice cream aanenkil.. appo ippo avalude lipsinte sideilum, cheeksilumokke ice cream spread aayittund. But she looked so cute with that. 🥺😍

Joe pov : achoda...ennaa cute aa ee rosamma..😍

Rose onnu thala pokki Joe ne nokkiyappo Avan avale ima chimmaathe ingane nokkikkond irikkunnathaa kaanunne.

Rose : mmm?🤨

Joe : (nods his head) mhmm..😍

Rose : (confused and avalude bowl maatti pidichu) ith njaan tharathilla..😶

Joe chuckled and avante kai avalkku nere neetti, (avar opp. Aane irikkunne) avalude lipsinte thaazhe pattiya icecream thudachu koduthu..

Meanwhile roseinte kannokke bulb aayi, with wide eyes and parted lips.. she looked double cute.

Avan avale nokki chirichukond avalude cheekil pattiya icecream viral kond thudach aa viral avante vaayil vachu..

And it was all over for her. Enthaa nadakkunne ennu ariyaatha oru avastha aayirunnu appo roseinu..

After some seconds, aval aa transil ninnum purath vannu.. a sudden blush covered all over her round cheeks.

Rose : ennaa da joeppa?😐

Joe : onnulla..😁

Rose : hmm..

With a shy smile, she continued eating her icecream.. her face all flushed and heated up.
Joe smiled at her and continues eating his icecream.. ithonnum kaanathe feli avide irunne nalla polling..🙂


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At bus stop -

Taevin nadiye avante bikeil bus stop vare kond vannu aakki koduthu. Aval bikeil ninnum irangy avane nokki chirichu.

Nadi : potte, ichaaya?

Taevin : ahh.. Chelle.. ini bus miss aakkanda.. 😊

Nadi : okay.. bye..😊

Taevin : ah bye..

Nadi thattam onnu nereyaakki itt thirinj povaan ninnathum aake shock adicha kanakke ninnu poyi..

Aval vegam thirinj taevinte adutheekk vannu. She was scared and shivering a bit with fear)

Nadi : (scared as hell) ichaaya..!!!😨😨

Taevin : ennaa? Ennaa patti?👀

Nadi : vaappachi..😧😧😥

Taevin : ehh😳 evide..? (Looks around)

Nadi : aa busstopinte aduthulla kadayile.. ichaaya.. enikk pedi aavunne..

Nadi Avante kaiyyil murukke pidichu, lowering her head. Avan onnu chuttum nokkiya shesham nadiyude vaappaye kandu, aal avide oru kadayil aaroodo varthamaanam paranjond nilkkuvaane.

Taevin : nee pedikkalle.. (avalude kaikal Avante kayyil eduthu pidichu)

Nadi : (kayyokke cheruthaayi virakkunnund) nammale kandittundaavoo..?😥

Taevin : Nadi, ente mukhathoott nokkikke..

Aval pathiye avante mukhatheekk nokki.. taevin softly smiled.

Taevin : kandu kaanilla.. nee vegam chelle. Bus ippo varum. ini ivide ingane ninnaal chelappo kandunnu varum.. athoond vegam chelle..

Nadi : ichaa-

Taevin : dhee bus vannu.. nee chelle mole.

Nadi: mmm..

With a nervous face, aval vegam oodi stopileekk poyi.. Aval bus kayari poyathinu shesham taevin vegam avide ninnu thirike poyi..

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Skip to CHAKKAALAKKAL VEED.
Night 8 pm.
Jimmy's room.

Jimmyum joeyum bedil kidannu phoneil kuthikkondirikkuvaane. Taevin Avante phoneun kayyil pidich aake tensed aayi angottum ingottum nadakkunnu..

Jimmy : (looks at taevin) neeyonnu samaadhaanipped ente mone.. aval vilikkum..🙄

Taevin : engane samaadhaanappedaana ichaaya.. saadhaarana 7 manikk vilikkandatha.. ithippo -

Joe : 8 mani alle aayullu.. ittha vilikkum.. ichaayan onnu cool aaye..

Taevin : (bites nails and bedil vannu irunnu) ennaalum.. inippo veetti-

Jimmy : nee ingane negative adikkalle ente taevine.. aval vere entheelum kaaranam kondaavum vilkkaathe. Nee chumma oronnu aloich koottaan nikkanda..

Taevin : angane aakuvalle..? 😶

Joe : aahnne.. ichaayan tension adichoond ivide ippo oru kaaryavumilla.. chumma pedikkaam ennallaaathe..

Jimmy : athaane.. nee dhairyamaayi irikk.. aval vilikkum.

Taevin : hmm..

Joe : ichaayan innu ivide kidanno.. namukk moonaalkkum koode innivide kidakkaam...😊

Jimmy : ath venodaa monee.?👀

Joe : enthey, ichaayane entheelum bhudhimutt undoo?

Jimmy : eyyy..

Joe: hmm.. ennaa pinne kidakkaam.. baa... Enikk nalla urakkam varunnond...

Taevin : ningal kidanno.. njaan kurach kazhinj varaam..

Jimmy : aah..

And taevin left the chat. Joe already bedil kidakkuvaanallo.. aal oru pillow okke kettippidichu onnude vistharich avide kidappaayi.. Jimmy continued thondal on his phone...

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Next morning..
At 8 am.
Jimmy's room.

Aal nalla urakkavaane.. collegil povanam ennulla chintha onnulla pullikk.. blanket moodi pillowum kettippidich sukhanidrayil erppettirikkuvaane pullikkaaran.

Ichaaya.. ichaaya.. onneneette.. enthoru urakkavaa ith..

Jimmy : 5 minute koode..

Avan veendum appurathekk thirinju kidannu.

Aish.. ichaaya.. enikk late aavunne...

Jimmy : ente karthaave enthoru kashtttava ith...

Angane oronnokke paranjond avan thalayum chorinj bedil ezhunnettu irunnu.. appo dhaante munpil nilkkunnu..















Appu : oh.. eneettoo?😊


























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Abhiye Jimmy appuvine veezhthaanulla oru Karu aakkumoo..?😁

Appu chirichu? Hmm.. athil enthoo panthiked ille Bebo...?😐👀

Joekk roseinod feelings...?😍

Nadiyude veetil scn aayo..?😣

Athoo taevin chumma pedikkuvaano..?🙂

Appu jimmyude roomil..? Ithokke eppo...?🤔

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