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By Jincymin

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๐™๐™ค๐™ง๐™ข
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๐˜ฝ๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™ ๐™ก๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฉ
๐™ˆ๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™™
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By Jincymin

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𝐉𝐮𝐝𝐠𝐞- Jincymin

Winner (1st Place)


awesometales

Book Title : Cursed with power

Cover - 4/5 

Title- 5/5

Blurb- 8/10

Plot- 20/20

Grammar and vocabulary - 14/20

Character and development - 10/10

Writing style - 20/20

Overall - 10/10

Total- 91/100 


Review: I really like the title. It seems to go with the plot and I've been thinking about it since it was requested so it's definitely memorable.Story itself is interesting. There are many facts that are amusing and intriguing. Characters are also likeable. Considering all the factors. I can say that the plot is good, but it needs to be presented well.

Story has lots of potential.

With some improvements, it will really shine.

1st Runner up (2nd Place)


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2nd Runner up (3rd Place)

Butterflies1980

Book Title: At the Twilight of mankind

Cover - 4/5 

Title- 3/5

Blurb- 8/10

Plot- 19/20

Grammar and vocabulary - 16/20

Character and development - 8/10

Writing style - 18/20

Overall - 6/10

Total- 82/100 

Review: The story flows smoothly. Even if I pointed out a few things that need to be included, they all occurred as an afterthought. While reading, there wasn't something that would feel like a hitch or make me stop to second guess the things.

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