OBSESSIVE MAN

By prita_krishnan

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A man was standing in the trial of bridge to jump from there... it was heavily raining...but he didn't care... More

OBSESSIVE MAN
summary
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
NO UPDATE TILL THURSDAY
CHAPTER 4 (not edited draft)
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 11
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13 (short update)
CHAPTER 14
CHAPTER 15
DARK LOVE 3
CHAPTER 16
CHAPTER 17
CHAPTER 18
CHAPTER 19
CHAPTER 20
CHAPTER 21
CHAPTER 22
CHAPTER 24
CHAPTER 25
CHAPTER 26
THE DEVIL'S FAIRY
CHAPTER 27
CHAPTER 28
CHAPTER 29
CHAPTER 30
CHAPTER 31
CHAPTER 32
CHAPTER 33
CHAPTER 34
CHAPTER 35
CHAPTER 36
CHAPTER 37
CHAPTER 38
CHAPTER 39
LOVE ME LIKE YOU DO
CHAPTER 40
CHAPTER 41
CHAPTER 42
CHAPTER 43
CHAPTER 44
CHAPTER 45
CHAPTER 46
OBSESSIVE MAN 2
BONUS CHAPTER
BONUS CHAPTER 2
VAANGA VAANGA

CHAPTER 23

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By prita_krishnan

Ashok reached the mall again & went to food court where everyone is...

Sri was looking here and there searching for Ashok.. he smiled seeing her searching for him and went silently behind her and whispered near her ears ..

Ashok: Yaara theditu irukka di maami...

Sri jerked & turned towards him making him laugh at her.... Soon everyone laughed seeing sri's expression.... Sri pouted at everyone...

Ashok pinched his ears ,

Ashok: sorry....

Sri gave him a small smile & sat down.. Ashok sat beside her...

Sri: enga poirundhel?

Ashok: ahmm... Adhan phone laye sonanla maa.. en pangali oruthana paathutu pesitu anuppi vachutu vara...

Sri: enga?

Ashok: romba thoorama... nee saapdu...

Sri nodded her head and started to eat.. dina & Agni raised his eyebrows at ashok which he nodded his head..

Meanwhile Ravi took spoon at fried rice and looked at it ,

Ravi : idhu edhukku namakku enna Kai kaal velangamaya irukku? Spoon la saapda?

He threw spoon aside & started to eat in his hands...

Agni : konjam achu vandha idathula decent ah saapdra..

Ravi: yen decent ah saapata award kudukka poriya? Shutter ah close pannitu saapdra...

Rerna: ney... Spoon la saapdu ney.. idho paaru ipdi edhuthu... Ipdi saapdanu..

Dina: ah.. periya teacher iva vanta podi velaya paathutu...

Making rerna glared at Dina... meenu rolled her eyes at them...

Meenu: pesama saapdunga vandha idathula sanda pottu kittu...

Dina smacked rerna ...

Dina: ellam unnala dhaan di vesha bottle uh...

Rerna: poya ...

Ashok smacked her head,

Ashok: mariyadhaya pesu..

Dina: apdi podu innum rendu..

Rerna: ooi.. enna ? Aalu aalukku adikiringa.. Naa ajju kitta poran ponga da..

Dina: adingu..

Rerna rushed towards Agni and sat beside closely to him..  Agni Moved his chair slightly making her roll her eyes...

Rerna mv: idhellam enikku thirundha podho...

After eating dinner in mall everyone reached home and went to their room...

Ashok, Ravi & Agni was laying in bed..

Ashok: Dina enga da?

Ravi:. Adhaan Avan aalu vandhuruchula .. Anga poitaan...

Ashok took his phone & called Dina,

Ashok: dei thellavaari enga da irukka?

Dina: edhukku da ippo call panna?

Ashok: olungu maariyadhaya enga irundhaalu Inga vaa...

Dina: yedhukku da?

Ashok: enna Mattum en pondatti ta irundhu thalli vachutu.. nee jolly ah irukka paakuriya.. mariyadhaya Inga vandhuru.. illa...

Dina: illaila na ennada pannuva?

Ravi: Ashok andha phone ah kudu na pesura...

Ashok gave phone to Ravi & he put the call in speaker...

Ravi: dei innum 2 minutes la nee inga vara illa..

Agni: apram anikku meenu oorukku pona piraku nee club ku poi Anga ..

Dina: dei dei dei ..  dho vandhutan da kathavu kitta vandhuta..

Agni: adhu vaadi vaa...

Ashok & Agni Hified each other.. Dina entered the room and glared towards them..

Dina: idhaye solli enna blackmail pandringa da .

Ashok: Adheppadi Raja.. unna vida mudiyum...

Dina: dei naalaikku unnakku first night ready panitu Naa en hospital ku kelamburan da .

Agni: hospital ka? Edhukku da?

Dina: Ada paavigala.. Naa oru doctor ndradhaye marandhutingala da?

Ravi: Ada aamala...sorry da..

Dina: suththam...

Agni: sari sari thoongunga... Naalaikku neraya purchase panna vendidha irukkum...

Ashok: aama.. aama.. nalla fresh ah na malliga poova vaangikonga da ...

Agni kicked ashok...

Agni: eppada nu irukka nee... Adhu kolandha paathu nadandhukko...

Ashok; engalaku theriyum nee moodu...

Dina: naanga mooditu dha irukkom nee  naalaikku night varaikkum close panitu thoongu da en muttakosu...
______

NEXT MORNING,

Ashok woke by a sweet singing voice Sri.. he opened his eyes and went downstairs & saw Sri with veenai near Krishna idol,

Alaipaayudhae kannaa
En manam alaipaayudhae
Aanandha mogana venu gaanamadhil

Alaipaayudhae kannaa
En manam alaipaayudhae
Un aanandha mogana venu gaanamadhil
Alaipaayudhae kannaa aaaa

He smiled seeing her... He went inside Pooja room and stood behind her with folded hands...

When she finished her song and placed veena in that place & turned to see Ashok was standing there & admiring her...

She blushed and looked down with fiddling her saree pallu ..

Suddenly paati came there saw Ashok,

Paati: dei pallu kooda vilakkama edhukku da poojai arakikkulla vandha..

Sri gasped and looked at him..

Sri : neenga kulikkala ya ..  abacharam... Abacharam..  Velila pongo...

Ashok: idhukey abacharam ah? Mudhalla indha word ah ban pannanum...

Ashok went to sit together with boys...

Agni: ennada abacharam nu velila anupitanagala?

Suddenly Dina started to laugh...

Ashok: edhukku da sirikira?

Dina: illa.. kulikkama pooja room ku ponadhey abacharamna ? Night uh enna nadakumnu yosichu paatha sirippu vandhuruchu..

He laughed hardly making Ravi and Agni also snickered....

Ashok glared at all..

Agni: nee maattuvannu enakku theriyum da ... Aana ipdi maatuvannu theriyama pochu da ..

Ravi: unakku indha nilama varumnu Naa ninachu kooda paakkala da...

He laughed slapping his thigh making Ashok stomped his foot...

Ravi: ayyo... Kumki Yaana mudhicha maari irukkey...

For the whole day dina , Ravi & Agni roasted Ashok...

______

Meenu & rerna helping getting ready Sri.. suddenly paati came to the room.. 

Paati: meenu prerna rendu perum inga vaanga...

Both of them went towards paati,

Meenu: enna paati...

Paati: paatukku oru help pandringala?

rerna: enna asingama help kekkura . Order podu paati.. enna matter uh?

Paati: ungalukkey Sri ah paththi theriyum la...romba appavi... Indha purusha pondatti naduvula irukkaradhellam onnumey theriyadhu avalukku...

Meenu: sari adhukku naanga enna pandradhu?

Paati: konjam avalukku puriya vainga di..

Meenu & rerna: edheyyy?

rerna: enna paati vilaaduriya? Naanga Epdi.. naangaley paccha kolandhainga..

Paati: yendi entaye vaai koosama poi solringa... Ponga di en peran Paavam di...

Meenu : poi tholayurom..

Both of them went near Sri & sat beside her..

Meenu: mmm.  Sri.. unakku first night ah paththi enna theriyum?

Sri: ahm..

rerna: bayapadaadha ka... Unakku enna theriyumo adha mattum sollu...

Sri: nekku onnumey theriyadhe.. apdi na enna?

Meenu & rerna sighed...

Meenu: Inga paaru.. ahmm.. ayyo Epdi solradhu.. Ashok mama va unakku pidikum la?

Sri Blushed and nodded her head as yes...

Rerna: appo avaru unna thottaru Naa .. nee onnum solla koodadhu...

Sri looked at her with wide eyes...

Meenu: enna?

Sri: oru payyan ponna thoda koodadhu adhu abacharam... Thappu...

Rerna: ayyo...oru payyan dha ponna
Thoda koodadhu.. aana oru purusha pondatti ya thodalaam...

Sri looked at them confusedly,

Meenu sighed and said,

Meenu: listen.. avara nee namburalla?

Sri nodded her head as yes

Meenu: avaru enna pannanlu nee thadukka koodadhu.. Unakku pidichurundha mattum.. suppose unakku pidikala illa.. uncomfortable ah irundhuchuna avarta sollu oka?

Sri nodded her head as yes..

Rerna: meenu akka ivanugalukku purijurukkum ah?

Meenu: vidu idhukkku mela Ashok mama paadu...

Meenu selected a red saree for sri & made her wear that... Paati came with a box...

Paati: Sri...

Sri saw paati & smiled at her,

Sri : paati...

Paati: indha idhu unakku dhaan..

She handed her a box...

Sri: idhu ennadhu paati?

Paati: thorandhu paaru theriyum...

Sri opened the box & saw it's full of all kinds of jewels... Sri looked at paati confusedly ,

Paati : idhu Ashok oda amma apram ennoda nagainga.. ini idhu unnodadhu..

Sri: enakku idhellam Vendam paati..

Paati: chumma iru.. idha unakku kudukka dha eduthutu vachurunda.. aai . Idhellam avalukku pottu vidunga di...

Meenu: yen Naga kada vilambarathukku anuppa poriya?

Paati: adhukku illa di...

Rerna: mandy.. Epdiyum kalatti dhana vaikka poranga apram edhukku Ivlo jewel podanum...

Sri looking at them confusedly,

Sri: Ava solradhu sari dhaana.. thoongaraku edhukku Ivlo alangaram nagai laam Paati...

Hearing that paati her forehead...

Paati: ivala vachutu en peran enna dha panna porano? Seekiram kelappi roomla kondu poi vidunga di...

Paati went from there... After got her ready,

Meenu: sooper.. unna paaththu  inikku night Ashok mama thoonga maataru...

Sri: yen?

Rerna: poga poga theriyum....

______.

Ravi, Agni & Dina was decorating the room....

Ravi: kuyila pudichu koondil adachu koova sollugira ulagam...
Mayila pudichu kaala odachu aada sollu kira ulagam...

Agni: edhukku da nalla naal adhuvum ah oppari vaikura?

Ravi: pinna enna da... Mudhalla ivanukku first night room ready pannitu irukkom... Aduthu Dina... enakku eppo eppodhanda vaalkaila oru nalladhu nadakkum?

Dina: mmm.. unakku straight ah 377 dha..

Agni busted out laughing.. hearing that...

Ravi: edheyyy...

Dina: illa da ..377 km nadandhu poi saami kumbutanna seekiram nadakkumnu solla vandha...

After decorating the room.. they went outside and told Ashok to take shower and get refreshed...

Meenu & rerna dropped Sri infront of  Ashok's room...

Meenu whispered in Sri's ear,

Meenu: sonnadhellam niyabagam irukkattum...

Sri nodded her head... Meenu & rerna pushed her inside the room and locked the door...

Sri was nervously looking at his room.. she was shivering from fear and nervousness....

Suddenly she felt a hot breath near her ear,

Continued.....

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